new ff,(kinrul/ragvir) HUM AAPK _ch.5..pg.9 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice part...very cute...
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Waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
Sorry for the late comment Mani. You had twisted the story. I never thought you will bring like this. U had U-Tured that RagVir know each other. Omg please update the next part soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Wow wonderful update. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
I loved your twist. Please update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
nice twist mani. loved your update. waiting for next.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Wow great work dear. Please update the next part soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank u guyz 4 ur lovely comments ,sry i wil nt b abl 2 update 4 few days as i wil hv term papers frm monday bt promise try 2 update it as soon as i can
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dips its ok dear,u hv commented na dats more important m more late den u coz m still left 2 comment on ur ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😲 chapter 4
Ragi yelled on seeing ranbir n c jst says tummm, n c reminds hr first meeting wd ranbir😆

One week ago ragi ws going 2 piya's home 2 prepare 4 d xams ,as usual ragi insisted 2 drive d car as at dat time there were no 1 xcept hr n driver so c convinced d driver though forcefully bt c managed it ,n ask driver 2 go n tk rest c will call him wen c will b free driver could nt did anything so he agreed 2 do wt rag said n went 2 watch d movie

Nw ragi is driving car all alone n all c ws vry carful while driving bt as soon as c switchd on d radio it ws a song frm salman's movie: 😃phela phela pyar h pheli pheli bar h:n on hearing dis ragi lost in hr wrld n dreams abt his fav.salman khan😆😆 bt c ws aware abt d red lght n traffic c stops hr car on d signal n njoying hr dream bt c came bck into hr senses as soon as sum1 hits hr car n c cum out of car n strt shouting on d biker

👏"helo,r u blind dkh kr car nhi chlani ati kya" on listening these words d biker put dwn his helmate😉 n it ws our ranbir he ws jst keep luking at ragi n ws listening 2 hr n

rag keep on shouting"andhe ho kya dekh kr nhi chl skht,jb bike chalani nhi ati to chlate kyu ho"bt ranbir ws nt uttering a single word he ws jst staring hr,he ws stunned by hr beauty bt soon he cums out in his sense n try 2 explain:
dekhiye,it by mistake,actually mere bike k break nhi lg rha tha……….." n mai wo apki car se n he ws saying these words n there ws green lght n sum1 frm bck side cam n pushed ranbir😉 n(he cam 2 tell dem 2 stp fght n proceed their way coz of dem d road ws jammed bt wdout n he jst shaked ranbir bt ranbir lost his blance n fall on ragi

n ragi ws under ranbir n he ws on hr n ragi falls on d muddy side n ranbir keep luking at hr 4 a few min ragi 2 kept luking at him😊 bt c soon cum into hr senses n shouts

hello,wil u plz get up ,aise kya ghiur rhe ho get up phele kbi ldki nhi dekhi kya,😆

ranbir get up n strt laughing coz ragi ws totally full of mudd n dis makes hr more angry n c shouts pagal ho kya ek to meri car thokh di mujhe niche girya n c ws saying di s all n c noticed dat c ws full wd mudd and evry1 ws laughing at hr, 😡c grabed ranbir's collar n shouts:ye kya kiya tumne I will kill u,u u...

ranbir says ''maine kya kiya h,maine tumhe nhi giraya,wo to mai...''

ragi intrupts n continues'' ha ha mai achi tarah janti hu tumhare jaise ldko ko,😆jha ldki dekhi fisal gye,bt mai baki ldkiyo ki tarah nhi hu I wil teach u lesson u jst wait c ws saying so
bt d traffic policeman cums n made dem stp d fght ragi angrily😡 leaves frm there n ranbir too leav

ragi reaches 2 hr frnd's piya home n as soon as c enters into d house piya strts laughing😊 n says omg rags ye kya haal bnaya hua h,wt happen 2 u

ragi:stp it piya, don't laugh otherwise I will kill u😡

piya:bt maine kya kiya h

ragi: I don't wan argue pls shw d washroom I wan 2 change

n c n piya leaves 4 washroom n aftr few minutes dey cum bck into d hall 2 strt their study n dey where studying n soon theire ws a knock on d door n d piya get up n open d door it ws ranbir 😉

piya keep on luking at him🥱

,ranbir says: xcuse me,hello,bt piya ws staring at him ranbir tk waves his hands in front of hr n
says:hello,kya mr.b.s mehra ka ghr yhi h

piya shakes hr head n says ya

ranbir :cn u pls call him n piya goes 2 call hr dad

meanwhile ragi noticed piya running in so hurry n c ws wondered 😲y c ran so fast

ragi moves 2wards d door 2 c who ws d person 2 whompiya aws talking n as soon as c noticesd it ws ranbir c shouts:tummm😲😲,tum yha b phuch gye mera picha krt krte😆

ranbir:wt,picha mai tumhara no ways,mai to wo papers lene aya tha mr.mehra se

ragi:oh,I c tum bighde hue k sath_2 cheater b ho😆,xams strt hue nhi papers leak krwane aa gye,pdhna to hota h nhi aur jb xams pass ate h to professors,principle's k ghr k chakkar lgate ho

ranbir:luk😡,tum kch b boel chle jaogi aur mai shunta rhunga,m nt a cheater ok

tbi mr.mehta cums dwn n he ask ranbir 2 sit n tell rags dat piya is calling hr in d room

ranbir:hello sir, m ranbir rajvansh ,my dad mr.inderjeet rajvansh talked 2 u abt d transfer certificates n its related papers,m here 2 collect dem

mr.mehta(principle): oh ya I remember u jst sit I will bring d papers,by d ay wuld u like 2 hv sum tea or coffee

ranbir:no sir,m fine

mehta moves upstair

in d piya's room,piya is sitting on d bed n still thinking abt ranbir

ragi shakes hr n yells😡 piya wts wrong wd u, kya hua

piya cums into hr senses n says:wo rags yaar dat guy woww he is so smart n ragi intrupts:smart my foot😡,u knw wt he did,he ws d 1 who hitet my car n den made me fall in d mudd,I will nt leave him

piya:wt,oh to he ws d 1 bt yaar he is vry handsome rag,chodh na glti se lg gyi hogi

ragi:wt,tu ushki itni side kyu le rhi h by d way

suddently ragi's phone rings

ragi:heloo ya mom,wt happen

kaushlaya:ragi beta jldi se ghr aa jaa v hv 2 go to sum function

ragi:mom,plz I don't wan 2 go 2 any function plz u guyz go😭

kaushlaya:ragi its important 4 all of us 2 go there as its related 2 ur dad's business ,u hv 2 cum

ragi:bt mom

kaushlaya cuts d phone

ragi :piya I hv 2 go 2 a function,ok I will catch u latter bye tk cr

ragi cums dwn n noticed ranbr n go frm there while making an irritated face😡

ranbir jst smiles bck

nw cum bck 2 d clg

on seeing ragi ranbir says:tummm😡😲

ragi: tum yha kya kr rhe ho ha,tum yha b phuch gye

ranbir:kyu yhe kya tumhara personal clg h ,jo mai yha nhi aa skhta,I hv taken admission here n paid 4 dat,got it😆

ragi:wt,tumhe yha admdission,kaise mil gya,luk yha pdhe likhe log aate h ,cheaters nhi ok

ranbir:u,👏 m nt a cheater 4 ur kind of information I ws d topper o London university ok

ragi:hm,topper dekhte h ish bar yha kaise top krte ho n c leave frm there n moves 2wards d cls,c ws late 4 miss.benerjee cls

c enters into d cls wdout luking 2wrds hr as c knew c wuld stop hr n taunt again c ws trying 2 go widout making any noice coz miss.benerjee's face ws 2wards d board bt suddently c turns n shouts ragiiinii n ragi stops n luks 2wards hr😳

miss.benerjee: miss.ragi Sharma u r again late may I knw y u r late

ragi:wo mam mai woo😳

miss benerjee:wt happen koi bhana nhi mil rha ,

ragi:it its nt dat mam actually wo meri

n c ws abt 2 say sumthing n frm behind a sound cam;may I cum in mam,evry1 luks 2wards d door n so ragi n ragi eyes were remained opened😲😡 nc ws abt 2 say sumthing2 ranbir bt miss, benerjee spoke b4 hr ya cum in,who r u

ranbir:m ranbiir rajvansh n m new 2 d college👏

miss benerjee:ok,plz welcum 2 d cls

ragi go n sits beside piya n mummers😡 luks kitne pyar se baat baat kr rhi h n mujhe taunt maar rhi thi n ye ldka humari cls mei oh nooo

piya noticed hr n shake hr rags wowww😊,he is in our cls omg,I don't believe dis n by d way rags hv u said thanks 2 him

ragi:wt,thanks 4 wt😲

piya:common,don't act silley he ws d 1 who gav u lift

ragi shouts:wttt,😡no ways I will nt say thanks 2 him,thanks my foot coz of him I hv irritated a lot n nw coz of him I hv heard dis stupid benerjee ,no waysss

miss benerjee:so mr. Ranbir cn v hv ur proper intro of ur's as u r new 2 d cls😛

ranbir:ya sure mam😊

evry grl of cls ws starring at ranbir xcept ragi c ws lukng outside uninterestingly coz c does nt wanted 2 listen ranbir anymore it ws enough of him since mrg

ranbir strts😆

hello frnd,m ranbir rajvansh,well I hv done my study frm London university n nw m continuing it frm mombay
ragi mummers:London hmmm,London se pdh k aya h tbi aisa h🥱

piya:rags pls stp miss benrejee is luking 2wards u only

ragi:ok😆

as ranbir hs finished his intro till den d lecture ws also ovr n miss.benerjee moves out d cls room n evry1 gathered arund ranbir 😛😉2 introduce wd him b grls were moving arnd him xcept ragi n piya 2 coz c culd nt leav ragi

abhay noticed rags n hits ranbir n says:ranbir so hv u met ragini

ranbir:no nt yrt(coz in mrg ragi did nt introduced hrself)

abhay:wt😲,common,don't tell me u hv nt meet hr yet

ranbir:ya abhay,I hv nt yaar,

abhay:its ok to ab mil le cum

ranbir:bt hw abi to cls h na

abhay:stupid c is in our cls only n c is there luk

he points out 2wards ragi who ws sitting near window table

ranbir:wt c is ragini,no yaar I will nt go 2 hr😲😃😃

abhay shocked:wtt,😲u don't go2 hr bt y,are u mad evry1 want 2 go 2 hr n u r saying no can I knw y

ranbir:are c fights so mch n u knw abi b bhar hum ldh rhe the (ranbir wants 2 talk 2 hr bt pretending as if he does nt wan he is attracted 2wards hr frm their first meet)😉

abhay:wt fhgt ,great man,chl chodh ushe I will introduce 2 hr ,cum

he brings ranbir 2 ragi n piya n says:hello grls

piya:hi abhay,hi ranbir

on hearing ranbir ragi got up n speaks:tum😡

abhay:hi, ragini,chill yaar,he is my best frnd ranbir n I knw dat u guyz hv already met bt I wan u 2 to shake hands n b frnds

ragi:wt, frndsss.😡first tell him 2 say sry 2 me den I wil think

ranbir:wt sry n 4 wt😲

ragi:ush din k liye jb tumhne meri car hit ki hit ki thi

ranbir:bt I told u na n maine intensally nhi kiya tha

ragi:oh really n b mujhe giraya tha wt abt dat

ranbir:maine nhi giraya

ragi:dekha abhay tumhara frnd apni mistake manne ko taya r hi nhi h,mujhe nhi krni koi dosti wosti n c moves out

ranbir:luk c knws ki meri mistake nhi thi n infact c shld thanxs me 4 helping hr out in mrg bt c wants me 2 say sry,no I wil nt until c wil say thanx

abhay:common yaar ,leave it say sry
😉ranbir:wts wrong wd u abhay,y r u so mch interested 2 mk us frnds

abhay:ranbir its nt dat yaar,I jst wan u 2 b frnds as it will mk our grp large dats it n by d way c is vry nice bs gussha thoda jyada krti h

ranbir:thoda nhi,bhut jyada😲👏 n I hv told u na wen c will say thanx ,I will say sry.bye

ranbir 2 moves out

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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏👏👏 I just loved it 👏👏👏

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