Decide a Romantic Sequence For Ranvir/Ragini Now - Page 16

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: KinshukLuvsDina

yaaa i knw it was t00 guddddddddd..

sanj did u read my jungle scene 0n RR??sanihaa ne bhe nahee perhaa:((

haan dinu maine pada tha...aur comment bhi kiya tha..
the naughty one??
yaad nahin kya?
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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks Dina... I am glad that you liked it... I also really liked your jungle scene (infact all are great)... hai, I could picture every part of it... all of their reactions, and every little part of it... very nice...
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Posted: 16 years ago
I would like to see RagVir in this song, especially that Ragini is away from the house, so it suites Ranvir as he is missing Ragini while remembering Ragini, it would be nice if they shot the song on them while they show Ranvir thinking of her, while Parul is back to shooting, it would nice if they do it before she comes back to the house..........
This kind of scenes increases the TRPs.......
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o6YI5PfcPvQ[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by farislove - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awww ya sanjana yaad agayaaa
ahahah s0rryy:P
yaa jeenu di i luvddd ur parttttttttttt!
han use zaraa sa jh00m l00n mai s0ngg
i th0ugh h0gaa wen i g0t t0 knw she was drunkk:P:P
but stilll luvddddd it all yarrr t00 guddddd
n thanx 4 liking minee t00:):)
n0w 0nly sanihaaaaa is leftt n m really mad at her HUHHH:((
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: KinshukLuvsDina

awww ya sanjana yaad agayaaa

ahahah s0rryy:P
yaa jeenu di i luvddd ur parttttttttttt!
han use zaraa sa jh00m l00n mai s0ngg
i th0ugh h0gaa wen i g0t t0 knw she was drunkk:P:P
but stilll luvddddd it all yarrr t00 guddddd
n thanx 4 liking minee t00:):)
n0w 0nly sanihaaaaa is leftt n m really mad at her HUHHH:((

yaar I didn't use zara sa jhoom loon mai for two reasons... one is that I wanted to use "Bahon Mein Chalo Aayo" for that cute scene in the bedroom later, privately just between the two... and second reason is that it's the first time Ranvir is taking Ragini to a party, so I didn't want her to embarass herself...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Zee i think u should make a VM with the song pal pal soch for RR.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Ok guys mene finally apni imagination use karke yeh scenes banaye hai.

There r 2 scenes

Yeh bohat bada ban gaya hai :S

But u can read it if u want :P and do tell me how was it if u read ;-)

Scene #1

Rajvanch family mein sab kuch theek ho gaya hai, mystery is revealed and there are no more misunderstandings in the family. Ragvir are also happy becuz after a long time they are together again.

Aaj office mien ek bohat zaroori meeting hai and indrajeet has given this duty to ranvir that if he dose good in this meeting and succeed, he can join the office again. He said so becuz in recent past days ranvir has been very careless and was not in office for a long time so now indrajeet wants him to begin with this meeting.

So it is big and important day for ranvir.

Ranvir: ragini aaj mere lie bohat khas din hai kyunki aaj mein meeting mein contract lene mein succeed ho gaya to dad ko believe ho jaye ga ke mein phir se phle ki taran office ka kam ache se sanbhal sakta hun.

Ragini: haan ranvir mein aishwar se dua karti hunke aap aaj kamyab ho jaye and aap fikkar nai karna, hum sab ki shub kamnae aap ke saath hein or aap zaroor aaj papa ji and mummy ji ki nazaron mein phir pehle wale ranvir ban jae gien.

Ranvir: thanx ragini, acha ab mein chalta hun.

He kiss ragini's forehead and goes to office. And in office he dose a very good job and he succeeds and get a big contract for his company. both indrajeet and vasu are overjoyed and give ranvir their blessings. Indrajeet announce in the whole office that ranvir is back to work and will not only get his old position, but he will get an higher position in office after his beautifull job that he did today. Everyone is happy ( not naveen as usual but… ). Everyone congrats ranvir and ranvir ki khushi ki koi simma hi nahi hai.

Wo khushi se ragini ko phone karta hia and to tell her everything.

Ranvir: mein abi yeh khush khabri ragini ko sonata hun. And he dials her nr.

Wahan ghar par ragini be sabri se ranvir ka intezaar kar rahi hoti hai and pray karti hai ke "eh bhugwan aaj mere ranvir ko kamyab kar dena". To acchanak phone ke bell hoti and wo sab khuch chor kar bhagi bhagi khushi se fone uthati hai yeh dekhe bager ke kiska fone hai :P

Ragini: hello ranvir, kia hua?? Meeting kesi thi? Aap ne contract sign kurwaya ya nahi? She dont let ranvir talk :P so ranvir chup ho jata hai taake pehle ragini ki poori bat sun le.

Ragini: hello ranvir, aap sun rahe hien na? Kuch bolte kion nahi ??

Ranvir : haan baba sun to raha hun but tum kuch bolne ka mauka do gi to bolu ga na.

Ragini : oh sorry, acha ab batye aap ke kia hua ?

Ranvir : ( he is a bit emotional) ragini aaj mein bohat kuch hun, aaj meeting bohat achi guzri and humari company ko contract mil gaya hai.

Ragini: (khusi se auchal parti hai)...dekha ranvir mene kaha tha na ke aaj aap zaroor kamyab hone gien.

Ranvir: haan ragini, tumme pata hai ke aaj dad and mom kitne khush the, mene phir se contract le kar apni company ko wohi postion me pohncha dia hai. Aaj me sach mein bohat kush hun.

Ragini: ranvir muje aap par garv hai, aaj apne apna bete hone ke farz phir se nabhaya hai and apne mom and dad ko khushi di hai.

Ranvir : acha ragini men chahta hun ke aaj ki raat hum dono ek saath ho aur celebrate Karen, ek to muje office mein dad ne phir se khushi kushi le lia hai aur dossra ais lie kei kitna dino ki mushkil dooryon ke bad hum dono aaj phir se sath mien hein.

Ragini: haan aaj hum poori family saath mien celebrate Karen gien

Ranvir: family ke saath hum kal suba celebrate Karen gien but aaj sham ko bas tum aur mein, bolo apni pati ki aitni si baat nahi mano gi?

Ragini: yeh kesi baat kar rahe hien aap? Mein aap ki baat zaroor manu gi and aaj hum dono ek saath hon gien.

Ranvir: ragini men chahta hun ke aaj tum mere passand ke kapre pehno. ( he has a cute smile on his face). Aaj tum wo red colour ki saari pehna jo humne ek baar shopping karte hue khardi thi, jo tumne aaj tak muje pehn kar nahi dikhai L. And tum wo wala haar pehna jo mene tumhe gift me dia tha becuz aus haar mein tum bohat khubsurat lagti ho.

Ragini??? Tum sun rahi ho na???

Ragini: haan ranvir mein sun rahi hun. Aaj mein bilkul aese tyar hun gi jese aap chahte hien.

Ranvir: mein janta tha ke meri ragini meri baat zaroor mane gi.

Ab to muje bas aaj sham ka intezaar hai jab hum dono mile gien.

Ragini: haan ranvir muje bi, acha ab mein fone rakhti hun aur aaj rat ke lie tyanri karti hun.

Ranvir: theek hai, bye sweet heart!

Ragini: bye =)

Scene #2

At home:

Ragini bade pyar se shower leti hien, while doing so she only and only thinks about ranvir and his sweet baatien. ( background music is ragini's usual melodi, lalalala la lalalala la :P )

Bahir aa kar wo apni red sleevless sari nikalti hai jo ranvir ko bohat psaand hai. Wo sari dekh kar wo din yad karti hai jab ranvir ausse yei saari lene par zidd kar raha tha. Aus waqt ragini thori uncomfortable becuz the sari is very sexy :P but ranvir ki zidd karne par aus ne yeh kharid li hi.

Yeh saari dekh kar ragini muskrati hai and pyar se apna sar hala kar change karne chali jaati hai. Phir wo ranvir ka passand ka dya hua haar pehnti hai.

Tyar ho kar wo poore room mein candles jalati hai and ranvir ki passand ka romantic music low awaz mein start kar deti hai.

Sham ko jab ranvir ghar pohanchta hai to seeda apne kamre mein ki taraf jata hai. Kaamre mein jaa kar wo shock ho jata hai. Pyari pyari candels jail hoti hien and auske fav music on hota hai. To ause ke face par ek big smile aa jati hai yeh sab kuch dekh kar. Wo room aram se lock karta hai ragini ko awaz deta hai.

Ranvir: ragini..........ragini tum kahan ho? Sweet heart ab saamne aa jao.

Phir achanak ek aur candle jalti hai and ragini comes infront of ranvir.

Ranvir is shocked to see her.

Ragini ke haath mein candle jail hoti hai and aus ka chehra aus light mein chand ki taran chamak raha hota hai. Ranvir ausse dekhta reh jata hai. Dono apni apno jaga khare ho kar ek doosre ko pyar se dekh rahe hote hien. Ranvir sees her from top to toe, wo aus red sari mein bohat hi khubsuar and sexy lag rahi hoti hai :D

Phir dono ahista ahista ek doosre ke kareeb jate hien and jab ek doosre ke bilkul kareeb aa jatein hien to ek doore ki ankhon mein dekhtein hei.

Ragini smiles cutely to ranvir but ranvir cant stop looking at her. (background mein ragvir ka nissa nissa wali melodi hoti hai)

Phir ranvir ragini ke haath pakarta hai and aus se candle le kar table par rakh deta hai.

Ranvir : ragini mein aaj bata nahi sakta ke tum kitni khubsurat lag rahi ho. Mein bohat kush hun ke aaj tumne mere lie yeh saari pehni.

Ragini : ranvir meh pehnti kese nahi, aaj apne aitne pyar se mujse pehne ke lie jo kaha tha.

Ranvir keeps looking at her.

Ragini: ranvir aap muje ab aese hi dekhte rahirn ge kia hmm? (with sweet smile on her lips)

Ranvir: haan ragini, aaj hum aitne dino ke bad ek doosre ke aitne kareeb hein, mera dil kar raha hai ke mein bas yahin khara rahun aur tume dekhta rahun. He kisser her forehead

Nissa nissa melodi is still in background.

After 10 mins.

Ranvir jhuk kar apna haath aage kar ke ragini se aus ke saath dance karne ki req karta hai.

Ragini muskrat kar apna haath aus ke hatah mein de deti hie.

Phir dono romantic music par close dance karte hien. While dancing they just look in each others eyes. Ranvir bohat hi romantic hojata hai and pyar se ausse kiss karne ke lie aage hota hai but ragini sharma kar chehra neeche kar leti hien. Phir ranvir pyar se ausse thora "gusse" se dekhta hai and then both smiles.

They keep dancing and lost in each other.

phir thori der bad ranvir ruk jata hai and says:

Ragini! apni aankhe band karo!

Ragini: kion?

Ranvir: ziada sawal mat pooch bas apni aankhe band karo

Ragini: achaaaa theek hai and she closes her eyes. Then ranvir apni pocket se do kangan nikalta hai and takes ragini's hand.

Ragini ankhe kholti hai and diamonds ke beautiful kangan dekh kar kush ho jati hai.

Ragini: ranvir…..yeh sab? Aap ko kia zaroorat thi ?

Ranvir : kia zaroorat thi matlab ? aaj mein bohat khush hun and hum aitne dino ke bad ek doosre ke kareeb ane wale the to mene socha apni pyari si patni ke lie koi taufa le jau.

Ragini : lekin phir bi ranvir taufe ki zaroorat kia thi ? aap ke pyar mere lie dunya ka sabse bada anmol taufa hai.

Ranvir: mein yeh janta hun but phir bi mera dil kia to le aya, after all this night is very special for aus to aisse aur special banane ke lie yeh le aya.

Ragini: theek hai par….

But he stops her by putting his hand on her lips and ragini chup ho jati hai.

Phir ranvir pyar se ragini ko kangan pehnata hai and ragini pyar se ausse dekhti rehti hai.

Ranvir: batao kese lage kangan?

Ragini : yeh bohat khubsurat hai ranvir.

Ranvir : haan but tumse ziada nahi.

Phir ragini pyar se auske head par aahista se marti hai and says :

ranvir aap bi na......

Ragini : ranvir aap hamesha mere lie aitna kuch karte hein....aaj muje bi aap ke lie koi gift lana chahye tha becuz aap theek keh rahi hien ke hum aaj aitne dino ka bad ek doosre ke aitne karreb hien and yeh din bohat special hien....but kia karun aaj mein tyar hone ke chakron mein bahir hi nahi gai.

Ranvir : koi baat nahi meri pyari patni ji aap ne aaj yeh sab karke muje surprise kar dia hai and tum muje aaj ais se bi bara gift de sakti ho

Ragini : acha….. wo kese ?

Ranvir : ragini ko apni god mein autha leta hai and romantically winks at her :P

Ragini: Ranvir aap bi na and ausse pyar se marti hai…

Ranvir : sweet heart, aap ka pati to bas aesa hi hai and winks again and goes to their bed

Lights off

Scene ends.

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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG Jia, that was such a beautiful and very romantic scene... Very nice yaar... I had a big smile on my face throughout, and in the last part, I was blushing... very sweet... aisa lag raha tha jaise ke serial mein dekh rahi hoon mein... very good...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: RagVir4eva

OMG Jia, that was such a beautiful and very romantic scene... Very nice yaar... I had a big smile on my face throughout, and in the last part, I was blushing... very sweet... aisa lag raha tha jaise ke serial mein dekh rahi hoon mein... very good...

thnax alot jeenu di 🤗
i am happy that u liked it😳😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Dinaaaaaaaaaaaaa dun be mad at meeeeeeeeeeeee main araaaaaaaaaam se perhungit umhaara sceneeeeeeeee aaj bidaai dekh keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
hyper nahi hoo:P:P i knoww ur scene will be rockkinggggggggggggggggggggggg
Jiaaaaaaaaaa ne bhi scene likh diyaa awwwwwwwww i m so excitedd
i ll read ur scene inshallah tonite n commentt
yayy i m so happy sub apney scenes likhre hainn
dhara premaa preet sukuu jaldii kero tum log bhi:P:P

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