Sandhir ff : Khoobsurat(Dark) chp 9,10 and 11 UPDATED - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Hey.. read all the parts now..
I liked it a lot.
Update soon n plz pm me😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
KHOOBSURAT

Part 8

Sanyu n Parth left for meeting. In car there was complete silence.

Sanyu was looking outside n Parth was driving.

Finally Parth decided to break the silence n said

"Sanyu abhi bhi naraz ho kya??

S- its Sanyukta😡

P(clenching his jaws)- Sanyukta u knw na Hw much

I love u bt still u NVR care for me. Dkho wh hmra

investor h n moreover uski co ka bht nam h so yhi hmre lye beneficial tha.

S(sarcastically)- ya ryt Wse bhi Tm Jo decision lo

wh glt thodi ho skta.P- listen jitna pucha Jaye uska

ans dia kro Ye faltu bak 2 mat kra kro wrna I knw

Hw to shut ur mouth

S- ya whatever

Parth applied brakes n moves towards sanyu so close

that there lips were inches apart Sanyu lips were

trembling in fear. Parth closed his eyes n was about to

kiss her when suddenly his phn rang n

he moved away leaving relax sanyu

S(im)- thank god aaj is phn call ne bcha lia

P- ok ok no prb she is coming

Parth cut the call n said

"Mr Shekhwat wants to meet u "

S- mjhse kyu milna chate h wh

P- wh unhe engine ke design ke baare main kuch discuss krna n since Ye car ka idea tmhra h n Iss ki initial designing tmne ki th u hv to go.

I'll drop u there.

Soon they reached Shekhwat automobile co

Sanyu get down of the car n Parth left her.

After he was gone sanyu sighed of relief.

But the poor soul was unaware of the fact that what all destiny has stored for her.


Sanyu entered the office n was mesmerized

by seeing the interior of office. With the help

of receptionist she moved towards randhir's cabin

There was knock on the door bt rd was so engrossed

in work that he didn't pay attention towards prsn n

simply said come in Sanyu kept the file on table n

was about to sit when rd said

"Did I gv u permission to sit?? No na dn why d hell u r trying

to sit keep this file here n get lost Sanyu was shocked that

how rude he is behaving with her N was standstill in

same position. This irritated rd n he looked up n was

shocked to see sanyu

Rd- ohh I'm sooo Sry ms aggrwal I thought mri

pa so nywys plz have a seat na

S- its ok btw ek baat bolu only if u Dnt mind

Rd- go ahead

S- aapko apne employees se aise rudely baat nhi krni chaieThey r ur employees not servants

Rd- wse aap th aise bol rhi h ki jse aapne kbhi bhi

apne kisise employee ko hurt na kra ho n he smirked

Sanyu was numb after listening this, to divert her mind

she said ummm let's discuss the design

Rd- sure Rd n sanyu started discussing abt design of engine.

One hour past lyk dis bt jha hmre Sandhir ho Wha fight na

ho Aisa ho skta h kya ????😉

S- no no Mr Shekhwat hme yhi part niklna h engine

ki cost reduce krne ke lyeRd- its not possible hme

Yeh part nhi remove kr skte its important to increase

engine efficiency

S- no Ye cost badhyega n efficiency ke lye we will

manage something

Rd- Yeh part impt h that's it

S- its not impt

Rd- it is impt

S- no its not

Rd- it isAnd so on this continued for few more mins.

Rd- fy9 agr apko apni knowledge pr itna hi doubt h th main

wh doubt clear kr dta hu. Let's have competition

Jo jeeta uska suggestion consider kia jayega wats say?

Sanyu was thinking something. Before she could

speak further rd said

Rd- kya hua ms aggrwal aap competition se pahle hi dar gyi

S- no ways let's have the competition...

Leave ur comments

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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Update! Update!
its an awesome story!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Read all parts in one go...
Amazing work ...

Its looking damn interesting...
So im guessing that sanyu did something with him in the past...

Plz conti soonish...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Read it one go
It was awsme

I so loved it

Wtng for next
Update soon


Pm me next tym
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Hey, read all d parts in a go..! It seems like a brilliant story.!
😃
Great work.!:))
Plz update soon n on regular bases.!
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Hey...
Just read. Ur ff...
All the parts were amazing...
Very mysterious...
Update sooon n please pm me too..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Khoobsurat
Chp-9


Recap- competition b/w Sandhir.

So the competition was to fix the engine in 15 mins Both gave each other deadly glares as if they we will eat each other

S(im)- aaj th sanyu u hv to win wrna Ye randhir Pta nhi ktne taunt marega.

God plzzz save me n make me win plzzz.

Rd-so shall we start the competition

S- ya sure

Both of them started working in the workstation. For normal ppl it

seems they r working on machine bt actually there was a

competition gng b/w them. They were quickly fixing their

machine n due to this they were least interested which nut,bolt or

screwdriver was falling from table.They were almost done with their machines but suddenly they realized screwdriver was missing.

Both needed screwdriver n their gaze fell on the

screwdriver which was lying on the floor. Both ran lyk manic

to get that bt due to slippery floor sanyu lost her balance n fell on rd

and their lips met n sanyu eyes widened in shock. Both remain in this

position for few mins not bcoz they were enjoying it bt they were too shocked to react.Sanyu lifted her head up n their eyes met


Tum bhi ho wahi,

hum bhi h wahi baat phir ye kyu ab lagti h nayi

(Both are lost in each other eyes)

Kya hua galat ,aur kya sahi

dno sath h sach th h yhi

(Both remember their accidental kiss)

Yaadien bht si rh gyi peeche khin

ye pyar ab aage hme khiche khin,

ke dur tk bechen h saab rasstein,

iss haal main tu muskra mre waaste

(Both of them went down to their sweet memory lane)

Tum bhi ho wahi hum bhi h wahi

baat phir ye kyu ab lgati h nayi

Kya hua galat aur kya sahi,Dno sath h sach th h yhi...


Rd- miss aggrwal

S( lost in rd) - hmmm

Rd- aap agr 2ya 3 kilo km krlegi dn I wnt mind ki aap mjhe pr aise

gire bt 4 Nw mere lye ye 2 ,3 kilo bht heavy ho rha so aap plzz

Listening to this sanyu eyes popped out n she was back in real world.She immediately stood up n went to her table...

S(im)- ohh god ye mjhe kya hogya tha?? N why d hell

I was attracted towards him. Aur iski eyes ye hmesha mjhe

cl ki yaad kyu dilati h. aggg itna confusion kyu ???


Her trance was broken by the sound of engine

which rd fixed. She turned around n was shocked to

see the working engine n dt victorious smile plastered

on randhir face

S- ohh no

Rd- ohh yes

S- what??

Rd-acc to our bet I hv won so my suggestion

would be consider

S- ohhh dts Nt fair Main slip hogyi ti n Jo hua usse

I was shocked th th I jst needed some tym n Hw could u fix it

Rd- well everything is fair in love n war.

S- ya ryt bt its not love

Rd came close to sanyu n said in her ears

Ya ryt it was nt love bt it was war n winked at her n moves away n

wse girls ka concentration hta aise hi h

S( giving him angry looks)- ab Iss main girls kha se agayi

Rd smirked n said- girls th har jagha wrng tym n wrng place pe ati h

S(im)- bloody MCP aggg

Rd- kuch kha apne

S- ji nhi. Ok so I'll take ur leave as Jo prb ti engine ke

part ki wh solve ho gyi

N she dashed out of room

Rd(im)- tch tch poor sanyu Tmhe harne ki adat nhi h na bt Koi prb

nhi h main bht jld tmhe harne ki adat dalwa dunga n he smiled evilly.

Sanyu angrily dashed out of rd cabin. She was walking

furiously n cursing rd

S(im)- samjhta kya ye MCP apne aap ko itni bdi co

chla rha h pr manners Nam ki chiz h hi ni

She was walking so carelessly that she bumped

with peon n hot coffee fall on her hand.

She winched in pain

S- ahhh ohhh god itni garam coffee. Ye hot coffee thi

ya boiling coffee ahhh mumma its paining

Peon- Sry madam plzzz maaf kr dijiye wh

glti se ho gya

S- aap ki glti mri jaan le rhi plz arrange medical kit

Listening to noise rd came out of his cabin

Rd- oh god miss aggrwal aap Thk th

h na n u (pointing his index finger towards peon )Dhyan kha

rhta h tmhra ha Koi kam dhang se ni kr skte

S- its ok Mr Shekhwat unki glti nhi mne hi dhyan nhi dia

Rd- come with me n u (peon ) arrange some ice

Rd took sanyu too washroom n put her hand under

flowing tap

Rd(im)- Tmhe pass se aise tadpta dkhne ka maza hi

kuch aur ( ya u guessed it ryt it was all rd plan😉) His trance was broken by peon who bought bowl of ice

Peon- sir ye lijiye

Rd slowly took the ice n applied on sanyu hand

Rd(im)- mne sanyu ko dhuk main dkhne ke lye

ye sb KIA bt Nw why d hell I'm feeling pain in my heart

as if mjhe lagi ho thodi der pahle tk I was enjoying

bt ab kya hua ???Meanwhile sanyu was constantly

looking at rd

Mann yeh saahib ji, jaane hai sab ji

Phir bhi banaye bahaaneNaina nawaabi ji,

dekhe hain sab ji Phir bhi na samjhe ishaare

Mann yeh saahib ji haan karta bahaane Naina nawaabi ji na samjhe ishaare na samjhe ishaare)

Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere

Jiya ko dheere dheere bhaayo re Saibo

Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheereApna

sa dheere dheere lage re Saibo

Rd- u ok now

Sanyu jst nodded her head n left.

so how was it???

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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Khoobsurat
Chp-10

Recap-rd evil plan work out

Nxt

Both rd n sanyu went to their respective homes n

was thinking about the incidents that took

place whole day

Sanyu POV

God aisa bhi ki day hta h kya??? Itne sari chizein

ek din main hogya. Kitni ajib baat h na aaj ke din main

Jo bhi hua ussmain ek hi shaks common tha Mr Shekhwat.

Phir chare wh hmre new partner bnae ho ya Mre Savior n

dn she remember her kiss or accidental kiss n smiles

bt the very nxt moment she cursed herself for thinking about

the kiss.Wth hell sanyu tu aise kisi ke baare main

kse sch skti when u knw u love...(guess marlo whom she love)

In Shekhwat mansion

Rd was drinking wine n was engrossed in deep thoughts

Rd POV

Finally aaj maine Tmhe pass se tadpte hue dkha.

Jis din tmhri factory jlai ti USS din main tmhra ye dard

ye aansun sb miss KIA tha so action replay th bnta tha n he smirked.

Pr mjhe ek baat samjh nhi arahi ki Jb bhi main Tmhe hurt krta hua

Tmhe rulata hu th mere dil ke ek hisse (part) main dard kyu

hta h ???? Why??? He went to his cupboard n took

out an album.He opened the first page n it was written

'My Dream Girl' He smiled sadly n turned the nxt pg.

That pg contain the picture of his dream girl ,his love ,

his soul n unfortunately Nw his

.

.

.

.

.

Enemy

Ya it was Sanyukta aggrwal whose photo was pasted on the pg

Rd was constantly looking at sanyu pic n was crying.

Rd POV

Why Sanyukta??? Why ??Main th tmse pyar krta tha n

Tm bhi th mjhse pyar krti ti phir tmne wh sb kyu kia kyuuu ???

Maine Tm se pahle hi kha tha ki Tm mjhe accept nhi kr

paogyi phir kyu tmne mjhe jhooti tasali dilayi, kyu mjhe jeene

ki wajh di kyuu ?? Aur phir ek din kyu mjhse mre jeene ki

wajh chin li kyu kyuuu??? Maine kbhi tmse Koi complaint

nhi ki na Koi demand bt why did u hurt me why??? He shouted at top of his voice n threw album on floor.

Dn he searched for something lyk manic. He was checking all drawers n cupboard bt he couldn't find it.

Ramu kaka ramu kaka

Rd screamed n his voice echoed in the whole house

Ramu kaka entered his room n was hell scared

Ramu kaka(rk)- ji ji beta b b bu bulaya aapne he stammered

Rd- Maine kitni baat aap se kha h ki mri chizo ko n especially Iss kamre ho haat mat lagna kyu nhi mante aap

Rk- beta wh wh safai krni hti h th

Rd( controlling his anger)- safai my foot jayie aur wh lekr aao. I said go


After some tym ramu kaka came with bottle of kerosene n match box

Rk- beta ye lijye

Rd ordered rk to keep Ol d stuff on the table n asked him to leave.

When rk went rd poured kerosene on album n lit the matchstick n threw it.The album was burning into ashes n he was enjoying it.Bt there was someone who was Nt understanding this act. Ya it was ramu kaka.

He gathered all his courage n asked

rd beta Tm Roz Roz ye album kyu jalate ho???

Rd turned around n glared him

Rk understood that it was of no use to ask such ques to

him so he started to move out bt rd stopped him n

said Kaka janna nhi h ki main ye kyu krta hu

Rk turned n nodded his head

Main Roz ye album islye jlata hu ki Jb main in album

ke logo ko jinda jalu th mre haath na kape 😡

.Listening to rd ans rk was soo scared that he quickly went away.

Rd- Sanyukta Aggrwal Tm bhar se jitni Khoobsurat ho andar se utni hi badsoorat ho. Aur ye mjhse Acha Koi nhi jnta hoga.

Bht dard dia h tmne mjhe sanyu bt Dnt wry

tumhe mre har dard ka hisab Dena hoga bt Nw

Koi aur bhi h jise hisab kitab krna h n he smirked


He called someone n asked to book a hall for the partyy.After the call ended he made all necessary arrangement with his pa rajiv on Skype for making his party successful

Nxt day @ ak enterprise

Both sanyu n parth received invitation for party from Shekhwat's

Shekhwat mansion @8 clock

All the guests started arriving. Rd received all his guests bt he was impatiently waiting for someone.(kya soch rhe ho ki he is waiting for his dream girl??? Naaa he th waiting for bali ka bakra ie parth ;))

After some time rd wait was over as parth n sanyu entered to make his plan worked.

Sanyu was looking extremely beautiful in black color backless gown whereas parth was wearing 3 piece suit. Rd welcomed them n asked them yo enjoy part.

Rd- Ladies and gentlemen may I hv ur attention plz.

You all mst be thinking ki why u r here so there two reasons for this part.

First jabse main Iss city main aya hu tb se Bht km logo se mil paye hu so I thought ki sbko ek be jaan lu n moreover today is my bday so hv fun guys n enjoy d party. Everyone congratulated rd. The cake was cut bt entertainment was missing so rd called someone

Rd- u work starts Nw

so wat is rd upto????

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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Khoobsurat
Part 11

Recap- some mischievous plan of rd

All were enjoying party bt suddenly lights were gone n spotlight was on rd pa rajiv(ra)

Ra- hello frnds I'm rajiv rd sir ka pa. Main Bht der se

observe kr rha tha ki party Bht brng ho rhi h so I thought

ki Koi entertainment ho Jaye.Usually hm log girls ko ramp pr

walk krte dkhte h with shorts clothes n we all men enjoy dis

so why should boys hv all d fun ??? Ab girls ko enjoy krbe

DTE h Its simple Yha jitne bhi men h plxx come up on d

stage n show ur jalwa bt there is twist in the tale


Rd- Ksa twist rajiv

Ra- sir we will walk on ramp bt Nt in dis clothes bt u oll will be given dhoti to wear n to show off ur well built muscular body jse hmre god hte the half bared .

So common men women r waiting to see ur

chiseled body.All men wore dhotis gvn by rajiv.

(BG song- fashion ka jalwa)

One by one everyone men started walking on the ramp.

Nw it was parth 's turn to show off his muscular

well built body. He went to the edge of ramp n

was showing his body when suddenly his dhoti

opened n it fall down.😆 😆Everyone started to laugh by

seeing his pathetic condition.He was too shocked to react. The media prsn

were clicking his pictures. The sound of flash brought him

back n he realized that he was standing there as it is

gving media n everyone chance to make fun of him.

His eyes were welled up n he immediately ran

Nxt

Rd entered n started walking. He was looking lyk greak

god with his well tonned n chiseled body.Bt he finished

Ol this n went to parth. Bt parth already left d party due to so much embarrassment. Rd changed his clothes n called rajiv

Rd- what was that rajiv ha Jb ye sb dhoti n Ol LA rhe

the th ek be check kr LTE hi outfits sahi h ya nhi

bt Tm se ek km nhi hta😡

Ra- I'm Sry sir mne sb check KIA tha I Dnt knw ye sb kese hogya

Rd- I Dnt knw mne Tmhe apna pa bnaya hi kyu.Instead

mjhe th Tmhe apna partner bna chaie tha.

Partner in crime u see n he winked at rajiv😉

Both started laughing wickedly

Rd- well done rajiv it was superb Bht sahi KIA tmne

Flashback

Rd- rajiv Kl Tmhe party main sb men ko convince

krna h ki wh ramp walk kre with these dhoti n make sure ye

special dhoti Mr Parth kashyap ko mile

Ra-ok sir

Present

Well rajiv go n check food arrangements tb tk main party main jta hu

A/N- Guys plz Koi glti Hui ho th forgive me. Ye parth ki aisi insult ka bhi ek reason h. Sry agr kisiko bura lga ho

Sanyu was so shocked to register things so she

decided to leave the party as she knew parth need her at dis pt

of tym.

But rd didn't wanted to let her go. This was not out of

love n affection that he wanted Sanyukta to stay

with him bt it was a part of his plan. So as per the

plan sanyu was going out bt suddenly rd held her wrist n

dragged her to corner n pinned her to the wall

S- what the hell Mr Shekhwat leave my hand. I said leave.

Ye kya kr rhe h aap 😡

Rd- ssshhh Bht bolti h aap N main whi kr rha h

hu Jo ek Khoobsurat larki ko dkr krte h

Sanyu was dumbstruck by listening rd words.

S- w..www whhh...what do u mean???

Rd- I mean Koi bhi itni Khoobsurat larki ko party main

akela kse chod skta h , so I'm here to gv u co

S- listen Mr Shekhwat neither I'm interested in your co

nor I want it. So will u plz leave my hand n let

me go.

By this tym rd started laughing n sanyu gave

him confused look

Rd- chill ms aggrwal I was joking

S- ho gya na aapka joke Nw let me go she said angrily

Rd- not so soon ms aggrwal

S- Nw what u want

Rd- dance.. I wnt to dance with u. Look

Dnt take me wrng again Jo bhi parth ke sath hua

DT was really bad n media ne ye news capture

kr ki h so we have to gv Tm some new news so dat Kl ke ppr main parth ke wardrobe malfunction ki Koi news na aye so I

guess hmra ek hot sizzling dance parth ko bcha skta h...


So shall we Rd forwarded his hand towards sanyu

S- bt Hw can you be so sure ki hmre dance krne se

ye sb nhi ayega

Rd- ms aggrwal use ur good for nothing brain😆.

Look ye media wala ko gossip ke lye n pg3 ke lye ye hot news n

topic chaie hte h so Sanyu cut him in b/w n said

Fy9 let's do it for parth.

N ya one more thing good for nothing Mera brain nhi aapka

sense of humor n she smirked

S - shall we ??As instructed by rd rajiv announced their dance performance n Ol media prsn were ready to capture this dance. Rd n sanyu went to the stage n d music started


Kurbaan huaTeri tishnagi mein yun

Kurbaan huaTeri aashiqui mein yun

(Rd held sanyu close to him n dy started moving along with beats of music)

Ohohoh...

Bekhudi mein Bekali mein Bekafi mein hua

(He turns her around)

Tujhko har dua di

Aur daga bhiAur fanaa hua

Kurbaan hua

(He held her waist from back n pull her close to him)

Ada pe Wafa pe Jafa Pe

Kurbaan hua ...

(He purposely turned her around so many tym that her head started spinning)

Rubaru Tu MagarTanaha hai yeh jahan

Jal uthe Meri kuft seSaanson ka yeh saamaa O O

(Sanyy was feeling uncomfortable so she decided to

move bt rd held her tightly n continued dancing)

Kya hua pal mein jane kho gaya kyunTu mila

aur judaimaa hua yun

(Rd possessively held sanyu waist n

both of them lost in each other eyes)

Bekhudi meinBekali mein Bekafi mein hua

Tujhko har dua diAur daga bhi Aur fanaa hua Kurbaan hua Kurbaan hua

The song ended bt they were in same position until they heard everyone clapping for them

Sandhir dance was appreciated by everyone in d party.

Media prsn were gng crazy to hv jst one interview of Sandhir.

Ra to rd- sir media wle apka aur mam ek chota sa interview lna chate.

S- no Mr rajiv mjhe Koi interview nhi dna already

I'm getting very late n upr se ye log interview main

tym waste kregye..

Ra- bt mam

Rd- its ok rajiv ek kam kro ms aggrwal ko back

gate se exit kra do I'll handle them.

S- thanku so much Mr Shekhwat

Rd- d pleasure is all mine. Bye

As instructed by rd rajiv safely took sanyu through back door.

Rd(im)- finally party was successful bt ek kam th rhegya. He immediately called someone n said...Ab kam pura hua n he smirked devilishly.


The party was over n rd was sitting in his room n was

watching parth wardrobe malfunction video n was laughing lyk manic

Hahahahaha😃

Someone has rightly said that What goes around come around

n a lone tear escaped from his eyes.

He closed his eyed n all he could hear was laughing sound


(Most awaited Flashback starts)

Flashback

The party was gng in full swing everyone was enjoying it.

Afterall It was success party of Ak enterprise after

they got 3 big projects.

But Parth was restlessly waiting for someone.

He was constantly looking at d entrance.

Vidushi to Parth- sir aap shyd jiska wait kr

rhe h na wh already party main h.

Wh kaustu ke sath Parth looked at d direction where

kaustu was standing n smiled

P- ohhh Vidushi u r sooo innocent( parth pulled vidu cheeks)

Main sanyu ka nahi kisi aur ka wait kr rha hu.

Wh kya h na as u knw aaj hmre lye itna Bada din h

so I thought to call someone who could easily

entertain us as dis party is soo brng. His gaze shifted

towards enterance n said look

(pointing towards entrance) wh rha hmra entertainment n he smiled devilishly.

Vidushi eyes popped out seeing ...(keep guessing)

Prerecap- flashback continue

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