Poor Manya ..- a new game - Page 2

srry i couldent stop myself 😆 i just luv ur new game 👏 but i dont want 2 write any story because u guys r doing an excellent job 👏 so i just wana read all of ur story 😆 pleaseee do continue 😉 i just luv it 😃 and srry 4 messing up the page with my comment but u can continue the story under my comment 😃 just wanted 2 tell u guys how much iam luving ur story,and wana know wat happens next 😆 😉 and srry again 😳 😳

she cries even more thinking tht she is breakin raj's heart and tears the card..it is very late in the nite so she goes 2 sleep..her dad appears in her dreams and he tells her 2 be strong and tell akash abt her love 4 him..the next day she wakes up ready to ask akash out..unfortunately she sees akash kiss rupa on the corridor..actually akash had seen her tearing the card and thought tht she doesnt love him nymore n went 2 rupa for advise..thats how they ended up makin out...manya is heartbroken

@ballball..its kay..bare bare forum me aisi chotti choti baat hoti rehti hai😉😉

Manya starts to get weak and dsnt really pay attention on her work but shes really crying so shes sitting in her room and keeps thinking about them kissing and so she takes a blade and writes A on the very top of her arm so no one can see. one day there changning she has her clothes on but shes just taking off her first shirt sanju sees it. sanju goes and tells om. om becomes a big mouth and tells akash. rakash doesnt believe but when he sees manya holding her hand over it the next day becuz its hurting, he believes them than.
its night time and every1 is outside sitting around a campfire. they all say lets sing a song. every1 forces manya to sing so she luks at akash who is luking right at her and so she starts to sing the song ishq na kerna and gets emotional and runs away. akash makes an excuse and runs after her he sees her sitting on the bench and go3s to her than suddenly hes talking to her and they hear a thunderstorm and manya hugs akash so tight. and its raining its a lovely scene both hugging eachother on rainy day. they both are so lost in love that they kiss. than manya runs away. the next day every1 is lined up and khanna sir says something to all of them and manya than says to khanna sir thats wrong and she corrects him and gives a big lecture on y dats wrong... every1 is suprised even khanna sir and he tells her he is proud of her. than the next day its valentine lolz akash gives manya a love card but he also gives rupa one and manya sees the same card that she has in rupas room and opens it and it says i luv u and always will when she opens her card it says happy valentines day

nice work guyz keep it up !!!!!!! continue da story its a real fun !!!! 😉 aakash n maanya rock!!!! 👏

Originally posted by: pinkss

nice work guyz keep it up !!!!!!! continue da story its a real fun !!!! 😉 aakash n maanya rock!!!! 👏

thnxxxxxx im really glad ppl r enjoying it but plz do continue the story to make it even interesting

lovely game!im continuing...

seeing the difference between the two cards, she feels bad and goes to sit in a secluded place. She begins to cry her heart out...but then controls herself. She asks herself:
...why would ne1 love me...i am not gud looking like rupa...and she is a much better police officer too...so why would akaash want to pay attention to me. Why would ne1 want to pay attention to me. And anyway i came here to become a strong cop and fulfil my parents' adhura sapna. I shud not let such petty issues interfere.
Saying that to herself she goes back to the academy.
She is walking and she sees akaash there. She smiles and walks toward him.

Maanya: Hi akaash. Kaise ho?
Akaash is a bit taken aback by this.

Akaash- Theek hun...tum?
Maanya- never better. Oh tumhaara card mujhe mila tha. Happy valentines day to you too!
Akaash: Maanya woh kal raat...
Maanya: ...ke baareme mai kuch baat nahi karna chahti. Jo bhi hua woh, ghalati thi. Lekin is baat ko humaare dosti ke beech hume laana chahiye. Tu mere bohut ache dost ho. Aur main tumhe gavaana nahi chahti.
Akaash: dost?
Maanya- Haan. Oh main to bhool hi gayee thi. Maine sab ke liye chocolates liye the.
She takes some heart candy out of her bag and gives some to akaash.
Maanya: Mere saare dost ke liye mera tohfa.

Akaash looks heartbroken and seems like he is going to cry.

Maanya: Tum aise kyun dekh rahe ho? Chocolate pasand nahi aaya?
A: Nahi nahi, tumne itne pyaar se diya hai to kyun bura lagega?
M- Acha tumne raj ko dekha hai kya- mujhe usse kuch kehna tha
A: pata nahi idhar hi hoga kahin...dhoondlo.
M: Acha...vaise have a nice day!
A- You too....byee.

Akaash is feeling really bad and maanya's dost dialogue still haunts him. He is walking down the hall when rupa comes and hugs him real tight.

R: Oh akaash I LOVE YOU TOOOO!!!!

Akaash is shocked at this. He then figures that he must have given the two girls the wrong card. The card that was supposed to go to rupa went to maanya and vice versa!!!!

Its night time an maanya is outside walking by herself.
Akaash is outside and he sees her. He runs from behind and closes her eyes.
Maanya is about to say akaash becuz she knows its him but says raj instead.
M: Raj, stop it kya kar rahe ho??
Akaash leths go of her and she turns around to see akaash.
M: Oh tum...
A: Haan mai. Tum idhar itne raat ko kya kar rahi ho?
M: Woh main...mujhe ghar ke yaad aa rahi thi to bas yahaan pe aagayi.

Akaash is about to reply when it starts raining again.
M: God yeh barish pata nahi kab ruke gi....teen din se rukruk ke ho rahi hai!

A: Tumhe isse problem kya hai? Let it rain!
M: Let it rain lekin mujhe bheegna nahi hai...mai andar jaa rahi hoon.
She is walking back toward the hostel when he holds her hand and pull her close to her.
M: Akaash chodo muhje....akaahs maine kaha chodo, dekho sardi hojayeegi andar chalte hain.

Akaash holds her even tighter and pulls her a little closer. She protests and he pulls her a bit closer.

i would do more but i gotta gp so continue plz!!!
Sorry for the insane length..i luv writing!!
Luv
sandu

meanwhile inside raj and rupa crash into eachother ...they say srry than raj turns arnd and asks rupa have u seen manya anywhere she says no and than rupa asks raj have u seen akash anywhere he replies no. than both start laughing and start to tlk..meanwhile outside

akash : manya mujhe patha hain tum mujh se kitna pyaar kartie ho
manya: akash main tumhse nahi pyaar kartie mera haath choro
akash: ishi liya tumne apni haath pain meray naam likha, apni diary main apnie dil ki baat ki or campfire per aisa gana gya ku manya is liya ke tumhe mujh se pyaar hain ya us raj ke liya
manya: ha main raj se pyar kertie hu
akash: manya aisay mut bolo tumhe patha hain kain tum usay pyaar nahi kerthi agar tum meri ny hosakti to uski bhi nahi
manya: akash tumhe ye haq bhi kisnay diya ke tum ye fasla kero ke main kisay pyaar keru tumhe to bolna bhi nahi chya ku ka tum mujh se pyaar kertay to chup chup kay rupa ka ashiq ny bantay
akash: main rupa se pyaar nahi kerta mujhe to uski shaqal se nefrat hain

just than manya leaves her hand and turns around and finds rupa and akash standing there. akash and manya luk at eachother scared . than raj walks upto them and says tumlogo na sy nahi kiya and rupa cums and says aray tum logo ko hum kitni der se dhund rehay thi tum logo ko to jana hi nahi chya tha .. acha ab under chalo bahir kitni barish ho rahie hain. akash and manya get reliefed
the next day outside in practice averyone is in a circle practicing when om says to manya ur so lucky ur getting 2 guys to flirt with just than every1 luks at manya and she goes staright upto om and slaps him 2 times and says dnt ever dare to even say a thing like dat again.
😆
rupa and manya sit together in canteine with raj .. rupa and raj keep tlking to eachother while manya is left alone ..
its night time and manya writes in her diary


ok guyz im really tired now lolz i think i wrote alot anywayz plz continue i luv the way u guyz are making the story