new ff,(kinrul/ragvir) HUM AAPK _ch.5..pg.9 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏Wow wonderful update. And they dint watch there face with each other. It sounds very interesting. Mani you are great. And dont take much time dear. Keep updating sooooooon. Love you. thanx dear bt nt great as u,jst trying my hands in dis 2 jst 4 ragvir n ragvirians
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏😉Thissss isss perfect
@shiam,thank u sona my pleasure n luv u sweety 4 d favor ,nw waiting 4 ur's
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Posted: 14 years ago
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deepa,i wil try 2 update soon dear bt coz of clg i hardly get time bt dont wrry nxt 1 wil b soon,luv u 2👏
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Originally posted by: kinrul_jan09

👏😉Thissss isss perfect

@shiam,thank u sona my pleasure n luv u sweety 4 d favor ,nw waiting 4 ur's

anytime Darling
mine 😆😆 it will be hard to do better than what i read
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Finally you guyz updated the second part. Wow. Its so beautiful. I loved Ragvir scene. Expecting more Ragvir scene. And please dont take much time. Please update next part soooooooooon.😍😍😍. I am waiting.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter:3

Ranbir keeps on talking as mch as he can n it ws irritating rags coz he ws asking 2 many questions,on d othr hand alekh n sadi asked 4 echothr's name n alekh drops hr near lokhndwala road n frm there c takes d auto n reach 2 d clg n runs 2wards d cls

Meanwhile ranbir n rags 2 reach 2 d clg nragi ws in hurry as c hs 2 collect hr timetable so c gets dwn n strt running 2wards d building n ranbir stops hr n say xcuse me,by d way m ran…….. ragi intrupts sry,bt m getting late n by d way itni jldi kya h v r in d same clg aram se intro dungi,c u later bye n c runs faster .ranbir keeps on watching hr n thinks kamal h yaar,aj kal to blai ka jamana hi nhi h,bt koi nhi baad mei mil lunga n he proceeds 2wards parking

Ragi enters in registerar office n c put off hr scalf n evry boy strt starring at hr as c ws luking dam gd n evry1 wan 2 b hr bf(boyfrnd/frnd) bt wdout noticing dem c reached 2 d registerar office n gets hr timetable n c ws talking 2 d recepcint n c ws carriying hr scalf on hr shoulder n ranbir who ws proceeding 2wards on d same way noticed d scalf n said oh,c is d same grl I gav lift,let me knw hr name he ws abt 2 go there bt he noticed d time oh its 9:30 I 2 meet princi also n he wil tk hw mch I don't kw,ishse baad mei mil lunga n he takes another way which goes 2wrds princi's office n ragi still talking 2 receptionsnist n found sum1 calling her ,ragi lukd bck

n runbir proceed 2wards principle's room

It ws piya hi,swthrt,m sry,ragi:sry ki bchi ,tu to khe rhi thi dt u wil b late n nw u r here wd me

Piya says:actually I found dad on midway n I ws trying 2 call u bt ur cell ws out off service

Ragi:oh ya, actually it ws fell dwn in d mrg,aj sb ulta fulta ho rha h n upr se aj mujhe lift lekr ani pdhi n dat stupid guy apni bakk bakkk bndh hi nhi kr rh atha

Piya:oh,n u left him widout saying anything hw rags

Ragi:areee kya krti,mann to kr rha tha ki ushi time bike rukhwa kr ushe khubh sunhau bt I ws getting late na😡

Piya:hmmm waise dihne mei kaisa tha smart tha kya wohi ush ldke ki tarah jo ush din mere ghr aya tha , Ragi screams 😡uska to naam hi mat le smart my foot,agr wo mujhe dobara mil jaye to mai ushe chodungi nhi mera dimakh mat khrab kr ek to phele se hi bhut irritate ho chuki hu n c leaves frm there n piya runs behind hr bt rags where r u going yaar,kch to bta

Ragi:m going in d field I wan sum fresh air b4 dat miss.benerjee's lecture,if u wan cum u can 2 cum n dey leave🥱

In principle's office :alekh were already there n principle were asking abt ranbir n ther ws a knock on d door it ws ranbir

Princi:ya cum in

Alekh :here he is sir

Princi:gdmrg mr.ranbir bt 4 ur knowledge let me tell u dat u r later ranbir:sry,sir actually my bike ws puncured n dats y I got late bt frm 2mtrw I will b on time😉

Principle:ok,well I hope dat u will keep ur promise n he cont. I hv gone through both of ur's documents n m extremely happy n preoud dat 2 of d toppers of London university r in my clg nw,best of luck guyz, n jst go n collect ur timetable frm reception n hv a gd day ,hope u guyz will cont.. ur best go

Both cums outside d office n ranbir were abt 2 say sumthing bt b4 dat alekh say:so mr.ranbir,apki bike khrabh ho gyi thi,really

Ranbir:oops,aree nhi bhai wo to princi ko bolna pdha wrna first day hi mera to impression bigad jata😆

Alekh:acha,impression bigahd jata ,hm I knw it kal se alte nhi hona wrna mei tera impression bighad dunga ok,chlo ab t.table lene aur ha jyada ldkiyo p dhayan mat dena ok,pdh b lena😛

Ranbir:aree bhaiya kya aap b,apn shuna nhi princi kitna khush tha hum se n by d way I hv topped my last university n u knw it na,phir b pdhai_2 bs bhai

Alekh:ya I knw dt u hv topped ur clg bt tumhe yaad dilate rehna pdhta h na dat study is also important n dey reach 2 reception n collect their t.tabl both strted moving 2wards d clsroom bt ranbir say oh bhaiya aap chliye mai zra apni bike dekh kr ata hu , actually I 4got 2 sign on receipt of parking n collecting,m just cuming.waise b abi 2nd cls strt hone mei 20min h n I wil call abhay 2 (abhay is ranbir's childhood frnd n he stdy in d same cls in which ragi n ranbir r stdying

N he moves outside n alekh 2wards d clsroom

Ranbir sign on receipt n collect it n he moves 2wards bike jst 2 chk it whether he hs locked it well or nt

On d opposite side ragi talking wd piya.piya asks rags tu ushe itna irritate kyu hoti h yaar,he ws so smart hi,kash wo mera boyfrnd hota n,wawooo

Ragi hits her tu to aise kr rhi h jaise tujhe kch pta hi nhi,wooo kitna chodh na tujhe itna hi pasand aa gya h to kya mei uncle se baat kru tumhare liye😆 unk pass uska contact no. jrur hoga tb ji bhar k baad kr lio hm n c giv hr scalf 2 hr coz ws setting hr purse n searching 4 d cell 2 repair it as it ws fell dwn in mrg bt c were nt able 2 open it so c decided 2 go 2 canteen 2 found sumthing 2 open d cell,c said piya jst wait here m jst cuming frm cxanteen,ok ,piya said:ok,bt jldi ana rags,2nd lecture strt hone wala h

Ragi:ya mai bs yu gyi n yhu ayi n c moved

Ranbir noticed d scaflf nhe proceeds 2wards dem while piya ws holding d scalf ranbir clears his throat n says:excuse me, piya turns bck n says :ya n c ws surprised n hr mouth remained opened ,

Ranbir:hi,phechana mai.wooo😆

Piya:ya ya maine to apko phechan liya bt apn mujhe yaad rkha ,apne mujhe phechan liya(here piya is talking abt first day wen c sawed ranbir bt ranbir ne ushe nhi dekha tha n he is talking abt mrg as he is thinking c is d grl 2 whom he gav d lift😆)he cont.

Oh,ya offcourse maine apko phechan, liya,abi kch time phele hi to mile the bt dats nt fair apne mujhe apna naam nhi btaya

Piya thinking in hr mind oh god ishe ush din se ab tk mai yaad hu,wawooo n replies oh,ya m piya n u😆

Ranbir replies :ranbir ,ranbir rajvansh,waise aap shubh kafi late ho rhi thi,ab apki car thik h ,

Piya:shubh,ya mine car ws nt well bt I think aap kch bhul rhe h hum shubh nhi kuch time phele mile the,rght😕

Ranbir: oh,lghta h apko majak krna bhut pasand h,nt bad,mera b yhi manna h hasana shehth k liye ach ahota h bt maine aj shubh apko lift di thi n u were in hurry to humara intro hi nhi ho paya tha dhung se😆

Piya:lift,aj shubh,bt mai to car mei dad k sath ayi thi,no no dekhiye apko jrur koi misunderstanding ho rhi h mai shubh apne dad k sath ayi thi nt wd u

Ranbir:common,aap subh mere sath ayi thi ab meri yadash itni b weak nhi h ki kch time phele ki baat bhul jau n sakal to aap b bhulakd bnhi lghti😆

Piya is confused😕ranbir cont. aur ha aapn shubh yhi scalf b phena tha nif m nt 4getting

Piya:scalf c relaxed ok to aap ne ish scalf wali ldki ko lift di thi ,bt sry wo mai nhi thi ,c ws my frnd 😉😉

Ranbir:oops,m really sry,I thought dat u r d 1,m really sry

Piya:its ok,oh by d way u can meet hr bs wo ati hi hogi,bt don't mind agr apko kch ulta bol de

Ranbir:ranbir rajvansh ldkiyo ki baat ka bhura nhi manta😉

Piya:gd,bt maine apko phele yha kbi nhi dekha

Ranbir:oh ya actually m new in d clg 2day is my first day n u r

Piya ws abt 2 reply bt den abhay cuums there

Bt here abhay cums n shouts:hey,ranbir,hw r u yaar n he saw piya n says hi piya hw r u n where is ur beautiful frnd👏,hs nt c cam 2day

Piya:hi,abhay,m f9 c hs cam bt c is in canteen aati hi hogi

Abhay noticed d time n cont. oh,its 9:50am ,common ranbir v r getting late aao mai tumhe baki logo se milwata hu,dey strt moving n abhay turns bck n says by d way piya apni frnd ko cal kr lo otherwise c will get late 4 benerjee's cls n c will nt leave hr he smiles n moves

Ranbir:abhay,who is hr frnd yaar,

Abhay:kya baat h yaar,dost ki khabar to li nhi n ldki k bare phuchna strt

Ranbir:aisa kch nhi h,😆actually shubh maine ushe lift di thi n usk baad se baat nhi kr paya

Abhay:hmmm.mr. ranbir, kya baat h yaar tune ushe lift di,u r lucky,bhi clg k ldke to mrte h ushse baat krn k liye n tu usk sath clg tk aa gya,c is d most beautiful grl inn our clg,ha na,tu to mil hi chukka😛

Ranbir:hmm,oh is it so,nhi yaar actually mai uska chera nhi dekh paya coz c wore d scalf bt ya uski ankhe bhut hi attractive h,👏

Abhy:hello,boss,ate hi lfki latoo ho gya,tu to kheta tha, tu ldkiyo k piche nhi wo tere piche bhaghti h

Ranbir:aise kch b nhi, h mai koi latoo watoo nhi hua hu,wo to bs yuhi tujhe to pta h mujhe to hr ldki achi lghti h yaar😊

Abhay:by d way wo hr ldki se hat kr mr.rajvansh,aur tu zra bch kr rhio khi apna dil na de bhete😆

Ranbir:aise nhi hoga,abi tk aisi ldki nhi bni jis k piche ranbir pagal ho jaye(on dis thought he again remembers ragi wen he first met her😊) by d way uska naam kya h

Abhay:ragini

Ranbir:ragini,(ye naam to khi shuna h bt kha yad nhi aa rha,he thinks in his mind)

Abhay:oh god,mai beg to car mei hi bhul gya, tu clsroom k pass chl m jst cuming

Ranbir nods ok on d othrhand ragi cum bck frm canteen n piya says oh ragini tujhe pta h mai abi kish se mili(c us vry happy n wants 2 b frnd wd him👏 bt if only rgi permits hr coz c is hr bestest frnd n c wont go against hr)😭

Ragi:kisse aur tu itni uchal kyu rhi h

Piya:aree wohi jishne tujhe lift di thi

Ragi:to ishme itna khush hone ki kaun si baat h

Piya:rags vry bad u shld b thankful 2 him dat he gav u lift wen u needed dat ok

Ragi:ok,ok thik h bt abi kya jldi h baad mei bol dungi n by d way wo isi clg mei h khi bhag ne nhi ja reha🥱

Piya:common rags don't b so rude go n say thanx

Ragi:bt piya abi miss.benerjee ki cls h na

Piya:common it wil nt tk more den 5min 2 say thanks

Ragi:ok m going 2 him n u go 2 d cls n reserve d seat ok

Piya:ok, n c moves

Ragi moving 2wards ranbir n says xcuse me,I jst wan 2 say,on dis ranbir turns bck n ragi screams tummm,yha😲😲

nxt:u wil cum 2 knw hwen dey met in past,njoy guyz

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Posted: 14 years ago
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😛guyz,updated d nxt chapter n njoy it n leave ur comments,ideas ,luv u all
Edited by kinrul_jan09 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Omg mani this is fabulousss "tum !!!!😲" i loved itt
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
sona,ya dear there wil b ragvir scenes dont worry
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
Wonderful update dear. Keep rocking.

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