new ff,(kinrul/ragvir) HUM AAPK _ch.5..pg.9 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its awesome. So our Ragini like Salman Khan. When our Salman khan is going to come I mean our Ranvir. Keep Updating dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank u guyz,ok i wil try 2 update in english n ya our salman aka ranbir wil enter soon guyz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mani where are you dear. Update the next chapter.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice ff....i had stopped visiting this forum coz it doesn't seems like bidaai forum anymore...m glad that some of you guys are still keeping ragvir alive through your ffs
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sorry for very late reply. awasome chapter. loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is mani's new chapter enjoy Guys

Ragi asks driver 4 d key,sadi:no ragi nt dis time,nt nw I don't wana b laten stuck in dis prblm,pls giv bck d keys 2 driver,ragi intrupts in mid n says no sadi u knw it vry well dat once I think of doing sumthing den nothing cn stp me frm doing u,so its better 2 sit quite n save ur energy 4 lecture,don't make me 2 make u late 4 clg n njoy my ride,ok

Sadi widout a second thought decides 2sit quite as c knws dat if ragi is saying so it wont tk hr long 2 do d same which c said n meanwhile if dey wil get late ragi is 2 gd in making bhanas bt sadi cant do so easily,ragi strts d car

Ragi:don't wry darling ,nw u jst c hw fast I wil drive n v wil in clg widin few mints

Sadi:ya,u got d aircraft na so u cn fly it ovr othr vehicles

Ragi ignored hr dis time n put on d music on full vol.,c is talking 2 sadi wen all of sudden c turns d car as anothr car ws abt 2 hit dem,c stpd d car n yelled at d othr one,n den lukd at sadi

Sadi:rag no 1 is there u shld me careful I told u na

Ragi trying 2 strt d car bt 2 their bad luck car got jammed

On seeing dis sadi is getting angry n yeeling at ragi oh great congrates ragi sharma u hv succed 2 reach upto dis shop frm dat 1, I told u na ,I knew dat wenevr u drives d car humesa gadbad hoti h n nw m going 2 kill u

U knw if 2day I wil get late dat miss.benerjee is going 2 taunt me again n I cant tk dat moreden dat c wil mk me punish like schl child

Ragi:oh god great yha behen ki prwah nhi h bs clg phuchne ki pdhi h,kya behen di,tusi great ho

Sadi:apni bkwash bndh kr whi yhi teri cls le lungi,tujhe pta h na wo kitni khdoosh h n upr se its our first cls aftr vaccation in new semester n I don't wan 2 b late

C ws abt 2 cry bt ragi tells hr 2 calm dwn n says ushki chinta mat kr I will handle hr,c gav hr hanky 2 sadi n ask hr 2 whipe d tears

Sadi:n wt abt u ,u 2 hv a khdoosh teacher miss:cheterjee,c wil nt allow u 2 sit in cls n more den datc wil complaint 2 dad

Ragi:don't wry c hs 2nd period n by den v will b in clg

Sadi:god knws ish ldki ka kya hoga,ishe kbi koi tension hi nhi hoti

Ragi:wo chodh let me think sumthing hw v wil reach 2 d clg

Sadi crying evn more louder

Ragi yells at hr ab rhona bndh kregi ,lt me think

Idea I wil call piya n ask hr 2 pick us up frm here ok(piya is ragi's best frnd n principle's daughter)

C is calling hr bt cell is ringing ,ragi 2 hrself common dam pick up d ph piya bt no rply frm othr side,ragi cuts d phone

C is nt picking up it I wil try later c mght be in washroom

Sadi:in a crying way,nw wt v wil do,do sumthing

Ragi:wtelse v can do, v hv 2 tk lift frm sum1

Sadi:lift na baba na,bilkul nhi

Ragi:den wait 4 mechanic 4 atleast 1hr n b prepare 4 miss.benerjee's taurcher ok

Scene shifted 2 rajvansh house: vasu enters in hr son's room their a boy sleeping on d bed covr wd blanket

Vasu common beta wake up'indu cums behind hr n ask dey r still sleeping wts wrong wd dem,make dem awake othrwise dey wil get late vasu

Vasu:its nt our sons ,its ur ladala ranbir who is sleeping till nw

Indu:n wt abt alekh,where is he

Vasu:mr.rajvansh u knw him na he doesn't likes 2 b late,bt first mk dis khumbhkaran 2 wake up othrwise he wil get late 4 sure

Indu shouts common beta wake up bt no response,he goes in d bathroom n brings a bucket of water n pour it on him n dis time a sound came:ohh,kya h yaar thung se shone b nhi dete mom(he shouts like a child) n sleeps again

Vasu:oh my god,ye ldka b na,wt shld I do 2 mk hr awake

Indu goes near him ,he is sleeping by putting his hands on ear still his face is nt visible,indu whispered ,cmmon get up,u r getting late 4 clg bt no reaction,he again whispers ranbir if u wil nt wake den u wil miss d beautiful grls in ur clg ,on hearing dis he puts dwn his hands n shouts no ways mere hote hue aisa kbi nhi ho skta dad,he finaslly get up n wishd his parent's n mom ldkiya mere piche bhagti h mai nhi,remember na

Vasu on dis luk at him pdhai k naam p nhi utha n ldkiyo k naam p jhuth se uth gya bt grls ko to tb dekhega jb clg time p phuchega khi ye na ho dat othrs wil luk at him while he wil b outside d clsroom n othrs wuld hv been stdy

Ranbir:mom u r rght evry1 wil luk at me aftr all m so handsome all coz of u n dad to log to dekhnge hi na,ok nw let me get ready he get up frm ved,bt where bis alekh bhaiya

Both shouts he hs already left

Ranbir: wt he left wdout me,ye bhaiya b na iktni jldi clg jakr kya krng pta nhi n he leaves 2 tk a bath

Aftr half n hr, vasu cums in d room ranbir is getting ready he hs weared a red jacked a blck shirt under it wd blck jeans n hving glasses,vasu:common ranbir bs kitna time lgate ho tayar hone mei cum dwn fast breakfast is ready

He cam dwn n wished his dadi;gdmrg dadi hw r u n kaisa lg rha hu mai

Dadi:gd beta bt tell me tu clg hi ja rha h ya shadi k liye ldki dekhne itna sajsawar kr

Oh oh dadi no shadi plz ,u na clg ja rhu ldkiyo ka b to khayal rkhna pdhta h na,dey 2 need a handsome guy like me

Dadi:lets c jb teri shadi hogi to tu apni wife k piche bhagta h ya nhi

Ranbir:oh dadi pls abi tk koi aisi ldki nhi bni jisk piche mai bhagu he stpn think in his hrt ek ldki jrur pasand ayi thi bt wo ldhti kitna h,wapish mile to mai b ldunga ish bar(its ragini her)

DADI SAYS OK LETS C BETA BT B CAREFUL YE INDIA H LONDON NHI yha ki ldkiya sch mooch shundhr hoti hmu nvr knw kis pr tumhara dil aa jaye he smiles n moves

He left d house on his bike

Scene shifted 2 ragi n sadi,sadi still thinking eithr 2 tk lift or bt n ragi says don't think so mch I hv called hr c said c wil b here bt it wil tk time n ur lecture is more important den mine so p;lz go c saw a car n asks sadi 2 tk d lift sadi hesitate bt finally gav hand 2 stp d car

D car stops n d window is getting dwn n a sound ya,he jst said so n luk at sadi n keep luking at hr n sadi 2 does d same both r staring at echothr ragi ws on d ph 2 confirm whether piya hs left or nt,c noticed it n cums near 2 d car n says xcuse me.alkh cums out of his thoughts n say ya

Ragi:cn u plz drop hr on d midway of lokhndwala ,actually v r getting late n our car got jamed,if u don't mind

He says ya ,y nt m going on d same way,plz cum

Sadi still confused whether 2 sit or nt,ragi says sadi don't think dt mch go,bt wt abt u,c asks,ragi says do nt wry piya is on d way ok,u jst go,u r getting late

C left wd alekh den ragi watched d time aftr 20min n screamed oh my god,its already 9am n I hv 2 reach b4 10am as I hv 2 collect d time table also oh no ,c cals piya n yells piya where r u stupid,hw mch it wil tk u 2 reach here,piya:sry rags,don't b sry cum fast

Piya says m nt asking 4 sry 2 cum late m saying it coz my car hs got puncured

Ragi:wtttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt,n c cuts d ph by saying u jst cum in clg I wil c u

Ragi cuts d phone n turns bck n get shocked oh no,its hr dad who is cuming 2wards hr car c immediately brings out hr scalf n covr up hr face nw only hr eyes r visible,c turns bck n ask drive if dad wil ask sumthing,jst say dt u hv dropped us n while getting bck it got jammed

Driver:ok, pc(hr fathr's car stps near hr car n he askd drivr wt happened n where r d grls,drivr tells him wt ragi hs said n pc says ok,so hv u called mechanic,drivr replied yes he is on d way

Ragini thinking in hr hrt oh god aj ka to din hi bekar h phele car krab hui den piya ki car,nw dad n wt if I wil gt late 4 second cls,wt 2 do lghta h mujhe b lift l;eni hogi,ishse to acha hota sadi k sath hi nikal jati,

C tries 2 stp few cars bt none hs stpd,c kicked hr car in anger n says wt d hell,ek b car nhi rukh rhi h,kismat hi khrabh h aj to,c noticed a bike n decides if dis wil nt stp den kujhe apna purana tarika apna pdega n c gav a hand 2 geet lift dis ws ranbir's bike guyz

N d bike stops (remember ragi is still undr scalf) ragi goes 2 him n tell him dat hr car got jamed n c is getting late 4 clg n ranbir asks hr: so can I help u,ragi thinking in hr hrt nhi yha maine tumhe apni car mei bhethan k liye rokha,na bt c does nt said it n stps while thinking ki agr kch ulta bola to ye b bhagh jayega n I wil get late)c answers politely

Ragi:yes,actually u can,

Ranbir:so u wan me 2 giv u lift

Ragi:

Ranbir:ok,cum n sit,bt tell me where u r going

Ragi:2 my clg its near lokhnwala u jst drop in d midway I wil frm there

Ranbir:near lokhndwala which clg,is it mombay university(stefen's cls)

Ragi:oh ya,u r rght,widout wishing 2 tell him d name

Ranbir:ok,den u don't hv 2 get dwn in d midway I will drop u 2 d clg only

Ragi thinking in hr hrt line mar rha h,bchoo agr mai clg k liye late nhi ho rhi hoti na to mai tumhe btati ki ldki ko chedhn ka result kya hota h b

t ajj bch gye

Ragi:oh nooooooooo plz no need 4 dat I nwil manage

Ranbir:artee don't b wry ,actualy I 2 studies in d same clg,dats y

Ragi 2 hrself great to acha h phir clg mei hi sbhk shikhaungi tumhe

Says ok n c leaves wd ranbir

Note:ragi still undr covr n ranbir hs nt put dwn his helmet while chating wd hr so dey both cant c echothr's face bt ranbir is attrected 2wards ragi's beautiful eyes

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow wonderful update. And they dint watch there face with each other. It sounds very interesting. Mani you are great. And dont take much time dear. Keep updating sooooooon. Love you.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepa_mishra

Wow wonderful update. And they dint watch there face with each other. It sounds very interesting. Mani you are great. And dont take much time dear. Keep updating sooooooon. Love you.

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deepu it's fabulousss u meann and intresting he is atravted by her eyes 😃😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sihame

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deepu it's fabulousss u meann and intresting he is atravted by her eyes 😃😉

Really Siham I too love this part. Its awesome dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepa_mishra

Really Siham I too love this part. Its awesome dear.

Yesss deeepu bt i need urs noww plzz tommorow morning upload it 😭😭 u make me dreammm

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