Poor Manya ..- a new game

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I feel really bad for manya since she is going to be used by akash .. so i thought lets make our own story for salam zindagi just add on to it to make a happy story make sure you add sum conflicts. I will start


Akash and Manya are working on their case. When rupa comes and akash starts talking to rupa. He doesnt concentrate on his work and manya is left to do all the work. This starts happening almost everytime they work😕. So then manya scolds akash and tells him she will be working on this case alone and she doesnt need his help. Manya stops talking to akash😭

--- Now u add on to this

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Akash goes and looks for Manya.He finds her in the beach, siting on a bench all alone.So he goes and sits beside her. He apolizes many times but Manya doesnt listen.She gets annoyed and tells him to leave.Before leaving Akash tells Manya he bought her something. He gives her the gift and leaves.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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she opens the gift and its a sorry card and a happy face and she smiles. so she thinks she shld go and tell him its ok and so she is going and she sees akash and rupa together thats becaus erupa falls and akash catches her but manya doesnt see her falling she only ses them together and cries
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Posted: 17 years ago
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She thinks that they both love each other!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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so she starts to run back but runs into something and akash
and rupa hear it so they look up to see a crying Manya. just when akash starts to talk manya , she runs away. everyone is looking for manya

(by the way nice game👏)
Edited by Abbu01 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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while everyone is looking for her
manya is sitting on the grounds remembering her time with akaash and getting mad at her self for being used. Suddenly someone hands her a Handkerchief. Manya looks up to see a handsome stranger standing.
Hi i am raj, and one thing i can't see is a pretty girl cry 😃 , manya takes the Handkerchief and says thankyou. Raj says beautiful girls don't have to say thankyou or sorry to me 😃. Manya smiles, raj tells her that he is a new transfer student and will be joining them in training starting tomorrow. Manya and raj are talking about the police camp and manya is telling him about officer khanna and her friends here. Akaash and roopa finds the 2 of them sitting and laughing.
Roopa: There you are manya akaash and i was so worried, and who is this?
Manya: Hey this is Raj, he is new here
Roopa: oh hi nice to meet you
Akaash: Manya don't you know how worried i was, i mean we were.
Manya: Well you don't need to worry about me
Raj: well it was nice to meet you 2, ahem Manya care to show me the rest of the camp 😊
Manya: Sure
they both left
Akaash and Roopa standing there, the rest of the gang gets there.
Gang: did you find manya?
Roopa: yes, and the reason why we couldn't find her was, she was busy with someone
Gang: what?
Roopa explains, Akaash get a bit moody and leaves.

next morning
everyone is lined up for practice, Officer khanna ask them to choose partners
Raj: Manya
both manya and akaash turn and look at Raj.
Raj: i hope you don't mind, you are the only friend i have here
Manya just smiles
Akaash is a bit pissed
When officer Khanna ask Akaash: Roopa
manya turns and looks at Akaash with a sad face, but quickly turns around.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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she doesnt want aakash 2 find out tht she is secretly in love with him..aakash thinks tht she is simply avoiding him so he starts flirting with rupa..manya gets even sadder and a lil jealous..on the other hand raj is fallin in love with manya..her simplicity, her freindly nature..everything about her is driving him crazy!

btw..cool game! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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than one day akash comes to talk to manya about whats hapening and manya scolds him and says y r u worrying about me just leave me alone and than akash asks manya if she would like to go for a walk she refuses. than raj cums in and asks manya if she would go with him outside and she agrees and leaves and akash gets upset. then when in their canteine manya sits with raj and no one else as soon as akah comes on her table she leaves. than akash needs to ask sanju something so the next day he walks in to their room but no one is there hes about to leave when he finds manyas personal diary. he startsb to open it and read it. he reads the first few pages which talk about how mean sanju and akash use to be to her and than as he reads it says how much she likes akash but bshe thinks he doesnt like her so shes going to stay away from him even though she will always love him. he hears someone coming so he hides behind the door thinking its officer khanna. but its manya she comes in and she cries and talks to herself and says that i know akash hates me but when ever he is in pain why do i care when i dnt love him anymore. he then quietly leaves.the next day manay is sitting alone on the bench and he goes to her and put his hand over her eyes and puts a love card on her lap and leaves before she knows. manya than luks around no 1 there so she opens the cars and theres a rose with a heart saying i love you. she thinks its raj
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Posted: 17 years ago
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srry i couldent stop myself 😆i just luv ur new game 👏 but i dont want 2 write any story because u guys r doing an excellent job 👏 so i just wana read all of ur story 😆 pleaseee do continue 😉 i just luv it 😃 and srry 4 messing up the page with my comment but u can continue the story under my comment 😃 just wanted 2 tell u guys how much iam luving ur story,and wana know wat happens next 😆 😉 and srry again 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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srry i couldent stop myself 😆 i just luv ur new game 👏 but i dont want 2 write any story because u guys r doing an excellent job 👏 so i just wana read all of ur story 😆 pleaseee do continue 😉 i just luv it 😃 and srry 4 messing up the page with my comment but u can continue the story under my comment 😃 just wanted 2 tell u guys how much iam luving ur story,and wana know wat happens next 😆 😉 and srry again 😳 😳

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