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Posted: 14 years ago
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My story of AmBo happy reunion forever

I was watching a movie other day. The movie was about three friends and they had a misunderstanding between them. They were able to clear it by the end. But while watching how they cleared their misunderstandings I thought it would nice to see AmBo clearing their misunderstanding in the same way. Along with the idea from the movie I have added some of my own idea also. It is a bit sentimental but I assure you guys my story will have a happy ending. This is my first venture and I'm not good at writing scenes or stories. Please forgive my errors.

Amrit decides to finish off Bebo somehow or the other. He comes up with a plan. He divulges his plan to GG and they extend their full support to Amrit. Amrit tell the Narangs that he is going for a picnic with Bebo. The Narangs are very happy that Amrit is behaving so well. GG are also happy that they could finish off Bebo and get hold of the Narangs once more.

During the journey Amrit tries to behave lovingly towards Bebo. Bebo leans towards Amrit's shoulders. Amrit, even though uncomfortable with Bebo's act doesn't stop her. He kisses on her forehead just to make her believe that he loves her.


Amrit takes her to a cliff. Bebo is mesmerized by the beauty of nature and she moves towards the edge of the cliff. Amrit was just standing behind her. She was thinking how nice it would be if the whole family is here. Amrit ask her what she was thinking. She says nothing. Amrit asks her whether it was about someone she loves. She says yes.


Amrit says I know about whom you are thinking. Bebo ask him tell what she was thinking about. Amrit tell her you were thinking about your "husband" Arjun Khanna and your "daughter" Riya.


Bebo is shocked to hear this. She asks Amrit what you are saying. Amrit tell I know what you and your family did to me. You created the accident so that you could live with Arjun. You left me bleeding in the middle of the road so that I would die. When you and your family knew that I was alive you all tried to kill me again. It was my good luck that there was a good man who saved me from all the troubles. He was the one who helped me to understand your true colors. While I was suffering you were living a happy life with Arjun. I gave you a chance to tell me everything at the restaurant; but there you behaved as if you don't know Arjun. I have heard enough of your lies. Now I know everything about your drama. Viju have told me everything about you and your family. If he was not there I would have died long ago. I tried to finish you off many times. But when your family is around you, nothing can happen to you. So today I took you here all alone. Now no one will save you from dying.


Bebo cannot believe that it is Amrit who told her all these. She ask Amrit politely but firmly that how could you think that I would ever love someone else in my life. You are my love and you are my life Amrit. I stayed with Arjun only to take revenge on your death and to get back all the properties they have taken away from my family. You don't know what happened to me and my family after the accident.


Amrit is fuming while he was hearing Bebo's words. He yells at her. Enough Bebo. I won't believe you anymore. Bebo was really afraid with Amrit's anger and she walks behind seeing Amrit's strange behavior. Amrit walks towards Bebo and he is looking angrily at her eyes. While walking backwards Bebo accidently slips and she was about to fall down the cliff; but she get hold of Amrit's hand . To be continued........

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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
Eagerly waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow such a lovely idea, very well written, luved it
u know what, after the louri episode, when amrit said that nothing can happen to bebo as long as she is around her family, then i thought that he might take her out and there he will try to kill her and then all the story will be reveal. but sadly as always nothing happened.
anyway luved ur idea👏, eagerly waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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A big thanks to all for liking my story.🤗.Here is my second part.


Part 2


Bebo gets hold off Amrit's hand while she was falling and due to the force Amrit also falls on the ground. Amrit is lying on the ground while Bebo was hanging down the cliff and he is having Bebo's hand in his hands. Amrit was somehow about to pull her up; but then he thinks why should he save her. After all he want her dead. While he was thinking this he loses the grip and Amrit is in such a condition that if he tries to pull Bebo up he will also fall down the cliff. Bebo understands that if Amrit tries to save her he would also fall in to the cliff. In oder to save Amrit she ask him to leave her hand.

Amrit is shocked to hear this. He asks Bebo what she was saying. Bebo tell him that she loves him more than anything in the world; more that her own life. Once Amrit was ready to give her life to save her. Now it is her turn. She is ready to give her life to save Amrit. She just want Amrit' love and trust. Amrit's suspicion is more painful for her than death. She didn't cheat him to marry Arjun. She was just taking revenge on the Khannas for Amrit's death and for destroying the Narangs. Amrit is really confused and shocked to see Bebo uttering such words. He don't know what he should believe. Whether he should believe Bebo or Viju's words.

At the Narang House GG were discussing about Amrit's plan. They were quite sure that this time Amrit would succeed in his plan since no one was there to save Bebo. Goldie tell that once Bebo is dead all the Narang's property would be theirs. Omi who was passing by hears this and is shocked. He yells at GG and all the Narangs come. Omi is so angry that he slaps Goldie. Kuku stops him and asks what is the matter. Omi tell them that GG along with Amrit have planned to kill Bebo. All are shocked.

GG tries to escape by saying that they were just joking. Daljeet is angry and ask them to tell everything in detail. They again tell that they were joking. Kuku now threatens to call the police if they don't divulge Amrit's plan. GG are now afraid and they divulge everything about Amrit's hatred and his wish to kill Bebo. Narangs never expected such a change of behavior from Amrit and are very much tensed about Amrit. Omi tells GG that your sins have crossed all the limits. Now even after knowing all this we forgive you both even God won't forgive us. Omi calls the police and the police take GG. The Narangs tell about Bebo and Amrit also to the police. The police assures their helping hand in finding out AmBo.

To be continued.......
Edited by lakshmin42 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
great part, finally GG r out, waiting for the next part.
Edited by juhuti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yeah Afee, I too thought that finally AmBo are going on a honeymoon (despite Amrit's bad intentions).... But alasss...
Humare Honeymoon topic ne 100 pages bhi kr liye, but AmBo honeymoon pr na jaa sake.... 😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ambofan

Yeah Afee, I too thought that finally AmBo are going on a honeymoon (despite Amrit's bad intentions).... But alasss...
Humare Honeymoon topic ne 100 pages bhi kr liye, but AmBo honeymoon pr na jaa sake.... 😔


arre alju ur talking abut ambo going on honeymoon, ufff ye dono SR to kar nahii paye and ur talking about honeymoon. I don't think we will ever get to see either ambo SR or honeymoon.

don't get me wrong but this is what CV's want us to think. and rahi hope ki baat to, there is no way that i am gonna hope for anything from these CV's
no offense.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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100 % Agreed...
But agar hum ne hope hi nai krna to why dont we stop watching it Afee ?
Chut ta hi nai hai na....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ambofan

100 % Agreed...
But agar hum ne hope hi nai krna to why dont we stop watching it Afee ?
Chut ta hi nai hai na....


well now i watch SLB for time pass, i don't watch it with any excitement as i used to have.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry girls for not posting the scene for two days. And I will have to ask one more sorry because the third part is a bit sad.😭😭 But don't worry. I assure AmBo happy reunion forever in the next part. And thanks for all your support for the story🤗


Part 3

Amrit is now totally confused. His inner voice is telling him that Bebo can never cheat him and he too knows that very well. But he was thinking how could all that Viju told him and what he saw in front of his eyes be a big lie. Any way he understands that something is fishy and he wanted to know what happened to Bebo and the Narang family after the accident. He any way decides to save Bebo somehow or the other and know the truth from Bebo herself. He tries to push her up hardly.


Meanwhile Bebo was thinking about what Amrit said. She tells herself that death is better than a life without the love and trust of Amrit. But then she notices Amrit trying to pull her up with great difficulty. She also sees that Amrit is falling down the cliff when he is trying to pull her up. She makes a decision in her mind.


Bebo asks Amrit to leave her hand so that at least he would be saved. Tears roll down Amrit's cheek seeing Bebo's love for him. He tells her that he would never leave her hand. Amrit was struggling hard to pull her but he cannot and Bebo falls down calling Amrit's name. Amrit yells Bebooooooooooo.


Amrit was full of mixed emotions now. He was sad, tensed, angry and afraid and didn't know what to do. He didn't know whether he should be happy or sad. When he was thinking about what Bebo told him he was sad and when he was thinking about Bebo-Arjun moments he was happy. He was thinking about what Bebo said and what Viju showed him. He remembers Viju tell him Bebo is acting in front of him and he is happy for Bebo's plight. At the same time when he remembers how Bebo asked him to leave her hand to save his life he is sad. He is totally confused and he understands that something is there which he is unaware off. He decides to know the truth from Viju himself and goes to Khanna's Office. He goes there and asks for Viju to a person. The person tells him that Viju is in prison. Amrit is shocked and ask for what. The person tell that Viju have been arrested for killing Shalini Khanna; for cheating the Narangs and snatching all their properties; for making Amrit Malhotra's and Bebo Malhotra's accident( the person know Amrit as Dev Verma) and for killing Amrit and making Bebo a captive in the Khanna's House. Amrit is now shocked and he wanted to confirm what he have heard. He decides to go to the police station and inquire about Viju's arrest.


At the police station the police officer tell Amrit about all the crimes Viju have done and that too with all the proves. The police officer tell Amrit how Viju have murdered Shalini Khanna and put the blame on Kuku; how he snatched all the Narang property with the help of GG; how he kidnapped Bebo and told the whole world about AmBo death. The police also tell him about how he kidnapped Riya and tried to kill Arjun to acquire Arjun's property.


Amrit goes out of the police station. Amrit thinks about the intensity of his crime. He was ashamed of himself for not trusting Bebo; trusting Viju so much; giving more troubles for the Narangs by joining hands with GG. Amrit remembers all the past moments with Bebo and the final moments of Bebo with him. He also remembers how she told him that he is more dear to her than anything in this world. Amrit is in tears and thinks how he could attempt to kill his Bebo. Now an idea passes his mind. He remembers Rano pushing Bebo from the cliff; but she was alive. He hopes and prays to God to give his Bebo back. He makes a decision. He decides to find out Bebo somehow or the other and if she is not there he would also follow her.


GG had blurted out the place where Amrit took Bebo. The Narangs arrive at the spot with police. They could not find anyone out there. The police decide to search the entire area. The police was able to spot Bebo . She didn't fall down the cliff; but some branches of the trees were obstructing her fall. The police was able to bring her up. She had a head injury and was unconscious. She was taken to the hospital immediately.


Amrit reaches the spot after the Narangs and police had left. Amrit decides to search the entire area for Bebo and he was searching for the way to go down the cliff. He saw a native there and asks him the way to get down. The man asks Amrit why he wants to go down. Amrit tell the person that his wife fell down and wanted to search for her. The person informs Amrit that the police had found out a girl who fell down and she is taken to the hospital. The person also adds that the girl is so lucky because she didn't fall down; but was struck with some branches. Amrit is so happy to hear this and he decides to go to the hospital to see Bebo. Little does he know that the whole Narang family now hates him for his deeds.


At the hospital the doctors tell the Narangs that Bebo don't have any other injuries other than her head injury. It is a serious one and if they didn't do an immediate operation her life might be in danger. The Narangs agree for operation and Bebo is taken to the operation theatre. All the Narangs wait outside the operation theatre. Now Amrit comes running to the Narangs and inquire about Bebo. All look at him with hatred. Kuku yells at him and says that he doesn't have any right to ask about Bebo and from now on Bebo don't have a husband. Amrit asks what he was saying. Kuku tell him that they know what he did to Bebo and the family by joining hands with GG. Amrit is shocked to hear this. He tries to tell the Narangs that it was Viju who tried to mislead him and now he knows the entire truth. The Narangs are in no mood to listen to him. Daljeet asks him to leave and tell Amrit never to come anywhere near his sister. Amrit's sadness now become anger and he tell that Bebo is his wife and he has every right to stay with her. Ashok tell Amrit that their sister don't want a husband like Amrit who can't trust her. They would look after their little sister throughout their life and after their death God would look after her. But they would never ever give her again in Amrit's hands. Amrit pleads to let him stay in the hospital. There would be a scuffle between Amrit and the Narang brothers. The security comes and asks them not to make noise in the hospital. Daljeet tell the security that Amrit is the person who tried to kill their sister and they don't want him anywhere near her. The security drags Amrit and throws him out of the hospital.


To be continued.............

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