Sandhir ff : Khoobsurat(Dark) chp 9,10 and 11 UPDATED - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Loved it yaar...cont soon plz :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
loved d ff cont. soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Hey.! Very nice concept of d story.!:)
But update on regular basis n give a little longer update please.
Eagerly waiting for d next part..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Heya !!!! it was an very interesting chappy 👏

very eager to read it , cont. soon... 👍🏼

& i want longer updates plz plz plz ☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
thank you so much guys n here im posting nxt parts😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
KHOOBSURAT

Part-4

Recap- Sanyukta new factory burned n Ol d financier back out of the project.

2 weeks passed

These 2 weeks were worst weeks of Sanyukta's lyf.

Her company AK enterprise(Aggrwal n Kashyap Enterprise)

which was joint venture was going into losses. Due to that factory

incident goodwill of their company wasconstantly depreciating.

There was no ray of hope.One fine day sanyu was sitting in her cabin n was engrossed in some work when suddenly payal came running to her cabin as if she has seen ghost.

P-mam wo mam

S- what happened payal ?? R u ok ??

P- mam financier mil gya n wh hmse aaj hi meeting

krna chata h (she said in one go)

S- what ?? Omg finallyYesss yesss Ktne bje ki meeting

n kha h ohh god presentation n most impt h kn wh????

P- mam relax n plz calm down maine meeting 7 bje ki

fix ki h in hotel Raddison Blue n hmre financier ka Nam h Mr shekhawat

S- kkk gud work payal Nw u may leave main presentation prepare krti hu

P- mam bt ek prob h

S- Nw wat prob ???

P- mam sir wants ki aap Indian attire main meeting attend kre

S- bt why Ye kya baat Hui

P- mam plz we need him so plz accept his condition

S- kkk u r ryt


Hotel Radison Blue 7pm


S-ohh god kha phas gyi main Ye Indian attire mjhe

handle nhi hta. Duppta Thk kri th Ye idiotic bangle

Iss duppte main phas jati h ufff... Sanyu was cribbing

lyk small child n heading towards table no 3 which was booked.

But due to this new attire which she was not able to handle she sliped

by mistake n dn...(kya socha har bar hero bchayega ???? Naaa)

Dhaaap



She fell on ground n everyone present there started laughing.

Sanyu was hell embarrassed where as someone was enjoying dis scene by drinking juice

S-ouchhh lgta h aaj mra din hi khrb h

Sanyu POV

I was sitting on ground n was hell embarrassed bt suddenly I heard someone calling my name.

So finally hero aagya

R- r u ok miss aggrwal???

how was it????

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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
KHOOBSURAT

Part 5

Recap- sanyu got financier for her project. Financier put forward condition for meeting. Sanyu fell on ground

Nxt

Rd POV

Waw Business women of the year Ms Sanyukta Aggrwal

is sitting in my feet tch tch not bad

Well aaj Tmhe Pta chala hoga ki itne logo ke beech

embarrass ho kr ksa feel hta n he smirked


Rd- Ms aggrwal r u ok?

Sanyukta lifted her head to see who was calling

her and d moment her eyed matched rd eyes

she got mesmerized by seeing Greek god

standing in front of her Sanyu was constantly

looking at rd as if she was hypnotize

Rd- miss aggrwal miss aggrwal

Sanyu finally came out of her trance and managed to standup

S- hi myself Sanyukta Aggrwal n app Mr ...

Rd - Mr. Randhir Singh Shekhwat ur new financier

S- ohhh ya I'm sooo Sry 4 d delay.

I think we should start the meeting

Rd - sure

Both of them settled themselves n started their

business talk After half hour their meeting

ended

Rd - well ms aggrwal I'm quite impressed by ur business proposal.

So I will fiance ur project n don't wry apki co ki

MKT value jitni bhi down Hui h wh Kl subha ki

newspaper headline dkh kr sahi hojayegi

S- aaa I didn't get aap khna kya chate h

Rd- khena th bhaut kuch chata hu bt

I mean Nw I'm gonna finance ur project so

S- ya I knw apki kafi achi reputation h mkt

main so it will benefit us ryt?

Rd- lgta h logo ki baatein beech main katne ki addat h apki

S(in Lil angry mode) wat???????

Rd- hy chill I'm jst joking lgta aap ko jokes nhi pasand

S- well Mr Shekhwat mjhe kam ke alawa aur kuch nhi pasand

Rd- nyc so apko Kl pprs mil Jaye gye as I hv to discuss

something with my lawyer. So it was nice actually very nyc meeting

He forwarded his hand for handshake

S- same here


As soon as she touched rd hand shiver ran down her spine.

Within nxt sec she jerks away her hand

S- bye Mr Shekhwat

Rd - bye unhe bolte h jinse hm kbhi na mile n abhi

abhi th hm mile h n im sure ki aage bhi milte rhegye.

Aur itni jldi main apka peecha th nahi chodne wla n he smirked evilly

Sanyu gave him confused look n went away

R u liking it guys????????????????

Edited by mahimanagar16 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
KHOOBSURAT

Part 6

Recap- encounter of rd n sanyu. silence

Nxt

Rd took out his phn n dialed no n said

Rd- hello kam hogya

P- yes sir

Rd- gud

He cut the call n smirked

Outside the hotel For d 5th tym Sanyukta tried to start

her car but all her efforts were in vain.

Being a mechanical engineer she was not being

able to findout the fault

S- aggg Ye start kyu nhi ho rhi

Suddenly rd car came there n he said

R- hy ms aggrwal it seems apki car khrab ho gyi.

Come I'll drop u home

S- no Mr Shekhwat its ok I'll manage

R- r u sure???

S- ya Mr Shekhwat I...


Suddenly sanyu gaze shifted to other side of road n her eyes

popped out n immediately she turned towards

rd n said

S- uummm gggoood good idea Mr Shekhwat

I'm coming with u n she quickly settled herself in car


Rd started his car n they left

After 2 mins of rd bursted out laughing.

S- kya hua Mr Shekhwat aaa aaap aise kyu has rhe ???

Rd- wh kya na miss aggrwal mjhse ek baat digest nhi ho rhi

S(hesitantly)- k..kkk kya

Rd- yhi ki Ak enterprise ki MD Sanyukta aggrwal dogs se darti h😆

Sanyu mouth was perfect o shaped 😲 as she nvr expected rd to find out the reason why she agreed for lift

Flashback


When sanyu was rejecting rd offer she saw

pack of dogs n her eyes popped out due to fear n

she thought

S(im) ohh goddd itne sare kutte agr mne MNA kr dia th

Ye th chla jayega n dn me n dogs. Nhiii

i hv to accept his offer

Present

S(hesitantly) - aapko kse Pta chla

Rd- rear view mirror nam ki koi chiz hti h n I'm born genius u see


Sanyu was hell embarrassed so she quickly told her address n finally they reached.

S- thank you Mr Shekhwat for d lift

Sanyu was getting down when suddenly rd screamed

ohh god Sanyukta wh dekho wha ktne dogs n due this

sanyu was hell scared so she quickly closed the door of

car n said kha kha dogs

Rd- haha haha look at ur self ktna dar gyi

S(in angry mood) kiski ki weakness ka mazak nhi udate Mr Shekhwat😡 bye

n she left

Rd clenched his jaws n said😡

Rd(im) look who's talking abt this the great Sanyukta aggrwal huh

jine dusro ki weakness ka fayda uthna bht achi tatah ata h.

He remembered something

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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
KHOOBSURAT

Part 7

Nxt day all legal work was done. Nw randhir was

officially announced as investor of Ak enterprise.

He was on official visit to Ak enterprise when he

heard someone talkingS- pahle hi prb kam ti kya

ki ab Iss engineer ko bhi Jana tha

P-relax Sanyukta I tried my best to convince

him bt wh kge rha ki ya th uski salary Jo loss ki

wajh se hm 2 months se nhi de paye h wh do plus

he want advance.

S- this is not done yr wh peechle 2 saal se kam kr rha tha

he should have known ki hm kbhi dues nhi rkhte

hmesha clear krte h

P- from the past two yr we haven't suffered any

loss n this was quite big loss. We have to arrange

someone asap.

All this while rd was listening their conversation n he smiled devilishly.

Rd(im)- tym to execute plan 3...

He entered sanyu's cabin Sanyukta was shocked plus

scared that if rd got to knw ki they Dnt hv engineer with

them he may also back out


S- Mr Shekhwat aap Yha

Rd- ha wh kisi official work se aya tha bt I'm Sry I overhead

ur convo with Mr ...

P- Parth ...Parth Kashyap

Rd-ohhh hello Mr kashyap

Wse Sry to interupt u guys bt as far as I knw aap dno

bhi mechanical engineer h dn aap itni tense kyu h

S- I agree to ur pt Mr Shekhwat bt engineer ke sath we

r owner of this co kbhi Koi meeting ya kbhi

Koi site dkhne Jana hta h so hmre pass tym nhi

rhta we can't manage it.Parth was constantly

thinking something n said

P- Mr Shekhwat as far as I knw u also have ur own automobile

co which has very gud credibility.

Rd- ya so

P-so I was thinking ki jis type ka engine wh bna rha

tha ur co is quite efficient in that so hm wh part

aapse manufacture krwa lte h what say Sanyukta??


S- excuse me Mr Shekhwat jst gv us two sec

Sanyu pull Parth to another corner of her cabin n said

S- r u out of ur senseses ?? Jis part ko Tm bnane ki baat kr rhe ho na wh bht impt part hmri new car we can't take risk n agr kisise ko

Pta chl gya ki hmri itni badi co ek part khud nhi bna

ski th bht prb ho jayegi plzzz baat ko samjho

P- ho gya tmhra ? Jst gv me one ans. Do u hv any

better alternative ??? Nhi h na so keep ur mouth shut.

I knw main kya kr rha hu ...


S- listen Parth main Iss co ki 60% share holder hu n

I will Nt gv my consent to this new proposal of yours.😡


Parth smirked n said

Tmhe kya lgta h Sanyukta u r in a position to say no to me ??

Nahh u can't say no to me u knw d consequences of your 'no'

Sanyu was numb n she said fy9 do whatever u wanna do.


They came back n said Mr Shekhwat we would lyk ki agr apki co hmri rk aur help kre

Rd(im) yhi th main chata tha ki u both dig ur graves yourself

Rd- well its nyc proposal bt I guess miss aggrwal has some sort

of prb with this proposal


Parth angrily glared sanyu as if he wants her to convince rd

S- no Mr Shekhwat Aisa nhi n wse bhi Parth Jo krta eh sahi hi

hta n I Dnt hv any prb n wse bhi er trust ur co n u

Rd(im)- Nw I'll teach both of you the meaning of trust

Rd- ab aapne itna trust ki th fy9 main lawyer se khe kr

contract ready krata hu

Sanyu n Parth - thank you Mr Shekhwat

P-sanyu Chlo hme meeting ke lye chlna h 😡(Parth said angrily)

As soon as rd heard sanyu from Parth mouth it pained in his heart n remembered something n closed his eye

Rd-ok I'll take ur leave

After rd went

Parth pinned sanyu to near by wall n said

P- Dnt u think ki aaj Kl Tm bht bolne lagi ho ??

Main tmhre baap ka naukr nhi jisse Tm apni 60% share

power dikha ke daro. I'm Parth kashyap He moved towards

her lips n said lgta h Tm past ki kuch baatein bhool gyi ho.

Mjhe unhe yaad dialane main zyda tym nhi lagega n he

smirked

All this while sanyu was listening all this lyk statue.

He then left her n was gng out bt suddenly turned

n said Main tmhra CL nhi hu Jo tmse darta ho n he dashed out of cabin

S- Tm CL ho bhi nhi skte Mr Parth kashyap n a lone tear fell from her eyes n she quickly wiped it off.

Prerecap- unwanted kiss b/w sanyu n Parth as they r going on meeting or sandhir kiss ????

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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Awesome updates.loved it.pls update soon

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