Longing to be with you. A SanDhir SS Part 3 updated Pg13 - Page 12

Yamsi I must thank you for directing me to your SS else I would have never found it and missed this amazing story Lucky for me I got to read all 3 parts in one go😆 I loved how you took elements from the show and made them into your own little story. The build up was amazing to the finale.

The tent scene and the laboaratory scene were my favourites ❤️ You showed so much developments in their characters while still retaining their core characteristics. You know the scene in the laboaratory when Randhir says he never wants to see her again. That is so typical impulsive Randhir 😆

And mostly you write so well honey! 🤗You MUST MUST continue so I can get my SanDhir fix when episodes are not so SanDhirlicious😆

Originally posted by: soumeesg

Perfect yams!!! Just perfect...though this ss ws short, it spoke of care, trust, friendship, heartbreak, anger, pain, anguish, happiness, reunion n finally...love...pure n unadulterated...loved it...if u write in the future, plz pm me ur works!! 😳

Originally posted by: forevermine

Yamz!!

i am finally here..!!! lol sry for nt commenting on part 2...although it was so brilliantly penned down..!!! i actually forgot my comment was pending in dat part..!!!

but coming directly to part 3..and the last part...u ended it so early babes i tot der would atleast be five more parts😆😆 this is the 1st time i am reading something written by u...bt gosh u completely ahmaze me..!!! u r an extremely talent person i guess..!! a baker "which i intended to come and taste someday as u refuse to fed me" 🤣 🤣 A mesmerizing siggie maker and now a writer..!!! gosh r one talented chica and i am nt lying...as for i hv no reason to lie!!
do u know i love this SS nw that its complete...everything fits..the bits and pieces finally come to the finale... the randhirs love... and sanyu guilt was so well portrayed that it makes me crave to see all this in the show..!!!

this SS was so well written...u did drag the story on and on just for the sake of it.. u ended it jzz when u felt was right..and all seemed so perfectly fiting..!!! i luved it...!!
the hwat makeout 🤣 gosh u made the temp rise!! lol!! well tot of..and the end was extremely well tot of..!!!

write more nahh pls!!

regards

safrena

Originally posted by: Heavens_Kiss

Yamsi I must thank you for directing me to your SS else I would have never found it and missed this amazing story Lucky for me I got to read all 3 parts in one go😆 I loved how you took elements from the show and made them into your own little story. The build up was amazing to the finale.

The tent scene and the laboaratory scene were my favourites ❤️ You showed so much developments in their characters while still retaining their core characteristics. You know the scene in the laboaratory when Randhir says he never wants to see her again. That is so typical impulsive Randhir 😆

And mostly you write so well honey! 🤗You MUST MUST continue so I can get my SanDhir fix when episodes are not so SanDhirlicious😆

Loved it totally Yamz..
Finally they reconcile, make love and live together forever.
I read it so many times again and again.
Stupendously fantabulous.
Waiting for you to start another one.

Originally posted by: TheDreamCatcher

Loved it totally Yamz..
Finally they reconcile, make love and live together forever.
I read it so many times again and again.
Stupendously fantabulous.
Waiting for you to start another one.