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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing..that was really good...i hope you dont end this one as quick as the last one ended =[

please continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
aww that so cute i love it plz write soon (lol i like ur old one as well lol) u r just too good 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank youu everyone! 😃 And I'll try to make this FF longer 😉


Manya rolled her eyes but laughed and held his hand. Goppu teasingly nudged Roopa and she glared at Akash.
Akash grabbed Manya's hand and pulled her closer, smiling his usual flirtatious smile. Karan looked at Manya, a bit confused. Roopa gritted her teeth in anger and whispered to Goppu,
R: Yeh aise kyun dekh raha hai ussai?
G: Relax, Roopa. Tum bhi doosroon ke saath dance ker rahi thi na!
R: So what?
Goppu shrugged and watched as everyone stared at Akash and Manya. The song "HumKo Malom Hai" came on from Jaaneman. Akash spun Manya and tightly held her as she stopped spinning. They were lost in the dancin world as Akash picked Manya up and circled her around in his arms, laughing.
Manya and Akash are slowly dancing to "Humko Maloom Hai" from Jaaneman. Akash held her lightly from the waist as they swayed, looking at each other.
Roopa suddenly stood up.
R: Enough! Manya, tum kya ker rahi ho?!
Akash placed Manya down, startled.
A: Roopa! What happened?
R: Mujhse pooch rahe ho!
A: Excuse me! Tum hi tho thi jo doosroon ke saath dance per aana chahti thi! Now what happened to you?
Roopa glared at Akash and walked towards Manya. She held her hand and took her to the side of the gym.
M: Roopa, kya hua?
R: Mujhse pooch rahi ho, Manya? I thought we were best friends!
M:We are, yaar, but what happened?
R: Tum Akash ke saath aise dance...
M: So? We're just friends...
R: Lakein main jaanti hoon ke tumhare dil mein Akash ke liye kya hai, Manya!
Manya was taken aback by Roopa's words. Tears stung her eyes.
M: I would never try to take him away from you, Roopa!
R: Tho phir muth jao uske paas! Woh..woh tumhara bahut acha dost hai Manya! Aur mujhe hamesha yeh darr rehta hai ki...ki...
Manya stared at Roopa, hurt.
M: Bas, Roopa...bas...
She raced out of the gym in tears. Karan stood up and so did Om.
A: Roopa! What did you say to her?
R: Don't shout at me, Akash!
A: ROOPA! MANYA KO TUMNE KYA KAHA?!
Akash was about to run after Manya when Om held his arm.
Om: Nahin, Om. Tu Roopa ko sambaal, main jaata hoon...
A: Per...
Om patted his arm and ran after Manya. Karan slowly walked behind him as well.
-------------------Outside-------------------------
Light drizzle fell on Manya's head as she cried.
M: Roopa, tumne soch bhi kaise liye ke main aisa karun gi? How could you, Roopa?!
Om came and held Manya's shoulder.
Om: Pagal hai tu, Manya? Itni si baat per rau perri?
Karan came from behind and stood still. He saw Manya crying and his heart sank.
Iss waqt shiyad tumhe meri nahin, apne dost ki zarurat hai, Manya... He thought, walkin away.
Manya wiped her tears as more followed.
M: Om, Roopa...ussai...usne aisa soch bhi kaise liye, Om?
Om: Kyunki sab logoon ke dil teri tarha saaf nain hote, Manya. Idhar dekho.
Om held Manya's chin and wiped away her tears.
Om: Jab tak tera yeh dost zinda hai, tujhe raune ki koi zarurat nahin. Its Akash's loss that he didn't realize your love.
M: Lakein main un dhono ke raaste mein aane ki koshish nahin thi ker rahi, Om. Main tho bas--patha hai tumhe, Roopa ne kaha that I shouldn't hang out with Akash?
Om: What?! Manya, tu bhool ja ussai.
M: I do love him, Om. I do! Lakein main kabhi bhi ussai Roopa se alag nahin kerna chahun gi!
OM: Manya, rao nahin! I know ke tum dil ki bahut achi ho! Aur un dhono ko alag kerne vaali tum nahin ho, Manya. Kismat hai. Kismat se hi unka pyar itna atoot nahin hai!
M: Tho phir shiyad woh kismat ka badalna mera hi kasoor hai, Om!
Om: No, Manya, no!
M: I should just go away. Main kisi ke liye mainay nahin rakhti, Om. I'm just bothering lives...
Om turned MAnya around and held her shoulders.
Om: Lakein mere liye rakhti hai tu, Manya. You're my best friend, yaar, aur tumhare ansoon mujhse bardaasht nahin hote..!
Manya smiled in pain and hugged Om, crying.
M: Thanks, Om. You're a true friend.
Om smiled and held her tightly in his arms, just like any best friend would do.
But from inside the door, Akash stood there, watching them. He couldn't hear what they were saying, but he saw Manya hug Om tightly.
A: Om...aur Manya?!
---------------The next day------------------
Kiran, Manya's roommate in the dorm, smiled at Manya.
K: Manya, I hope tumhe kal raat ka burra na lag raha ho. You're okay, na?
M: Yeah, I'm fine...
They both headed downstairs to class where Jyotsna madam was teaching Literature.
J: Welcome, class! Please take your seats!
Manya saw Roopa seated next to Akash, who was slumped in his chair with a frown on his face. Without saying hi, Manya went to the front andtook a seat between Goppu and Karan.
Karan grinned at her.
K: Hey, beautiful, date ka silla tho aapne khoob diya!
Manya blushed.
M: Woh, I'm sorry about last night...
K: Chill, beautiful. Its okay.
Manya smiled at him. Om entered the class and waved to Manya. Manya smiled and waved back.
K: So, Manya, tumhare aur Om ke beech mein--
M: Karan! Please! He's my best friend!
K: Good. Verna mera dil toot jaata!
M: Shut up, Karan!
K: After class, Manya, tum field mein kyun nahin aati? To watch me play?
Manya stared at him.
M: Uh...sure...Lakein main Om ke saath lunch kerne vaali thi...
Karan turned around to face Om who was seated behind him.
K: Om, yaar, Manya ke saath football field mein aao ge after class?
Om: Yeah, sure. Manya, hum lunch wahan bhi tho ker sakte hain na, bleachers mein?
K: Great. Be my personal cheerleader, beautiful!
-------------------In the field-----------------------
Manya and Om laughed and clapped for Karan as he took the football and ran away from the players.
Manya suddenly stopped cheering as Akash stepped into the field. Roopa came in the bleachers and gave Manya a half-smile and clapped for Akash. Akash looked in the field and waved. Manya wasn't sure if he waved at her, but Roopa waved back at him.
Akash and KAran started playing, Akash in the lead. Roopa gave Manya a strange look, and Manya slumped in the bleachers.
Manya thought about Akash. "Aur woh ladki hai Roopa!" Akash's words from the Valentines day party rang in her ears. She remembered droppin the rose in tears. She stood back up and clapped.
M: Go, Karan!
Om looked at her, giving her a confused smile. Akash stopped playing and looked at Manya, totally confused. In the meanwhile Karan grabbed the ball and made a touchdown. (The football here is referred to the American football!) Akash slammed his hand into the bleachers angrily.
He came upto the bleachers and galred at Manya.
A: Bahut achi friendship dikha dhi tumne, Manya!
Manya looked at him and then at Roopa.
I'm sorry, Akash. Lakein meri dosti ke peeche tum Roopa ka oyar kho sakte ho..She thought.
M: Friendship mein kahin nahin likha hai ki mujhe tumhare liye hi cheer kerna hai. Aur besides, Karan bhi mera dost hai!
Akash clapped his hands angrily.
A: Waah, Manya, waah! Kabhi Karan aur kabhi Om--!
Om looked up at him, shocked. He grabbed Akash's collar.
Om: AKASH!
A: Chilao muth! Maine bhi dekha raat ko how you two were hugging!
M: Akash! [I[(crying)
R: Manya! Once again you made...
M: Bas! Om, chodo ussai!
Om glared at Akash.
Om: Ek atoot dosti ka bandhan tu nain samje ka, Akash! Aur vaise bhi, tujhe kya Manya jiske saath bhi ho? Tu reh na apni Roopa ke paas!
He let go of Akash and grabbed Manya's arm, leading her away.
Akash watched them go away as Roopa held his arm.
Mujhe kya! Manya jiske saath bhi ho! Why am I so bothered about it?


Manya wiped away her tears.
M: Ab bas, Roopa! Meri dosti ka kitna imtehan lo gi?
She said this aloud to no one in particular. She looked up and saw a figure approach her.
"Manya?"
Manya looked up and saw it was no other than Akash.


Hope you liked it, guys...stay tuned! 😳


Edited by sonikudi1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
that was really good! 👏 but can u put more of karanya scenes? i'd really like that. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks...more Akanya scenes will definitely be coming up 😳



Manya sat down on a bench outside, wiping her tears. Roopa came and stared at her angrily.
R: Manya! Tum--tum--just stay away from him, can you? Aaj tumne Om aur Akash ke beech...
M: Bas, Roopa! Bas karo!
Roopa stared at her and walked away. Manya held the bench, crying.
Manya wiped away her tears.
M: Ab bas, Roopa! Meri dosti ka kitna imtehan lo gi?
She said this aloud to no one in particular. She looked up and saw a figure approach her.
"Manya?"
Manya looked up and saw it was no other than Akash.
A: Manya, Roopa ne tumhare saath kya kiya?
Manya looked at the ground and stood up. She started walking away when Akash grabbed her hand. He pulled her close to himself and whispered,
A: I'm sorry, Manya.
M: I don't care, Akash.
She started to walk away again when Akash grabbed her from the waist.
A: Acha. Tho meri Madam Moiselle ab mere saath naraaz hai?
Manya pushed Akash away.
M: Akash! Tumhe patha hai ki Roopa ko hamari yeh dosti pasand nahin hai?
A: But why? Hum tho shuru se ache dost hain na, Manya!
M: Haan, lakein--
A: Lakein kya?
Manya shook her head.
M: Tum bas Roopa ka saath dho, Akash.
Akash frowned as he looked away. Manya stared at him.
M: Akash?
Akash held his hands behind his head.
A: Manya, I'm not sure agar main yeh saath kuch dher aur dhay sakta hoon...
M: Akash, tum yeh kya keh rahe ho?
A: Haan, Manya...Roopa..Roopa woh nahin hai jo main samja tha. I thought she was understanding, sweet, almost like you!
Akash stopped when he realized what he said. Manya stared at him. She stepped back and ran away from there.
-----------------The next night------------------------
Manya saw Roopa flirting with a guy in class. Manya walked upto her.
M: Acha? Tho tum mujhe itne ghusse mein kehti ho to stay away from him? Aur tum khud--
R: Manya, Akash and I are no more.
M: Huh?
R: Akash...Akash mujhse pyar nahin kerta, Manya. He said we were over.
Manya stared at Roopa.
M: Are you...serious?
R: Haan. Oos ne kaha that it was just attraction...not love. And you know what, Manya? I think he's right...
M: Kahan hai woh?
Roopa shrugged.
R: I don't know. But don't worry, Manya. Hum dhono khush hain is faisale se. We've decided to stay as friends.
M: I'm sorry, Roopa...
R: No, I'm sorry, Manya...I was wrong.
Manya smiled at her and went outside. It was chilly outside the campus. She took a seat near the pool and soaked her legs in the chilly water. Two hands covered her eyes.
M: Kaun?
The hands let go of her as Manya turned around. Akash smiled at her and sat down.
A: Madam Moiselle, aren't you cold?
M: No...its okay...
Akash soaked his legs in the water also and smiled at her.
A: Manya, tum bahut different ho, tumhe patha?
M: Oh really? Woh kaise?
Akash laughed and put his arm over her shoulder.
A: Tum meri one and only Madam Moiselle ho!
Manya laughed.
M: I'm honored, Akash!
A: Hey, tum semester break ke liye kahan ja rahi ho?
M: Oh...I'm not sure. Mummy Papa tho New York mein hain...and its just a week. Hotel mein, I guess...
Akash shook his head.
A: No way! Tum mere saath chalo gi, to my house! My family will love to meet you!
M: Tumhare saath? No way!
A: Relax, Manya. Main tumhara...rape nain karun ga!
Manya laughed and pushed him.
M: Lakein Akash, agar mere jazbaath behk gaye tho?
A: Tho..phir..har had ko hum..paar ker dhein ge, my love!
They both laughed.
M: Lakein tumhare gharwale....
A: Samje ge ke main unki bahu le aya!
Manya looked up at Akash and smiled.
M: Akash, tum bhi na!
A: Come on, Madam Moiselle! Please?!
M: Uh...okay...

--------------------Next Morning-----------------------
Akash entered Manya and Kiran's room just as Kiran left with her luggage.
K:Akash, I'm leaving! See you in a week! And tell Manya I said bye!
A: Woh tho teek hai, per woh hai kahan?
K: Abhi so rahi hai! Byeee!
Akash walked into the room and saw Manya sleeping on her bed. He smiled and walked upto her, staring at her sleep. He bend down and whispered,
A: Sleeping Beauty, utto.
When Manya didn't budge, Akash laughed and bent into her ears.
A: BOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Manya screamed and jumped up.
M :AAhh!! AKASH RATHOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
She jumped up as Akash laughed and ran out of the room. Manya followed him with her pillow, yelling his name angrily. Akash raced into his room and fell on the bed, and Manya jumped onto of him.
M: You're sooo dead!!
A: No, Manya, you are!
Manya looked at him confused when she saw Jyotsna ma'am in the door.
J: MAnya Sharma! Please get off him!!
Manya blushed furiously and stood up.
M: I..I..
J: Please hurry up, guys. Your cab is waiting...
She gave Manya one last look and left the room. Akash started to laugh hysterically as he sat on his bed again.
A: Oh damn! Tumhara chehra, Manya!!
Manya glared at him.
M: You--
A: What? Ab tho ek witness bhi hai, Manya! Main tumper rape ka ilzaam laga dhoon ga, okay?
M: Acha?
Manya grabbed his neck and pretended to choke him. He rolled out his tongue as if he was dying.
From the hallway, Manya heard Jyotsna ma'am's voice again.
J: Manya!!
Manya let go of Akash, her eyes widening.
M: Haye main mer gayee!!
She raced out of the room as Akash laughed.
A: Haye main mer gayee? What the heck?

-----------------Two hours later----------------------
Akash waited on top of the cab for Manya.
A: Yeh Sleeping Beauty bhi na...itni dher laga rahi hai!
Manya stepped out of the college, rolling her bag behind her. Akash looked at her and sat straight, surprised at how pretty she looked. She was wearing one of her usual dreses, but she looked fabulous. Manya's dupatta suddenly flew away with the wind and landed on Akash's face. Manya flushed and walked to him, slowly taking her dupatta away from his face. His closed his eyes as it came off, and then opened them again to see Manya, blushing, putting it back on her shoulders.
M: Woh...
A: Aye, Sleeping Beauty...
Manya looked up at him...


Manya looked at Akash's room as Akash spread his arms out.
A: Like it?
M: I love it!
Akash looked at her flirtatiously.
A: Want to make it yours?
Manya laughed as he teased her.
M: No thanks.
A: No really, Manya...
He bent down and whispered in her ears,


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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
wow my god u have the best imagination ever u rock(by the way i luved your other ff humtum sho sweet)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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JUST LOVE ITT! 😳
meh to doop gaya tuhmara FF meh 😳
i thought i was watching a epi off SZ 😃
it was so fabulous 👏 !!
btw love u imagination.. that date auction fabulous idea 👍🏼

JUST CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXST PART 😳

continue Sooooon!
im dying to read the nexst part..
so if u wana keep me alive continue soon 😆

luvs, Bahar
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bahar ^_^

JUST LOVE ITT! 😳
meh to doop gaya tuhmara FF meh 😳
i thought i was watching a epi off SZ 😃
it was so fabulous 👏 !!
btw love u imagination.. that date auction fabulous idea 👍🏼

JUST CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT PART 😳

continue Sooooon!
im dying to read the nexst part..
so if u wana keep me alive continue soon 😆

luvs, Bahar

yeh if u dont want to murder me keep going for another 25 years(jokes😆)

but that murder thing is true

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Posted: 17 years ago
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so wen rite next
cant wait sorry for being very very very ipmpatient 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
omg that was really really really good please post the next part in soon

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