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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
Durin this fateful moment
Rupa regrets for all her foolishness
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Maanya gains consiousness
Wen she opens her eyes
she sees every1 bur Rupa
M: aakash, weres rupa?
A: Rest maanya, she'll cum
OM:ill go get her
he looks for her all over the acadamy
finally he searches for her at her room
wen he sees
Rupa cryin
OM: kya huva?
Om sits by her
and she hugs him
Om feels weird
OM:wat happened?
R: I no wat i did wrong
im really sry
do u think maanya n aakash will 4give me? 😭
OM: of course, dont u no maanya?
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the next day
Rupa doesnt show up for any classes
Maanya: weres rupa?
OM: i talked 2 her yesterday
Shes really regreting
Maanya goes 2 her room
wen she finds a note



Rupa:
Sorry Guyz, 😕
I cudnt help it. I cudnt see guilt in all ur eyes.

I no u guyz will alwayz hate.But just 2 le u no i got a
transfer to another acadamy.I love u all. Esp. Maanya
Maanya, Im sry 4 everthin. I don no wat happened 2 me. I no u wud have 4given me but i wudnt b able 2 live w/ that. Hopefully now u have a peaceful life! 😆

Love u lots, 😳
Rupa
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52

i think v sud start again from the begining 😛

wat say?

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53

heyy ppl... nobody continued this story for a long time, so i thought that i will do it... this part will be a bit long, and someone exciting will enter, so i hope u all will like it... plz continue after i write... i really love this game, and wud love and wish for it to go on for a lonnnggg time... thanks...

ok, now here's the story...

akash kisses manya's tears off her face. he then pulls away from manya, and looks into her eyes. they both suddenly feel a spark, and akash leans forward to kiss manya, but she turns her head, so akash ends up getting some of her hair.

manya pulls a little back, and looks at akash's face. she laughs seeing the cute not-fair-type of look on his face, then runs away. akash hurries up, closes the door of the room, then runs away after manya.

he looks around for her, and finally finds her hiding behind a tree. manya sees akash, and tries to run away, but akash is too quick for her, and catches her.

akash pulls manya against him, so she bangs against hard toned muscles of his chest. akash then again leans forward to kiss manya, but just as he is about to, he hears some come from behind.

peron: cough...cough...

akash and manya part and turn around. they see khanna sir.

akash: uh oh...

khanna sir: yeh kya ho raha hai?

akash: ky-kya matlab?

khanna sir: mera matlab hai ki tumhare aur manya ke beech kya ho raha hai? aajkal is academy mein ladkiyon aur ladkon ke beech kya chakkar-vakkar ho raha hai, yeh meri samajh mein nahin aa raha hai.

akash wispering to manya: yeh chakkar toh madkon aur ladkiyon ke beech mein hi hoga! na ki do ladkiyon ya do ladkon ke beech, varna sach much mein kuch galat hoga. 😆

khanna sir: yeh tum kya ghusar-phusar kar rahe ho?

manya: kuch nahin sir.

khanna sir: toh tum kya kar rahe the, mere aane se pehle?

akash: ji sir... hum toh kisi natak ki 😆 practice kar rahe the.

khanna sir: oh. kaisa natak?

akash: woh sir...

akash is stopped by telling khanna sir anything more, when someone calls khanna sir from behind telling him that the dean of the academy has called him for something urgent. khanna sir goes, and akash and manya breath a sigh of relief.

akash: haan?!! toh hum kahan the?

akash leans towards manya again and is about to kiss her, when suddenly he is interrupted by gopi from behind.

gopi: akash, manya!

akash wispering to manya: yeh dekho. doosra kabaab mein haddi aa gaya. koi humein akele kyun nahin chod sakta?

manya secretely laughs seeing akash's helpless state.

manya to gopi: kya hua?

gopi: tujhe pata hai? karan johar aur uski production team humari academ aa rahi hai.

akash and manya: kya??!! (both shocked and surprised)

gopi: haan. apparently, woh ek nayi film bana raha hai. yeh police academy mein set ki gayi ek love story hogi. is movie mein humari academy ke kuch cadets appearance bhi daalenge.

akash and manya: really!?? aur dean aur khanna sir ne unhe permission bhi de diya?

gopi: haan! kaise nahin dete? woh dono khud hi karan johar ke itne bade fans hain.

manya: accha. toh karan johar kab aa raha hai?

gopi: bas aata hi hoga...!!!

akash: kya? toh humein jaldi karna hoga. yahan baat karne ke liye kya baithe hai?

gopi: haan chalo, chalo...

gopi, akash and manya rush towards the entrance gate, just like everybody is doing. they are just in time to see a grand car coming through the entrance. the car is followed by a few more cars, and some make-up vans.

and, out from the first car... Out steps karan johar, wearing goggles, and wearing a white T-shirt with jeans, as everyone around gasps and screams, especially the girls, as they see the handsome man, and favourite director/producer/etc. KARAN JOHAR.....

Edited by iqbal_angad91 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
i hope u all like this part i wrote......, please also comment on it... thanks for reading.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
it was really good..please continue as quickly as you can cuz i wanna no what happens o and i sooo think that maanya and akash should be the lead roles in the love stories or someone else with either one of them so they get jealous and it makes it intresting
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: soccorgirl1015

it was really good..please continue as quickly as you can cuz i wanna no what happens o and i sooo think that maanya and akash should be the lead roles in the love stories or someone else with either one of them so they get jealous and it makes it intresting

i agree too... neha (iqbal_neha91) and moi are quite good friends (we have almost similar IDs...)... i will find out the story from her, and post the next few parts for her (since no1 else is doing it..... ) she is only allowed to log on IF on weekends, and since next week are the Chinese New Year Holidays in Singapore, she will not be able to log on until 2 weeks later...

BETTER STILL... i have an idea... why not i tell her to make this into a FF... me and her can have a joint Fan-Fic, she will write parts on weekends, and i can write parts on weekdays, since i logon to IF almost everyday... i will get permission from the author/originator of this topic first.......

Edited by iqbal_angad91 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
ooohhh... i asked permission from the person who started this topic, and i have gotten it to start this story as a ff...

mods? anyone? plz close this topic!!!??
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
close this topic i think =[

not many are intrested

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