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Posted: 16 years ago
Alright guys, after reading all your beautiful scenes, I have attempted to write something... I honestly know that it's not as good as yours are, but after Sanju's insistence, I thought that I will give it a shot.... my problem is that once I start writing, I don't stop... That's why this doesn't look like a scene, but an entire episode... Sorry if I bore you guys... Feel free to stop whenever, wherever you like...
Ragini and sadhna are sitting in RagVir's room and drinking tea...
Ranvir comes home early and asks Shankar chacha ke Ragini kahaan hai... he says choti bahu apne kamrein mein hain...
Ranvir has a smile on his face and quickly goes upstairs to his room.. He is a holding a bag in his hands from some shop like big bazaar...He is about to enter the room with a big smile on his face, and naughtiness in his eyes. Just then he sees Sadhna sitting there, and his expressions quickly change... He looks a little sad...
All of a sudden sadhna sees ranvir and says, "devarji aap?"
Ragini turns around and says "arre ranvir, aaj aap itni jaldi office se aa gaye? sab theek to hai?"
Ranvir: Haan ragini sab theek hai, bas meri meeting cancel ho gayi thi, to mein ghar aa gaya...
Ragini: Oh, acha...
sadhna: Jiji, devarji, aap dono baatein ki jiye, main Alekhji ko dekh kar aati hoon...
Ranvir: Ji Bhabi...
Ragini: Ranvir aap fresh ho ke aayi, mein aapke liye chai le kar aati hoon...
As soon as Ragini is about to walk out of the room, Ranvir grabs her hand and stops her...
Ragini: Kya hua Ranvir?
Ranvir: Mein abhi aaya hoon aur tum jaane ki baatein kar rahi ho
Ragini: Ranvir, mein kahin nahin jaa rahi, sirf aap ke liye chai lene jaa rahi hoon
Ranvir: magar tum chahe do minute ke liye hi sahi, meri nazron se to door jaa rahi ho naa...
Ragini: ranvir, aaj kya hua hai aapko?
Ranvir: Kuch nai, bas mera mann kar raha hai ke mein apni biwi ke saath thoda waqt bitaaon...
Ragini: acha, to mein chai le kar aati hoon, phir aap waqt bata lena, theek hai...
Ranvir makes a cute face and nods no...
Ragini: Ranvir aap bhi naa... and she walks out of the room to get the chai...
When she gets back, she doesn't see Ranvir there... she puts the tray with the chai on the table, and starts looking around and calling for Ranvir...
Just then Ranvir comes from the back and puts his hand over her eyes...
He is holding something behind his back.
Ragini: Ranvir, yeh kya kar rahe hai aap?
Ranvir: Ragini kuch nai..
Ranvir takes his hand off of her eyes, and she looks at him...
Then she notices that he is hiding something behind his back...
Ragini: Ranvir, yeh peeche aapke haath mein kya hai?
Ranvir pulls the box from behind him and gives it to her...
Ranvir: Tum khud hi khol ke dekh lo.
Ragini opens the box and sees a beautiful, heavy, black colored saree with beautiful Red stone work on it with some silver stones and sequins ...
Ragini: Ranvir, yeh kis liye..
Ranvir: Kyon, mein apni biwi ke liye koi tofah nahin laa sakta kya?
Ragini: nahin, yeh baat nahin hai...
Ranvir: Baat yeh hai ke aaj jab mein subah kisi meeting ke liye gaya tha, to wahan mujhe mere koi poorana dost mil gaya, aur usne mujhe pataya ke aaj uski engagement hai aur phir usne aaj hum dono ko apni engagement party mein bulaya hai...
Ragini looks at ranvir with a confused smile on her face...
Ranvir: To aaj jab hum party par jaa hi rahein hain, to meine socha ke kyon naa mein tumhare liye ek nayi saree bhi le aaon...
Ragini smiles at him and has a happy look on her face...
Ranvir: Ab aaj raat ko tumhe yehi saree pehan ni hai...
Ragini: Aap mere liye itne pyaar se itni khubsoorat saree le kar aaye hain, to mein kyon nahin pehnoongi...
Ragini goes towards the cupboard and takes out some jewelry to see what will look best with it... she then takes out the necklace that Ranvir had gifter to her, and rests it on the dresser in front of her vanity... Ragini grabs the saree and is about to go and change...
Ranvir: Ek minute ragini
Ragini: Jee kahiye...
ranvir: Mein tumhare liye itne pyaar se yeh saree layaa hoon jo tumne aaj pehani hai... yeh to pata do ke mein kya pehnoo.
Ragini: Aap jo chahen, woh pehan li jiye..
Ranvir: Tum meri pasand ke kapre pehan rahi ho, to aaj mei bhi tumhari pasand ke kapre pehanoon gaa...
Ragini smiles and walks towards the cupboard. She takes out a black suit, red satiny shirt and a black tie...
Ragini : Ranvir yeh theek hai.
Ranvir: Tumhari pasand hai to theek nahi, perfect hai...
ragini smiles and grabs her saree and goes to change...
When she comes out, she walks towards her dresser to wear the necklace... she opens the box and doesnt find it there...
During this time, Ranvir goes to change...
She looks all around the room, in the cupboard... she is worried and says to herself, "yeh haar kahaan jaa sakta hai, mein abhi dresser par to rakh ke gayi thi use"...
Ranvir comes out and she asks him...
Ragini: Ranvir apne mera haar kahi dekha hai, mein abhi yahin rakh kar gayi thi...
Ranvir nods his head and says no...
Ragini looks very worried and is looking all around the dresser and moving things around...
Just then she feels something being put around her neck...
She turns around and sees that Ranvir is putting a necklace on her.. It's not the same necklace... Its a new one..
Ragini: Yeh haar? Ranvir yeh haar kahaan se aaya?
Ranvir: Kahaan se aaya matlab? Ye mein apni pyaari biwi ke liye le kar aaya hoon...
Ragini: Magar iski kya zaroorat thi Ranvir, apne pehle hi merko itna pyaara haar diya tha...
Ranvir: Tumhe kya lagta hai ke mein tumhare liya ek nayi saree le kar aaonga, aur uske saath ek haar nahi laaon ga?
Ragini: samiles and says: Ranvir thank you so much... yeh saree aur yeh haar bahut hi khubsoorat hai... bilkul aapke dil ki tarha...
Ranvir smiles and says ke tum roz bahut khoobsurat to lagti ho, magar aaj bahut bahut bahut khubsoorat lag rahi ho...
Ragini feels a little shy, and then smiles and says: aapke pasand ki saree aur haar pehna hai isliye...
ragini: Aaj aap bhi bahut bahut handsome lag rahe hain...
Ranvir: Aaj meine tumhare pasand ke kapre pehne hai isliye..
They both smile and Ranvir says ab chalein...
Ragini: Jee chaliye...
They both leave for the party...
Then they both reach the party and get out of the car...
OMG they are looking so cute together, matching and complimenting eachother... Ragini in black and red saree, and Ranvir in black suit and red satiny shirt and black tie...
Ranvir is holding a beautiful red rose bouqet and they walk in to the party...
They go in and meet Ranvir's friend Manish.
Manish introduces his fiance Pooja...
Ranvir: Smiles and says Hi, Nice to meet you... and then looks towards Ragini and says this is my better half, my wife, my life, Ragini...
Ragini feels shy, but looks at Manish and Pooja and smiles and says, Hi and congratulations...
Then a waiter walks towards them and offers them drinks...
Ragini says no thanks, but Ranvir takes a glass of champagne...
They all are talking, laughing, smiling...
During all this, there is a guy who keeps on staring at Ragini...
Ragini notices him and feels uncomfortable, but looks the other way...
Just then someone walks by and accidentally bumps into ranvir, and his glass of champagne spills on Ragini's saree..
Ranvir: Oh ragini, sorry, chalo jaa ke saaf kar lete hain..
Ragini: Koi baat nahin ranvir, aap baatein ki jiye, mein abhi ise saaf karke aati hoon...
ragini goes to the bathroom to clean her saree. When she comes out, she notices that man who was staring at her before, was standing right in front of her..
she tries to ignore him, and starts to walk past him... as soon as she walks past him, from behind he yells, "kahan jaa rahe ho soniyo (beautiful)...
Ragini has a worried look on her face, turns around and looks at him, and then quickly walks towards ranvir...
Ranvir : ragini kya hua tum pareshaan lag rahi ho...
Ragini: woh, woh kuch nahin Ranvir, bas aise hi, main theek hoon...woh aap mere liye itne pyaar se yeh saree laye the aur ab...
Ranvir: I am sorry Ragini, magar tum chinta mat karo mein tumhare liye aur saree le aaongaa..
ragini just smiles and then they all continue their conversation...
the guy is still staring at Ragini, but she doesnt say anything...
Then the DJ announces that they all will play a game...
The game is that each couple will get a paper, and they have to dance while standing on that paper... If anyones foot is even slightly off of the paper, that couple will be out of the game... as the music goes on, they will have to fold the paper and it gets smaller and smaller...
So all the couples are playing, Ranvir also puts his arms on ragini's hips, and she puts her arms around his shoulders. and the song in the background is bahon ke darmiyaan...
one by one the couples get out... there are just two couples left, and ofcourse one of them are RagVir... they are dancing quiet close to eachother now, and Ragini is feeling shy.
now they fold the paper again and it is quite small now... so ranvir tells ragini to stand on his feet, so she does... now the paper has to be folded again, and is very small...
ragini says to ranvir, ke ab nahi kar payenge, paper bahut chota hai... Ranvir says tum chinta mat karo darling yeh game hum hi jeetenge... the other couple stands on their paper normally, but Ranvir being mr.romantic, picks ragini up in his arms and stands on the paper... The music is on, and ranvir is holding ragini is his arms, and slowly moving... ragini feels shy, but keeps on looking at Ranvir and smiles..
The other couple gets out and the music stops... ragvir are so lost into eachother that they dont even realize that the music had stopped.
Then Manish comes and taps ranvir and says congratulations yaar... Ranvir realizes that he is still holding ragini, so then he puts her down... They both look at eachother and smile..
They are announced as the winners of the game...
Then the dance floor is open to all, and everybody is dancing... while dancing, the guys who was staring at ragini comes up right behind her and starts dancing... while ragini is dancing, he keeps bumping into her on purpose... she sees him and is disturbed, but quickly changes her side...
the guys follows her around the dance floor, and does this a few times... Ranvir now sees this and just when the guy is about to bump into ragini again, Ranvir moves Ragini out of the way and stands in her position... as soon as the guys bumps into him ( thinking its ragini), ranveer taps his shoulder... the guy turns around and boom he gets a punch in his face... everyone is surprised and the music stops... the guys says what the hell, why did you hit me...
Ranvir is very angry (oh he looks so cute when he is angry)... He tells the guy that what were you doing?
He says nothing, I was just dancing...
Ranvir says that you were just dancing??? or you were bothering my wife???
The guy says that you got it all wrong, I was just dancing...
ranvir grabs him by his collar and starts to slap him...
ragini quickly tries to stop ranvir, and is able to convince him to let the man go...
ranvir lets him go and says to ragini that chalo yahaa se, hum ab yahaa nahin rukenge...
Ragini: Nahin Ranvir, hum abhi nahi jaayenge... acha nahin lagta.. aap sochiye ke Manishji ko kaise lagegaa
Ranvir: Magar ragini woh...
Ragini: Koi baat nahin Ranvir, aap shaant ho jaaiye...
so then they stay for the party and are about to have dinner...
The guy who Ranvir had hit mixes something in a drink (juice) and tells the waiter to give it to ranvir...
ranvir takes the drink... they all are having dinner and all of a sudden Ragini starts coughing and it seems like she is about to choke... so ranvir quicky gives her the juice, and she drinks it all... she is now fine, and they continue eating...
The party is over, they all say bye, and Ragini and Ranvir sit in their car ready to go home...
In the car Ranvir says to Ragini: agar tum mujhe nahi rok ti to main to us aadmi ko...
ragini: ranvir ab chodiye is baat ko aur chinta mat ki jiye... then she jokingly says to him: waise aap ko to khush hona chahiye ke kisi aur ko aapki biwi itni sundar lagi...
Ranvir looks at ragini in anger...
Ragini: Ranvir mein to kewal aapse mazaak kar rahi thi, aapka mood change karne ke liye...
Ranvir: Agar kabhi bhi kisi ne tum par nazar utha kar bhi dekha to main uske aankhen phor doonga..
Ragini: Ranvir bas is baat ko yahin bhool jaayie... waise Manishji aur Pooja kitne khush lag rahe the naa ek doosre ke saath...
Ranvir: Haan Ragini, mujhe hamari engagement yaad aa gayi...
Ragini smiles... and all of a sudden she starts feeling weird... she feels as if everything around her is spinning, and things are looking a little blury... she doesnt say anything to Ranvir... she just shakes her head and now everything is fine...
They get home, and its very late, so everyone else is sleeping.. while getting out of the car, Ragini feels dizzy again but is quiet about it...
They both go to their room and ragini takes out her nightgown and is about to go to change... ranvir realizes that he forgot his cellphone in the car, so he tells her that he is going to get it... she says okay, and he leaves, and she goes to change... she feels weird but doesnt know why...
When Ranvir gets back, the lights are dim, and he sees Ragini standing there (she is wearing a redish-maroonish silky satin night gown)...
She looks at him, smiles, tilts her head to the side, and puts her arms out towards him...
He is smiling at her, and then all of a sudden Ragini starts singing... "Bahon Mein Chale Aayo, Hum Se Sanam Kya Parda"...
Ranvir is surprised, but since its all about romance for him, he is very happy... ragini comes near him, pulls him by his hand, and is now dancing around him... then finally the song ends and they both are hugging and are in eachothers arms... Ranvir says Ragini... she doesnt answer... Ragini... he senses her breath and realizes that she accidentally drank something alcoholic... so then he steps back and realizes that she fell asleep on his shoulder... so he carries her to the bed, lays her down, puts the blanket on her, and kisses her forehead... He lays down, looks at her and says "to tum yeh sab anjaane mein kar rahi thi aur mujhe laga ke shayad aaj tumhe mujh par pyaar aa raha hai... kher koi baat nahin, kisi bahaane hi sahi, tum mere paas to aayi naa.... he laughs and then turns the lights off and goes to sleep...
The next morning, ragini is sleeping, and Ranvir wakes up but doesnt disturb her... So he gets ready and goes downstairs to the kitchen to get tea... sadhna sees him and says "arey devarji aap?"
Jiji kahaan hain?
Ranvir: woh bhabhi, Ragini so rahi thi, to maine use disturb nahin kiya
Sadhna: Jiji abhi tak so rahi hain?
Ranvir: Ji bhabi.. he smiles and takes two cups of tea back to his room...
Back in the room, Ragini wakes up and looks around and doesnt see Ranvir.. she then looks at the time and says " hai bhagwaan, 10 baj gaye, aur mein abhi tak so rahi thi? aur yeh Ranvir kahaan gaye?
Just then Ranvir walks in with the tray with two cups of tea...
He says good morning dharam patni ji... aap ke liye garam garam chai...
Ragini feels ashamed that she was sleeping and ranvir had to go and make the tea...
Ragini: Ranvir, pata nahin mein kaise soi rahi itni der... I am sorry aapko khud chai banani padi apne liye.. then she feels lightheaded and feels like she is about to throwup..
she runs to the bathroom and throws up...
while ragini is in the bathroom, Sadhna comes and asks Ranvir if Ragini jiji woke up...
he says yeah and that she is in the bathroom...
Ragini comes out and wipes her face...
sadhna: jiji aap theek to hain? aaj aap itni der se uthi ho...
ragini; haan sadhna, pata nahin aaj mujhe kya hua, mein itni der tak kaise soi rahi...
Ranvir says that he is getting late for the office, to aap dono behat kar baatein ki jiye, main chalta hoon...
They both say bye, and Ranvir leaves for the office...
sadhna: Aur sunaiye jiji, kal aapki party kaisi rahi?
Ragini is telling her about the party, and all of a sudden she feels like she is going to throw up again, so she runs to the bathroom...
sadhna looks worried but also slightly nods her head and smiles...
ragini comes out of the bathroom and sees sadhna smiling...
Ragini: sadhna kya baat hai tum muskuraa kyon rahi ho?
Sadhna; Jiji, aap baar baar ulti kar rahi hain, to kahin main maasi to...
ragini: shyly smiles and says, chup karo sadhna, aisi koi baat nahin hai... woh kal meine party mein shayad kuch galat khaa pee liya hoga, isliye meri tabeyat thodi theek nahin hai...
sadhna: oh, acha.. and they both smile and laugh... chalo phir aapne koi dwai li...
Ragini; nai, main abhi leti hoon...
sadhna: theek hai, aap dwai lee jiye aur araam ki jiye, main tab tak kitchen ka thoda kaam khatam kar leti hoon...
ragini: mein bhi chalti hoon tumhare saath...
sadhna; nahi, aap araam ki jiye, mein sambhal loongi...
sadhna leaves and Ragini sits down and is just relaxing...
A few hours later, kaushi calls ragini on her cellphone and asks her to come over as she has to give her something important...
Ragini: theek hai maa, mein abhi thodi der mein aati hoon...
Ragini goes to sadhna and tells her that mujhe maa ne kuch zaroori kaam se bulaya hai, to tum bhi chalo...
sadhna says sorry jiji, main alekhji ko chod ke kaise jaaon...
ragini: haan yeh bhi hai... acha theek hai tum jijaji paas ruko, mein abhi thodi der mein ho ke aati hoon...
sadhna: theek hai jiji, aap jaayi, aur apna khayal rakhna... bye...
Ragini: Bye...
Ragini gets to kaushalya niwaas, and there she is sitting and chatting with maa, and nani...
Kaushi says that bas mera tumse milne ko mann kar raha tha, isliye tumhe bulaya maine...
Ragini; maa, aapko mujhse milne ke liye bahaane banane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai, aap bas seedha seedha keh dia karein ke Ragini tumse milne ka mann kar raha hai, to tum aa jayo ghar pe..
kaushi: theek hai beta, aage se aise hi karoongi...
they are sitting and talking, and again Ragini feels like throwing up... ( If you guys didnt get it yet, the guy at the party had mixed something in the drink for ranvir, but ragini drank it when she was about to choke.)
she runs to the bathroom, and they follow her... from outside they hear her throwing up, and Kaushi and nani's face lightens up and there is a big smile on their face...
nani: kaushi chal is pe pehle ke ragini hume yahaa dekhle...
They go back and sit down... they are talking amongst eachother...
Nani; hai bhagwaan ne meri sun li... bhagwaan aapka bahut bahut shukr hai...
kaushi: hai ab mein dadi aur nani dono ban jaayongi... (big smile on her face)
malti hears all this and gets worried...
while ragini is coming back, malti pulls her in her room and says: ragini, tum to bari chupi rustam nikli...
Ragini: kyon bhabi? maine aise kya chupaya hain?
Malti: Kya chupaya hai? Itni badi baat ho gayi, aur tum pooch rahi ho ke kya chupaya hai...
Ragini: bhabhi mujhe kuch samaj mein nahin aa rahaa, saaf saaf boliye naa...
Malti: main mami ban ne waali hoon aur tumne mujhe abhi tak bataya nahin...
Ragini; bhabi yeh aap kya keh rahi hain??? (with a confused look on her face)...
Malti; main abhi maaji aur naani ki baatein sun kar aa rahi hoon... woh to bahut khush hai yeh baat sunke... magar mein tumse naraaz hoon, tumne mujhe nahin bataya..
Ragini: she feels shy, smiles and says: bhabhi aisa kuch bhi nahin hai... zaroor maa aur nani ko koi galat phemi hui hai..
Malti; matlab tum abhi...
Ragini: nahin bhabi... nahin...
Malti is relieved and they both just laugh...
Ragini goes back to where they were all sitting...
Kaushi and Nani stand up...
Kaushi smiles at ragini and gives her a hug...
Nani starts doing the thing that she always does... you know the nazar utarne waali thing with her hands aorund in the air and on her head... lol...
Kaushi: Ragini aaj mein bahut khush hoon...
Ragini feels very shy, embarrassed and uncomfortable...
Ragini: maa yeh aap kya keh rahi hai, kya hua hai jo aap itni khush hai?
kaushi; Ragini, tu bhi naa... mein nani ban ne waali hoon to mein khush nahin hoongi to kya hongi?
ragini: kya, yeh aap???
Kaushi; mujhe pata hai ke tum abhi ulti karne gayi thi... shaadi ke baad ladki ko ulti kyon aati hai? ab iska kya matlab hua?
Ragini feels very embarrassed and says to herself, "ab mein maa ko kaise kahoon"... so then she finally says "maa, aap jaise soch rahi hain, waisa kuch bhi nahin hai...
Kaushi and nanis face expressions change into a confused look..
ragini: woh baat yeh hai ke kal Ranvir mujhe kisi party pe le kar gaye the, aur wahaan meine kuch galat khaa liya tha, isliye subah se meri tabiyat thodi kharaab hai, aur mujhe baar baar ulti aa rahi hai... Maa aap bhi naa.. she nods her head, and looks down and is feeling shy...
Kaushi and nani look at eachother and feel stupid...
Just then Ranvir calls Ragini's cellphone and tells her that he called home and Sadhna bhabhi told him that she came here to maaji's house... so then he says that he is around that area, and will pick her up...
Ragini: theek hai Ranvir, aap aa jayi mein aapka intezaar kar rahi hoon..
Ranvir gets there a few minutes later... They all have tea and snacks, and then Ranvir and Ragini leave from kaushalya Niwaas...
In the car Ragini is smiling and Ranvir asks her that kya hua, tum itna muskuraa kyon rahi ho...
Ragini feels shy and looks down...
Ranvir: kya baat hai ragini, tum itna sharmaa kyon rahi ho, jaise ke kisi anjaan admi ki gaadi mein behti ho...
Ragini: Ranvir pata hai ke aaj saara din sab mujhe galat samaj rahe the..
Ranvir pulls the car to the side and stops the car...
Ranvir: galat samaj rahe the? kya matlab?
Ragini: woh kal meine party mein kuch galat khaa pee liya thaa naa...
Ranvir: Haan phir???
Ragini: isliye mujhe baar baar ulti aa rahi thi... isliye... (she gets shy and stops, and looks down again)
Ranvir: isliye kya ragini?
Ragini is still sharmaying...
Ranvir: Ragini bolo naa kya???
Ragini: woh Ranvir... Sadhna, Malti bhabhi, maa aur nani, sab ko lag raha thaa ke hum unhe koi...
Ranvir: hum unhe koi kya? ragini ab tum mujhe bataogi bhi...
Ragini: ke hum unhe koi khushkhabri sunane waale hain...
she shyingly smiles and looks the other way...
Ranvir: Kyaaa??? He laughs and says oh god... yeh sab log bhi naa...
They both laugh...
Then Ranvir stares at Ragini....
Ragini: kya hua ranvir, aap mujhe aise kyon dekh rahe hain?
Ranvir is quiet and just keeps staring at her with a smile on his face...
Ragini: Ranvir boliye naa..
Ranvir: Jaunsi khushkhabri ki yeh sab baat kar rahein hain...
Ragini slightly nods her head..
Ranvir: unhe de dein kya???
Ragini looks at Ranvir with a smile on her face, and feels very shy... she turns her head and starts too look outside the car window...
Ranvir is still staring at her, and she notices this, then she looks back at him and just smiles...
They both just smile, and then Ranvir starts the car again, and they drive away...
I know you guys wanted a scene... sorry if I bored you with my episode... ( For those of you who feel that it's too early for them to show Ragini being pregnant, I agree with you all on that)... lol..

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Posted: 16 years ago
sanju di, dina page 10 se leke page 17 tak read all the scenes

sanju di, sanhu, dina 🤗 u all wrote amazing scenes 👏 👏 RS should really take all these scenes into consideration, i wish aisa kuch sach mei dikhate bidaai mei
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Posted: 16 years ago

Dina and jeenu di, mein sham ko aap dono ke scenes par kar comment karun gi, i know they must be great =D

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Posted: 16 years ago
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww jeenu diiii,itsssssss awesomeeee,fantastic.....i loved ur scene👏👏👏......
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awww jeeenu aapney scene likhdiyaa i will surelyy read it in sometimeeeee
too excited to read it hehehe:P:P
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Posted: 16 years ago
Jeenu di 🤗
why u ended it?? i was loving it...i wish it was not for one episode but 1 week ke poore episodes aap likh deti
di, it was amazing 👏 please write few more scenes like this please please please 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dharaa

Jeenu di 🤗
why u ended it?? i was loving it...i wish it was not for one episode but 1 week ke poore episodes aap likh deti
di, it was amazing 👏 please write few more scenes like this please please please 🤗 🤗

awww, thanks dharaa... I am glad that you liked it... yaar abhi ek episode ka itna lamba hai sab ke parne ke liye, to imagine karo ke agar ek week ka likhti to kitna lamba hota... isliye, I thought that this was a proper end for this episode here... yaar don't say please... I will try to think of something else too... ideas to bahut aate hain RagVir ko apne saamne (dil aur dimaag) mein rakhte hi, magar kahin na kahin baakion ke scenes se similar hote hain, thats why I don't write those...
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Posted: 16 years ago
@dina: wo jungle wala scene was great yaar
aww ragini changing clothes in jungel and they slept in jungle :D
it was sooo cute
i liked it
keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago

Jeeneu:- omggggggggggggggggggggggg ab tak ka subseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Best sceneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee yeh thaaaaaaaaaaaa i swearrrrrrrrrrrrrr

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i wnat to send thisss to RS..jeenu omggggggggg u better join the cerative team
i loved itttttttttttttt
ek ek scene awesome thaa
teh dressingg
aur omgggggg maine dream mein mein bhi aisa nahisocha thaa
but imaginee ragini ko kou thori si alcohol pilaaadey
omggggggggggg wowwwwwwwwwwwww
mujeh kuch horaa thaa thorugh out when i was eradint hte scene hahah
ohh it was tooo romanticccccccccccccccc😳
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Welll Doneeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 16 years ago
beautiful episode jeenu diiii
i loved it
it was great
wo party wale scenes were my fav scenes
and when ragini was wearing that dress and was singing
it was shoooo cute
and keep writing more scenes, u r very good :D

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