Sandhir ff : Khoobsurat(Dark) chp 9,10 and 11 UPDATED

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Khoobsurat(Dark)
Prolouge

Khoobsurat means something
beautiful bt does this word means
d same to every one.
Well d ans is no. In our society
a prsn is called khoobsurat or beautiful
if he or she is fair, have perfect body,
sharp skill, gud height etc etc.

But what if sum thing mentioned above
is missing in prsn ??

Well this d story of a prsn how he fought this ugly world with his khoobsurat heart.
INDEX
Part1- page 1
Part 2 n 3-page 2
Part 4 n 5-page 3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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waah bhai waah! aaj kal log forums join karte hi stories likhne start kar dete hai aur mujhse ek bhi nahi likhi jaati!!😭 prologue is awesome dear! do continue!! will b waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very very awesome fab lovely lovely
superb amazing fab interesting
love it. update asap.
and please pm me.😃
love-Anushka
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Khoobsurat
Part 1
A car stopped outside huge mansion n a very beautiful girl get down n go towards d mansion. She enters d mansion bt to her surprise its dark everywhere no one is present .she call out many names bt no one turned up. Then suddenly the mansion glittered with lights n every 1 shouted Happy bday sanyukta. She was so happy that no one forget her bday.
Kaustu,Sahil,vidushi,jiggy all came running n hugged her n started their never ending jokes n talk. But sanyu eyes were searching sum1
Vid- kisse dhund rhi h sanyu
Sanyu- kiski ko nhi
S(im)- kha rhegya Ye bday party organize krke khud gyb huh
K- sanyu jisse tu dhund rhi h there he is
Sanyu happiness had no bounds. She ran towards the prsn n hugged him tightly.
S- thank you so much Mr.Parth Khasyap 4 being in my lyf n also for dis surprise
P- anything 4 u babay
Prerecap- A prsn other side of city in a dark home seeing sanyu bday pics n saying enjoy ur last happy wala bday bcoz Kl se ur bad days r starting ms aggrwal.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that sound amazing. lovely first part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey interesting twists...
So is that person our very own rd??
Short and sweet update...
Well great story...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...amazing update and interesting concept
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you all for appreciating the ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
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KHOOBSURAT(Part 2)

The party was gng on full swing. Everyone was enjoying it
bt there was one prsn who very cleverly was taking pics of
sanyu n Ol her frnds.
After taking no of pics he walked out
of party area n dialed a no
Caller(c)- sir apka kam hogya h I'm
sending u pics
Person- good job Nw leave the area asap
C- ok sir

The prsn adjusted his phn with projector.

Nw each n every pic of bday party was being displayed.
He saw every pic n he stopped it at one pic ya u guess ryt it
was sanyu pic

.Person- Miss aggrwal enjoy ur last happy wla bday bcoz kal
se tmhre sath kuch Acha nhi hoga n he smirked evilly.
Soon d party was over n everyone left d mansion
.Sanyu n Parth
both were very tired so they went towards
their respective rooms.
Nxt day Sanyu was sleeping
peacefully bt suddenly her beauty sleep was
disturbed by a call
Prerecap- accident


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Khoobsurat

Part-3


Recap- sanyu bday party nd a mysterious prsn clicking their pics

n dn d phn call

Tring Tring Tring ... S(in sleepy voice)- hmm hello

Caller- is this Sanyukta aggrwal speaking

S- ya, C- mam actually I called you to inform that...

S- what ??? No no its not possible. R u sure ???

No dis cannot happen to me


Without listening further she cut the call

dashed out of room n settled herself in

car n went away


.After 2 hr drive she reached her destination.

She was totally shocked to see her factory,

her dream project was burning.


There was total destruction. In the meantime Parth also

came there n he was shocked too.


He couldn't believe his eyes that their new n

highly developed factory was burning into ashes.

He somehow managed to get over the shock n

looked 4 sanyu. Bt sanyu was nowhere to be seen.


He knew where she must have gone.Without wasting

any tym he sat in his car n drove back to mansion n

went towards sanyu room. He opened d door only to

find sanyu throwing all her belongings n she was

continuously blabbering

'San khtam ho gya sb khtam , kuch bhi nhi bcha its over ,

its all over n she kept on crying whole day.


While on other side a prsn poured drink in his glass

n said level 1 completed n smirked

.3 days passed Sanyu PA payal knocked her door


S- come in

P- mam wo...woo.

.S- ek aur financier ne back out kr lia na ???

P- yes mam

S(im)- god Ye kya hogya , kya mjhe mre project ke lye Koi bhi financier nhi milega

S- do one thing payal plz khin se bhi Koi financier arrange kro its very urgent wrna we r gone hope u understand

Prerecap- entry of our hero

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