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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
.......A:sir maanya was about to fall
so I caught her
Officer: tik hai tik hai 😡
the officer headed towards his office.
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Then ...
Maanya and aakash sat on the bench holdin eachothers hands 😳 😳 😳
and got rid of the misundersatndings
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while talkin
they thought of gettin 😃 rupa and raj
together
A:wat a perfect jodi, just like us 😳 !
M:Yea Yea wateva
Aakash got up 😡 😡
A:fine then Im goin
Maanya got up n grabbed his hand
M:im sry
I REALLY LUV U
A:me 2
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Gang:AHEM!!!!!!!!!!
Kiran: vese ab humhe rupa aur raj ko milana chahiya
OM:yeh toh tenu sahi baat karri
Gopu:Chale
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Maanya and aakash walked bac holding hands
along with everyone else.
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Everyone seperated to go to their rooms
M:bye aakash
aakash wouldnt let go of her hand
and pulled her close
n was bout to kiss her
but she moved herself
A:alright then for now on the fore head
aakash kissed her on the forehead
A:ILUVU
M:bye
then Next MOrnin.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
everyone in the academy find out tht manya n akash r gng out..rupa n raj r heartbroken n lyk keep 2 themselves throughout the week..they avoid manya n akash as much as they can..meanwhile the gang try 2 fix them up and fail miserably each tym..its just not happenin..
then one nyt rupa goes 4 a long walk..raj sees her and decides 2 join her..they both share their miseries with each otha n rupa starts cryin n is lyk aisa hamare saath hi kyu hua?..raj consoles her..then hes lyk un dono ne humara dil toda..kyu na hum dono um dono ka dil tode..at first rupa objects but raj forces her till she says yes..

hehe..now we have the vamps..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
raj whispers his plan of how to break up akash and manya in rupa's ears.


rupa - okay! tumhara plan 100% successful hoga. ab akash aur manya ko dukhj sehne se koi nahin bacha sakta.


the next day, its rose day. manya is standing in the garden when akash comes and hugs her from behind while presenting her with a rose. manya gets happy and hugs him.


manya - aww akash. i love u!

akash - i love u 2.


rupa and raj come from nowhere, and disturb their moment.

rupa - ah hemm.

raj - yeh kya ho raha hai?

manya and akash part.

manya - kuch nahin. woh bas...

raj - waise manya, yeh hai tumhare liye. happy rose day.

raj presents manya with a yellow rose and kisses her.

raj - yeh pilaa gulab humare dosti ke liye. (correct me if i am mistaken, but i think its tt presenting a yellow rose to sm1 is 4 friendship and a red rose is 4 love)

akash gets jealous seeing raj kiss manya, so he gets angry and goes from there.

rupa - arre. isse kya hua?

manya - pata nahin. dekhti hoon.

manya goes to see where akash has gone and then manaaofy him.

rupa - oh... jealousy...

raj - jab yeh green eyed monster aata hai na, toh har rishtey mein daraar banata hai. yeh thi humari pehli vaar...
Edited by iqbal_angad91 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
M:Aakash
Maanya finds him in his room
M:Kya huva?
A:woh raj bhi na.............
M:Woh sirf mera dost hai
Maanya hugs him
M:DOnt u trust me?
A:Yea I guess, im sry
they kiss

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then walkin in the hallway
Rupa n aakash bump into eachother
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
rupa starts to remind him of old thing and starts bto flirt with him
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
gud game 😆 😆 😆
this story is really interesting
gud job guyz
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Aaksah and rupa talk n rupa gives him a hug
Maanya sees this
Aakash sees maanya
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he tries to explain but b4 he cud
M:tumhe kuch kehne ki sarurat nahi hai
mujhe tum par pura bharosa hai 😳 😳 😳
aur mein bhi yeh oumid karti hun ke tum bhi
mujh par bharosa karo ge
A: Sach mein, 😃 😛 😉
mein bohot hi kushnaseeb
hun ki mujhe tum mili ho
They hug eachother
and head towards the grounds

Seeing this rupa n raj
get frustrated
Raj:luks like v have 2 work harder
Rupa:Maanya is trusting aakash blindly
Lighhtbulb
Raj:but, aakash wont
Rupa:rite
Raj: so lets break it up from aakash's side
Dayz pass
Raj get close to maanya wen aakash is around
and on the other side 😡 😡
rupa keeps tauntin 🤢 aakash
that he needs to keep n eye on mmanya


u guyz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
akash thinks really hard about what ruppa said...
on the other hand raj is taunting manya about akash
r: manya mujhe akash ke aur rupa ke beech main kuch sy nahi lagra
m: raj main ye nehi mantie wo sirf dost hain or kuch nahi
manya leaves with a angry face

the next day rupa and raj are talking with eachother about their plan and at that time sanju over hears them n they dnt no...sanju thinks really hard abt it she thinks than that she shld go and tell manya so in the night she tlks to manya abt it ..manya thinks really hard she thinks about how raj was trying to brainwash her earlier.

the next day she goes to tlk to akash when she finds akah nd rupa together she tried not to b jelaous but she thought to herself if she tells akash he wont believe her n tell it 2 rupa so she makes a plan
she wlks toward them

m: hi rupa ye tum log yaha pe kya keray ho
a: wo hum ..
r: manya hum to sirf puraani baatain yaad keray thay ..kaisay akash mujhko puker ta tha or khanna sir ke naam se deratha tha
m: log kaithay hain puranie baton ko yaad kerkay apnay aanay walay kel ko kharab ny kertay. wasay mainay notice kiya hain tumharay or raj ke beech main ky chal ra hain akalay akaly kamray main kya keray thay 😆
rupa leaves with an angry face

manya sees raj cuming so she starts hugging akash n tells him she luvs him but b4 raj cld diturb them she takes akash away.

next day khanna sir tells everybody u all will get a partner and practice shoooting 4 dem
ks: sanju tumhara partner kon hain?
s: sir goppu ( she gives him a luk)

ks: rupa tumhara partner kon hain
(manya knew she was going to call on akash )
r: sir akash
ks: im srry rupa lakin mainay akash ko manya ke saath partner banaya hain
( hearing this manya gets happy)
ks: rupa tum om kay saath kaam kero gie
r: but sir
ks: jo ke dia so kedia
ks: ( calls on every1 else)
Edited by fabulus - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
since no 1 is adding i will just continue

manya nd akash get even closer becuz of this but than rupa makes a fake fall nd cries nd acts like she fell...she starts to yell...akash runs to her but raj doesnt go becuz he noes shes acting...manya cumz 2 she notices rupa didnt get hurt so she tells rupa let me go n call khanna sir nd rupa stops but she still goes she tells khanna sir nd khanna sir cums and takes a luk at her he sees nuthin wrong so he scolds rupa for making a false issue ... akash gets suspicious nd rupa gets embaraced
rupa tells all this to raj

so they make another plan
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
they decide 2 drop the jealousy idea n think of sumthin tht will completely shatter their relationship..n tht is by making akash think tht manya is a middle-class LS person n tht she is not fit 4 him..
rupa throws a new yrs party whr she invites every1 from the academy..its like a posh party n manua shows up in a slawaar kameez..a very old-fashioned 1 while everyone else is in fancy dresses, skirts n all..she looks completely out of plc..om n sum otha peeps make fun of her but akash stands up 4 her which is totally opposite of wht they had planned..they get frustrated
meanwhile akash tells manys tht thts what he likes abt her..her simplicity..manya smiles n they make out

gossh! we shouls turn scriptwriters..we can give kekta a run 4 her money..lool 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: ~PuNk PrInCeSs~

they decide 2 drop the jealousy idea n think of sumthin tht will completely shatter their relationship..n tht is by making akash think tht manya is a middle-class LS person n tht she is not fit 4 him..
rupa throws a new yrs party whr she invites every1 from the academy..its like a posh party n manua shows up in a slawaar kameez..a very old-fashioned 1 while everyone else is in fancy dresses, skirts n all..she looks completely out of plc..om n sum otha peeps make fun of her but akash stands up 4 her which is totally opposite of wht they had planned..they get frustrated
meanwhile akash tells manys tht thts what he likes abt her..her simplicity..manya smiles n they make out

gossh! we shouls turn scriptwriters..we can give kekta a run 4 her money..lool 😆 😆 😆

yea like i luv were the storys goin

gud job

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