You Plus I Equals One - SanDhir TS (Based on Promo) - Part 2 Page 3 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW... i was sooo scared after the precap n the promo... but is two shot ne toh dil khush kar diya yaar.
loved it to the core..
u are brilliant. 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Read both the parts ...
Both of them were wonderful like all your works!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
both of parts are superb awesome lovely,fab,thanx for pm me.😳👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
OHHH MYYY GODDD !!!!!
that was the most sensual , passionate , emotional , sexiest thing i have ever read !!
it had all of it !!!
when you told me about it i was still in college.. then i decided to save it for my night read.. and it was the best decision i have ever made in my life .. LOL !
i had the perfect ambiance too read the story.. and with every sentence i was getting goosebumps..man i hate to reply so late .. but what can i do !
Okay coming to Part 1 :
OH my Randhirrr !!!!!!!!!!!
The way he barges into her house and crashes her engagement .. OMG !

he loves her sooo much !!
I simply got goosebumps when he said "She's mine." and without any hesitation.. he slid Sameer's ring off her finger.. he didn't care about who was around .. it was just him and her .. he just neglected the world around .. she was everything for him.. <33 😳
Sanyukta made a wise decision there .. she stood up to her family ..and chased of her dreams .. even if one of her dreams was Randhir himself !! That was amazing .. <333
and the way.. he pins her against the wall .. that is so hot ! and intense..
and then when she promises him... he slides his ring onto her finger.. oh my ! " Will you be mine forever ?" .. you are seriously killing me with this haan...
Sanyu better not break his heart again !!
and she doesn't ..
PART 2 😳😳
Best love making scene ever !!!
i have always told you this... you make it look so perfect ..making love is beautiful and your writing does that.. it is not cheap.. what you wrote was sexy and sensual and not vulgar at the same time !! which is what i love !!!
and their kisses are sooo hot .. and the neck kisses.. EEKKKSS <333
and the whole whipped cream sequence .. i was like Oh MY GOD !! that was hot haan ..
where did you get that idea from yaa... it was so so so so goood !
and Randhir is sooo cute yaaa !!!
You can make out he was so surprised seeing her wild side at the same time a little embarrassed that she turned him on already ..
i mean we are talking about MCP !! Randhir Singh Shekhawat !!!
and the love making seeing ...
you nailed it !!! It was perfect.. it was romantic .. full of emotions ..they just love each other so much !!
you have truly justified the title .. and my respect and love for you and increased my a very huge margin .. it was always very high ..
but it is the stuff you write .. it is really moving and inspiring .. thanks a lot yaa Saffi !!!
you are changing lives... i wish i could find love like this someday .. your stories give me hope ! it is true indeed ... "You plus I equals one" 😳
LOVE YOU... !!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Read dis on fb...
amazing...beautifully written...😊
sooo hot n romantic...☺️
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Oh my god Saffi.. This was awesome man!!

Today when i opened your message.. I got to know about this promo!! When i saw the promo i actually became sad..

But ur os is something.. I am smiling while writing this comment..
I hope something like this happens in SH! Sanyu should leave Chomu!

Ur language.. Haaye!!

Lots of love,
Samarpita!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
Safi you nailed it...nailed it again. It is so sensual, hot and sexy. Still not tacky, cheap or vulgar. It is amazing how you write this thing so effortlessly, sincerely and beautifully. Loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
I just read this TS
MUST SAY AMAZING ONE
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
oh my gosh Saffidi!!! ahhh! you're ... you're just tooo amazing! I am sorry about yesterday. I fell asleep while reading it, but that's because of the stupid sleep schedule and school... but I swear... this was sooo good. And don't worry, it was not vulgar! Haha but... IT MADE ME BLUSH LIKE☺️... I loved it... I sooo hope that this happens... but the stupid promo is making me feel extremely scared. I can't wait to watch it though. Love you! LOADS! Muah... sorry again for not giving my long review... but you know that I won't be able to because of my school... except on Fridays and Saturdays! Muahhh! Love you... LOVE this TS as well!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
I just luv u
ur one update makes my day😳
n gosh ur such an awesome writer dear
u explain their make out so perfectly
its hot but not vulgar
I just loved their cream romance☺️
loved it

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