Longing to be with you. A SanDhir SS Part 3 updated Pg13

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relentless.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

thank you sisss :* 🤗

Kaustuki bit i had to keep it natural 🤣 🤣 i was imagining, if it was real..kaustuki would be genuinely happy for sanyukta 😳 😳

SOO GLAD you liked it...love making scene i had to keep it short and you know exactly why 🤣 🤣

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relentless.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

oh and i always imagine SanDhir too

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Areeba

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

OH MY GOD!! i never thought u can write such romantic stuff 😉 Beautifully written,Perfect ending 👏

bundles of appreciations from my side :)

Keep writing! 👍🏼

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Surbhi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

awww yaar

yamsss tunee toh rola hi diyaaa mujhe !!

ufff <3 kasam se yaar :D :D

this was suchhh a sweeettt n hottt update ;) heheheh <3 ufff :D :D thanksss for this SS :D :D:

cant believe its over already :(( write more okk !! :D

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yatup

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Posted: 11 years ago

#95

WOW. I have no words. Such a good ending

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relentless.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

thank you Areeba, Surbhi and nampi awww u guys 🤗 i'll promise i'll write moreee 😳

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starsshinex

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Reserved. I just woke up. Lol. I will edit it in an hour or so. 😳

*unres*

Was that the end? :( Nooo! :( 😭. That last part was simply mind blowing! That SanDhir moment was just soo magical! I love your choice of words to express everything! The words are simple that I can just imagine everything!!

" But more than anything, it was their TRUE love that took over everything..They spent the most beautiful time together..and promised to be each other's strength ALWAYS! ❤️" - I LOVE THIS LINE! ❤️ This line is just apt for SanDhir! Even if I don't like this SS ending here, this line made up for that.

The whole SS was so magical and really well written Yamzy! I wish this SS had turned into a FF! 😳 But, anyways, here's hoping you write more!! Your work is SO good!! ❤️ Do tell me if you write anything! I am always excited for anything from you - your creations or your written work. 🤣

Thanks. 😃

Edited by ..Preethz.. - 11 years ago

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Kays94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

omg Di your such a good writer ❤️

I really really enjoyed this!!!!!

I hope you write more and maybe on Virika even 😛

Loved it!!!!!!

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relentless.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Omggg Karinaa! you actually read this one? :O but you dont know SanDhir na 😳 thanks a ton girl...you're a true friend to me ❤️ i love youuu! shall do someday 😃