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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
👏👏👏....
Excellent scene Lakshmi...
You have defo found a very sensible way of letting Amrit know the truth. If it were the CVs they wud have left so many loopholes but your scene was in a proper flow.
And I know it is a little sad now but all is going to be well very soon.
And AmBo's moments on the cliff were so touchy...

Good Going dear, really enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#92
as always excellent part, eagerly waiting for the next part
my fav line from this scene
Bebo is his wife and he has every right to stay with her.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part IV

The doctor comes out of the operation theatre and informs the Narangs that the operation was successful and Bebo is out of danger. The Narangs are pacified to hear this. Bebo is shifted from the operation theatre to a room. Doctor tells that it will take some time for Bebo to regain consciousness. The doctor suggests the Narangs to go home and take rest because there are doctors to take care of Bebo in the hospital. Kuku tell the doctor that how they could take rest when their laadli is in such a condition. The doctor is touched by the love and affection of the family towards Bebo. The doctor leaves and the Narangs are waiting anxiously for Bebo to regain consciousness.

Amrit is walking all alone and he was remembering all the past moments with Bebo; beginning from their first meeting at the railway station; their marriage; and all other cute moments. Then the accident and Viju's poisoning comes to his mind. He feels so angry at himself and is really frustrated. He wanted to know about Bebo; but he knew that he can't go anywhere near the hospital. He is completely perplexed and don't know what to do.

The next day at the hospital Bebo regains her consciousness. The Narangs are so happy and they ask her many things. But she doesn't respond to any. She hasn't talked to anyone after regaining her consciousness. She was just like a living dead body. The doctor comes and he tries to make Bebo talk. But she doesn't respond to anything. The doctor tells the Narangs that physically she is all right and doesn't have any problem. But she has got some mental shock. Even though she knows what is happening around her; deep inside she doesn't want to come to her senses. Something has happened that she didn't expect at all and that have caused all the problems. The doctor tells the Narangs that she needs time to recover and that may be one or two weeks or months or may be years. The Narangs are shocked and sad to hear this. The doctor tells that a miracle can also happen. Daljeet asks crying what sort of miracle. The doctor informs them that if something happens before her that force her to break their silence. The doctor asks them to pray to God for her speedy recovery and informs them that they can discharge Bebo whenever they want because the doctors cannot do much in the situation. The doctor also tells the Narangs to keep Bebo happy and give her inspirations to come back to life. The doctor leaves. The Narangs are shattered. They decide to take her home so that she would be more comfortable out there. Amrit who was roaming around the hospital sees the Narangs taking Bebo home. He wanted to know how his Bebo and he decide to ask the doctor directly soon after the Narangs had left.

Amrit goes to the doctor and asks him about Bebo. The doctor asks who he was. Amrit replies he is Bebo's husband. The doctor has known about the previous days incidents from the hospital staff and is angry at Amrit. The doctor refused to divulge any details to Amrit. Amrit pleads to the doctor and tell him what have happened to him after the accident and about Viju's instigation. The doctor after hearing the whole story feels sorry about Amrit. The doctor tells Amrit about Bebo's condition and Amrit was totally shattered after hearing about Bebo. The doctor promises to talk to Kuku about Amrit's condition. But Amrit refuses by saying that he is so shameful about himself and he doesn't deserve a wife like Bebo. Amrit leaves and requests the doctor not to tell about his arrival to anyone.

At the Narnag House; the Narangs are taking good care of Bebo and are trying to make her happy by showing their smiling faces. But there is great pain hidden behind those smiles seeing the condition of their laadli. Amrit somehow wants to meet Bebo and he decides to go to the Narang House without anyone's knowledge. He enters the Narang House at night without anyone noticing him. He goes to Bebo's room and sees Bebo sitting in a chair like a statue. Tears rolled down his eyes when he saw Bebo. He goes to Bebo and sits in front of her.

To be continued................


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part V(Last part)


Amrit goes to his Bebo and kneels down before the chair in which she was sitting. He holds her face in his arms and calls "Bebo" lovingly. No reaction from Bebo. In a trembling voice Amrit says that it is he, her Amrit. When she tried to tell him she was his; he was not ready to listen to her and was after destroying her. When she wanted to talk to him; he didn't want to listen to her. But now he had understood that he was wrong and she was, she is and she would be always his and she could only love him and no one else in her life. She was repeatedly telling him that she loved him; but he could not understand the depth of her love. But now even when she is not even uttering a single word, he is able to see love in her eyes which he failed to recognize after falling in to the clutches of Viju and GG. Amrit breaks down after telling all these to Bebo and cries putting his head in her lap.

Even after Amrit's confession of his love; there isn't any change in Bebo. Now Amrit lifts his head and apologizes to her for not trusting her. He tells her crying that she never suspected him. He was living with Rano for a long time; that too when Bebo was there. But she never complained nor did she suspect him. But it was he who lost the trust on his Bebo. He was not able to fulfill the promises he gave to her. He tells her that he feels ashamed of himself for even thinking that Bebo could cheat him and she would try to kill him. He tells her that he himself doesn't know how he believed that Bebo could love someone else and she would discard his love. He promises Bebo that he would never ever suspect her even if God himself comes down and tell about her. His Bebo is pure and innocent as she was and she would be. Amrit begs Bebo to give him one more chance so that he would get a chance to rectify his mistake. He folds his hand and tells Bebo to come back to her life and just give him one chance. He folds his hands and tells Bebo to wake and come back to her life and he breaks down.

He hears a yelling from the back telling him to stop his drama. He turns back and find Daljeet yelling at him and the whole family is with Daljeet. He goes to Amrit and grabs his collar and pushes him to a corner. Daljeet asks Amrit why he has come to his sister now. To look whether she is dead or not. Tears roll down his cheek. Amrit's tears make Daljeet angrier. He tells Amrit that there isn't any need to cry now because these tears are nothing but a big waste now. Could he bring Bebo back to life with his tears? Their Bebo was very much concerned about his emotions and tears; but now that Bebo is no more. The girl sitting on that chair is Bebo's living dead body. She loved Amrit more than anything and anyone in this world. She stayed with the Khannas only to take revenge on his death. She was even ready to bear the pain of separation of the family only to take revenge for his death. That was the love of Bebo for Amrit. But he was blind with his revenge and he was not able to see her love for him. Daljeet also says that he very well knew that what happened with Bebo was not an accident. He was sure that Amrit purposefully threw Bebo from the cliff to fulfill his revenge.

Hearing such harsh words for her Amrit, Bebo's eyes began to fill with tears. Her eyes were trying to deny all what Daljeet said. Daljeet tells Amrit that even if Amrit calls back Bebo she is not going to come back to her life because from now on there is no place for Amrit in Bebo's heart. Daljeet goes to Bebo and kneels down before her. He asks her if she could ever forgive him. There is no place for him in her heart. He is such a cruel and ruthless person; he is a big sinner; he is such a cold-blooded snake. Daljeet breaks down and he cries by placing his head in Bebo's lap.

Bebo cannot tolerate all these allegations against her Amrit. Tears roll down her cheek and it falls on Daljeet's face, who was still crying. Daljeet is shocked to see that something have fallen on his cheek. He lifts his head and looks up. He sees that Bebo was crying. He rises up happily and informs all that their Bebo have come back to life. He is so happy and he goes running to one and all saying that Bebo have come back. At last he goes to Amrit and tells his Bebo has recovered. All the family members go to Bebo and hug her. Amrit goes to her at last and asks forgiveness by holding his ears.

Bebo stops Amrit and tells him that he is the only love in her life. Amrit tells that all that happened was his mistake; he wanted to tell everything to all of them. Kuku tells Amrit that they all knew everything and whatever happened was not his mistake; but was a trap of Viju. Amrit is surprised to know this and he asks then Daljeet…..Now Daljeet completes the sentence by saying that all this was a drama to bring Bebo back. Daljeet divulges everything to Amrit.

He tells Amrit that he knew that Bebo could never tolerate anything that would hurt her Amrit; because he is so deep in her heart. Even being in such a worst condition she was not able control herself and she could not stop her tears when she heard something bad about Amrit. He knew that Bebo would react and to make this reaction possible he played this drama in front of Bebo. Daljeet tells Amrit that when Amrit went to see the doctor he was also there; because he had to show the results of some tests done to the doctor and he heard the entire conversation between Amrit and the doctor. When he came to know about what happened with Amrit he was really sorry for him and was about to console him. But then he got an idea.

He was sure that Amrit would come to see Bebo. The doctor had already told that if something happens that would leave an impact on Bebo's mind and that would force her to break her silence and react; then there is a scope for her recovery. Daljeet tells Amrit that he knew Amrit was Bebo's jaan and if she could not tolerate Amrit getting hurt. If he hurt Amrit in front of Bebo; she would react. And he decided enforce his plan when Amrit comes to meet Bebo. Daljeet apologizes to Amrit for his rude behavior. Amrit stops him and tells that it is he who should apologize to the entire family for causing all the trouble. Kuku asks Amrit to forget everything as a bad dream and to begin a new life from now on.

After a few days Bebo have recovered completely. Amrit finds out his family. The entire family along with Babloo and Geet has left the Malhotra House when GG began to rule and torture the Narangs. With the "death" of AmBo, GG have tried to torture Amrit's family also. Since they could not stand against the mighty GG and Viju they have gone to a village and were leaving a life in exile. Now Amrit brings back his family along with Geet and Babloo. Geet have delivered a sweet baby girl. Bebo and Amrit decide to leave the Narang House and go to the Malhotra House. All of the Narangs give AmBo their blessings. AmBo leaves the Narang House and goes to the Malhotra House to start a new life; a life full of love and a life without GG and conspiracies.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
excellent part
i am gonna miss the story
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AmBo Valentine Special...

( The Malhotra family now lives in a new house, a small one but better furnished. Suman has been married to Omi. Geet and Babloo bhaiyya live at the old Malhotra house. Harmmet paraji has been married to a sweet lady, Neetu parjai ji. All is well in the family... 😊)

Amrit and Bebo are in their bedroom. They just shared some beautiful momnets of love and passion with each other. Now Bebo turns towards Amrit, rests her head onto his chest and curls up into a snuggly hug. Amrit places one arm around her and strokes her cheek with his other hand. Bebo closes her eyes. After a few minutes, Amrit asks : Bebo are you asleep ?

Bebo: ahan... nai, nahi to...

Amrit: Ek important baat krni thi..

Bebo: Acha ji, kia ?

Amrit shifts his position to face Bebo. He strokes her face moving his finger across her lips. Then he gets closer and kisses her cheek, brushing his lips against her chin as well.

Bebo asks in a meaningful manner: Amrit aap ki important baat ??

Amrit: Yehi to impotant baat hai...

Bebo looks quizzically into Amrit's eyes. The soft light of the night bulb seemed to be dancing in Bebo's eyes. The clock struck 12, marking the beginning of 14th Feb. Amrit puts his arms around Bebo n says: Bebo I LOVE YOU, will you be my valentine ?

Hearing this Bebo smiles n replies: I always have been your valentine and will always be yours.

Amrit gives his romantic smile.
Bebo : Now I also have something important to tell you.

Amrit: Yes sweetheart...

Bebo: Can you drop me at the grocery store while you go to the office tomorrow ?

Amrit is surprised and disappointed to hear this. He turns back to lie straight.

Bebo then giggles and gets over Amrit. She places her hand on his cheek lovingly.

Bebo: Amrit I LOVE YOU too, more than anyone else in this world.

With this she further bends down to kiss Amrit. Amrit is all happy with a wide smile after the sweet kiss. He turns and quickly embraces Bebo tightly. Bebo too responds back with the same passion. Then slowly Amrit moves apart and takes Bebo's face in both his hands. He brings his lips closer. Bebo feels the tingle and moves up the covers. Both AmBo get lost in the depth of their love.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
oho alju lovely scene yaar, filled with love, kisses and naughtiness😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
Yeah as all of this is usually missing, we are always imagining up as Di says.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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My Next Part OF My Story

The Next Morning The Whole Narang's Plan That Bebo And Amrit Won't See Until There Marriage Finish Then Do To AmBo Saru Go To Knock AmBo To Wake Them Up To Bring Then Downstairs There Amrit Whole Family There Amrit Mother Harmeet, Paapi, Geet, Babloo And There Baby Name Is Anusha And Suman With Her Husband Shravan And Suman Is 4 Month Pregnant (Shock Is It) Everyone Goes Hugging Amrit He Hug Them Back The Mother Crying To Hard AmBo And Everyone In Narang House Is Shocked To See Shravan Back Shravan Goes To Hug Amrit He Hug His Back Long Go Time No Phone Call No Letter, No Visit, Sorry Dude Amrit Say What Are You Doing Here I Married To You Sister Suman. (Everyone Shocked) Shravan Go The Narang People One By One And Ask For Forgiveness They All Forget At That Long Time Ago Bebo Say To Everyone That She Will Come Back And She Goes To Her Room Amrit Say He Will Be Back Amrit Ask What Happen And She Replied Nothing What To Get Ready So Both Get Ready And Go Downstairs And Everyone Outside Having Dinner Everyone Enjoying Dancing Playing Games Bebo Didn't Feel Well So She Faint On Amrit Shoulder Everyone Looks Worried
There Doctor Comes And Checked And Saying She Has May Have Cancer Or Brain Tumor Everyone Shocked She Had This For A Week She Didn't Know Anything About It Everyone But Bebo Still On Consciousness Amrit Is Crying Everyone Console Amrit Nothing Going To Happen To Her Now We Planned To Start To New Life And This As To Happen. The Doctor She Has To Come To The Hospital For A Checkup To Know Whether If She Going To Cancer Or Brain Tumor Whether If We Can Cure Her Or Not The Doctor Leave Everyone Downstairs Worrying For Bebo And Amrit But AmBo In There Room Bebo Wakes Up Amrit Still Looking At Bebo.

I Will Contro Tom
Edited by Mythily2 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice story👍🏼
Hope nothing happens to my laadli and she gets cured soon. Waiting for the next part.

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