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Posted: 14 years ago
Amitoz very nice part !!
They had a good evening dinner and i am glad that Inderjeet finally showed Anmol as their son...

And Gunni's parents in Australia interesting..
Good we needed all this in Bidaaii but you have brought it out beautifully !
Please continue soon !
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Posted: 14 years ago
@amitoz..nice update and enjoy reading it..😊
the family get together with their guests...the scenes written you have described how a happy family are the rajvansh...
feel happy for anmol as he was introduced as the son of the family .inder is indeed proud to get a son as anmol..
do continue and keep it up...👏
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Hello Guys, thanks for the reply on previous part. Here is Part 21, its little long to read but I hope you will all enjoy. Please read and do comment back!!!! Thanks!!

Part 21

Morning at Rajvansh house has always been a busy one; everyone trying to make it on time to their respective destinations. Anmol was leaving for Kanpur for a business meeting for few days today; Ragini was packing his clothes while Sakshi was getting the kids ready for school. Vasy, Inderjeet, and Gunni were already at the breakfast table.

Alekh: Sakshi, mujhe meri file nahi mil rahi hai, zara dekhna please. Anmol ko voh file chahiye hogi meeting ke liye.
Sakshi: Aap Sahil ko zara dekhiye, main abhi file dhoondh deti hoon.

Alekh watched Sahil who was in his cradle giggling and getting amused by the toys hanging on it while Sakshi looked for the file in the cabinet.

Sakshi: Alekh ji, yehi file hai kya?
Alekh: Are haan, tumhe kahan mili?
Sakshi: Yahi cabinet main thi.
Alekh: Mera bhi dhyaan pata nahi kahan hai, khair Thanks. Chalo naashta karlein. Chalo Tammy, Khushi.

On the other hand, Anmol had gotten ready and he was looking at Ragini who was making sure Anmol has everything.

Ragini: Anmol, aapki files main yahan suitcase ke peeche rakhi hain taan ki voh safe rahein.
Anmol: Thank you, Ragini. Abh chalein? Main bachon aur Gunni ko chodkar vahi se seedha nikal jaunga kanpur ke liye.
Ragini: Jee chaliye, naashta tayar hai aur maine gaadi main bhi khaane ka samaan rakhwa diya hai, bahar se khaane ki jaroorat nahi hai.

Anmol smiled how she takes care of every single thing and silently followed her downstairs. After finishing breakfast, he decided to leave as he had to reach Kanpur on time.

Anmol: Okay bacha party lets go, aapko school chodkar mujhe bhi kaam par jaana hai and I will see you after 2 days.
Tammy: Papa, aap to office se shaam ko aa jate ho
Anmol: Haan beta par aaj papa office nahi Kanpur ja rahe hain
Khushi: To partner humain school kaun chodega?
Anmol: Are bhai aapki maasi maa, choti maa, papa kitne log hai. Don't worry main jaldi aa jaunga.
Alekh: Anmol, yeh voh file hai jisme contract ke papers hain aur meeting ke baad phone kardena mujhe.
Anmol: Thanks bhaiya, jaise hi meeting main kuch decide hota hai main apko inform kardunga.

He then took blessings from Vasu and Inderjeet before leaving.

Inderjeet: God bless beta and all the best.
Vasu: Good luck aur apna khayal rakhna aur pahunchkar phone karna.
Anmol: Jee mummy, I will. Allright I should take leave now.

Ragini walked outside with Anmol. Gunni sat in front while kids sat in the back seat.

Ragini: Dhayan se jayiyega aur drive slowly; aur pahunchte hi mujhe phone kijiyega aur.....
Anmol: Are bas bas main sirf 2 dino ke liye ja raha hoon; don't worry main apna khayal rakhoonga aur phone karta rahunga. Tum bhi apna khayal rakhna; don't miss me too much.

Ragini smiled and blushed at his comment. Saying this, he sat in the car and drove off. She waved saying bye to him and walked inside. She was organizing her closet when her cell phone rang and it was Kaushalya; Ragini was catching up with her telling her about Anmol's trip and Gunni's job as Ragini didn't get a chance to go visit them lately. On other hand, Gunni and Abhay just finished their presentation and it was now lunch break.

Abhay: I am starving; chalo lets go out for lunch. Yahan pass hi main acha chinese restaurant hai, you must try it.
Gunni: Haan sahi baat bhookh to mujhe bhi bahut lagi hai, lets go.

They left office and arrived at the restaurant shortly. After being seated, a waiter came to get their order.

Waiter: What can I get for you?
Abhay & Gunni: Veg chinese noodles with manchurian

They exchanged smile after ordering the same thing together and the waiter served them shortly.

Abhay: Tumhe yaad hai Gunni, hum college ki canteen main bhi noodles order kiya karte the
Gunni: Ofcourse, oh those college days were the best. Yaad hai ek baar us waiter ne sare noodles tum par gira diye the

Abhay and Gunni laughed remembering that scene when a waiter got pushed by another waiter and he spilled the noodles on Abhay's shirt.

Abhay: Haan aur kaise sabh ne mera mazaak udaaya tha, wakya hi voh din kamaal ke din the. We had so much fun. Abh to sabh apni apni life main busy hain; thank god I atleast found you.
Gunni: Maine to kabhi socha hi na tha ki main tumhe dubara aise milungi aur upar se humari families bhi ek doosre ko jaante hain.
Abhay: Small world indeed. So, hows everyone at home?
Gunni: Sabh theek as usual, chachu aaj business meeting ke liye Kanpur gaye hain.
Abhay: Oh ok that's good, your chachu and chachi are really nice.
Gunni: Haan main aur chachu, we are best friends and I get along really well with chachi also.
Abhay: Well, I am done. Tumhe kuch aur chahiye?
Gunni: Nahi bas I am also done, office jakar mujhe voh Sharma client se bhi milna hai.
Abhay: Haan badi mushkil se usse appointment li hai, ek number ka khadoos banda hai voh. Let's go, tum chalo main bill pay karke aata hoon.
Gunni: Kisne kaha ki bill tum de rahe ho?
Abhay: Are its ok aur waise bhi our first lunch is on me.
Gunni: Okay fine, but next time its on me.

Abhay went to the pay the bill while Gunni was standing outside in the parking lot waiting for Abhay. She was checking her messages on her phone when suddenly a guy approached her with knife in his hand.

Gunni shrieked immediately as she wasn't expecting someone to just come to her.

Guy: Ae jaldi se jo kuch hai nikaal.

Abhay was walking outside when he saw some guy messing aroung with Gunni, he quickly ran upto Gunni who was scared as the guy had pointed knife at her. Abhay put his arm around Gunni and held her close.

Guy: Ae shaane nataunki band kar aur maal nikaal.

Abhay grabbed him by the collar and he tried to throw away his knife. In admist of this scene, Abhay's right hand got injured with knife and was now bleeding. He punched the guy who quickly ran away knowing that Abhay has his knife now and could beat him. Abhay threw the knife and went to Gunni who was still in a shock.

Abhay: Gunni, are you okay? Don't worry chala gaya voh.

Gunni silently nodded her head and they both sat in the car. Gunni suddenly noticed Abhay's hand and she immediately grabbed his hand.

Gunni: Abhay tumhare haath se khoon nikal raha hai, kya jaroorat thi usse hathaapayi karne ki, tumhe jayada lag jaati to. Use bas paise dekar chod dete

While shes saying this, she took a handkerchief from her purse and tied it to his hand and Abhay just looked at her.

Abhay: Are tum kamaal kar rahi ho, voh chaakoo lekar tumhare pass aaya aur tum chahiti ho ki main usse aise hi chod deta aur waise bhi agar paise de bhi deta, voh kalko kisi aur ke saath bhi aisa hi karta.

Then they drove off to office and upon reaching at office, Gunni tied proper bandage to his hand and went to attend her meeting with the client. Upon finishing the meeting, Abhay dropped her home and headed home himself. Gunni was narrating Ragini and others at dinning table about what happened earlier in the day and how Abhay took the risk to that fight that goon. Ragini got worried but got assured when Gunni told her that shes okay and Abhay as well. On other hand, Abhay's parents noticed bandage on his hand as well.

Gautami: Abhay, yeh tumhare haath main bandage?
Abhay: Haan maa bas kuch nahi aise hi mamooli si chot hai.
Ram: Par choti lagi kaise?

Abhay narrated them the scene; they were happy that he saved Gunni's life.

Ram: Beta, its good that you stood up for Gunni par tumhe itna risk nahi lena chahiye tha, paise dekar matter khatam kar dete. Khair, agli baar aisa kuch ho to risk mat lena.
Abhay: Jee papa

Ragini had put kids to bed and Gunni was asking her if Anmol had called.

Gunni: Chachu ka koi phone aaya?
Ragini: Nahi abhi tak to nahi, aap to jaanti hain na apne Chachu ko, kaam main itna busy ho jaate hain ki baki sabh bhool jaate hain.
Gunni: My poor chachi is waiting for his call

And just then Ragini's cell beeped with Anmol's name flashing on the screen.

Gunni: Ooh what a timing, well I should leave you two to talk and go to sleep. Goodnight Chachi
Ragini: Gunni aap bhi na bas, Goodnight.

Smilingly she picked up the phone.

Ragini: Hello
Anmol: Sorry Ragini, kanpur pahunchte hi itna busy ho gaya ki time nahi mila phone karne ka. Bas abhi hotel room pahuncha hoon dinner karke clients ke saath
Ragini: Mujhe maloom tha ki aap kaam main busy honge, meeting kaisi rahi?
Anmol: Apni taraf se to maine clients ko satisfy kar diya baaki jab deal final hogi tab hi pata chalega. Khair, bache kaise hain aur ghar main sabh?
Ragini: Bachon ko abhi sula diya aur baki bhi sabh theek hain. Maa ka bhi phone aaya tha apke jane ke baad, apke bare main pooch rahi thi.

She also Anmol about her incident today and how Abhay had helped her.

Anmol: That was really nice of Abhay aur Gunni theek to hai?
Ragini: Jee voh theek hai, Gunni bata rahi thi ki bas Abhay ke haath main thodi chot aayi thi
Anmol: Ragini, aap Abhay se milkar use thanks kijiyega, usne Gunni ki itni madad ki.
Ragini: Jee main bhi yehi soch rahi thi, kal subah jab Gunni ko office drop karungi tab Abhay se bhi mil loongi.
Anmol: Acha Ragini, mujhe subah meeting ke liye jaldi uthna hai aur agar jaldi kaam ho gaya to main shaam ko hi kanpur si nikal jaunga aur kal raat tak ghar pahunch jaunga. Aap bhi araam kijiye. Goodnight.
Ragini: Yeh to achi baat hai, aap phone kar dijiyega agar shaam ko nikal rahe hain to. Goodnight.
Anmol: Sure, Bye Ragini.
Ragini: Bye.

Next morning, Ragini dropped the kids to school and later reached Gunni's office to drop her to work. Gunni texted Abhay asking if he is at office already and he replied that he just got in and is in the cabin.

Gunni: Chachi, Abhay already cabin main hai. Chaliye aap wahan hi mil lijiye aur main apko apna office bhi dikha deti hoon.

Ragini followed Gunni and Gunni showed her around and entered her cabin.

Gunni: Hi, Abhay.
Abhay turned around to see Gunni along with her Chachi.
Abhay: Hi Gunni. Are aap..... namaste.
Ragini: Namaste.
Gunni: Chachi yahan tumse milne aayi hain especially.
Abhay: Mujhse especially..... koi kaam tha?
Gunni: Haan tumhe daatne aayi hain.

Abhay was confused and he was just looking at Ragini wondering what he had done. Ragini shook her head at Gunni's behaviour of joking around with Abhay which had scared the poor guy.

Ragini: Nahi yeh Gunni to bas aise hi mazaak kar rahi hai, main to bas yahan aapse thanks kehne aayi thi.
Abhay: Thanks kisliye
Ragini: Voh jo kal aapne....
Abhay: Are isme thanks wali kaunsi baat hai, wahan Gunni ke ilava koi aur bhi hota to main aise hi karta. Aap yahan especially sirf thanks kehne aayi hain, aap please mujhe sharminda mat kijiye. No need for thanks.
Ragini: Phir bhi aapne itna risk liya, aapka haath abh kaisa hai?
Abhay: Bas choti si chot hai, its getting better. Aap bilkul chinta mat kijiye. Are aap baithiye to sahi, main coffee order karta hoon.
Ragini: Nahi bas main chalungi, darasal mujhe maa ke ghar bhi jana hai unse milne aur aap bhi apna kaam continue kijiye.
Abhay: OK phir next time kabhi. Namaste.
Ragini: Namaste

Gunni walked her outside and went back to work in the cabin. Ragini went to her parents house and spent few hours there as she hadn't met her maa and bauji since long time. Shortly after, Ragini left to pick the kids from school and headed home. It was evening around 5 pm when Anmol called Ragini again.

Anmol: Hi Ragini, maine yeh bataane ke liye phone kiya ki main bas abhi kanpur se nikal raha hoon aur takreeban 10 baje tak pahunch jaunga apke paas.
Ragini: Iska matlab contract mil gaya?
Anmol: Haan contract mil gaya, meeting main finalized ho gaya tha project
Ragini: Congratulations, apki mehnat rang le hi aayi. Sabh bahut khush honge yeh jaankar aur yeh jaankar ki aap ghar jaldi aa rahe hain.
Anmol: Aur aap?
Ragini (smiled and blushed): Sabh mein, main bhi shaamil hoon.
Anmol (smiled): Ok phir I will see you shortly. Bye
Ragini: Bye.

Ragini informed everyone that Anmol got the contract and he will be arriving at night. Alekh and Inderjeet were glad to hear that. It was now 11 pm but Anmol wasn't there yet; Inderjeet told Ragini its probably due to construction on the highway to kanpur thats taking him little long. They were all sitting in the hall when phone rang and Inderjeet received the call. The call had caused his face to turn pale all of a sudden and he shouted "What". Everyone rushed to him wondering what happened; he looked at Ragini with a worried face. Ragini felt something weird inside her.

Ragini: Papa jee kya hua, kiska phone tha?
Inderjeet (stuttering): Anmol.....
Ragini: Kya hua Anmol ko, Papa jee. Boliye na?
Vasu: Inderjeet batayiye na kiska phone tha aur kya hua Anmol ko.
Inderjeet: Anmol....... ka............ Accident!!!!!!

* I know you would hate me for putting this twist in the story but this twist was needed**

Edited by Amit90 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
kya hua anmol ko amit? kay hua??? OMG... yaar.. wonderful part... continue it
soon... i just hope hamara anmol will be fine.
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Posted: 14 years ago

@amit90..really nice update..

very well described scenes and could see for real the busy morning of the rajvansh..

anmol going to kanpur but still dont forget to drop his kids to school and gunni to office..
abhay/gunni scene interesting and loving how you are developping their friendship..in the end abhay was the hero of gunni saving her from the goon.
ragini/anmol convo so sweet and ragini always blushing and smiling..
anmol getting the contract and all so happy ..but their happiness is for short stay as the phone call did brought some bad news for them..watching inderjeet ragini could feel something wrong about anmol..her anxiety could visualise it that scene..
a sad twist anmol met with an accident...😭
you have given us a happy moment of the family and also a sad moment too with anmol's accident..will wait for next update to read how you unfold the twist about anmol's acident..
awesome job..do keep it up..👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow really nice, please continue soon, thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fantastic Amitoz.👏Loved to read Angini's part so much.😳 ☺️

Please write more on them.😳 ☺️

What a twist you gave?😲Please make Anmol normal soon.😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Amitoz nice long scenes 👏
Firstly Anmol going to Kanpur and Ragini helping him get ready..
Then The Abhay and Gunni interaction and Abhay saving Gunni from the goons and getting injured and finally Gunni nursing him !! 😊

Very nicely shown and I cold picturize the whole scene

Then comes my interesting part Anmol calling up Ragini and he telling her that the meeting went on well and they finally got the deal..
He asked her whether he missed her and she blushing !!😉😳

And O M G what a twist Accident.. Leaving us at the edge of the seat ..
Twst with suspense!!😲

Continue soon !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you all for your great, detailed comments! Its great to see that my writing helps you to picture the story so vividly in your mind and you feel connected to it. Here is the next part, hope you guys enjoy this one as well. Please do leave back your comments as well, I look forward to reading those. Thank you and Enjoy!

PART 22

The word "accident" echoed in the silent hall causing Ragini to leave in a position where she didn't know how to react to this news. She moved back slowly from everyone and was mumbling to herself "Anmol... ka.... accident....accident"; tears were silently rolling down her eyes and she was gasping at same time. Vasu rushed to her and held her in her arms where as Alekh was controlling Inderjeet.

Alekh: Papa, aap sambhaliye apne aapko please aur humain hospital jana chahiye jaldi.
Inderjeet (wiping his tears): Haan beta tum sahi keh rahe ho.
Alekh: Sakshi tum yahan ruko bachon ke paas, unhe pata nahi chalna chahiye abhi voh ghabra jayenge aur Gunni tum apni Chachi ke pass rehna, Sahil ke saath.
Gunni: Jee chachu main hoon yahan chachi ke paas.
Alekh: Papa main bas abhi wallet lekar aata hoon.

Meanwhile, Inderjeet decided to inform Sharma family; with heavy heart, he picked up the phone to tell them this news. Ragini's bauji picked up the phone.

Bauji: Hello
Inderjeet: Namaste Sharma Ji, main Inderjeet bol raha hoon.
Bauji: Are namaste bhai sahib, is waqt kaise yaad kiya, sabh theek to hai?
Inderjeet: Sharma Ji, khabar hi kuch aisi hai...voh darasal Anmol ka...... accident.....ho gaya
Bauji: Kya?! Kaise lekin, abh kahan hain Anmol beta?
Inderjeet: Jee hum abhi hospital ke liye nikal rahe hain, wahan pahunchkar hi pata chalega. Aap ho sake to City hospital pahunchiye...
Bauji: Jee bilkul, abhi pahunch rahe hain

After hanging up the phone, Bauji informed everyone about the accident. Kaushalya, Vineet, and Bauji left for hospital where Malti was home with Kavya and Nani Ji. On the other hand, Alekh, Vasu, and Inderjeet were leaving for hospital when Ragini went upto them.

Ragini: Mummy Jee, main bhi chaloongi hospital.
Vasu: Ragini, tum ghar ruko bachon ke pass hum hain na, tumhe wahan aur tension hogi
Inderjeet: Beta, Vasu theek keh rahi hai tum...
Ragini (folding hands and crying): Papa jee, please main aapke saamne haath jodti hoon mujhe bhi le chaliye, yahan rehkar mera dhyaan wahan hi rahe ga aur Anmol wahan akele hain.
Alekh: Chalo Ragini.

They all left for hospital and reached there after few minutes and met sharma family there as well. They all went upstairs and enquired about Anmol.

Alekh: Nurse, Anmol Rajvansh kis room main admit huye hain?
Nurse: Jee unka highway par accident ho gaya tha to wahan ke logon ne inhe yahan pahunchaya, unka abhi operation chal raha hai room no 402 main.
They were all waiting outside the room waiting for doctor to come; Ragini had been crying on her mom's shoulder and Kaushalya was trying to console her. Vineet and Alekh had gone to fill the formalities and pay the fees for operation. It was 1 am when the red light above the operation theatre turned off and everyone got up from their seats as they saw a doctor coming out of the room.

Dr. Mehra: Aap Mr. Anmol Rajvansh ke family members?
Alekh: Jee doctor, main uska bhai hoon. Kaise huya yeh sabh aur Anmol kaisa hai?
Dr Mehra: Darasal Kanpur highway par construction ka kaam chal raha hai aur isi wajah se roads ki condition theek nahi hai aur traffic rules bhi follow nahi ho rahe. Wahan jo workers the unhone bataaya ki Anmol ki gaadi ki takkar ek truck se huyi hai jo ki kafi speed par tha, aur shayad highway lights ke naa hone ki wajah se raasta clear nahi tha isliye yeh accident hua. Wahan logon ne gaadi se Anmol jee ko nikala aur unke gaadi ke papers main address dekhkar is hospital main bhej diya ambulance main. Accident kafi serious tha aur truck ki speed bhi kafi thi. Anmol has head little injury to head and his right arm but his legs have suffered more. Unke dono taange car ke neeche dab gayi thi jis wajah se nerves have been supressed aur voh chal nahi sakte.

Everyone was shocked; Ragini felt as if she couldn't feel her own legs, the silent tears had now turned into sobs.

Inderjeet: Doctor, is this permanent injury, iska koi treatment?
Dr. Mehra: Dekhiye yeh permanent damage to nahi hai, it is not case of paralyses par unko theek hone main kaafi waqt lagega. It would take lot of time for his legs to heal so he can maintain balance and stand on his feet.
Ragini: Kyaa hum unhe mil sakte hain?
Dr. Mehra: Filhaal to voh medicines aur injections ki wajah se behosh hain aur jab tak voh hosh main nahi aate, unki condition ke baare main kuch kaha nahi sakta. Par aapse main koi ek unhe kamre main jakar dekh sakta hai.

Saying this he left and everyone stood there speechless. It was shock for everyone to digest the news; Ragini walked inside the room slowly by herself and with great emotional turmoil, she pushed the door. There he was laying in bed with an oxygen mask on and thousand other wires attached to his body; the same Anmol who was always cheerful, playing with her kids, who was talking to her in such lively manner few hours ago on the phone. Tears were uncontrollably sliding down her eyes, she stood near his bed and stared at him. This was probably the first time she had stared him from such close proximity. She didn't know what to do: to carass his hair, cry on his shoulder, try talking to him, etc. Night was on its full peak; it was dead silent in the room and infact in the hallway as well. Ragini had been laying next to his bed, resting her head on her arm, her tears had dried up but tear marks were vivid on her face. Meanwhile everyone else was outside in the hallway, sitting on the benches, waiting for morning to arise so that they can see Anmol once he gains his consciousness. Alekh called home to inform Sakshi about the condition as they didn't get a chance to inform anyone. Sakshi was swinging cradle for Sahil so that he doesn't wake up and Gunni was also laying on the bed to give her company but she was awake as well; waiting to hear from Alekh or someone from the hospital. Sakshi's cell vibrated and she quickly moved to the other side of the bed to receive the call so that Sahil doesn't wake up; phone's vibration had caused Gunni to sit upright as well.

Sakshi: Alekh Ji, main aap hi ke phone ka intezaar kar rahi thi. Anmol bhaiya kaise hain?
Alekh: Umm Sakshi bas formalities ke chakar main time nahi mil paaya.... Anmol ki condition critical hai..... (he explained her everything).... subah jab hosh aayega tabh condition saamne aayegi.

Sakshi (stuttering): Hey bhagwan..... yeh itna sabh kuch..... bhaiya ke saath...... Ragini Didi!!! Alekh Ji, ragini didi kaisi hain, voh to yeh sunkar bilkul toot gayi hongi.
Alekh: Badi mushkil se andar gayi thi, abhi Anmol ke saath hi hai room main. Khair, subah jaise hi kuch pata chalta hai main phone karta hoon. Tum bachon ka khayal rakhna.
Sakshi: Jee Alekh Ji aur subah main bhi wahan aaungi.
Alekh: Okay, rakhta hoon. Bye
Sakshi: Bye

Gunni had been reading her facial expressions trying to guess the situation whereas Sakshi placed her phone back with trembling hands.

Gunni: Chachi, kya hua Chachu ko?

Sakshi narrated her everything which shook Gunni as if she couldn't believe all this could happen in just few hours to her Chachu who is an ideal man in her life, her best friend. Sakshi consoled her and helped her go to sleep promising that they would go see Anmol tomorrow and he would be fine soon. Next morning, Gunni informed Abhay that she won't be coming to office due to some family emergency and that she would tell him later all about it. Malti came over with Kavya to take care of the kids as they would be alone at home. They told the kids that it is holiday from school as they didn't want to tell them everything now. Sakshi fed Sahil and dressed him up; leaving him with Malti. Gunni and Sakshi left for hospital. On the other hand, everyone was impatient for Anmol to gain conscious; Ragini had woken up but she remained seated on the stool next to Anmol's bed. Shortly after a while, Sakshi and Gunni arrived at the hospital. Alekh told them that they cannot go in as only Ragini is permitted to go inside till Anmol gains consciousness. Doctor came in for morning checkup and Ragini was told to step outside. Sakshi held Ragini and made her sit down giving her glass of water. Gunni couldn't speak anything after seeing Ragini's condition; even though Ragini has always been strong and supporting others in times of needs, but this news effected her terribly. After, few minutes doctor came out with reports in his hand.

Dr. Mehra: Mr. Rajvansh, Anmol's condition is stable now.

This news brought a small smile and hope on everyone's faces.

Dr. Mehra: Par unhe conscious hone main thoda sa waqt lagega, maybe in few hours he should be gaining conscious; its slow but positive improvement. So, don't worry. I will see you guys later.

Sakshi: Papa, aap sabh log raat se yahaan hai, aap ghar jakar fresh ho aayiye.... main aur Gunni hain yahan. Ragini didi, aap bhi fresh ho jayiye aur kuch khaya bhi nahi hai aap sabh ne.
Ragini: Nahi Sakshi, main theek hoon.
Vasu: Ragini, Sakshi theek keh rahi hai. Thodi der ke liye ghar ho aate hain, hum tumhare saath phir waapis aa jayenge.
Kaushalya: Haan beta, Vasundhara ji theek keh rahi hain.

After much convincing, everyone went home except Gunni and Sakshi to get freshened up. Upon reaching home, they all got freshened up and Malti served them breakfast made by Guddi. Kids were playing in the hallway and they approached Ragini.

Tammy: Mumma, aap sabh kahan se aa rahe ho?
Khushi: Haan, maasi maa aur partner bhi raat ko aanewale the, voh kahan hain?
Kavya: Aur humain school se chutti kyun hai?
Malti: Kavya, tum bahut bolte ho, maine kaha na ki aaj chutti hai school se, tang mat karo Ragini ko.
Ragini: Nahi bhabhi, aap inhe daantiye mat. Kab tak inse chupaayenge. Beta, aapke Papa ka accident ho gaya tha raat ko isliye hum sabh hospital se aa rahe hain.
Tammy: Kya hua papa ko?
Khushi: Unhe jayada chot to nahi aayi na, maasi maa?
Ragini: Beta unhe thoda time lagega theek hone main aur voh thode din hospital main rahenge. Aap promise karo aap ache bache banke rahoge ghar main mumma ke begair, promise?
Tammy: Kya hum bhi hospital main papa se mil sakte hain?
Ragini: Beta abhi papa baat nahi kar sakte lekin jaise voh theek honge main aapko milwa laungi unse. Mumma raat ko hospital se aane ke baad subah aakar fresh hokar aapko school chodne jayegi aur aap dono ache bachon ki tarah Sakshi chachi aur Gunni didi ke saath rehna. Apna homework complete karna aur time par sona theek hai, promise?
Tammy & Khushi: Promise.

Ragini hugged her kids while crying whereas everyone else also had tears in their eyes. After eating and getting freshened, everyone left for hospital again as it was afternoon time and Anmol could gain conciousness any moment. On the other hand, Gunni was texting Abhay on his lunch break.

Text Message Convo:

Abhay: Hey, Gunni. What was the family emergency, is everything ok?
Gunni: Anmol chachu had a severe accident
Abhay: What?! Lekin kaise, kabh?
Gunni: Last night when he was coming back from Kanpur, abhi tak hosh nahi aaya unhe par doctor keh rahe hain ki he will gain conscious anytime now.
Abhay: I am really sorry to hear that...... umm... I will drop by after work to see him. And you don't worry, it will be ok.
Gunni: Thanks, Abhay.... I really owe you, tumne sara kaam....
Abhay: Common, Gunni its no big deal aur family is top priority. No worries. Take care. Bye.
Gunni: Bye.

Everyone else arrived at the hospital again and they were waiting outside the room. Few hours passed by and now it was 4 PM when nurse called the doctor to checkup Anmol as she noticed a movement. Doctor rushed in and Anmol had slowly opened his eyes; doctor conducted his regular test and he came outside.

Dr. Mehra: Anmol jee ko hosh aa gaya hai, aap sabh unse mil sakte hain par voh abhi shayad baat na kar sake par he will be normal soon.
Inderjeet: Thank you, doctor.

Ragini had tears rolling down her eyes as she saw him awake with his eyes open after 12+ hours!

PLZ COMMENT &STAY TUNED !!

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Posted: 14 years ago
@amit..that was one emotional part as anmol is critical due to the terrible accident...
anmol accident news and all family shattered hearing this esp ragini and i could visualise her state of mind at that moment..
so well described scenes and its feel so real...
from hospital to ragini getting back home and how daringly she told the kids the sad news though she was going through lots of pain....well written scenes with the perfect emotion all the family was going through....👏
its a relief after so many hrs anmol got consciousness but still it will take time for him to heal esp his legs..
its some bad time for anmol but i'm sure with ragini's care/love anmol will get better soon..
so waiting for next part and great job.👏👏👏..
Edited by savee_k - 14 years ago

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