Pyaar to hona hi tha- NEW FF- Part 40A- Pg 34!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello guys, I am Amitoz. I have been a silent member on the forum but today I have the urge to write. Bidaai has been my favourite show and I started following it even more after the leap and I am very disappointed that Bidaai is ending at such interesting phase. According to me, they should alteast extend it for 3-6 months in order to conclude all tracks completely.So, I have thought out the proper "ending" as to what CTS should show the viewers and since its not possible, I am trying to write a FF from current track onwards till the end. Its my perspective of how I want Bidaai to conclude. I have NEVER published FF before although I wrote 6 FF earlier but never had the courage to publish it as I have seen people on this forum with immense talent. But love of Bidaai has turned me into a writer and especially since we are not getting the accurate ending.So, if you all would give me some feedback if should commence with my idea or not, that would be great. Depending on what people respond and feel about this new FF idea, I will be posting the parts of FF. And i feel this is the way we can keep the forum active and keep our memories of Bidaai intact although show is going off air soon. Sorry for the long message but I wanted to put out my feelings out there as to why I am writing a FF and what will the be story based on. Thank you for bearing with me and I look forward to your responses.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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are you mad or what ,you wrote 6 parts & never published thats tooooooooo bad. If you want correct feed back post 1st part & just see the response & i will say do it right here ,Right now😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yes u can say i am mad, lol! but i didnt write 6 parts for this FF, it was for same other FF based on Heer and Prem from Kis Desh. I am working on the first part like you said, I can get correct response based on that. So it will be up shortly. Thank for the encouragement :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Amitoz we would love to read your write-up! Please Write it and We'll comment!..It happened with me too that I started few part of ff on paper but never posted them..But AnGini made me post my first OS so I didi! If you want you can publish your 6 parts of ther ff in Fanfiction forum I am sure you will get feedback n continue writing your ff for Bidaai as we all wanted it to get some extension but it didn't.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Please post it !! We would love to read !!!

We love reading fanfictions and it takes us to a different world !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Well, thank you everyone for the encouragement. I am posting the first part and it is continued from yesterday's episode where Anmol and Ragini had gone for dance practice. It is first time writing and publishing FF so please bear with the mistakes and I would love any feedback to make it better especially from such creative writers of this forum. It is little short update as I have early morning class tomorrow and I just wanted to give the glimpse of my FF. Also please excuse any grammatical errors, I didn't proofread it. Well here goes:

PYAAR TO HONA HI THA


PART 1

It was cold foggy night outside but one can get the glimpse of moon trying to peep through the clouds making its presence valid. Ragini was standing near the window, looking out at the moon as if it is promising a new light in her life. She stood there reminiscing events from earlier in the day where she had danced with Anmol and how his hands smoothly gripped her waist. She remember that touch that brought the new vibe in her; she was feeling confused at the same time whether her feelings are giving the impression of her being in love. For her it almost seemed surreal as she couldn't even imagine being in love after all these years. But on the other hand, those memories brought a smile to her face. She remembered the memories from past few days where Anmol had kindly requested to join him at lunch and other day how she reacted on the eve of Karwachauth when she flung her arms open and hugged Anmol. She stood there wondering and surprised at her own actions as if they were all part of some dream and it was someone else who was in that dream and not her. Deep in the thoughts, she remained still next to the window when a voice disturbed her thoughts. She turned around to see Anmol who just came from office as he directly went to work after the dance practice; she somehow felt akward to face him after that intimate dancing rehearsal.

Ragini: Aap kabh aaye, mujhe pata hi nahi chala.

Anmol: Bas abhi jab aap khidki ke paas chaand ko dekh rahi thi.

Ragini: Aap bahut thak gaye honge, main aapke liye khaana lekar aati hoon.

Anmol: Ji bilkul thak to main bahut gaya hoon, pehle dance practice phir office ki meetings.

Right when he mentioned dance practice, Ragini lowered her eyes so that she doesn't have to face him. Anmol could sense the awkwardness from her body language and he smiled to himself tracing back those moments.

Anmol: Waise mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap itna acha dance kar leti hain. Aap to bewaja form sign karne se inkaar kar rahi thi.

Ragini: Woh bas aise hi thoda bahut seekha tha maine. Par abh itne saalon main practice nahi ho paayi isiliye thoda ajeeb lag raha tha. Par shivani bata rahi thi ki aap hi bahut acha dance karlete hain.

Anmol: Jee, karta to hoon par aap jitna khoobsoorat nahi.

Ragini: Aap change kar lijiye main khaana laga deti hoon.

Anmol: Jee bilkul.

Ragini walked away blushing and left Anmol who had been smiling the entire day. For him, it was an ultimate moment as he got a chance to dance with the love his wife who willingly agreed to join him for this dance competition. At times he felt as if Ragini is coming close to him but when he thinks about the pendant which was not worn by Ragini the other day, he becomes confused as to what might be Ragini thinking about regarding him and their relationship. Putting his thoughts aside, he went to change as Ragini was waiting for him downstairs. Ragini had set the table when Anmol walked in. Ragini was serving him and Shivani happened to walk in at that time; she was irritated to see Anmol with Ragini and how he was staring at her as she served him food. Ragini made halwa and asked Anmol to try it and tell her how it is. Before, Anmol could eat the halwa, Shivani decided to intervene.

Shivani: Are Ragini tumhe nahi pata, Anmol ko halwa bilkul pasand nahi, haina Anmol?

Anmol just gave her an angry look whereas Ragini's smile faded away knowing that he doesn't even like halwa.

Anmol: Maine tumse kaha tha na Shivani, mera taste abh badal chuka hai. Aur Ragini apne haathon se kuch banaaye aur mujhe pasand naa aaye, aise to ho hi nahi sakta.

He, then looked at Ragini who just smiled at him. For him, her smile meant everything and he didn't want to lose that any cost. Even though he disliked halwa it in the past, he ate it as he didn't want Ragini to feel bad and moreover he wanted to prove Shivani wrong. But he himself was surprised to actually like the halwa. He smiled and thought to himself "ofcourse it will be good since Ragini had prepared it with her own hands".

Ragini: Kya huya? Acha nahi bana?

Anmol: Isse acha halwa maine aaj tak kabhi nahi khaaya, Ragini. Aapke haathon to main to jadoo hai.

Ragini felt elated at his comment and just blushed. Deep down somewhere in her heart, she had hoped that Anmol would eat the halwa despite of what Shivani had said. Anmol and Ragini went upstairs after finishing their dinner leaving fuming Shivani behind who was planning her next big move to separate Anmol and Ragini.

******** Will continue soon; depending on if you guys liked it or no*************

Edited by Amitoz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fantastic part Amit (if i can call you That)⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏


Can't wait for next part😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very beautiful please continue !!!

We can enjoy many angini scenes from such talented people

!!

Wow Halwa is anmol's choice
Anything ragini makes he loves

I love teh way he woos her
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gr8 Update Amitoz!👏👏👏👏I think you should really continue writing n posting more of your FFs!👍🏼..You're good at writing n the FF was good!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome..I hope we got these kind of scenes..I just wish they did not rush the story and gave us some of these romantic scenes between Anmol and Ragini..Anmol cuteness and Ragini blushing would rock the screen.

please continue and let us know the what happens next..

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