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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello everyone...
I know i've my exams..
But kya karun thodi der ke liye aa gayi
So about your reviews..
Guys don't worry as meri story mein Sanyu jallad nahi hai😆
She's way too sweet..😊
Its just that usne purposely ye rumours fela rakhe hai about herself...
As the story will progress ...You'll come to know soon about it..
Till then keep liking my story👏
Keep smiling😃
God bless😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
all the best 4 ur exam...
update soonish...
eagerly waiting for it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Hello People!!!
Howz you??
Here is Chapter 1

Enjoy...



Chapter 1: The NEWS!!!



Mumbai,
RSS house,
10am
Randhir was sleeping peacefully on his bed after almost a month.
He had a breakup with his 1 year old girlfriend Ishika about a month ago and he was very stressed out thinking about it.

He had trully loved Ishika thinking that he has finally got a lifepartner after waiting for so long.
But his life was shatterred when he saw Ishika hugging and kissing some random guy.
He was feeling as if a sword was stabbed in his poor heart.
He had cried and cried but couldn't get over with it.😭

Parth his best buddy had supported him throught his life and now he was standing as a strong pillar for Randhir.
He knew about Ishika's real face but kept quite seeing how deeply Randhir trusted her.Randhir and Ishika were family friends and Randhir knew her since when he was 18.After being friends suddenly one day Ishika had proposed Randhir and Randhir couldn't deny her.
Parth was also there friend but he had always felt something fishy about her from the start.
He was the one who had informed Randhir about Ishika cheating on him with Parth's Business partner.

Randhir took almost a month to recover and came to the conclusion that he had never loved her and that it was just attraction.

Randhir's sleep got disturbed when he heard the doorbell ring.
He with a very slowpace got up.
His body was aching because he had done vigorous workout draining all his feelings along with his energy and because of excess crying also he had lost his energy.

Randhir went and opened the door to find his best buddy Parth huffing and puffing gasping for air.
It was as if was he came here running all the way to his house.
His house was a pent house with absolutely no servants.
Despite of being a Celebrity he preffered to do all the work by himself.


Randhir was shocked🥱 by seeing Parth like this and quickly let him in.

He handed him a glass of water and said:Ye le paani pee le.Achanak se tujhe kya hua Parth????
Itni kya jaldi thi ki tu phone pe nahi bata sakta tha aur direct yahan aa gaya.Aur tu kya kahin se marathon bhaag ke aa raha hai
kya??(he tried to crack a joke)

Parth who had now returned to normal pushed Randhir and said desperately finding the TV remote.

R:Abe kya dhund raha hai???Kuch batayega bhi???

Parth turned a deaf ear and continued to do his work,
Seeing this Randhir sighed angrily and pouted like a baby and said:Meri koi sunta hi kahan hai

Parth finally found the remote and quickly switched on the news channel on TV

P:Dude just see this.(pointing towards the TV)

Randhir who had his back facing towards the TV turned and was dumbstruck to see the news on the TV.

"BREAKING NEWS!!!!!!".

"The great RSS phasa controversy mein!!!!"
"Yakeen nahi hota ki The great RSS aisa kuch bhi kar sakte hain???"
"Aakhir Celebrity honeka proof de hi diya na???"

And what not.There were all the nonsense quotes that were being made on Randhir.
And the reason behind it???

Well the B*T*H Ishika was the reason behind it.

Reporter:Miss Ishika Khanna
Kya Aap humein bata sakti hain ki exactly kya hua hai aapke saath??

I(faking a cry)😭:Mujhe nahi pata tha ki Randhir mere saath aisa karega.
Mein kitna pyaar karti thi usse aur badle mein usne kya kiya??
Humare private moments ki pics Social networking site pe daal di.
Chii
Use jara si bhi sharam nahi aayi???
Usne yeh bhi nahi socha ki meri izzat ka kya hoga??

And then the channel flashed the 2 3 pics which had Randhir and Ishika sharing an intimate moment with each other.
It was clearly visible that the pic was edited.
But the pic almost showed that it was true.


Randhir who was numb till then was shaking in anger.
This girl had messed up with the wrong guy.
She needed to pay for this.

R(angry):That bloody Sl*t!!! How dare she to do something like this.
I swear to God Parth mein usse nahi chodunga.
Ek to mujhe dhoka diya.Ab mujhe hi fasane chali hai.
You just wait.

And with this he grabbed his phone and calles Ishika.
She picked the call in second ring.

R:Bloody B*T*H how dare you to do this to me???

I:Ahhh auu mmm.Umm itna chilla kyun rahe ho baby???News pasand nahi aayi???
(She was having sex with her current boyfriend)

Randhir felt disgusted to hear the sounds made by her🤢🤢.He was an idiot to love a girl like her.

R:Listen you...
Mein tumhe chodunga nahi.Tumhe nahi pata tumne kisse panga le liya hai.
You are so gone girl...

I:Aww Randhir baby.Mein to yahi chahti thi ki tum mujhe na chodo.Par tumne mujhe chod diya.Now enjoy the news.
This is the price you pay for leaving me.(evil laugh)

Randhir cutted the call and banged his fist on the nearby table.
He immediately called his lawyer cum gud friend Jiggy.

R:Mr Patel did you see the news??
J:Yes Sir.
R:I want everything to be cleared ASAP??? Did you get me??
J:Oh I'm really sorry Sir but I can't help you with this
R:What??? What the hell are you talking??

J:Look Randhir besides being a lawyer I'm also a friend of yours.
So personally speaking you should sort this out yourself.
Okay???

Randhir only hummed in response and cutted the call.
He was pissed off.

It was almost an hour and Randhir was trying to call different people to ask for help.
But as usual noone gave a shit about him and in return blamed him for the news being real.They just had got the chance to humiliate him as they were hell jeaulous of his success.

Randhir was busily roaming in the room with rage in his eyes.
R:How dare she????I'll kill her for ruining my reputation
Now noone is even ready to help me out of this.
Meri to kuch samjh mein nahi aa raha karun to karun kya??


Parth who was seated in the couch noticing every action just sighed.
P:Now whats the point in cursing her
Dude kuch to sochna padega
Isse pehle ki kuch aur nuksan kare woh dumbhead.

Randhir didn't listen to him and started puching his punching bag

That's when Parth noticed Jhalak Dikhla Jaa advertisement on the TV and an idea clicked in his mind and he smirked.

P:I've an Idea...(proudly)😃

Randhir didn't stop and kept punching the punching bag.🤢

P:Dude??? I said I've an idea!!!
R:Parth Don't mess with me right now!!!!
Mera mood bahut kharab hai tujhe pata hai na.

P:Are mein teri problem ka solution nikala hai yaar.Ek baar sun to le.
R:Ok finee
Jaldi bak

Parth made a face😆 and continued:Ok
To Idea yeh hai ki tu Jhalak Dikhla Jaa mein participate karega.As a contestant.

Randhir was bewildered by the so called suggestion given by his bff.

R:Parth like really??? Soch soch ke tune socha bhi kya??? Ye???

P:So what??? Isme kya burai hai???
R:Kya burai hai??? Like seriously tujhe short term memory loss hua hai kya???
Bhul gaya jab maine apni pehli film ki thi tab kya hua tha???



Flashback...

2 years ago...

Randhir was selected after a quick audition for the role of hero.
It was an action movie in which Randhir was not informed that he would have to dance on an item song with the heroine.

Randhir with his hardwork successfully completed 3/4 th of the movie and then came the part where he had to dance on the item
song.
It came as a heart attack to Randhir as he was informed about the same by the Director.

R:What???Mujhe dance karna padega???
D:Chill Randhir there's a Choreographer, he will teach you.
Don't worry.

Somehow Randhir agreed.😉

At the time of rehersal, the choreographer got pissed off with Randhir as he was not doing the step properly and his patience ended.

C:Director Sir I'm just done.
He's not getting a simple step.How will he complete the whole song??

R:Amm Sir but I'm trying my best.I am just not for dance i had already told you.
I'm really sorry about that.


And now just because of Randhir not able to cope up in doing the steps, The Director cancelled the item song from the movie.
Randhir felt guilty and decided that from now on he will only do Action movies as dancing is not his cup of tea.😆

Flashback ends...

P:Haan haan yaad hai.But dude everyone needs a change in his life.
And its not like you have any other option.
R:Matlab??😕
P:Are matlab yeh ki agar tu JDJ mein part lega to shayad apni sachaai sab ko bata sakta hai.
And by this you'll get fame back too.

R:Really??
P:Trust me on this yaar.Plz maan ja

Randhir was in deep thoughts...
What to do???
He wanted his fame back as he deserved it and he wanted to make his parents proud.
A lone tear escaped from his eye thinking that he had to take the risk.Otherwise his hardwork will go in vain and he didn't wanted
that to happen.


He quickly wiped that tear and with a determined look he said:Ok
I'm READY...

Precap:The TEASER😃


Until next time...
I know i had said that the teaser will be Chapter 1
But what to do i needed to show PaRan background
Pakka i'll post the teaser in the next part...
Do leave your review...
And silent readers plz comment on my story...
I badly need that😃
Keep smiling😃
God bless😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
nice chappy that too long wala
cherry on cake
keep writing😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Superb starting
Loved it

U write superb
Poor rd that ishika she's so cheap
Firstly she cheated rd now faking all this drama

Parth is a true friend


Excited for next
Update soon

Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
It was an amazing start to d story👏
Loved paran bonding😳
Very ll written 😃
Update soony🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
superb starting...
that ishika... 😡
rd in jhalak.. excited to read next part...
update soonish...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Superb start
Ishika such a cheap
Hope rd jaldi kuch action lega ishika ki kilaf
Eagarly waiting for sanyu entry nd teaser
Thanx for pm
Continue asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
awesome update
ishika such cheapo
update nxt part asap
n plzz nxt tym sandhir scenes
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
AMAZING CHAPTER😃
IT WAS TOO LONG😉
STORY IS GOING TO BE MORE INTERESTING😊

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