The Time I Loved You - Ch. 5 on Pg 10 - COMPLETE

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Awsme update
Loved it

Finally they sorted their differences
Both loved each other so much
Craved for each other
Bt now they will never leave each other

Excited for nxt

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RIDDSI

@RIDDSI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

wow.. awesome update

damn amazing update

sandhir never leave each other now

excited for last part

keep writing

update soon

RIDDHIMA

Edited by RIDDSI - 9 years ago

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

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+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

This story was supposed to end in the next chapter... but, I'm thinking of writing the love-making scene. If I do write it, it'll end in two more chapters (Chapter 6). Let me know if you have a preference - as in lovemaking scene, yes or no?

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Chandy

@-PurplePeach-

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Saffi 🤗

A tight hug for your Awesome Story!

Benevolent Parth, Transformed to good Mr.A, Nautanki Vidushi, Selfless Aryan <3

Nice Plot <3

I wish this to happen in the story.. But it won't! ;(

Lovely.. Update soon <3

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Wrackspurt

@Wrackspurt

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar
This story was supposed to end in the next chapter... but, I'm thinking of writing the love-making scene. If I do write it, it'll end in two more chapters (Chapter 6). Let me know if you have a preference - as in lovemaking scene, yes or no?

Yes yes yes

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Yashi

@.SaduFarzi.

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Oh how BEAUTIFUL was this!!!!
I swear if something like this happens in the show I'll start crying. Just to imagine Param-Harshita performing an intense scene gives me goosebumps!
You're too good, Saffi. The way you write Randhir-Sanyukta and their emotions, perfect. Gah, can't wait for the upcoming chapters.
Update soon :)

Love
- Yashi :)

P.S.- Also, I have this weird feeling that all this is a dream, like they are still on the bed, she on top of him and they are imagining all of this. Please prove me wrong *facepalm*

Edited by .SaduFarzi. - 9 years ago

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Ayushi

@loveparsh

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar
This story was supposed to end in the next chapter... but, I'm thinking of writing the love-making scene. If I do write it, it'll end in two more chapters (Chapter 6). Let me know if you have a preference - as in lovemaking scene, yes or no?

Wish ypur stories never ends😳

Love them

Would love to read 2 chapters instead of one😛

Update sooner

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Soniya

@TUKI.MICKY

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+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar
This story was supposed to end in the next chapter... but, I'm thinking of writing the love-making scene. If I do write it, it'll end in two more chapters (Chapter 6). Let me know if you have a preference - as in lovemaking scene, yes or no?

A BIG wala YES

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BornAries

@BornAries

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar
This story was supposed to end in the next chapter... but, I'm thinking of writing the love-making scene. If I do write it, it'll end in two more chapters (Chapter 6). Let me know if you have a preference - as in lovemaking scene, yes or no?

Yes