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Posted: 17 years ago
#11

Sangam

They were all preparing , and reciving guests because it was soon the time to see both bride face.

First couple was in a room and second in another , it was the time to prepare all the things...

First room

Saagar who finally gets the oportunity to talk to kaveri says

Saagar : Kiya tumne mera khaat para???

The bride was so shocked behind her ghungat , She was going to but it of when ...bhabhi comes

Bhabhi : chalo tum dono ...saab intezaar kar rahai hai ...(gigle)

Second room : The dhula hold the bride hand tightly , it was hurting the bride she was going to say something , when shekars bro (ooof gonna put is name shashank ok) shashank who see that the dhula was holding the dhulan hand says

Shashank : urm urm...chalo saab wait kar rahai hai...yeh saab karne ke liye raat bachi hai...-he gigle)

So the first couple was put on a Blue beautyful chair as for the Second they were on Pink Chair.

Shashank and his wife undone each jodis dupatta (you no when you done the dupatta for the wedding.

Than the dhulas take of their sehra so as for the bride.

Everyone was so Shoked

At the Pink chair there was Kaveri with a smirking man who is no not saagar ... no not shekar ... but MADAN ...

madan smirk at everyone and finally look at his bride and stood up in shockeddd , same for the bride...

on the other hand , on the Blue Chair their was Saagar With ...JANVI

they look at everyone expression and were like "what happen" than they finally look at eachother ...

They stood up ...they couldn't believe their eyes ... first saagar thought he was imaginating ganga at kaveris place but when he see kaveri on the other side he was like...

Saagar : ganga...

he was so happy started to aproche her but ganga take a step backward ...(discreate nobody see it) he look at her questionaly

he was going to say something when...

Shashank : yeh ..yeh kiya ho gaya

Bhabhi : Or shekhar bhaya kider hai ???

We see a man driving fast and than stop to run inside the home... he stood at the door ... everyone looked at him...

It was Shakhar

Shekhar : Janviiii

TUNUM TUNUM TUNUM lol

Next part after you post some comments lol

Edited by aisha1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: aisha1

if u don't like my ff tell me plz

Hey Aysh, can I call you Aysh?😆 its just that I got a cousin called aysha! and I call her Aysh all the time! 😊 youre FF is really good! its wicked!😃 I wanted someone to write a FF about Sagar, ganga/jhanvhi, shekhar and kaveri! and you did thnx!😃 I like sagar!😳 hehe! anyway please cont soon! I really liked it!

Bye!😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
Hey your fan fic is great. I love the way you write it, but I think it needs more promotion 😃 Meaning, change colour in the text yaar so that the readers enjoy reading it. Be cautious about your spellings. Add some flowers or some more pictures just for us to get the visualization of what you are trying to show us. These were just my opinions. I don't know why but I always make my writing formal so that if when my English teacher ever sees it, she should think that yes, I have learned from her 😆 No offense on the suggestions yaar, they were just my two cents and please please please do not get offended 😊 Once again, a lovely fan fic 👏 I have a questions too. Why don't Sagar-Ganga get married though?
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
hey ur fic is tooooooooo gud , gr8 ............. do update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15

wow.. i just read all the parts.. superb ff!!!! plz continue.. the tunum tunum thingy was hilarous 😆 😆 😆 ~niti~ 😃

btw... does anyone know how i can get rid of the ad below in my signature area???? i dont know where it pops outta from..i want it GONE😡... lol!!!!!! plz tell me if u know!!!! thanx!!!!

Edited by infiniti1215 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
this fanfic is superb 👏 👏 👏

continue soon!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey plz cont soon! 😭 i want to know what shekar, sunny, jhanvi and kaveri do! 😊 it was really good! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
i read all the partsnd i must say ur ff is mindblowing 😃 plz continue fast..very eager to know wat will happen now 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
Shekhar : Jhanvi!!!

Sunny : Jhanvi?!

Madan : Jhanvi nahin Ganga...

Kaveri look at the man who was standing near her ...who was supposed to be her Husband...

As for Sunny he was frusted...The Woman he Loves was near him , she was his wife , his beloved was alive he was so happy but at the same time his love had just been called Jhanvi by his brother...as he just stoll his brother love?

Press was there to take photos of The big Wedding in the singhani house...

Press : wasn't it supposed to be Mister Shekhar Singhania wedding...

Everyone had to come back to reality and answer ... Shanta was going to say something but shakhar cut in...

Shekhar : Sorry No ... It is Saagar and Jhanvi s wedding we just had litle problem ...

Everybodys shoking face...

Shekhar : please don't disturb us we want it to end this wedding personnaly...you may leave

Press : but...

Shekhar : LEAVE

the press leave...

Shanta : Please aph saab bethiye , or khayie(weird)

In the rOom

Kaveri , Ganga/jhanvi , Saagar , shekhar , shubudh(come back to his real show name lol) , shanta , madan were present...

Kaveri : Shakhar ap ne yeh kyon kaha ki...
Shekhar : Kaveri sorry...lekin yehi ek raasta tha ...ki jhanvi or tum badnaam na ho...(blabla guys think as if i am ekta and i found something lol)

Madan : main is shaadi ko nahin manta ... maujhe nahin pata tha ki ganga nahin thi...issi liya to maine isko (pointing toward shekhar) kidnap karwaya tha

Saagar catch madan by the neck

Shekhar : saagar choro usse...tumain meri kasam

saagar leave him , he was actually so angry because , because of him (madan) he thought he had lost ganga...he was separated from his love

Kaveri : main ek ajnabi ke saath nahin rehe sakti ...i want divorce

Madan : shit...
he punch the wall
Everyone look at madan

Shubudh : tumara problem kiya hai...abhi abhi to kehe rahai the ki tum kaveri ke saath nahin rehna chate or abhi...

Madan : hoye ... main iske saath nahin rehna chaata ...lekin problem yeh hai ki...

Shekhar ; what?

Madan : hum charon ne wedding paper par sign kiya hai...

Shanta : to?

Madan : bolne de...Taaki ganga mujhse talak na le maine contract kiye hai ki ek saal tak yeh mujhse talak nahin le sakti

Everyone : KIYA???

(ok guys just imagine it can happen ...ok lol)


While everyone were shocked , Saagad was a bit happy he knew that no one can separate him for ganga now , he just wanted desperatly to talk to her...

Edited by aisha1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
oh my god . its great , i love this drama . sagar nd ganga...UFFFFF...No words for them. 👏

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