SanDhir OS: Understanding The Need

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Prachi

@Prachijainn

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Achhha tha
Good os dear
Now update camp at goa fast

Edited by Prachijainn - 11 years ago

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shefali

@heartbeatz

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

If u call this crap then let me tell u i just love crap which is this good..keep up the good work😊

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Mariya

@mariya.kamran

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

That was beautiful. They don't want to acknowledge each other's existence yet they care so much for each other... arrgghh sucha confused yet intense couple

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Wow

This was heart touching

I just read it

Superb work

Totally loved it

Awesome job

Sandhir were so perfectly portrayed

I loved it totally

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Tisha

@BeyondWords

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

" You should apologize, but not now re" such a hilarious phrase, just by the use of 're'.

Sorry to be late, was busy sleeping!!

Crap? So true! Not your work, but you for calling this one!! Want to get whacked eh? This is so realistic. You know what miss Tanya? You are pretty good with words, the way you use certain phrases, I can't ROFL enough!! You made me chuckle during sanyukta's self talk, it reminded me of my self talk! Hilarious girl she is and you are good with the work with our Randhu baba drenched in sweat pain and remorse se!! What a perfect combo! I liked how you wrote it in Hindi (some parts) using appropriate proportions of the language and emotion! :")

Love

Iptisha

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Arushi Kotecha

@PrussianBlue

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Taneeeya! You're mad. Purely mad. Pura OS kal ke epi ka written version hi toh tha! xP

That conversation between the angel and the devil! Bwaahaha! And the hug! Haaaye! Thank you for this, Tanu! :D :*

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Gargi

@Gargi.swaron

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

First things first, u r in serious need of ameliorating ur dictionary...this is definitely not what sane people would define as crap.Perfect use of Hindi n English at correct places😊

Randhir's emotions were penned beautifully..A date with Punching bag???😆even Sanyu's lil chat wid her doppelganger was a treat to read,I was giggling all along🤣...thnx for d pm

-Gargi

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Tich

@Jin.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Pehle lagaa episode ka written update hai.. Then i read last two paras and thought, chalo tanz ne bachaa liya.. ending was really good..

ye toh weekend treat ho gaya

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Arohi

@.Peeves.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

It was so good .. The hug was well described :D

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Unknown

@AnatomyAddict

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Res... I am so damn late... stupid time differences

Unresed!

Naaaw! You dedicated it to me😳!!! Naaaw, the urge to give you a bear hug is uncontrollable at the moment 😆... Chalo, issi se hi kaam challa lo 🤗

When I was reading the first half of the OS, I could feel all of the episode flashing in front of my eyes! It's one thing to act it out, and another to write that exact scene with the same emotion! Bravo girly 👍🏼

ROFL! The devil vs angel talk! Hilarious!!! Don't we all do that, well I still do 😆

And then THAT hug!!!! Something we all wanted to see, yet we got that stupid cycle again 😉... Another hug for making it so believable and magical! Loved it!

Why couldn't the CVs be in sync with your thoughts hun! We could have had the most awesome-est weekend if that had happened... But Alas 😕

Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago