FF:TeRE IShq MeiN||LasT PaRt - Page 4

awww the part was really really cute...please post the next part soon

Originally posted by: jinil

sonia can u pleaz tell me why u didnt put the precap from part 3

but i still luved this part keep cont!

Yaa I realized that too, but the story with the house thing didn't seem much interesting to me, so I changed it😃But I promise not to do that again!😆😳

Thanks everyone! 😳


Manya was putting on her earring when Om knocked on the door.
Om: Manya! Akash bhula raha hai tujhe!
M: Mujhe? Kyun?
Om: Patha nain...
He entered the room and smiled at Manya.
Om: Tumhe hanstha hua dekh ke...sach mein bahut acha lagta hai, Manya. Hamesha yuhin smile kerti rehna!
M: Thanks, Om. You're the best, tumhe patha hai na?
Om: Haan, kuch bahut...
Manya laughed and Om held her shoulders.
Om: Remember, Manya, if you need me, I'm always here for you...
Manya smiled at him as her eyes became teary.
M: I know that, Om. Kyunki tum shuru se meri madat kerte aye ho. And thanks for that.
Om: THANKS? Dost kehti ho aur phir thanks?
Manya laughed.
M: Okay, okay, no thanks! Ab main ja ker dekhun Akash kya chahta hai?
Om: Haan..
As Manya walked away, Om smiled to himself...
----------------On the beach---------------------------
Manya saw Akash waving his hands wildly at her from the water. He had his jeans rolled up, and he was playing in the water with little children.
A: MANYA!
Manya raced over to him and stood in the water, her dress getting soaked. She laughed as Akash splashed her.
M: Akash!
She grabbed a handful of water and threw it at Akash, then started running away. Akash followed her, throwing water on her. They laughed as Akash grabbed Manya in his arms and whispered,
A: Pankh dhoon?
M: AKASH!
A: Too late, sweetheart!
In his arms, he held MAnya high up, and suddenly let her go. Manya landed in the water with a huge splash. The kids laughed as Akash pointed and laughed hysterically.
M: Acha?
She grabbed his legs and pulled, and Akash toppled over in the water.
A: Manya...!!!
Manya laughed and stood up, sticking her tongue out at him.
They both stood up and went over to the little carts set on the beach. Manya pointed at balloons.
M: Look! Balloons! Akash, mujhe chahiye!
A: Balloons? Pagal ho?
M: Pagal mathlab? Mujhe chahiye, mujhe chahiye...!!!
A: Fine, fine, shut up!
Akash bought a handful of balloons and handed them to Manya.
A: Khush?
Manya gave him a light hug, leaving him surprised. She ran off with the kids while Akash smiled to himself from her touch.
The wind blew hard as Akash stared at Manya run in the sand, her hair flying in the wind. Manya laughed and let the balloons fly from her hands in the air as she opened her arms, running around and laughing. Akash stared as a few little girls played music, humming the words "Tere Ishq Mein, Ishq Mein...Tere Ishq Mein, Ishq Mein..." Manya passed Akash as she ran with two little boys, chasing them. Her dupatta waved Akash's face as he grabbed it in his hands. Manya turned around and stared at him as he rolled the dupatta in his hands, pulling himself closer...
A: Manya...
M: Hmm?
Akash and Manya stared into each other's eyes as the wind picked up, moving leaves all around them. Akash stared into her eyes as the song came on, (This song follows the rhythm/music of Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai, but they are my own words 😳 )
Jee Yeh Chahe Jaana
Tere Ishq Mein Zindagi Guzaroon
Teri Ek Hassi Mein
Apna Ashiyaan Sajaa Loon...

Tere Aanchal Mein
Sir Rakh Ker Sauu Jaooon
Saari Dunya Bhula Ker
Tere Ishq Mein Khau Jaoon...

Akash looked at Manya and Manya looked at Akash.
M: Bolo bhi...
A: Woh, Manya...main kehna chahta tha ki...
Suddenly, Om stepped out.
Om: Manya! Tumhari Ma ka phone hai! New York se!!
Manya looked at Akash and took her dupatta out his hands, running away. Akash laughed and put his hands behind his head, looking up at the sky.
A: Yeh tho kabhi nahin socha tha!

---------------------At Night--------------------------
Manya waved to Om.
Om: Manya, you sure tum nain aana chahti? Hum sab beach per walk kerne lage hain. Bahut mazaa ayega!
M: Nahin, Om, tum jao.
Om: Okay..bye..
Manya shut the door and went upstairs to her room. After a few hours or so, she heard moving downstairs. Manya stood up, thinking that the gang had returned. When she stepped on the stairs, she noticed the lights were out.
M: Kaun hai?
A spotlight flickered on at her words and Akash stepped into view. Manya looked at him, confused.
M: Akash?
Akash was looking at her. Manya climbed downstairs till she reached in front of him. Akash breathed loudly as Manya stared at him.
M: Akash..?
A: Manya...Main nahin jaanta ki mujhe yeh kehna chahiye ki nahin. Lakein...tumhare saath jagarte jagarte pyar ho gaya...
Manya breathed in loudly, staring at him.
A: Aur ab jee chahta hai ki...ki...apni saari zindagi tumhare saath guzaroon. Ki tumhe apni baahoon mein leker ek alag sa ashiyaan saja loon. Bhool jaoon saari dunya aur tumhari khushi ko apni khushi banaa loon. Main--main jahan bhi jaata hoon, na, Manya...tho...tho aisa lagta hai tumhari gali hai. Har chehra tumhara chehra lagta hai, Manya. Tumhe hanste hue dekhta hoon na, main khud khush ho jaata hoon. Tumhare saath mujhe...mujhe janat milti hai, Manya..
Manya stared as he bent down on his knees, looking into her eyes lovingly.
A: Kya tum iss deewane ko oos ki zindagi dho gi, Manya?
Manya stared into his eyes...


Manya stared at Om, who still stood in the doorway, his eyes glued to the ground. Suddenly, she felt as if all she wanted to do was go away from here, from everywhere. All her emotions turned into panic as she turned around and looked out the window to see Akash kicking the grass excitedly...

Hope you all liked it! I know the lyrics weren't that good but I tried 😆 Stay tuned! 😳

aww that was really good...i got kinda confused by the precap...? but thats just me

Originally posted by: soccorgirl1015

aww that was really good...i got kinda confused by the precap...? but thats just me

Yep...it was meant to be a bit confusing😆

Originally posted by: ana1

👏 thats so good 👏 👏

Thanks Sandra...I could call you that, right?😆

Originally posted by: devildanca730

LOVE IT!

Thank you😳

wen are you going to post in part 7????

[[PaRt 7]]

Akash stared at Manya expectingly. Manya smiled and placed her hand in his as he grinned.
A: I Love You, Manya Sharma!
He picked her up and spun her around as the lights flickered on. Manya gasped and saw the whole house decorated with red and white balloons. In the middle it read "I Love You." Manya looked down and realized she was standing on a red carpet filled with flowers. Roses fell from the ceiling as Akash spun her around. Manya laughed.
M: Akash! Yeh sab...?
A: Mujhe patha tha tum na nahin karogi!
M: Oh really? Aur woh kaise?
A: Kya Cinderella apne Prince Charming se inkaar ker sakti hai, Manya?!
Manya laughed and hugged him tightly. Akash grabbed her hand and raced outside to the back yard overlooking the back portion of the beach. Manya looked around and realized the gang must have gone the other side for a walk, because no one was in sight.
Manya laugehd excitedly as she saw balloons flying in the air. The beach was decorated with red and strings covering the poles, roses covering the sand, and what seemed like millions of balloons covering the sky.
Akash smiled and held her hands. Manya laughed and played with the balloons, swinging around. Akash laughed and looked at her lovingly as the song came on,
Jis haseen khwaab ki thi tamanna mujhe
Haan vahi ban gaye ho tum
Zindagi ban gaye ho tum
Zindagi ban gaye ho tum
Akash ran over Manya and grabbed her from behind, putting his arms over her and holding her hands. He let his head rest on her shoulders as the balloons flew around them, being pushed by the wind. Manya turned around and smiled at Akash.
A: Meri sweetheart, aapko yeh surprise kaisa laga?
M: Kaun sa? Yeh decorations yaan..tumhara pyar?
Akash grinned and spread out his arms, looking up at the sky.
A: I love you, Manya Sharma!!!
Manya laughed as she stared at him, having flashbacks of their times spent together in her mind. The song played,
Har kisi se jisse main chhupaati rahi
Bekhudi mein jisse goongunaati rahi
Maine tanha kabhi jo likhi thi vohi
Shaayari ban gaye ho tum
Zindagi ban gaye ho tum
Zindagi ban gaye ho tum
Akash breathed haevily and stared into Manya's eyes.
A: Tumne mujhe meri zindagi dhay dhi, Manya..
M: Aur tumne mujhe har khushi dhay dhi, Akash...
He pressed his forehead against hers and smiled, thinking, I love you, Manya...
-----------------At Night---------------------------
Manya was sitting in bed when she heard something against her window. She looked down and saw Akash blowing kisses. She laughed and stuck her tongue out at him. He teasingly placed his hand on his heart, pretendind to be offended. Manya giggled and waved to him, shutting the window again.
Manya spun around and jumped, surprised to see Om standing at her door.
M: Om!
Om: Manya, yeh neeche...sab decorations...
Manya stared at him and then remembered Akash's decorations for her.
M: Oh, woh sab--
Om grinned at her.
Om: Tho iss liye tum peeche rehna chahti thi?
M: Huh? Nain, mujhe nain patha tha ki--
Om laughed and looked up at the ceiling.
Om: Manya...mujhe bhi patha nahin chala...that while trying to help you away from your fears, I suddenly fell in love...
Manya's smile faded as she stared at him, shocked. She breathed in tightly.
Om: You know, hamesha tumhare ansoon pohnchte pohnchte...un ansoon se nafrat hone lagi. Aur maine khud se poocha, that why does it bother me? Ek awaaz ne kaha ki main sirf tera acha dost hoon..aur doosri..doosri ne kaha ki..
Manya stared at Om, who still stood in the doorway, his eyes glued to the ground. Suddenly, she felt as if all she wanted to do was go away from here, from everywhere. All her emotions turned into panic as she turned around and looked out the window to see Akash kicking the grass excitedly, smiling to himself as he ran around like a little child who just got what he wanted. She turned and stared back at Om, who had always been there for her as her best friend, even when Akash had "abandoned" her.
Om looked at Manya, smiling sheepishly.
Om: Manya...I...love you...
Manya let out the breath she was holding, staring at him in bewilderment.
Om: Lakein, koi jaldi nain ai Manya...main...main subha tak intezar karun ga...
Manya raised out her hand to reach him and tell him everything when he turned around and walked away. Manya turned around and saw Akash writing something in the sand with a stick. When he left, Manya peered down and saw that he had written "Akash and Manya..I Love You.."
Manya closed her eyes, letting a tear slip down.
M: Om..yeh kya ho gaya? Main...main apna pyar chunu yaan...yaan dosti?

Precap:
Rehan raced inside the house where Manya stood next to Om, about to say something. Rehan pointed frantically out the door.
Rehan: MANYA! OM! Woh--woh...!!!!

Hope you liked it! There will be interesting scenes coming up 😳

this was really good...i'm glad that there will be some drama and a a little conflict thats not only between Manya and Rupa ;) you are really good...please post part 8 up soon