Sangam a short ff part8 Contract

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Sangam

Madan escape from jail...

He run and jump into a tractor to hide from the police, the tractor is going mumbai (where ganga is)

Madan (thinking) : Main a raha hoon ganga , tum kissi or ki nahin meri hi hogi , or dekhna main tumse badla lun gha , tumain tarpahunga.

Sagar side

Sagar is on phone

Sagar : please do the booking as soon as possible

Sagar : what ??but the wedding IS the day after tomoro

Sagar : ok book it ...

Kaveri and Ganga in kaveris room

Ganga : tumpar yeh bohut acha lage gha haina??

kaveri not answering , ganga look at her and see that kavi is dreaming , so she goes near her.

Ganga jockingly hit her shoulder with kaveris : Haye haye JIJAJI ke sapne dekh rahi ho???

Kaveri blush : janki tum bhi na.

Ganga : haye haye main sadke jawan ... vaise kitna sharmati ho ...yeh na ho ki shaadi ke din tum sharam ke mare chup jaho or sunny kissi or ko hi lejahai apni dhulan bana ke.

kaveri get up not looking at janki : Are aise kaisse kissi or ko le jahai gha , usko hi lekar jahaiga jiska naam uske hathon ki lakiron par likha hai ...matlab sirf main..

Ganga : HAye haye kiya baat hai khulam khula

Kaveri blush and come back to normal : Vaisse tum bhi kuch kaam nahin ho shekar ke samne , dono ITNA sharmate ho ki , sab sochte hai ki shaadi ke din tum dono ek dusre ...

Janki (feeling 😕): bass bass bass...acha mujhe yeh bata sunny ji dikhne main kaisse hai ... hum bi to jane humari didi ka sayan kaisa hai

KAveri : bass pucho hi maat , uske ankhe brown jaab vo dekhta hai na bass kho jaane ka maan karta hai ...vaisse aj kaal ziada iss tara lagta hai jaisse usse kissi ki talash ho

Janki : kiski??

Kaveri : pata nahin kher choro ... lamba sa Acha main tumain discribe kyun kar rahin hoon , ider kahin photo hogi acha abhi lahi...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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**Sangam**

kaveri : yahin kahin photo hogi , ek minute abhi lahi...

just when she wa going to find the photo her mobile ring . she pick up

Kaveri : Hello

Kaveri : ho sunny , kaisse ho

Ganga : uncha karo

Sagar : hello

Ganga : hello sunnyji , app hi ki batein ho rahi thi

Sunny "so shocked with the voice" : a...ach...acha kiya kehe rahi thi mere bare main

Ganga : yehi ke shaadi ke din kaveri shram...

cut by kaveri : Voh sunny tumara ticket kab ka huwa

Ganga laugh ,

sagar : (thinking ) yeh assi (that laugh)

Kaveri : HeeellOooO

Sunny : ho haan voh kal shaam ki hai main shaadi ke din phunchun gha subah

Ganga : haye haye phir apni dhulan ko shaadi ke baad hi dekho ge

Kaveri : vo kyun

Ganga : haye haye apko bari jaldi hai

Sunny : shekar bhaya ko bhi

Ganga quite

Kaveri : hogi na bolti band

Ganga : haha... vaisse yaad diladun ke dhule ne sehera or dhulan ne gunghat pehena hoga.to no chances

tree of them laugh

ganga mobile ring

ganga : acha tum dono batein karo main ahi

...

sagar : gangaaaa

ganga return in shock

Kaveri : ganga???

Sagar : voh main kynki saas bhi kabhi bahu thi dekh raha tha na usmain ganga ka accident ho gaya

Ganga relieved but shocked (thinking): kahin...nahin yeh nahin ho sakta

she leaves

Keep reading and tell me if you like it

Edited by aisha1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow, i'm sorry but my computer is going a little cuckoo 😆 i posted a reply but it crashed, so i'm sorry 😭 but ya, your fan fic is really awesome! and i luv the part where ganga teases kaveri 😳 kudos to u 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sangam

Next day

Ganga and Kaveri goes to the final shopping ,

Kaveri : acha janki , bass kangan kangan ley li , abh chalen

Ganga/janki : ji didi

she see a payal stand with bangles

Ganga/janki : didi main abhi ahi ..udar payal ki stand par hoon...app car lekar ayeh main abhi athi hoon.

Kaveri : ok ...ho haan mere liye bhi ek pyaari si payal lana ... mujhe tumari pasand achi lagti hai

Ganga /janki : thik hai didi

Ganga goes to the payal store

She see a payal looking like the one sagar brought for her , she remember those moments

Ganga : abh mujhe un lahmon ko bhula hoga , main kissi or ki amanat hone jaa rahin hoon

but she kno inside her heart , she will always remain to sagar even if he betrayed her (because of the letter do u remember lol)

she buy another payal with some bangle

One the other side , Madan is searching for ganga with is chamcha 😆

Chamcha : Madan ji , kiya ganga mile ghi ??mujhe yeh umeed nahin hai

madan gets angry and hold his chamcha by his neck when he look at his chamcha he see ganga near the bangle stand

Madan :(evil smile) mil gahi ganga

He start to walk toward her and ganga goes inside kaveris car , madan run and goes into a taxi actually he make the driver go out of his taxi and purchasse ganga

kaveri and ganga reach to their house madan stop a bit far from them , he goes out of his (huuum not his) taxi and hide behind a tree and listen ganga and kaveri discussin while they are taking the bags

Ganga : to didi kal shaadi hai kaisse feel ho raha hai

manda : didi???

Kaveri : Janki kaal tumari bhi shaadi hai , tumain kaissa feel ho raha hai

Madan : (thinking)yeh janki...???kiya yeh ganga nahin hai

then he though of something

kaveri goes inside while ganga is going to madan say

Mandan : ganga

ganga return and look everywhere to find noone

Ganga : yeh ganga kissne ... nahin nahin ider kissi ko nahin pata mera naam ganga hai

Madan (thinking) : to yeh ganga hi hai...shaadi ho rahi hai main bhi dekhun kaisse hogi

he goes back to the taxi to find ...

Edited by aisha1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesome ...................love itttttttttttttttttt......


Greatttttttt ...dooo conitnue dearooo 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sangam

Madan find his chamcha (yaar don't remember his name) with balbir

Balbir : tum kaun ho???

Chamcha : yeh ganga ki mangetar ...

madan hit his head with is hand : (thinking) bohut bolta hai yeh langoor

Balbir : ganga ...kaun ganga yahan sirf Kaveri uska baap or janki rehte hai

Madan suddenly look at him

Chamcha : jaanki nahin ganga

balbir : ganga??(smile evily)to voh tumari mangetar hai

Madan : hoye ziada chapar chapar karne ki zaroorat nahin hai ...chal

Balbir : rukho ...

...

scene shift , sagar in the airport

Sagar : kuch hi waqt or main jaanki ko dekh sakon gha...uskeharkatein awaz ganga se bohut milte hai...lekin voh meri ganga nahin ho sakti ...meri ganga to

tear drop he remember those moments

Sagar : chahai main kaveri se shaadi karon , jitna pyaar karne ki koshish karon ...main usse sache dil se pyaar nahin kar sakon gha ...ussko apna dil nahin de sakon gha kyunki voh dil voh pyaar sirf ganga ka hai ...or voh dil uske saath chala gaya hai

Edited by aisha1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sangam

Ganga is sleeping , on the other side sagar put his feet in the airport , ganga have lot of flash of sagar ... than he gives is passport , ganga feel like he is near her ... finally sagar meet shekar and goes hug him ... in gangas dream sagars voice saying "ganga main a gaya hoon" ganga jerk up.

Ganga sweating : kyun mujhe lag raha hai jaisse sagar mere ass pass hai...jaisse bohut jald main usse milne wali hoon...ke kuch hone wala hai

Kaveri who was near ganga wake up

Kaveri : (sleeping tone) kiya huwa janvi ... tum uth kyun gahi...shaadi ke liye abhi kuch gante baki hai jaani...(gigle) chalo so jao

ganga : hu haan

ganga goes back to sleep

Sagar and Shekhar in the car ...

Sagar : so bhaya shaadi hone jaa rahi hai apki kaissa feel ho raha hai

Shekar : sunny tumari bhi ho rahi hai ...apni swweeettt si kaveri ke saath ... tum to bohut khush ho...to jaissa tumain feel ho raha hai uss tarah mujhe feel ho raha hai

Sagar (thinking) : bhaya ke apko meri taran ki feeling kabhi na ho...

Sagar : acha bhaya kiya apke pass janvi ki photo hai??

shekhar was going to say yess but he didn't say because he knew if he would had say yes ,sagar would have teased him about kipping janvi photos on him

Shekhar : nahin hai...vaisse bhi abhi khuch hi palon main dekho lo ghe...shayad mujhse phele dekh lo

Sunny : app se phele...voh kaisse

Shekhar : voh ajj sirf shaadi ke baad dekh sakon ...same for you and kaweri

Sunny : ho haan jaanvi ne kaha tha

Shekhar : (jockes mood) janvi janvi kiya lagahi huwi hai...bhabhi bane wali hai tumari...

Sunny (also jocking mood) : ohoho possessive hu...kiya baath hai khulam khala...vaisse bhaya main kiya karon jaanvi meri bhabhi nahin bane wali kuch or hi baneghi...

Shekar : kiya matlab

Sunny : akhir meri adi ghar wali hai

Shekar : ???

Sunny : meri saali bane ja rahi hai...

Shekhar : vah vah...apki to life ban gahi

both laugh , while sagar didn't kno tha in sometimes this laugh will disapear ...

Edited by aisha1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sangam

(the saangeet had already taken place before when sagar wasn't here)

Ok preparetion in Groomsss home

Sagar and shekar in shekar room

Shekar : sunny jo sherwani maine li hai mujhe fit nahin ho rahi

sunny : same here bhaya , apko mera size nahin pata tha kiya

Shekar size maine nahin (you the good person don't remember is name the on with his wife always teasing him)Babhi ji or (name) ne size di hai...mujhe lagta hai ki size exchange hon ge hoge tum mera pehen lo main tumara

So now sagar was wearing this :

and shekhar this

Sunny : chalo dhula ji main apko apna sehra pehna dun

sunny puts shekar sehra than shekar put sagars

Shekar : (stressing) pheww readdyyyy???

Sunny : relax bro , world war III nahin karne ja rahai , shaadi karne ja rahai hai

Shekar : samee thing

they laugh

babhi enter

Babhi:chalo chalo dono tayar ho gahai ho abh chalo bhi

Shekar : voh...

Babhi : chup dono chup rehna ...abh dhule ko na bolna hai , na chera dikhana hai ok ...jitna maarzi hai bhol lena shaadi ke baad

Saagar had written a litle letter to kaveri , he want to tell her the truth about ganga ... and want her to kno everything before the marriage.

On the girls side

Kaveri and Ganga had wear the same lehenga(fiou dont want to search more lol)

But the colour is red with white and gold designing one it for ganga and for kaveri its red with white and silver designing , can not find much difference .

while kaveri was doing her finale touching ganga wrote about her past to shekhar ...she think that would better if she say the truth know...about madan and sagar

Kaveri : ok ganga tayar ho gahi ... chalo

Kaveri s maussi came she is really close to her

Maussi ji : taayaar ho gahi dono chalo a jao

They both take blessing and goes downstair ... lot of people whe messmerized by they beauty boh where wearing the same lehenga , and was as much beatyful on one than the other .

Kaveri s dad : Barathi a gahai hai

Maussi ji : Kaveri or ganga beta dono phir se upar jaho or chehare par ghungar pehen kar hana chalo jaaldi karo.

Grooms at the door.

The ceremony start , aarti then everything , sagar and shekar put foot inside and ganga feel so strange.while sagar feel the wind on his face

Shekhar phones ring and goes into a room to pick up ...to much noise ...while sagar gives letter to gudiya and told her to gives it to is beautyful bride in the other room.

Gudiya take is and goes and gives the letter

On the other hand ganga say to the waiter to give her letter to shekhar ji ...waiter goes to gives letter

Ganga start to put up her ghunghat to read when maussi come and say ...na na na beta ghunghat nahin uthana...do khat mujhe do abhi parne ka time nahin hai...exactly the same thing happen other side.

Anyway know the groom where respectly at their own mandap.

Maussi and kaveri s dad take the bride and put them near their respetive partner the dhulan sit near.

The pheras start ,

First phera , ganga remember her first meeting with sagaar , his smile...

Second phera : sagar remember his and gangas night ...her smile.(he stop for one second the phera than restart)

Third phera : kaveri remember all her happy moment with is to be hubby sunny

Fourth phera : all remember each other

Firth phera : Ganga remember sagars letter how he cheated

Sixt phera : Sagar remember gangas death

Seven pheras : sagar and ganga have a tear while everyone else smile and are happy

They put manglasutra

ganga : i hope ke shekhar ji ne who khat para hai

Kaveri just so exited

when they put the sindoor the light goes off and beautyful firework start (just imagine the wedding on the terrace)

Wedding his over ...

Both the couple start unlochink they (you the bride dupatta and groom dupatta) but massi and shekhars bro stop them saying

Maussi : beta sasural ja kar kholna

Shekhars bro : vaisse bhi tum logon ka to maan nahin hai ek dusre se jhooda hone ka

all laugh

Bidaii

Kaveris dad : meri betiyon ka khayal rakta ...

They all leave

they all arrive at the house ... we see someone evil smile

Aarti is taken , than both girls shoot on the litle pot of rise (hahah)

Balbir s dad : dekha na shaadi to ho gahi ...abh kiya karo ge

Balbir look at him and leave near the wedded couple

the girls enter and put they feet in the kumkum...

Fourth phera :

Edited by aisha1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi guys
kiya shaker soap my mer jay gawasy usy merna nahi chye woh bhaut cute hai
aur shaker aur ganga ki shadi b hoo jaye jald sy jald
kuon kshaker cute hai
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Posted: 17 years ago
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if u don't like my ff tell me plz

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