MyCreation:Funny story on AMBO-UPDATED LAST PART

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi,friends from many days i was thinking 4 posting a story with ambo named "AMRIT BADNAAM HUA DARLING BEBO K LIYE".This story is made by me and this story is completely different from others.This story is only 4 fun.If u really think about this i think u'll understand it's fun.Hope u all will enjoy my story.There goes the first part...



CHARACTER SKETCH


BEBO:She is a 2nd year student in 'x' college.She is 19.She is not interested in studies.She always thinks about love.She compares her life with films.She is from a middle class family.She doesn't care about her parents.She is very much fond of her younger brother omi.She spends her all time with her friends.Who r also like her.

AMRIT:He is a 3rd year student in the same college.He is 20.He is an average student in his class.He thinks that he is very stylish and he is the most handsome boy in college.He also very arrogant and rude.He doesn't like 2 talk with strangers.He is also from a middle class family and also not fond of parents.He has two best friends and spend all time with them.

RITU & LISA:They r the best friends of Bebo.They r also not interested in studies & in their families.They r also always interested in boys.They like it and they think they r the belles of college.

RAJU &SONU:They r the best friends of Amrit.They lick his boot.

SHRUTI:She is the best student in Bebo's class.A very good girl.She is very much helpful and all girls like her very much.She has her own gang including the 9 most good girls in class.

PIYA,SNEHA,SWEETY,MILI,ROLI,MOONMOON,HINA,TAMANNA,ESHA:They r all in Shruti's gang.All r bubbly,chirpy and kinda full of fun.

PART-1(LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT)

BEBO:Hi,Ritu.What's up?

RITU:Nothing good yaar.Lisa hasn't come yet.She took my nail paint yesterday.I want 2 apply it now.But she hasn't come yet.I'm feeling like killing her.

BEBO:Cool down.Look here she comes.

LISA:What happened?Why were both of u eagerly waiting for me?

BEBO:Not me.Ritu was waiting 4 u.She is dying 4 her nail paint.

LISA:Is that true Ritu.Yesterday u were telling me that u don't need that.That's why i have not brought it.

RITU:What!I'll kill u.

LISA:Ok. Take it.But Bebo what happened 2 u?

BEBO:I was thinking that i'll meet my love 2day.

RITU:That's not a big deal.Everyday we meet our love.But r u telling about ur true fillings?

(WITH THAT KIND OF FILLINGS THEY HAVE THEIR LUNCH BREAK)
IN THE CANTEEN BeBO IS LOOKING OUTSIDE-

BEBO:Look friends,there.The boy is sooo handsome.I can't take my eyes from him.
(To b continued)







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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG a story on Amrit-Bebo
i am sooooooooooooo excited to read
will read the part and leave my comment
princessdoll thank u soooooooooooo much for writing dear
thank u soooooooooooooooo much
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow princessdoll awesome part
nice story loving it,
awwww so the girl r not interested in study hmmmm
waiting for the next part
do continue soon.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: juhuti

wow princessdoll awesome part
nice story loving it,
awwww so the girl r not interested in study hmmmm
waiting for the next part
do continue soon.......


Thanks 4 comment.😊I'll continue soon.😉

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow princess nice story.Loving it. it's totally different. Continue it soon.
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Hey there goes the 2nd part........
(PART-2)


BEBO:I want 2 know about him.Who is he? i haven't noticed him earlier.

RITU:See Omi is coming.U can ask him about this handsome boy.

LISA: Wait a minute.I am calling him.Omi,Omi.Listen.

OMI: What happened,sis?

BEBO:Omi,look there.That handsome boy.I want 2 know who is he?Can u tell me?

OMI: That boy!Look like he is in the 3rd year.I'm coming,plz wait here.

BEBO:Wait,where r u going?

AFTER SOME TIME OMI RETURNS-

BEBO: Omi,where have u been?

OMI:I went in the 3rd year class 2 ask about the boy.

BEBO: What?U know about him!Tell me quickly quickly.

OMI:Why r u so interested in him?What is ur plan?

BEBO:Plan! 4 what?Just tell me ok, younger brother.

OMI: He is Amrit.He is an average student.He thinks he is the most cool guy in college.

BEBO: Amrit ! Amrit! Amrit! What a nice name.Thats true he is the coolest guy in college.But what type of student he is doesn't meant 2 me.I only know now he will b only mine.

OMI: Oh! Don't tell me u like him.Firstly,he is not the cool guy in college.Secondly,He is rude he doesn't behave well with anyone.I don't like him at all.

BEBO:What means u don't like him?4 that,he is rude.He will not behave well with me? I can bet 4 him.When he will see me he will lost his sense.Becoz u can see how beautiful m i.

OMI: Ok. I'll see that.

BEBO GOES 2 AMRIT FAST-

BEBO:Hello Amrit,dear.

AMRIT(SHOCKINGLY):Who the hell
r u?

BEBO: U don't know me but i know u.I know u ll now tell me that u know me and 2day i'm looking pretty.Right.

AMRIT(IRRITATEDLY): Just move aside.Go away from here.

BEBO(SWEETLY):Why r u being so rude.Don't act like that,sweetheart.

AMRIT( GOING AWAY FROM BEBO):Sweetheart!!!My foot.I said go away.

BEBO:Amrit,listen 2 me.Amrit.

AMRIT(2 HIS FRIENDS):What a disgusting girl.


BEBO(HEARTBROKEN):Amrit,Amrit,don't go away.Plz,listen 2 me.


OMI: Ha ha ha.How was that,sis.U lost the bet.give me my prize.Plz find a girl 4 me.


BEBO:Wait,bro.I m not lost. Tum bas dekhte jao mein use apne ungli mein nachaungi.

(To b continued)

Girls,how r u liking my part 2?Do read and comment.I'll b back with par-3 soon.






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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow Princessdoll, Well Done beta, you have outdone your self.⭐️


Bcoz this is a tooo fresh track for AmBo...
Bebo being the tapori girl after boys, and Amrit being the cool rude guy, this is just totally opposite to what we are used to with AmBO... 😆
And the best part is where you have given detailed character sketches, that is an amazing idea and has never been done with any of the other AmBo scenes on the forum.
I'm sure this is going to turn out hilarious n emotional ... Eagerly looking forward to the third part.
And thanks for starting this up. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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niceeee... whats up with amrit??? soo rude... nd bebo, your the inocent one right??? but over all loving it.. well done..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@alju
Bebo being the tapori girl after boys,🤣
u cracked me once again
like ur language, totally mawali language🤣


aise language use kia karo beta, acha lagta hai😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: juhuti

@alju
Bebo being the tapori girl after boys,🤣
u cracked me once again
like ur language, totally mawali language🤣


aise language use kia karo beta, acha lagta hai😉😆

I'm glad once again... 😃
But aisi language ki adat nai hai to flow mein aati nahi but yes kabhi kabhi it is defo fun agar dimaah mein aa jaye to... 😆

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