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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update dear...
To tu finally aa hi gayi Indiaforums pe 😉👏
Thanx for the PM😆
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pranotib

Awesome update dear...

To tu finally aa hi gayi Indiaforums pe😉👏
Thanx for the PM😆
Update soon
😉




Hehe thanx yaar 😉
Teri hi wajah se me aayi hun 👏
Tysm 😉
Ab apni story bhi update kar na 😭
I'm waiting 🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello people!!!
I'm up with 2nd part of my story😛
Hope you all like it...
No proof reading😉



Chapter 2: The CUTE MEETING😳


R:Par iska matlab ye nahi ki hum dusre options try nahi karenge
P:???
R:Haan mein yeh keh raha hun ki yeh wala option will be our last option.Hum baki options bhi try karenge.
P:Hmm chal thik hai.Par JDJ ke liye hum jald se jald jana hoga.
R:Par aaj nahi mujhe bahar nikal kar media ke saamne nahi aana hai.
P:Ok dude!! Hum 2 3 din baad jayenge.
R:Hmm

In these 2 3 days they tried many ways to manipulate the proof against Randhir but there was no use of it.
Ishika had planned it very well.There was'nt any loophole which can help him out of this case.
This meant they now have to go through the last option with them.

Parth and Randhir had come to register at the Jhalak Dikhla Jaa Office.
But only Parth went inside to ask first.

P:Excuse me??

Receptionist:Yes Sir how can I help you??

P:I want to register my friend in the list of participants who are going to perform for JDJ.

Re:Who is your friend??
P:Oh yaa just a sec.
Randhir...(he called out)

Randhir came inside.Before the Receptionist could ask him about the news Parth motioned her sternly not to do so.
Receptionist kept quite.

R:Yes I'm the one who wants to register.

Re:Sorry Sir but you are late...
There is no choreographer left for you to participate with...

PaRan:What?? How is it possible??
We just saw the advertisement 3 days back.

Re:Sir it was for the public to know that JDJ will be on air soon.

P:What??? But how's it possible??
You guys always have extra choreographers right??

Re:Yes Sir but all are booked Except for one...

R:Who??

Re:Sir there's one choreographer in the group.But she's totally mad.Not in actual sense but Sir she's very Weird and Strict regarding her dance routines and thus noone really pots her for them to participate with.One celebrity had risked to participate with her and After 1 week only he got a fracture on his both legs.Now if you want to participate with her then the choice is yours.

Randhir thought for some time.Even Parth was thinking that whether to selct her or not.

R:That decision we are to take.You just tell me her address.

Re:Sure Sir.Just a sec.

Receptionist gave them a card which had the details about the choreographer.

Randhir read the card
"Sanyukta Aggarwal"
"Age:24"
"BCom graduate from XYZ University"
Address:**********
Contact no:**********

Randhir sighed.
What does this girl have in her God only knows.😆


PaRan proceeded to meet this Dangerous Choreographer.
The address led to small chawl.

P:Randhir tu ye hat aur ye moustache laga le taaki koi tujhe pehchan na paaye.
Yahaan ke logon ne agar tujhe pehchan liya na to tu to gaya.
Tera keema bana denge yeh log.🤣

Randhir as said quickly wore the hat which was a big cowboy hat which almost covered the area till his eyes and he also wore a
moustache that to a big one which covered his most of the face.

P::Mein bhi yeh moustache pehen leta hun for safety measures.
R:Pagal hai kya tu kyun pehen raha hai??
P:To kya hua meine kaha na for safety purpose.😉
R:Whatever.

They proceeded towards her house after asking a lot about her.

They reached near a small house which almost looked like a 2BHK Flat.
It was 2 storeyed with 2 room downwards and a terace upwards.

They were about to ring the bell when they heard some voices from upstairs.
They decided to check.

There was a different way to go upstairs.
There were stairs that led to the room which was up.

Before they could knock they heard sounds of someone laughing.
A sweet voice was laughing like a maniac saying:
Yeee!!!!!yippeee!!!!! hara diya hara diya meine tujhe hara diya!!!!!

PaRan were shocked to hear this and they decided to peep in from the nearby window.

What they saw again shocked them.

A girl clad in a simple T shirt and patiala was dancing like a maniac throwing her hands in air and whistling in intervals.
Her waist length hair were dancing in air.
And they also saw a small boy who had a sullen face was looking as if he had been statued on the spot.

G:Kaha tha na bachhu mein hi jitungi.Isliye nahi ki mujhe acha dance aata hai.But isilye kyunki mujhe apne aap pe pura bharosa
tha ki mein hi jitungi.Kyun ki tere dimaag mein keede pad gaye the jo tu yeh soch raha tha ki tu famous ho gaya hai to tu kabhi
galat nahi ho sakta.
Wrong.Koi bhi insaan kitna bhi perfect kyun na ho ussme koi na koi fault to hoti hai.Aur uss fault ko pehchanna mujhe aata
hai.Samjha???
Ab kal se regular aana samjha???
Hmm??

The little boy nodded meekily.

Another boy:Are Sanyu didi ab aapne daant liya usko hum jayeen???(asked cutely)

The girl came towards that boy and said:OOKKK(she also replied cutely)

All the kids went away leaving the girl alone in the room.
It was not actually a room.It was a terrace which was given a shade of wooden plank.
The room was looking very beautiful with a big mirror in front of a wall.
The girls back was facing PaRan that's why they didn't see her face.

That's when Parth stumbled on something and the girl got aware and said:Kaun hai wahan???

And she turned.
Randhir was awestruck seeing the beauty in front of him.
She was looking very beautiful with her simple look.
Her almond shaped eyes were looking very innocent and beautiful.
Her nose was red because of her dancing.
Her lips were parted because she was panting a little.

Thats when someone clicked her fingers in front of him.
He saw the same girl staring at him with her left eyebrow raised.

G: Kya boss??? Kaun ho tum log aur yahaan kya kar rahe ho??

(Confused that how come that girl didn't identify Randhir???
Are yaar abhi tak woh hat aur moustache lagaya hua hai)

Thats' when PaRan entered forcefully pushing the girl in the process and quickly removed the hat and moustache.

The girl identified Randhir and squilled:Aeila Action Jackson???😲

PaRan:Action Jackson???😲😲

G:Haan yeh Action Jackson aur kaun(pointing towards Randhir)

P:Hai??? yeh kab hua???Acha woh sab chodo yeh Sanyukta Aggarwal ka hi ghar hai na??

G:Haan aur nahi to kya Katrina Kaif ka hai???
(yes the girl is our very own SANYUKTA)

Randhir smiled at this.So this is the very own "Dangerous Choreographer"!!😆😆
But speaking the truth she didn't looked like one.😃
She actually looked the cute girl with "I'm so cool" wala attitude.😉

R:Ok ok calm down Ms Aggarwal.

Sanyukta who was suspiciosly looking at them stumbled a bit at listening so polite tone from her Action Jackson.
(Why Action Jackson??? You'll come to know soon!!😛😛)

S:OMG Ms Aggarwal???? Aaj tak kisine mujhe aise address nahi kiya.Aur aapne kiya??
Wah wah thankyou thankyou!!(She did a adaab sign with her hands in front of her face)
Waise mein phir bhul gayi.Aap log yahan kya kar rahe ho??
Aur meri itni achi kismat ki mujhe aapke darshan hue(pointing towards Randhir)
Ek minute inko mein janti hun.Par aap kaun ho??(pointing towards Parth)

R:O Miss Pakpak KBC khel ke ho gaya???Ki aur kuch questions puchne hain??
Jabse bole hi jaa rahi ho bole hi jaa rahi ho.

S:Are to aap log bolo na yahaan kyun aaye ho??
Aapko mujhse kya kaam hai??

Parth was frustated with this constant blabbering of Sanyukta
and muttered to Randhir:Bol to aise rahi hai jaise ki hum iska autograph lene aaye hain.
Huh

S:Kya kaha??
P:Kuch nahi Maate(joining his hands in front of her)
Mein Parth Kashyap hun.Aapke Action Jackson ka aa i.. mean Randhir Singh Shekhawat ka best friend.
Aur kya aap wohi hai jo JDJ mein choreographer hain??

S:Haan aapko kaise pata???

P:Kyunki humein JDJ ke office se pata chala.
S:OOO

Randhir who was thirsty saw one bottle on the table and proceeded towards the table to take it.
But as he was about to walk he tripped and fell down badly.
But he didn't hit the ground.He was above something or rather someone.
When he got up a little he saw that he was lying over Sanyukta.

Actually when Sanyukta saw that Randhir was about to fall she quickly came to his rescue but dur to some water on the floor,
She herself fell down with Randhir over her.
There was a deep eyelock going on between Sandhir.😳😳
It was the first time for Sanyukta that she was lost in someone's eyes.His eyes were deep that were depicting some kind of pain and there was also some kind of rage in them.
She was confused as why such deadly combo that she saw in Randhir's eyes.😆😆😆
Whereas Randhir was also lost in her eyes.They were somewhat calm and were soothing his broken heart and mind.
They were innocent with an unknown charm which was atrracting him towards her.😳

Parth was looking at them with a surprised expression.He was feeling as if this girl will soothe his best friend's pain with her aura
and charm very easily.

After some time he fake coughed to bring these two souls out of there staring session.

Randhir was the first one to break the eyelock and quickly got up while Sanyukta was still admiring him.
Randhir saw that Sanyukta was still lying on the floor so he gave his hand to help her get up.
She innocently looked at his face and then at his hand and after few seconds took his hand and got up too.

As soon as she got up she knew the reason why Randhir tripped on the floor.


Because his shoelaces were tied with each other.🤣

(Actually one of the kids thought that PaRan are here to trouble Sanyukta so he had very quietly went down and tied there
shoelaces together so that as soon as they will go towards Sanyukta they will fall down flat on there face.This scene occured when Sanyukta had seen PaRan and was talking to them.The kid was too small that he got covered by Randhir's legs.He surely was a chota packet bada dhamaka.😆😆)

She started laughing thinking of the possibilty.
PaRan were confused.Why was she laughing like maniacs???

P:Have you gone mad??? I mean pagal ho gayi ho kya??(he thought she didn't knew english)
S:Apne pairon ki taraf dekhiye!! O I mean look at you legs!!!
(EEt(brick) ka jawab pathar se)

Parth looked at his shoes and frowned as he didn't find anything.
P:Dekho tum hasna band karo Samjhi(proceeding towards her to threaten her.)
But next moment he also fell on the floor.But unfortunately noone was there to save him.

Sanyukta bursted into laughter again clapping her hands seeing Parth lying on the floor flat on his face.
Randhir also chuckled but helped Parth to get up.

P(angry):Yeh kisne kiya???😡
Sanyukta told everything while laughing in between.

P:Uss bache ki toh!!😡
Kya hum gunde dikhte hai???

S:OH Hello agar kuch der pehle apne aapko dekhte na to tum bhi yahi sochte.😆
Acha woh sab to theek hai par mujhe kiske saath participate karna hoga.
I mean kaun hai woh daring jise mere saath dance karne ki himmat dikhayi hai???😉😉

R:Main!!😲😲

Precap:Some nokjhoks and 1st day with my Choreographer!!!😉😉

You know what you have to do😉😉
Likes and Comments plzz😉😉
Edited by natureloverr - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
soo awsm update...
SanDhir ki 1st meet...
aur woh bache kitne shaitan hain...
and amazing name 'Action Jackson'.. 👍🏼
update next part soonish...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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kya jhalak dikhayi tumne apni kalam se
ki hum haans-haans ke lot-pot ho gaye
😃
update ie really sooo funny mera tea-cup haath se girthe-girthe reh gaya yaar
update soon😊
naam to batao?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
agla update bhi long-dena ok
bye
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: bolston

kya jhalak dikhayi tumne apni kalam se

ki hum haans-haans ke lot-pot ho gaye
😃
update ie really sooo funny mera tea-cup haath se girthe-girthe reh gaya yaar
update soon😊
naam to batao?


Thanks😉😛😊
Glad you liked it😛😛
Sorry for the tea cup😛😛
Mera naam Praniti hai😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Twinkle_SR

soo awsm update...
SanDhir ki 1st meet...
aur woh bache kitne shaitan hain...
and amazing name 'Action Jackson'.. 👍🏼
update next part soonish...




Thank you so much dear😛
Yup Action Jackson ka bhi ek dum todu logic hai Sanyu ke paas😉😆
Will reveal soon😊😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: bolston

agla update bhi long-dena ok

bye


Sure😉
Byeee
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Awsme update
Loved it

Finally rd ready to take part in jdj
Everybody scared of choreographer bt our RSS ready to take the chance

First meeting me hi rd lost in sanyu beauty


Sanyu seems quite and simple
Fir vo dangerous wale rumors

Excited for next
Update soon

Keep smiling

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