Pyaar to hona hi tha- NEW FF- Part 40A- Pg 34!! - Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago
Amitoz Very very nice thoroughly enjoyed it !!👏

Anmol nay khana banaya dil khush ho gaya !!!

Very well written !!!
Please continue !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
You put them to sleep too fast....
Waiting for some action 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice part,enjoyed reading it please continue soon, thank you
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@ amitroz... i was wonderful.... you have written it well..
Anmol: Umm kya hua, Ragini aap has kyun rahi hain?
Ragini: Umm Anmol apne is main namak ki bajaye cheeni daali hai.🤣🤣 hahahaha... it's a very good seen....... continue it soon dear....
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Hello Guys, Here is Part 18, please do comment as I am only writing it for you guys. This part is little long as I have tried to make up for late update. Thank you!

PART 18

"Gunni!!", screamed Anmol to call her downstairs as he was getting late for work and it was a big day for Gunni today. Gunni was going for her interview at most prestigious law firm of the town to apply for a position after completing her studies. She came running downstairs dressed up in a formal professional looking dress suit with files in her hand.

Gunni: Sorry, Chachu main papers organize kar rahi thi. Abh chalein?
Ragini: Ek minute Gunni, ruko.

Ragini stepped up and fed her yogurt as its auspicious and to wish her luck. Gunni hugged Ragini in return.

Ragini: All the best, Gunni aur mujhe yakeen hai ki aapko yeh job jaroor milegi.
Sakshi: Aur tumhari mehnat ka phal tumhe jaroor milega, dekhna.
Gunni: Thank you so much lovely, Chachis.
Alekh: We wanna hear some good news, allright! Best of luck.
Gunni: I hope so too, Chachu.
Vasu: Acha abh late mat hona, wish you all the best
Inderjeet: Good luck beta, make us proud.
Gunni: Thank you bade papa.
Anmol: Chalo bacha party, lets go!

Anmol and Gunni left along with the kids and he dropped off the kids first.

Tammy & Khushi: Best of Luck didi!
Gunni: Thank you my little munchkins!

Anmol then drove off to their destination; Malhotra Solicitors and Barristers Law Firm.
Anmol: Well, here you go Gunni! Jaise hi interview khatam ho mujhe phone karke batana ki kya hua aur ghar par phone kardena, driver tumhe pick karne aa jayega. All the best.
Gunni: Thank you so much, Chachu.

Anmol got in the car and drove off while Gunni made her way into the building. Upon taking the elevator, she had reached the 3rd floor and she requested the receptionist that she is here to see Mr. Malhotra for an interview. After being seated for few minutes, she was told to go in the cabin. Upon taking a deep breath and fixing her hair, Gunni gathered her files and walked in the cabin. She shook hands with the CEO of the law firm and began explaining about her studies and how it would be beneficial for her to work at such prestigious law firm. After having a detailed meeting for about an hour, Mr. Malhotra was convinced that she would be great addition to their law firm seeing her creditibility.

Mr. Malhotra: Well, Ms. Rajvansh, Congratulations and we welcome you aboard. I am sure you will prove to be a great addition for us and our law firm.
Gunni: Thank you so much for believing in me, Sir.
Mr. Malhotra: Ms. Rajvansh, main chahunga ki aap shuruaat ke liye kuch legal cases main lawyers ko assist karein; preparing case briefs etc. I am sure as time goes on, you will be able to handle cases by yourself. So, you would be working with Mr. Kapoor and he also joined us few months back and he has been assigned to a case. Aap unke saath us case par kaam karengi aur I am sure aap dono ek achi team saabit honge. Main unhe inform kar deta hoon apke baare, aap room 305 main jaakar unse mil sakti hain and he will guid you through. All the best.
Gunni: Thank you, Sir.

Gunni walked out of that cabin all elated as she had finally gotten the job in such prestigious law firm as it would be great stepping stone for her career later on. She made her way to room number 305 praying that Mr. Kapoor would be someone nice as she would have to work with him. She slightly knocked on the door and walked inside upon hearing the response from inside.

Gunni: Hello Sir, I am Gunni Rajvansh.

The person sitting on the chair spun the chair around and got up to greet Gunni when both of them had a surprised look on their face. Indeed it was a surprise for Gunni to see Abhay Kapoor, who she had recognized from her college days; he was 2 years senior to her but being in same college, they both had interacted at various occassions at college.

Gunni: Abhay tum yahan?
Abhay: I can't believe its you, Gunni. How are you, long time no see. Umm please, have a seat.
Gunni: Mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha ki main tumse baatein kar rahi hoon, I mean tum to college ke baad gayab hi ho gaye. Maine tumhare friends se tumhara contact number bhi liya lekin contact ho nahi ho paya.
Abhay: Haan college ke baad main Delhi chale gaya tha studies ke liye aur phir graduation ke baad, yahan aakar main job ke liye apply kiya. I just joined few months ago. Aur tum batao, yahan kaise?
Gunni: Well same reason, I finished studies and here I am in this law firm to start work experience. So, I guess I am working with you, what a co-incidence.
Abhay: I hope a good one, ofcourse. Its good to see you after such a long time, college ki saari yaadein taaza ho gayi. Aur acha hua yahan main kisi ko jaanta bhi nahi tha, so its great to see you and the fact that we will work together.
After that, Abhay showed her the office and introduced her to other staff. Later he briefly outlined her the case that they are supposed to be working on. Gunni was impressed with his knowledge and how he explained everything to him.

Abhay: Well, I guess this should be enough for introduction, nahi? Hum kal se start karenge in more detail.
Gunni: Yea, so if everything is done, can I leave?
Abhay: Yea, well I mean I would have loved to make you stay for lunch today but I have meeting with a client. So I guess, I will see you tomorrow.
Gunni: Its no problem and it was great seeing you after such a long time and indeed it was a great surprise. I will see you tomorrow 9 AM sharp, Sir.
Abhay: Oh please, no Sir! And it was great seeing you as well. Take care and see you tomorrow.

Abhay went back to work and Gunni had left the cabin. They both had smiles on each other's faces after seeing each other after so long. Gunni had called Ragini and Ragini told her that she is coming to pick her up as she is already out doing errands. Ragini told the driver the address of the firm and after a short while, she had arrived there. She got out scanning the area as she waited for Gunni. Gunni came outside and she hugged Ragini with joy to share such big news.

Gunni: I got the job, Chachi!!
Ragini: Congratulations, Gunni. Main bahut khush hoon apke liye aur mujhe yakeen tha ki aapko yeh job jaroor milegi.
Gunni: Chachi, yeh sabh aapke, Chachu, aur baki gharwalon ki goodwishes se possible huya hai.

They were in car now and Gunni was explaining Ragini how her interview went.

Gunni: Aur Chachi sabhse achi baat yeh huyi ki aaj itne saalon baad meri mulakaat mere college ke dost se huyi, Abhay. Voh college main mera senior tha lekin hum college festivities ke dauraan milte rehte the. Phir voh delhi chala gaya aur usse contact nahi ho paaya, aur aaj yoon aise use achanak dekhkar main to hairaan hi reh gayi. Jiske saath mujhe casework karna, voh Abhay hi hai. I am so glad.
Ragini: Are wah, yeh to bahut achi baat hai Gunni. Puraane doston se milne ka maza hi kuch aur hai, college ki yaadein dubara taaza ho jaati hain.
Gunni: Are Chachi, main baaton baaton main Chachu ko to phone karna bhool hi gayi, unhone mujhe phone karne ke liye kaha tha.
Ragini: Koi baat nahi, hum unhe office jakar yeh news dete hain.
Gunni: Okay, I can't wait to see him and tell him the good news.

Upon reaching the office, Ragini and Gunni walked in Anmol's cabin. Anmol was delighted to see Ragini and Gunni. Gunni quickly walked upto him and hugged him.

Anmol: Congratulations, Gunni. I am very proud of you.
Gunni: Chachu abhi to maine aapko bataya hi nahi ki mujhe job mili ke nahi.
Anmol: Tumhari khushi dekhkar mujhe aur kuch poochne ki zaroorat nahi padi. Well its definitely a good news.
Ragini: Humne socha ki office aakar aapko yeh news dein.
Anmol: Well, I think is good news ko celebrate karne ke liye humain lunch bahar karna chahiye nahi? Lets go, mujhe vaise vi bahut bhookh lagi hai.
Ragini: Anmol, Jija Ji aur Papa Ji nahi hain office main?
Anmol: Nahi Ragini, bhaiya to site par gaye hain aur Papa Ji bhi meeting par gaye hain.

All 3 of them drove to their favourite restaurant and had ordered food after being seated. As they were having lunch, Gunni narrated Anmol how her interview was and what would she have to do. Ragini told Anmol that Gunni was more excited to meet her college friend, Abhay and Gunni further told Anmol about Abhay and that they would now work together. After having their lunch, as they were all walking outside, Gunni had slightly bumped into someone and lifted her eyes to see who it was.

Gunni: I can't believe it, hum itne saalon se mile nahi aur aaj jab mile hain to baar baar mil rahe hain. Tum mera peecha to nahi kar rahe?
Abhay: No, actually maine bataya na tha ki meri client ke saath meeting hai to voh yahan hi milne wale the mujhe. I just finished having meeting with him.

Gunni realized that she didn't introduce Abhay to her Chachu and Chachi.

Gunni: Well, Abhay I would like you meet my Chachu and my Chachu. Chachu, this is Abhay jiske baare main maine abhi aapko bataya tha.

Abhay shook hands with Anmol and said Namaste to Ragini who nodded back.

Anmol: I am Anmol Rajvansh and shes my wife, Ragini. Bahut acha laga tumse milkar, Gunni abhi tumhare baare main bata rahi thi.
Abhay: Aapse milkar bhi bahut acha laga; jee main aur Gunni college main saath the par graduation ke baad contact hi nahi ho paya.
Anmol: I think it would be great for you two work together as you already know each other. Well, it was nice meeting you Abhay and hope to see you again. Sorry I have to rush back to office now as I have an urgent meeting.
Abhay: No, its completely allright. Nice meeting you.
Gunni: I will see you tomorrow at work.
Abhay: Yea sure.
Ragini: Aap ghar aayiyega kabhi jab time mile kaam ke baad.
Abhay: Ji jaroor, thank you.
They all left to their separate destinations; after dropping Anmol back to the office, Gunni and Ragini went to pick the kids from school and then got home after. Sakshi and Vasu congratulated Gunni on her achievement.

** NOTE: According to my imagination and my thinking, I have imagined Vishal Singh ( Rishi from Kasam Se) as someone to be playing character of Abhay as I think he would look good with Gunni. So just for sake of imagining (since we didn't actually see this character in real), you guys can imagine him as Abhay. For those who don't know, heres the picture of him that you can see and do tell me what you think of him as our new character! Thanks!
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Posted: 14 years ago
😊amitroz... nice part yaar... keep it up.. vishal singh is good😉.. continue it soon dear..😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part..😊
seems gunni love track will start soon..
abhay nice name and with the pic description of vishal singh he will suit gunni..
so gunni is a working woman now and with abhay in same office ..interesting..
the intro of abhay already done to her chachu anmol and chachi ragini and he got invitation too ..sounds interesting..😊
lets see how the story unfolds ahead..
enjoy reading it and keep it up..👏👏👏..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amitoz very very nice part..👏
I am glad Gunni has started to work in a law firm...

And this guy Abhay her college friend hmmm seems interesting...

I love to see Gunni being teased by her chachu.. please continue soon...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww ek japhi from me re.....
wil lreply in detail baad mien
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello Guys, I am back with Part 19, the update is little slow because I am not getting much feedback just about 4-5 comments so I am not taking any faster initiatives; just writing whenever I get a chance. I thought about discontinuing or ending it soon but I am continuing just for those who are reading and commenting as I don't want to ruin the story for them. So I will be updating depending on the feedback because I am busy with school so I would take my time in updating (sorry, not trying to be rude at all), I sincerely thank those who read and comment! So here is Part 19, hope you will like it! Thanks!

PS: The character of Lalit is portrayed by Ram Kapoor ( Mr. Walia from Kasam Se) and Gautami by Gautami Kapoor ( Ram Kapoor's wife in real life, she also played Tulsi's role in Kyunki Saas for a while and earlier in Ghar Ek Mandir for those who rem)

PART 19
Later at night, Gunni shared her good news with Alekh and Inderjeet while they were having dinner and they were equally elated for her. Anmol had meeting with client which is why he didn't come home.

Alekh: Are wah, Gunni yeh to bahut achi baat hai. Congrats!
Inderjeet: Beta tumne apne dost ka naam kya bataya?
Gunni: Abhay, Abhay Kapoor.
Inderjeet: Kahin voh famous lawyer Mr. Lalit Kapoor ka beta to nahi?
Gunni: Ji bade papa, aap jaante hain unhe?
Inderjeet: Haan beta voh humari company main legal advisor reh chuke hain, phir unhone apni practice shuru ki thi as a lawyer. Very nice family, we should invite them for dinner, isi bahane mulakat bhi ho jayegi.
Vasu: Gunni tum kal Abhay aur uski family ko humari taraf se invite kar dena waise hum bhi baat karlenge unse.
Gunni: Okay badi maa, I will do that.

Everyone went to their respective rooms after dinner; Gunni had tucked kids in their bed and went to sleep. On the other hand at Kapoor mansion, Abhay was having dinner with his family.

Gautami: Aur Abhay tumhara kaam kaisa ja raha hai?
Abhay: Bahut acha mom, infact main to aapko kuch batana hi bhool gaya. Aaj mujhe apni college ki friend mili; Gunni Rajvansh, usne aaj hi join kiya office aur hum dono saath main hi ek case par kaam karenge.
Lalit: Are wah yeh to bahut achi baat hai; umm Rajvansh naam suna hai pehle. Beta, kahin voh Rajvansh Industries se Mr. Inderjeet ke relation main to nahi hai?
Abhay: Papa yeh to pata nahi par aaj main uske Chachu aur Chachi se mila; Anmol aur Ragini Rajvansh.
Lalit: Hmm shayad koi aur bhi ho sakta hai. Khair jaane do, I should get to bed now and so should do. Good Night, son.
Abhay: Good Night, Dad. Good Night Mom.
Gautami: Good Night, beta.

It was 10 PM when Anmol's car pulled into the driveway of Rajvansh mansion. He walked inside to his room and he saw Ragini sitting on the bed; flipping through pages of a magazine. A smile had appeared on his face automatically
when he saw that she had been awake and waiting for him. He walked upto the study table and placed his laptop bag while letting out a sigh. Ragini quickly got up and walked upto Anmol and took his coat from him.

Ragini: Aaj aapne kaafi der kardi aane main?
Anmol: Haan Ragini voh client ke saath meeting thi 7 baje aur project discus karte time ka pata hi nahi chala. Bache so gaye?
Ragini: Ji, Gunni ne sulaah diya unhe. Chaliye aap fresh ho jayiye, tab tak main neeche jakar apne liye khana tayar karti hoon.
Anmol: Are aapne bhi khana nahi khaya, Ragini aapko khana kha lena chahiye tha.
Ragini: Apke bina main kaise kha sakti hoon aur waise bhi apko company dene ke liye koi to
hona chahiye na.

Anmol smiled at her response.

Anmol: Aap 2 minute rukiye main change kar leta hoon phir saath main neeche chalte hain.
Ragini: Jee.

After few minutes, Anmol came out wearing white kurta and they both walked downstairs towards kitchen.

Ragini: Aap bahar table par baithkar wait kijiye, main khana garam kar leti hoon.
Anmol: Main bhi chalta hoon apke saath kitchen main.
Ragini: Are aap thak kar aaye hain office se, aap rest kijiye. Main karloongi.
Anmol: Main akele bahar baithkar kya karoonga, aapko kitchen main company deta hoon aur aapka kaam jaldi ho jayega.

Ragini smiled and nodded as she knew he won't listen to her.

Ragini: Chaliye. aayiye.

Anmol smiled and followed her. Ragini was making chapatis while Anmol was sitting on the countertop.

Anmol: Umm main kuch karoon?
Ragini: Nahi bas ho gaya, microwave main sabzi re-heat karni hai aur kuch nahi.
Anmol: Main kardeta hoon.

He placed the bowl in the microwave and waited till it beeped. He took out the bowl and screamed "ouch" as it was too hot and quickly placed the bowl on the counterop. He was air blowing his fingers.

Ragini: Anmol, maine kaha tha na ki main karloongi par aap kahan sunte hain. Abh lag gaya na garam. Chaliye, abh bahar jakar baithiye, main aati hoon.

He gave a sheepish smile and he walked outside while air blowing his fingers. Ragini smiled to herself at his innocent action and remebered about other day when he put sugar in matar paneer. "He doesn't belong in kitchen", Ragini thought to herself and smiled as she walked outside. She placed the food on the table and put it in their plates.

Ragini: Papa Ji aur Jija ji bahut khush the Gunni ki goodnews sunkar. Aur Papa ji, Abhay ki
family ko jaante bhi hain.
Anmol: Oh really, voh kaise?
Ragini: Uske papa humare office main pehle legal advisor reh chuke hain. Papa ji to unhe kal dinner par bhi invite kar rahe hain.
Anmol: Oh thats nice. He is a nice guy.
Ragini: Haan ladka to mujhe bhi acha laga, mujhe lagta hai ki in dono ki dosti kuch naya hi rang laayegi.
Anmol: Abhi kuch bhi kehna namumkan hai, I think they are good friends right now.
Ragini: Hmm, kal aap bhi shaam ko jaldi aa jayiyega.

Saying this, Ragini grabbed the dishes and started to walk in the kitchen. Anmol followed her while gulping the last few drops of water in the glass. Anmol insisted to help Ragini wash the dishes. He was scrubbing them with soap while Ragini was rinsing them with water; Anmol accidently wiped his face and he had soap on his face. Seeing this Ragini started laughing and Anmol couldn't understand what was the reason behind her laughter.

Anmol: Kya hua aap has kyun rahi hain?
Ragini: Apke chehre par soap laga huya hai isliye. Ek minute.

Ragini came close to Anmol and he was wondering what is she gonna do; she slowly wiped his face with her pallu while he was gazing at her. She caught him gazing at her and he quickly looked the other way and finished the rest of the dishes.

Anmol: Lijiye madam, bartan dho diye maine abh hor koi kaam ho mere layak to batayiye.
Ragini: Acha jaise maine kaha tha bartan dhone ke liye but thanks anyways. Chaliye abh kafi der ho gayi hai aur mujhe bhi neend aayi hai.
Anmol: Jee bilkul, aayiye.

They walked upstairs and Ragini put blanket on the bed and they both laid down; Anmol rubbed his eyes and let out an sigh indicating his tiredness.

Ragini: Thak gaye naa, aaj?
Anmol: Hmm kafi kaam tha aur phir yeh meeting; kal bhi ek bahut jaroori meeting hai. Khair, filhaal bahut der ho chuki hai aur I am sure aap bhi thak gayi hongi. Goodnight.
Ragini: Goodnight.

Anmol drifted to sleep very quickly and Ragini just stared at his innocent face and smiled to herself thinking how he has been a positive change in her life, how he works so hard for them and yet never complains. She fixed the blanket on him and shorty went to sleep as well. Next morning, it was the usual routine at Rajvansh house, everyone had breakfast and were off to their tasks. Anmol had left for office with Gunni and the kids as he drops them on their way. On the other hand at Kapoor household, Abhay was had joined his mom and dad for breakfast.

Abhay: Good Morning, Dad. Good Morning, mom.
Lalit: Good morning, son. Aao baitho naashta karo.

Just then, Lalit's phone rang and he picked up the phone hesistantly as he didn't recognize the number being displayed on his blackberry phone.

Lalit: Hello?
Inderjeet: Kapoor Sahib, pehchana humain?
Lalit: Maaf kijiye lekin maine pechana nahi, aap kaun?
Inderjeet: Main Inderjeet Rajvansh bol raha hoon.
Lalit (excited): Are Rajvansh Sahib aap, what a pleasant surprise. Main kal hi aapko yaad kar raha tha, kahiye kaise yaad kiya?

Inderjeet explained him how he came to know about them from Gunni who happens to work with their son, Abhay.

Lalit: Maine bhi Rajvansh naam sunkar Abhay se yehi poocha tha. Khair aap batayiye, bhahi ji aur ghar par sabh kaise hain?
Inderjeet: Sabh bilkul theek. Actually maine apko dinner par invite karne ke liye phone kiya hai, It would be great to get together after long time and chat.
Lalit: Thank you for the invitation, aur hum shaam ko jaroor aayenge.
Inderjeet: Allright great, well see you in the evening.

Lalit hung up the phone smiling; he explained to Abhay and Gautami about Inderjeet's invitation and how they will be meeting up after long time. Lalit left for work after finishing breakfast and Abhay informed them that he will meet them directly at Rajvansh house after work as he would come with Gunni. Gautami instructed him to be on time.



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