Longing to be with you. A SanDhir SS Part 3 updated Pg13 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Preethz..

Reserved. I just woke up. Lol. I will edit it in an hour or so. 😳


*unres*

Was that the end? :( Nooo! :( 😭. That last part was simply mind blowing! That SanDhir moment was just soo magical! I love your choice of words to express everything! The words are simple that I can just imagine everything!!

" But more than anything, it was their TRUE love that took over everything..They spent the most beautiful time together..and promised to be each other's strength ALWAYS! ❤️" - I LOVE THIS LINE! ❤️ This line is just apt for SanDhir! Even if I don't like this SS ending here, this line made up for that.

The whole SS was so magical and really well written Yamzy! I wish this SS had turned into a FF! 😳 But, anyways, here's hoping you write more!! Your work is SO good!! ❤️ Do tell me if you write anything! I am always excited for anything from you - your creations or your written work. 🤣

Thanks. 😃



Yeah i had to end it one day or the other 😆 Don't worry i'll definitely write more on SanDhir. This is not the last SS that i've written :P 🤣


Ah thank you so much Preetz! When a couple inspires me to write, words come naturally in my mind...😳 I can't wait till SH actually shows us some great SanDhir tracks..Hoping for the best ❤️


Awww i definitely will girl! Thank you for appreciating my creativity so much 😃 love you 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Preethz..

#edited on page 14 Yamzy! 😳 And I agree with Karinaa! You should write one on VirIka. 😳



Will do 😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
You ended this SS so soon 😭 😭 😭

Awesome update
Well written

SanDhir moments were so adorable
Finally they reunite and became one 😳 😳

am not talking to you Yamini ...
you didn't pm me 😒
Edited by Anysia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks Sonia 🤗 Sorry hon, i didn't PM anyone this time...ran out of time :(

@rinku...thanks a lot <3
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KiShaholic.

Thanks Sonia 🤗 Sorry hon, i didn't PM anyone this time...ran out of time :(

@rinku...thanks a lot <3



Its ohk :) 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Perfect yams!!! Just perfect...though this ss ws short, it spoke of care, trust, friendship, heartbreak, anger, pain, anguish, happiness, reunion n finally...love...pure n unadulterated...loved it...if u write in the future, plz pm me ur works!! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
You know, when you got to the part about the rain and love-making, Tum Hi Ho invariably started playing in my head :D
Great job! Amazing end!

Do write more :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read this right now 😳😳
I'm not a big fan of SH or SanDhir but yamzy, your SS is lovely!!!
I like it coz you were not stuck with 1 scene for a long time 👏😆
Lovely end 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow This Was Just An Amazing n Beautiful SS Yamz
Loved this part so much...Everything Was Perfect...

Please Do Write More...Would Definitely love to Read More From u
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yamz!!
i am finally here..!!! lol sry for nt commenting on part 2...although it was so brilliantly penned down..!!! i actually forgot my comment was pending in dat part..!!!

but coming directly to part 3..and the last part...u ended it so early babes i tot der would atleast be five more parts😆😆 this is the 1st time i am reading something written by u...bt gosh u completely ahmaze me..!!! u r an extremely talent person i guess..!! a baker "which i intended to come and taste someday as u refuse to fed me" 🤣 🤣 A mesmerizing siggie maker and now a writer..!!! gosh r one talented chica and i am nt lying...as for i hv no reason to lie!!
do u know i love this SS nw that its complete...everything fits..the bits and pieces finally come to the finale... the randhirs love... and sanyu guilt was so well portrayed that it makes me crave to see all this in the show..!!!

this SS was so well written...u did drag the story on and on just for the sake of it.. u ended it jzz when u felt was right..and all seemed so perfectly fiting..!!! i luved it...!!
the hwat makeout 🤣 gosh u made the temp rise!! lol!! well tot of..and the end was extremely well tot of..!!!
write more nahh pls!!

regards
safrena

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