SanDhir OS: Understanding The Need - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: anki08

My dear kiddo jane austen,, You literally hv far left behind the notion with age comes maturity...In ur case,,,it is just a matter of acquiring perfection..I hv becum a diehard admirer of urs,,like seriously tanya!!!!

You jst strike the right chord in ur evry wrk..I m dumbfounded by the sagacity of a 13 year old...
An absolutely stupendous nd worthy ending to the scene!!!!It solved the whole purpose of scene,,,at last,,their equation got altered...Indeed,,u r phenomenal kiddo... Chhote chhote bacche itne talent overloaded,,,hats off... No one cn guess tht its a wrk of a mere 13 year old,,you are pretty much brilliant thn tht...Wish u all the luck for ur future wrks too...

Oh gawdd.
Himani dii!!
You always give such beautiful comments re!!
Thenkoo soo muchh!
Really means a lot to me :*
Love u loads<33
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: winchesters

Tanya, u write so beautifully girl!

Yeah, i have not read any of ur one shots, but aftr readin this one, i am goin to read all!!
How badly i wish this would have happened!
Awesome OS!

Aaw. Thank you soo muchh Ifra di <33
I wish it'd have happened too but alas!
Nevermind xP Thank you for reading this though xD
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Reminescence

How I wish aisa hota!
You've written beautifully. Every action well described! :)
Nice work. :D

Thank you so much Rini!
means a lot :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Awww...they hugged🤗. So sweet. It was a wonderful OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
That was a really wonderful os! :)

Especially the hug! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
are you crazyyy???
Calling this amazing thing a crap!
it was AWESOMEEE!!!
felt like watching the epi again!
I wish this happened in the show but...
thanks for writing it
😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: TashaForever

Lolz re. My work is not crap? U pakkah not flattering na? *Glares suspiciously*
Sanyukta's self talk reminds me of my own slef talk xP
Ooh, Thank you soo much re.
For finding time to read this and commenting :D
Love you too <3
Tintin


Noji! not flattering!!
welcome re!!
btw you were flattered a month back duhling!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This wasn't crap, Hitler! In fact, you usually write Oneshots that satisfy all my of disappointed Sandhir feels :P
You practically take all the scenes that could be improved, twist them around and write your own version that usually leaves us Sandhirians so much more happy :D
This particular scene was extremely disappointing for me in the show. Sometimes, Randhir is SUCH a jerk that I can't help wanting to smack him or something. I wanted something more out of that one innocent act of Sanyukta's. The CVs didn't write it out the way I wanted, but you sure did. LOVE YOU FOR THAT! :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
Girl when you can write so well why copy paste the entire SH epi?
you could have done a better job than that.
and it was short too.
someones getting lazy I see 😆
But nevertheless it was a good read cause of that hug.
You have no idea how crazy I am about their hugs and them consoling each other.
tu do words mei they hug bhi likh degi toh I'll be done :P
All in all you portrayed the emotions behind their actions very well in your words. I loved the changed ending you gave.
Very nicely written.
Now will you stop calling yourself bad writer or do I need to remind you of who you are again? 🤣
Love,
ari :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aha, the punchbag simile was funny. "Fists smooching the punching bag!"

Aww poor neglected Randhir.

Lol, the classic angel devil!

Baap re, the window! Daring Sanyukta!

Aww, the hug <3 They are adorable and you wrote this beautifully!

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