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Shruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

@ambofan:Thanks dear 4 ur sweet comment.😊When i started this i thought this should b something new and here it is😃.I think if Rano plays the character that would b nice.What say?😆 And yes,this is going 2 b more hilarious.😛

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Shruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

@ ganga:yes Amrit is rude. becoz he is very sweet i thought it will b different, Right?😉Bebo is not shy, that's the point.Becoz i want something new.😊Thanks 4 liking my story.😃

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Shruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hi,friends.How r u all?I'm writing my third part.Hope u all will like it like previous parts.

(PART-3)

IN THE CLASS BEBO TOLD HER TEACHER THAT SHE IS GOING 2 MEET HER BRO OMI.
BEBO IN FRONT OF THIRD YEAR CLASS-

BEBO(IN MIND): Finally i'm here Amrit,my dear.Now i'll see how long u stay away from me.

RAJU(2 AMRIT): Amrit see who is here.That girl,who was disturbing u.I think she has come here 2 meet u.

SONU:What ! she is here?Amrit yaar,i think she is in love with u.Go and talk 2 her.Go.

AMRIT: Are u crazy?U want me 2 talk with that mad girl!!!

AFTER THE CLASS AMRIT CAME OUT AND SAW BEBO WAS LOOKING AT HIM &.SMILING . THAT MADE AMRIT ANGRY.

AMRIT: Hey girl!! are u mad ? Why r u after me? Leave me alone. Do u know how insulted i felt 4 ur behavior. Don't come again in front of my class. I am telling again leave me alone. Now go from here.

A TEAR DROP CAME OUT FROM BEBO"S EYE.

OMI COMES THERE & SEES BEBO CRYING.

OMI: Hey sis, What happened 2 u? Why r u crying infront of 3rd year class? Did u come here 2 meet Amrit?

BEBO: Ya, I came 2 meet with Amrit but he doesn't bother with me. He always stays away from me.

OMI: Really? He behaves this kind with u?O.k. I lost the bet. I will talk 2 him about u. After all i m ur bro & i can't see tear in ur eyes.

AMRIT & HIS FRIENDS R SITTING IN THE COLLEGE FIELD.

RAJU: What's the matter Amrit? Why did u behave that with the girl?

AMRIT: So, what do u want? I should go & hug that stupid girl & say " Oh u love me! From now i'll also love u."? That girl makes me hyper. I don't want 2 see her face.

OMI ENTERS-

OMI: Why don't u want 2 see her face? What is wrong about her face?U won't find a beautiful
gal like her in the whole college.& what's that "girl"? she has a nice name "BEBO".

AMRIT: Beautiful ! ur head.

OMI: What? I m telling u that from now u will love my sis & listen every word of her. & u'll run after her.

AMRIT: Main uske piche to tab vagunga jab woh mere piche vagna bandh karegi.Ab mera sar mat khao aur ihan se futo.Aur apni behen ko kehna ke himmat hain to khud mere samne aye apni bhai ko chamche ki jaise vegne ki zaroorat nahin hain.

OMI LEFT THE PLACE ANGRILY.

SONU: Oh "BEBO"! A very good name. Why didn't u like that yaar?

AMRIT: Oh i see! u liked her very much! May i talk 2 her about u?If it happens that she agrees 4 u then she will spare me.

SONU: Just stop it yaar. I know she is not a good girl .

RAJU: Ya, she always runs after boys. Let's go & have some snacks.

AMRIT: No, i don't feel like eating. U & Sonu carry on.

RAJU & SONU WENT IN THE CANTEEN. AMRIT STARTED 2 WALKING BESIDE TREES ALONE.
HE FELT SOMEONE WAS PUTTING HAND ON HIS MOUTH & DRAGGED HIM .

AMRIT: Ummmm.

( 2 b continued)

Edited by princessdoll - 14 years ago

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Afreen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

OMG u updated part 3rd
and i still have read part 2
uffff got to hurry up, got to read them soon.
btw thanks for the quick updates dear....

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s_a_m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Great idea princessdoll. AmBo with attitude - very different to what we are used to 👍🏼 Can't wait for the next part.

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Afreen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Part2
OMG princessdoll whats this.
Bebo-Amrit characters r soooo weird. totally different of what we r seeing
how on the earth bebo can talk to her bro like this,
how can she says Amrit is mine. and pehli baar baat ki
and sweetheart, darling. haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😍
i wish ambo could use such languages in the show.
princessdoll ur doing an awesome job. loving ur story...
its TOTALLY different and fantastic. keep it up
will read the 3rd part as i get time.
Thanks

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Alja

@Ambofan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Alrite so now the third part;

Amrit to bara hi kharus hai bai. Ek dafa Bebo k ishq mein mubtala ho gya , phir dekhna... 😆

At the end, dhen dhen cheek cheek, now who is this myserious kidnapper ??

Kahin hmari Bebo hi to bindaas nai hogi... 😛

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Afreen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Read the third part
OMG, what a story, awesome, awww poor bebo, why amrit is being soooo rude with bebo.
OMG who is this mysterious person? who dare to do this Amrit?
kahi ye bebo to nahi, OMG how come she got sooo much courage to do this
eagerly waiting for the next part
post it soon dear.

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Shruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

I'm writing the fourth part of my story.Hope u all will like it.

(PART-4)

AFTER SOME TIME AMRIT DISCOVERED HIMSELF UNDER THE SPACE OF STAIRCASE.AMRIT LOOKED BEHIND-

AMRIT: BEBO!!!!!! U!!!!

BEBO:Yes,me.Tumne kahan tha ke agar mujh mein himmat hain to mein khud samne aau.To,dekhliya tumne mujh mein kitni taakat hain?U thought u'll behave like this 2 my bro and i'll only listen? See Amrit,darling if u ever behave like this 2 my bro u'll see what i'll do.This was only trailer see what happens next.

AMRIT:Oh! u think that i'll b afraid of u after this cheap incident?Don't even think of that.After this i can now understand that how disgusting girl u r.U can stoop so low.U should know one thing that now i'm hating u more than before.I'm going.Let me see what u can do.

BEBO: Amrit, Amrit listen 2 me.

AFTER AMRIT GONE 2 HIS CLASS HIS FRIENDS ASKED HIM ABOUT WHERE WAS HE-

RAJU: Amrit there u r.We were worried about u.Where have u been?

AMRIT: That shameless downmarket girl dared 2 to touch me?I will never forgive her.

RAJU: R u talking about Bebo?What has she done?

Amrit: She closed my mouth and took me under the staircase.She told me," see what i m capable of doing."I can't believe that.

RAJU: What!!! R u telling truth ?

SONU: See,Amrit yaar.How much she loves u.She dared 2 kidnap u.How brave is she.I think u should accept her love.

AMRIT: No way.She wants that.I'll not do anything like that.

AFTER THE CLASS AMRIT AND HIS FRIENDS WAS GOING 2 HOUSE.THEY WERE TALKING 2 EACH OTHER AND BEBO AND HER FRIENDS WERE LISTENING 2 THEM-

SONU: Sorry yaar Amrit.I was mad.Please don't mind what i've said 2 u.

AMRIT:No,i will not mind.Let's go 2 home soon.

RAJU:Why do u want 2 go home so early?

AMRIT:I want 2 have some peace in home.Akhir ghar mein woh stupid Bebo to nahin hogi naa.

RAJU:OK,let's go.

BEBO LISTENED THE WHOLE CONVERSATION-

LISA:See,bebo how much he hates u.

BEBO:I don't know anything.I only know that he has 2 love me.Let's follow them.I have 2 find about my Amrit's home.

BEBO FOLLOWS AMRIT AND SEES THAT HE IS SMOKING-

RITU:He is smo smoking!!!!!!!!

LISA:Mein ne kabhi nahi socha tha ke woh bhi smoke kar sakta hain.Mujhe yeh nahin samajh mein ata ke use to fir tumse kya problem hain?

BEBO:I don't have any problem with smoking.See he is going , let's go.

BEBO FINALLY SEES AMRIT'S HOUSE AND BECOMES HAPPY-

BEBO:So that's the palace of my prince charming.So it's very near of my one.

IN THE EVENING BEBO GOES 2 AMRIT'S HOUSE AND THROWS A LOVE LETTER 2 HIS ROOM THROUGH THE WINDOW.BECOZ HE LIVES IN THE GROUND FLOOR.AMRIT SEES THE LETTER AND LOOKS ANGRILY AT BEBO WHO WAS STANDING INFRONT OF THE WINDOW AND SMILING.

(2 b continued)

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Afreen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

OMG another awesome part
totally loved it, haila it was bebo who kidnapped amrit, manna parega bhai hamari bebo mein to kuch zeyadah hi daring hai...............haiiiiiiiiiiiiii lets see ye amrit kab ispe latto hota hai
eagerly waiting for the next part do write it soon dear

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