Case Studies - RanYa SS - Updated Case 2, Part 3 - Page 2

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LOVE LOVE LOVE it !
really great start ..
I'm anxiously waiting to read the next part !!!
Hope you continue soon . really soon 😆😊

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wow that was amazing...loving this so far...please cont soon
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Wow...
It Was Wonderful...
Looking Forward For More!!!!
Thnx A Bunch...
Edited by sajdaluver - 13 years ago
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Case Two: Continued

A few days ago

"I'm Mahendra Pratap Singh," said the man in front of Aaliyah Hassan who was deeply annoyed at the damage he had caused to her new car. However, he appeared smug and rather relieved for a reason she did not know but she cared not for this random man who had no manners.

"Look here, Mister!" she started, pointing at him with her index finger. "You should really reconsider if that driver's license is right for you. I mean..."

"Yes, I apologize for that but I'm afraid I can't apologize for this..." he said, grimly pointing at her head earning a confused glance from her.

"This... what?" she said but then immediately her voice faltered and she fell to the ground clutching her head. The last words she remembered before she slipped into darkness were "Good work... Pat... bring... Julia..."

***

"I don't know where she is!" cried Ranveer, for the umpteenth time finally throwing his phone in anger not caring if it broke. "She never does this, Mallika. I tell you something is definitely-"

"Relax, Ranveer. Aaliyah called up last week that she won't be making it for a few days..." explained Mallika, eyeing the locket found at the crime scene. Something was definitely familiar about the locket and she was pretty sure she had seen it somewhere.

Ranveer couldn't believe what he was hearing. He had been so worried about her but she called up last week informing she wouldn't make it. And everyone knew apart from him... how?

"Mallika... why did-" Ranveer stopped midway through his question when the familiar pendant shone at him from Mallika's hands. It was dangerously familiar and he knew the odds of her surviving.

Having read his expressions, Mallika gasped in recognition at the pendant. This belong to no other than...

"Aaliyah?!"

***

"Aaliyah goddamn Hassan!" stalked Ranveer at the confused girl who sat on the bench with a straw hat on, slightly uncomfortable but aware of who the man was. She had been told that Special Agent Ranveer had recently developed feelings for the girl. Eyeing the worry, tiresome eyes she knew that the information was true.

He noticed her looking at him but something didn't feel right. Placing his hand on her shoulder, he didn't feel the spark that he would always feel with her. What had changed between them in the last two weeks, he thought glumly as she stood up and faced him.

"Ranveer," Julia acknowledged fidgeting slightly with the hem of her flowery dress. His gaze was making her uncomfortable but moreover the man's beauty was attracting. She found his eyes to be large and expressive like a window of his heart. Pure goodness reflected from him something she always desired to see in her own husband.

Sighing, he ran a hand through his fingers knowing she wasn't going to speak. Something was definitely wrong with her and he was going to get to the bottom of it.

"Where have you been?"

That one question spoken with such intensity made Julia forget everything she had rehearsed. How could his melodic voice hold such love for her where MP's voice always held a tone of harshness and discipline. No, she must not think like this...

"I've been... I went..." she stammered, looking around the park where it was eerie silent apart from a family chattering happily. What was she supposed to say? Family, no! Aaliyah's family had moved to some other city. Holiday? Aaliyah hadn't taken a proper holiday leave...

Feeling pressure on her cheeks, she gasped when she saw his face a few inches away from hers, eyes swimming with tears and fingers twitching on her cheek as if expecting something. She wondered if he could feel her heartbeat that had increased wildly since the moment he looked upon her.

"Please... Aaliyah, tell me..." he whispered leaning his forehead on hers and closing his eyes. Her introverted behavior was causing pain to his desperate heart and he wanted to know what had changed between them. Where was that spark?

"I... I've been sick!" she said lightly, her breath fanning on his face while he pulled her for more. Despite the change he had saw in her, he wanted her to know that he loved her and what better moment to confess now. The most important thing to him was that she had come back to him.

Relaxing into him, Julia's mind consistently reminded her the wedding vows she had took with MP and his yelling, commanding voice for her to stop or he would "punish" her. Feeling her heartbeat increase and her body burst with excitement, she realized she didn't care.

"I love... you," he said finally, sealing his lips with hers. In that one kiss, he laid his life at her hands waiting for her to respond by moving her lips. Finally, she reciprocated the kiss, her arms wrapping around his neck and pulling him closer for more. She had never felt something so intense for someone before and now she just wasn't sure of anything. Neither her love for MP or her commitment to the mission.

Breaking the kiss, he sighed slightly in disappointment because he wasn't feeling what he had meant to. It was not intense for him and it seemed like one of the high school kisses when he had thought he was in love. But the woman in front of him brought him back and filled his heart with love for her.

Pulling her into an embrace, he didn't care if he had lost all the sparks or her beautiful attitude because for him Aaliyah had just responded to his kiss. That was enough for him and he was willing to live like this forever.

Julia shut her eyes as she breathed the manliness of the man she had just kissed. She wondered how many more days she could stay like this with him before MP or Aaliyah would snatch everything. Looking up at his comforted yet slightly strained expression, she admitted to herself that she was indeed in love with him. Even if she had known him for a few minutes.

Wrapping her slender arms on his back, she confessed her love for him before sealing their lips with another kiss. It was bliss and pure heaven and she was willing to sacrifice anything for it.

***

"Goddamn! How could she do this to me?" yelled M.P, slamming his hand into the mirror. "Bitch!" he cursed profusely glaring at the identical picture that sat before him, weeping slightly with anger burning in her eyes.

"Because of you, I've lost Julia!" he yelled, pulling out his revolver and aiming at her paled face. "You had to be born with her face, didn't you, you hag?" He grinned as her eyes drooped and her head began to swoon. He watched her faint before his eyes and smiled as an idea struck his evil mind.

Pulling out his cell phone, he dialed the bitch's brother. His dog, Pat. "Arrange for a bed. I'm done waiting for your bitch of a sister because I will deal with her later. For now, I've got other plans..." he eyed the girl from head to toe. "...to satisfy my needs."

***
Edited by Joker - 13 years ago
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Fantastic Update [as usual] :)
Can't wait for the next part !

Edited by liza16 - 13 years ago
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Love it can't wait for the next part :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This Is What I Call 'Execellence Simplified"
Wonderful...
Cant Wait
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the comments! :D There is really nothing to say except that I wholeheartedly appreciate the gratitude shown by my readers.

Case Two: Part Three

"Ranveer, what else do you want?" cried his frustrated partner, Mallika. She simply couldn't believe that Ranveer was not satisfied even after Aaliyah and him uniting. Why did he keep brewing up hopeful thoughts that one day just one day...

Sighing, Ranveer threw the file in disappointment. "Having Aaliyah with me is good but... it just seems so different now... I mean-"

Mallika glared at him, repulsed. She couldn't believe that Ranveer, a man who was a hopeless romantic would not be satisfied by a confession she always dreamed about having with him. What else could he want? He had the perfect life he wanted and it was her who sat moping for him like a long lost puppy but yet she was satisfied to at least be near him.

Regaining his composure, anger struck him to the highest level. "She doesn't feel like Aaliyah! She's not my Aaliyah!" He sunk down into the couch, his head returning to his hands and his eyes closing in defeat.

And as he had anticipated, Mallika roared into laughter and fell beside him. Even though it sounded fake to his ears, he knew she still thought it was mildly funny.

"Seriously, Ranveer?" she asked, wiping the drool off the corner of her lip. "She's not YOUR Aaliyah? Well then she doesn't seem so true on this relationship-"

"Mallika..." he warned, glaring at her while she smiled dejectedly. "Look something is not right. Everything about her is just different. Her smell, her reaction, her behavior and even her... her hair!" He said in disgust wiping his mouth on his sleeve to demonstrate.

"That's because she cut her hair, Ranveer..." said Mallika, rolling her eyes. Men, she thought walking out the precinct to the Captain's office. It was best that he spent some time alone thinking about Aaliyah but she couldn't help as the small hope rose in her again. She turned around and smiled with sincerity at his sunk figure. No matter what, she would love him till the end.

***

In the darkness

"I just want to sleep. A coma would be nice. Or amnesia. Anything, just to get rid of this, these thoughts, whispers in my head. Did he rape my head, too?"

A troubled girl sat in the corner of the dungeon while an ominous shadow loomed overhead watching her weep.

And then a ray of light fell on her revealing the bruises on her slender body and she felt disgusted with herself. Just as the door slammed, Aaliyah knew she would never be the same person.

***

A few months later

"I'm quitting," whispered Aaliyah Hassan to the Chief who gasped in horror. He knew what happened but the girl who stood before him was no longer the one he cherished and joked around with. He watched the clothing hang out from her body while the permanent bags made her look ghostly and tortured. It was an agony to watch and he nodded in grief, sliding the resignation document towards her.

She managed a small, painful smile. "I'll remember you, Chief. Take care."

Sighing, he nodded and cowered his face away hiding his tears. In such small time, the family he had found at the precinct had broken apart. Again...

***

Aaliyah's Point of View

I felt as if I was safe. I no longer had anything to do with murderers, rapists, etc and I was safe. Just by signing that document had given me immense protection and that was enough for me to live through my now deep dark life.

Bumping into a hard chest, I didn't bother saying sorry and kept my head down walking from the person's side. I hope whoever it was would understand my introverted behavior and let it end there. But I guess I was wrong because that someone had just jumped in front of me blocking my way. Should I hyperventilate or should I look?

"Where are you going?" he asked me coolly, pulling me into an embrace. "I've just gotten you back... don't leave your rookie cop again." I wanted to smile at his kind gesture but I knew it was not enough to be bring me back. It would only weaken me... that's what emotions do.

"You'll live, tough cop," I said, keeping the act breathing his scent in. No wonder why Julia had fell in love with him... she even felt like falling in love with him but the mere thought scared her. She just wasn't good enough for him. For anyone...

Pulling away, he stroked my left cheek where a faint scar lay. "Look... we'll figure it out. Everything will be fine just... don't go." He grabbed my hands and placed them on his chest. On his heart. It was beating erratically and I wanted to believe him but he had not seen what the beast did to me.

And with fake harshness, I yanked them out of his grasp and moved past him. "It's over, Ranveer. Everything was over the day he took me... I just can't cope with this anymore. It's not in me... anymore!"

He punched the concrete wall before jumping in front of me. "You'll find it again, won't you? We'll find it again, Aaliyah! We'll find that... strength in you again! Don't let that SOB take your soul like this!"

"He already has," I replied, ominously watching his expressions flicker with confusion. Perhaps, if I told him he would think of me with disgust and maybe let me go. "He raped me! Is that enough for you to let me go now!?"

With tears pouring down my cheeks, I raced to my apartment and let everything fade. A monstrous sleep awaited me but it was better than the harsh reality of him not accepting me. And I let the nightmares conquer me once again...

***

And when a soft, warm embrace lulled me awake I felt like I was in heaven but everything came flooding back and I instinctively yelled shocking the man beside me. It was him. He was here and he was a nightmare which had come alive. Not again... not again.

"Stop, Aaliyah..." whispered Ranveer, his hands up in submission. "It's me... you are safe..."

Wiping the tears with anger, I glared at him. "Why do you keep coming back? Can't you see that I am not who you wanted me to!? Why won't you leave me alone!?"

He seemed hurt but he leaned towards me clutching my sweaty, scarred hand. And like that, he kissed it gingerly and pulled me towards him powerfully. And then it was a safe haven for me because the man I loved was kissing me. He had accepted me despite my flaws and... I knew I could trust him.

"I can't let you go because I love you," he said, huskily out of breath. "Always..." He kissed me lightly again on the lips waiting for a second before pulling a small shiny object from his back pocket. But I never felt him wear it on my ring finger until after the heated kiss.

"How does it feel to be a wife of a rookie cop?" he smirked, kissing my hand. I stared at the truth and love in his eyes but also fear at my reaction.

Grinning, I silenced him with a kiss and winked in amusement. "I get to call you that for life now, tough cop..."

Note: End! Case Three up next! And as for Julia... let's just say that is a mystery until next time. Take care! x By the way, quote is not mine! Solely goes to Laurie Halse Anderson! Amazing writer and this is from the book, Speak. Verrry sad book but also shows us the harsh reality of the dark sides of this world.
Edited by Joker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 👏 👏
Awesome update, so excited for Case 3 :)
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How do you make it to the top...Amazing...Wonderful...Every bit defined...When r u continuing?????????????I Just can't wait...

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