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Wow katori kya likha hai.Like it from the very start .It serves Dhairya good for treating Santo badly.That letter part is awesome.Santo's feelings is expressed well.I hope more members read it & comment.
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Katori ๐Ÿค—
First of all, thank you very much for writing it. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
This is perfect ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Letter part is amazing and superbly written. โญ๏ธ
All emotions of Santoshi are expressed perfectly. ๐Ÿ˜Š I like she called him dear Dhairya ๐Ÿ˜ณ not sir because he's not her master but husband.

When Santoshi said that she set him free because she can't see him in pain was really emotional ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Omg!...Dhairya is not happy but hurt because she left him without his permission ๐Ÿ˜†
That Maabhi is very happy ๐Ÿ˜ก

Dhairya is behaving like an obsessive lover in the end like "she has to come back! She is mine" โค๏ธ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Katori please continue this story. I want to know what Dhairya will do after this. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Obsessive Dhairya ๐Ÿฅณ

And he walked out of the house to look for Santoshi, that means there is something more to come. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SymphonyStar

Wow katori kya likha hai.Like it from the very start .It serves Dhairya good for treating Santo badly.That letter part is awesome.Santo's feelings is expressed well.I hope more members read it & comment.


Thanks! I am glad you liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajni13

Katori ๐Ÿค—
First of all, thank you very much for writing it. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
This is perfect ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Letter part is amazing and superbly written. โญ๏ธ
All emotions of Santoshi are expressed perfectly. ๐Ÿ˜Š I like she called him dear Dhairya ๐Ÿ˜ณ not sir because he's not her master but husband.

When Santoshi said that she set him free because she can't see him in pain was really emotional ๐Ÿ˜ญ

Omg!...Dhairya is not happy but hurt because she left him without his permission ๐Ÿ˜†
That Maabhi is very happy ๐Ÿ˜ก

Dhairya is behaving like an obsessive lover in the end like "she has to come back! She is mine" โค๏ธ ๐Ÿ˜ณ


You are welcome!! I am glad you liked it.

It is different from my other OSes. I could not find much humor here as of now but tomorrow is another day.

It came out more emotional that I had expected when I started working on it. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ




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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajni13

Katori please continue this story. I want to know what Dhairya will do after this. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Obsessive Dhairya ๐Ÿฅณ

And he walked out of the house to look for Santoshi, that means there is something more to come. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†


If the right inspiration strikes, I will definitely continue. But beware!! romance is not my forte and you never know where this will end up if I decide to follow him out of the house. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Katori


If the right inspiration strikes, I will definitely continue.But beware!! romance is not my forte and you never know where this will end up if I decide to follow him out of the house.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

ek funny thought aaya kahin Dhairya talli hoke chhat pe chad ke chillke bole Mishra family ke logo agar mujhe Santoshi nahi mili toh Suicide & Maabhi aur Kranti maa Are main toh kehta hoon Kahe ki Kranti maa sab karamkandi hain (Veeru -Sholey style).bhaad mein jaye.Yeh Dhairya wahin hoga jahan uski Santoshi hogi.And imagine Nupur aur Ujjawal dono ke expression.Ujjwal will probably say yeh apna Dhairya filmy kab se ho gaya? Maabhi ka expression toh epic hoga.
Edited by SymphonyStar - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SymphonyStar

ek funny thought aaya kahin Dhairya talli hoke chhat pe chad ke chillke bole Mishra family ke logo agar mujhe Santoshi nahi mili toh Suicide & Maabhi aur Kranti maa Are main toh kehta hoon Kahe ki Kranti maa sab karamkandi hain (Veeru -Sholey style).bhaad mein jaye.Yeh Dhairya wahin hoga jahan uski Santoshi hogi.And imagine Nupur aur Ujjawal dono ke expression.Ujjwal will probably say yeh apna Dhairya filmy kab se ho gaya? Maabhi ka expression toh epic hoga.


๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ what an inspirational thought symphoo. ๐Ÿ‘

Would love to see this in the show or in any OS, FF etc. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by rajni13 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Katori



You are welcome!! I am glad you liked it.

It is different from my other OSes. I could not find much humor here as of now but tomorrow is another day.

[DIV]It came out more emotional that I had expected when I started working on it.๐Ÿ˜ƒ


I was expecting some darkness with humor in the end like your previous work. ๐Ÿ˜†

But for Sairya story, this is perfect and awesome. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by rajni13 - 9 years ago

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