MyCreation:Funny story on AMBO-UPDATED LAST PART

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Alja

@Ambofan

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Haye Allah, yeh Bebo to kuch ziada hi taporan type hai, peechay hi par gai Amrit k...

But all this seems interesting and so different from the usual...

Dekho oont kab pahar k neechay aata hai... 😆

Well Done yar for the wonderful story !!!

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Shruti

@Princyz_Belle

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Sorry friends 4 not updating 4 2 days.I was so busy that i could not give updates.Once again really sorry.But now i'm back .Here is my part 5.Hope u all will like it.

(PART-5)

AMRIT SEES BEBO IN THE WINDOW AND COMES OUT-

BEBO:Hi,Amrit sweetheart.How r u?Don't u liked my letter .Oh1 sorry love letter.

AMRIT:What's the problem with u?R u mad?Why r u doing this kind of things?How many times i've told u 2 not call me in that words.But why don't u listen 2 me.get out of my life.Go.

BEBO:Seems like that u don't liked my love letter.Ok,i'm going ,dear.Cool down.Bye,See u soon.

AMRIT:What kind of girl is this!!!

NEXT DAY BEBO DECIDES THAT SHE WILL TELL AMRIT THAT SHE LOVES HIM IN FRONT OF EVERYONE

BEBO:Look,Ritu.I've brought my makeup box 2day.

RITU:What!!!!But why?

BEBO:I've decided that i'll tell Amrit that i love hm in front of everyone.

LISA:Oh!! That's why u've brought ur makeup box.We will help u in ur make up.

BEBO:Let's go.

AFTER THIS LISA AND RITU MAKE UP BEBO>BEBO ASKED THEM ABOUT HERSELF-

BEBO:How i'm looking?

RITU:As always awesome.

LISA:I think Amrit will faint when he'll see Bebo.

IN THE LUNCH BREAK BEBO SEES THAT AMRIT IS SITTING WITH HIS FRIENDS.THERE WERE MANY PEOPLE AROUND.BEBO DECIDES THIS IS THE R8 TIME 4 TELL AMRIT-

BEBO:Hi,Amrit.

AMRIT:Oh!!Hello.I think u've mend ur ways.That's why u r talking so gently.

BEBO:I want 2 tell u something.

AMRIT:Now don't tell me that u want 2 apologies becoz i've forgiven u.

BEBO:I want 2 tell something else.

AMRIT:GO ahead.

BEBO:Amrit,I....I LOVE U.

AMRIT(SHOCKINGLY):What!!!!!!!U've started again?

SUDDENLY AMRIT HOLDS BEBO'S HAND AND TOOK HER AWAY-

AMRIT:Please Bebo,I'm pleading in front of u.Please leave me alone.U've told this in front of everyone.U don't know how insulted i m.I think u don't love me.U r just making fun of me.

BEBO:Amrit!Don't say like this.I love u more than my life.

AMRIT:I don't see any proof.Just go away.

AMRIT LEAVES.BEBO DECIDES 2 DO SOMETHING HORRIBLE.

(2 b continued)

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Alja

@Ambofan

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

😆😆😆 That is really funny..

I'm trying to imagine Bebo shouting out " AMRIT I LOVE YOU"...

Drama mein to ek baar dheere se bhi nahi kaha...

However the fifth part was great as usual and thank god chahe thori hi der k liye Amrit polite to hua... 😊

And now I guess the horrible part is going to be a try for a suicide so that Bebo can prove her love to Amrit... however lets c what u have got in store for us... 😉

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

OMG thanks for another amazing part
OMG ye bebo to kuch zeyadah hi hai, haila ye larki ne sabke saamne amrit ko ILV keh dia 😍
uffff ye amrit bhi na, i wonder what she will do to make amrit believe that she really loves him. eagerly waiting for the next part

Edited by juhuti - 14 years ago

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Tanzeela

@ganga16tr

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

wooow! nice scene.. i gotta geta move on.. warna your gonna be producing better scenes then me! haha! just joking... well done, and keep going!

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Shruti

@Princyz_Belle

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Hey friends,how r u all?I'm very happy 2day bcoz my exam ended 2day.And i'm full free from 2day.Don't forget 2 tell me how much u missed me or u haven't missed me?I missed u all soooooo much.O.k come 2 the topic i'm continuing my story 2day.Here is my part 6.Hope u'll like it.

(PART-6)

The next day Bebo comes 2 the college and everyone is shocked.They all r watching her hand.She wrote Amrit in her hand by burning.The news reaches 2 Amrit.He is shocked and he runs 2 her immediately. He holds her hand and saw her hand is burnt horribly.

AMRIT:Oh god! What u have done.What kind of madness is this Bebo?It is paining very much right?

BEBO:No,Amrit.U touched it now it's good.U wanted proof right?Here is ur proof.But i'm so happy that u r so worried about me.

AMRIT:No it's nothing like that.I don't care what u r doing.

Amrit leaves.Bebo is smiling behind.Bebo goes 2 the class and Moonmoon sees her hand.She goes and tell that 2 her friends.

MOONMOON:Hey,girls.I just saw something interesting.

SWEETY:What happened?

MOONMOON:U know what has Bebo done?

PIYA:Now what has she done?She always do something mess.Always after the boys.Tell now.

MOONMOON:She has written a boy's name in her hand by burning.

SNEHA:What?Who is that boy?

MOONMOON:There is a boy called Amrit in the 3rd year.He doesn't like her.But she is mad 4 him.

SHRUTI:Now that is too much.I have 2 talk with her.She has 2 stop it.

Shruti goes and asks bebo what's she has done.

SHRUTI:Bebo,What's wrong with u?Why r u doing such things?

BEBO:Nothing is wrong with me.I'm just proving my love 4 him.

SHRUTI:Proof?What kind of proof is this?U r hurting urself 4 him who dosen't love u.

BEBO:I know he loves me.He is just not telling me.I will make him 2 tell that.

PIYA:U always make problems.Now stop this,ok.

BEBO:I can't stop it.Now he has became my life.

Everybody is shocked.bebo is smiling.Raju & Sonu hears this from outside.

(2 b continued)

Edited by princessdoll - 14 years ago

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Alja

@Ambofan

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Yeh hui na baat...

Bari cheeti nikli Bebo to , haath burn kr lia Amrit k waastey...

Now I think Bebo is sooo right, Amrit will eventually fall in love with her.

Haye tapori love blossoming btw AmBo, tab bara maza aye ga... 😃

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Shruti

@Princyz_Belle

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Hello,friendz.Now i'm back in writing my funny story on AmBo.I know i hadn't updated it 4 so many days.But 2day bcoz of Mrevasara's request i thought i should continue it.So,from 2day 1 day i'll update this story n next day i'll update my new story.What's say?So,here is my part-7........................

(Part-7)

Raju n Sonu hears Bebo's words n tells Amrit.

Raju:,yaar,Amrit.This is a big problem now.What u'll do now?

Sonu:Of course Amrit will now go n tell Bebo that he also loves her n he was doing fun that days.

Amrit(Angrily):Just shut up.What do u mean by that?I'll never do such things.What she think abt herself?

Sonu:That she is the most beautiful girl in the collage.And u love her.

Amrit looks angrily at Sonu.

Raju:Stop ur mouth Sonu.Don't u see that Amrit is disturbed?

Sonu:Sorry,Amrit.But i was just giving u some solution.

Amrit:U don't have 2 give any solution.I've thought abt it.From now i'll completely ignore her.And no one will go 2 her or talk 2 her.

Sonu:Ok,But Amrit u r the one who talks with her.She doesn't even look at us.If she does so it was a completely different matter.

Raju:Sonu.....Ok,Amrit.we'll do as what u say.

After some time Bebo comes out of class n sees that Amrit is sitting in cafe all alone.She goes 2 him.

Bebo:Hi,Amrit.

Amrit says nothing.Bebo again tries 2 talk 2 him.

Bebo:Amrit,can i sit here with u?

Again Amrit is silent.Bebo sits bside him.Amrit looks at her.

Amrit:xcuse me,i haven't agreed 4 ur sit.

Bebo:oh,i'm sorry.

Bebo immediately gets up.Amrit sees that.

Amrit:Hmm.

Bebo again sits in her chair.Amrit gets shocked.

Amrit:Again u took sit?I haven't told u.

Bebo:What?Now u told "Hmm".So what was that?

Amrit:Oh,That!!!!! i told that's good that got up from here.

Bebo:Hey,Mr?"Hmm" means "yes".Don't get too smart with me.i know that very well that u want me to sit bside u but u r just making fun of that.

Amrit:What?OMG!! I didn't knew that u have a problem of day dreaming.

Bebo:It's not a day dreaming. ok?U....

Bebo snatches a fork from table n it hurts her burned hand.

Bebo:Ahhhhhhhhh.................

Amrit:OMG!!!!!What's that?It's bleeding.Oh,i don't understand why u've done that burning.I can understand how it hurts u.I can't bear that all.Plz let's go 2 a doctor.U need some medicines.

Amrit looks at bebo.She is smiling.

Amrit:U r smiling.Don't it hurts u?

Bebo:It hurts but when i look at u all that goes away.

Amrit:Oh.plz stop that 4 some time.

Bebo:U say that u don't care of what i do na?So what r these?Seeing me in pain ur eyes r full of tears.

Amrit wipes his eyes.He sees that Lisa n Ritu r coming.

Amrit:Ok,i have 2 go.See ur friendz r coming.

Amrit leaves.Bebo is smiling.

Precap:The collage closes 4 half month.Amrit is happy thinking that now he'll have some peace without Bebo.

So,gals that was my part-7.Hope u'll like it.like my new FF i have also added Precap in this FF also.

Edited by princessdoll - 14 years ago