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Tanzeela

@ganga16tr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

Hey guys! Ok we really need a couple of new ambo scenes. So here's one that I have just thought of… This isn't the one that I have been working on for months…

It is the night arjun finds out that vijendar is ria's kidnapper. He has been trying to get through to bebo all evening, but her phone remains unavailable. He keeps trying to get through to bebo. Bebo is worried, as she hasn't received any calls from arjun regarding ria. But she hasn't realized that her phone is switched off. Amrit noticed this and thinks to himself that he will tonight again put another test in front of bebo and see how she reacts to it.

After dinner everyone goes to bed. Bebo picks up her phone and sees that it is switched off. She turns it on… Soon amrit comes. He gets changed and gets into bed. Bebo too gets into bed. She turns away from amrit and says good night. He says nothing back.

Arjun picks up his phone, he thinks that he should call bebo, but then puts it down again. He thinks that bebo has been giving me so much time to help find ria. She needs some time for herself and now she has found amrit again they will need time to work on their relationship. It would be rude to disturb them so late at night. So he puts his phone back and says that he will call bebo tomorrow morning and let her know what is happening.

Bebo is settling down. She closes her eyes and tries to go to sleep. Amrit turns and looks at bebo. He moves towards her. Bebo doesn't notice this. She is too busy worrying about how ria might be. Amrit puts his hand on bebo's shoulder. He then puts his arms around her. Bebo gasps. Amrit looks at bebo with utter dislike but says if I get a positive reaction from her it means that vijendar was lying to me and that bebo loves me and only me. But if she gives me a negative response I will confront her and tell her that I know her dirty, low truth. Bebo thinks, what do I do!? I really am not in the mood for any of this. But what do I say to amrit? Amrit moves towards bebo and holds her tightly. He kisses her neck and the top of her arm. Bebo feels a huge jolt of discomfort. Amrit turns bebo onto her back and he attempts to get on top of her but bebo pushes him off. Amrit looks at bebo and asks what the matter is. Bebo says she doesn't feel like it. Amrit gets angry but before he can say anything bebo's phone rings.

Bebo looks at her phone and quickly answers it. She gets out of bed and goes to the balcony. Amrit looks at bebo going and says I knew it. I knew that you no longer love me. You don't care about me. You don't want me! I'm sure that it is arjun's call! Amrit too gets out of bed and quietly follows bebo. She answers it. Arjun apologises for calling so late. Bebo says that it's ok. She was really worried about ria and didn't feel like doing anything else. She asks if arjun has got any news. Arjun says that the kidnapper is none other than vijendar. Bebo looks shocked and says but vijendar is in jail. Arjun says that he has escaped. Bebo says that she is coming over. She puts the phone down. She turns to see amrit who is fuming.

Bebo asks amrit what the matter is. Amrit says that he has caught her red handed today. Bebo looks at amrit confused. Amrit says that she doesn't need to act he knows everything. Who she was with during the time he was away and now where she goes as soon as the phone rings. Bebo says that she wanted to tell him but she didn't want to worry him or make him upset. She thought that he would understand. Amrit says I understand everything all right. But my point is why did you do this to me? If you don't want to be with me why act as thought you do? Bebo looks at amrit and says what are you talking about. Amrit says it doesn't matter any more. All that matters is that she is happy with her arjun. Bebo looks and says amrit I think you have misunderstood something… My arjun? What are you talking about? Amrit looks at bebo and says let it be. I want to go to sleep. Amrit leaves and gets into bed and puts the pillow on top of his head. He thinks she thinks I'm so stupid but I will get to the bottom of this and then I will finish her and arjun off!

Nothing much, but I hope you liked it!

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Alja

@Ambofan

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#72

Aaaww this had a sad ending to it but as far as the creation is concerned, the scene was coherent n well-organised. Although I wish Bebo could have responded positively but may be one is not able to if something worrysome is going on in the mind.

As always , a wonderful job sweetheart but I so much wish if u cud write a part 2 for it in which the actual truth is disclosed.

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

wow ganga janu excellent scene, fabulous job. 👏
awww i wish bebo could have responses positively, and OMG hamesha ache time hi us arjun ka phone ring hone lagta hai arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh😡...anyway overall as always it was a great scene and well written. ⭐️

Edited by juhuti - 14 years ago

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Shruti

@Princyz_Belle

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Hi,friendz.How r u all?Finally I'm back after a weeks break.I missed u all very much.So,let's come to the topic.I told u all that i will write a new FF on AmBo.So,2day I'll start it.I hope u all will enjoy it as i'll try my best 2 make u all happy.So,here it is...............................

Bebo Narang:She is the same girl as our show(SLB).Her family is also same.

Amrit Malhotra:He is also the same as our show.His family is also the same.

And the other characters of the show r also same.

1st part

In the bus stop Amrit is waiting 4 the bus.The bus come and Amrit gets up in the bus.He takes his sit.He opens the window,cold wind is blowing.Suddenly he gets surprised.Some long hair is blowing over his face.He gets a strange feeling and a small smile comes in his lips.but he gets his sense back.He moves the hair from his face and sees the hair is of the girl who is sitting in front of him.He tells in his mind what a beautiful hair i don't know why but i think the girl will b a belle.And he desires to see the girl just one time.After some time the woman who was sitting bside the girl gets down from the bus.Amrit just stand up and sits bside the girl.The girl looks at him.Amrit gets stunned.He says on his mind,"What a beautiful girl"!!!He smiles at the girl.The girl feels some kind of strange for the smile.She looks outside.Amrit gets surprised what m i doing?he tells the girl "oh i'm really sorry." The girl looks at him and says,"No,it's ok."Amrit says,"Actually u have so long hair that ah.... ah.....i like long hair i hope u'll understand."The girl smiles at him and says,"Ya i can understand.But thanks 4 ur praise.I don't think that my hair is so long."Amrit says,"No, it's long and lovely ohhhhhhh."!!!!! Girl says,Ok i have to go.But again thanks 4 ur praise."Amrit closes his eyes and says,"it's ok ,But i think...."He opens his eyes n sees she has left.Amrit feels sad.he also gets down from the bus.

Outside the bus stop the girl is looking 4 a rickshaw but there is no rickshaw.She founds 1 she asks the driver 2 go but he says it's already booked.She says him that, "it's going to b evening and i have 2 go home,now what will i do?"Driver says i don't have 2 do anything plz tell that 2 him who has booked it.He is talking 2 the phone there.The girl goes to him and says,"Excuse me,can i take ur rickshaw?See it's going to b evening n i....." the man looks after the girl sees that he is that man who was in the bus.Amrit says "oh it's u?"Girl says,i want 2 take ur rickshaw.Amrit says,"U can take it but i also have 2 go home.Then the driver comes n says "if u 2 wants 2 share rickshaw so it's ok".They both agrees.they sits in the rickshaw.Amrit sees that the girl is tense.He asks why.She replies that she had never traveled with a stranger.Amrit says "oh that's the problem ok let's introduce ourselves so we'll not b strangers." He says,"Hello,I'm Amrit Malhotra.An architect."
He takes his hands forward 4 handshake.The girl says,"namaste."Amrit takes his hand back n says "so what's ur name?"The girl replies,"Oh,I'm Bebo Narang.I'm a collage student."Then they reaches at a place where Bebo says stop.She gets of from the rickshaw and says Bye 2 Amrit.She says,"Nice 2 meet u."She goes in her house.

Amrit gets stunned.Bebo is going 2 a big house.And she is so rich.!!!!He says 2 himself,"If she is so rich so why she is traveling in Buses and rickshaws?Why she is living so simply?"

So,friendz that was my 1st part of "Do Humrahee.".Hope u'll like the 1st part.Do comment and plz press the like button if u liked my 1st part.

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Shruti

@Princyz_Belle

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Hello,friendz.I'm back wid my next part.Hope u liked my first part.So here is the part-2....................

PART-2

Bebo goes 2 her home.It's a very big house.She calls loudly "Papaji".Here comes Kuku Narang the famous businessman.He comes n hugs his dearest daughter.He tells that "so now u r back my dear." Then comes Bebo's mum Amro.She gives her "gajar ka halwa".Which she have make 4 specially Bebo.Then comes Bebo's three loving brothers who loves her so dearly.Ashok,daljeet n Omi.Ashok n daljeet r married 2 Saru n Pravjot who also loves Bebo.And this is the big n happy family of Bebo. The next day Amrit was going 2 his office and he stops b4 a collage where he sees Bebo.He reminds what happened yesterday.He decides 2 ask Bebo abt that.Bebo sees Amrit n comes 2 him n says, "Nice 2 meet u again .Oh yesterday i forgot 2 thank u but now Thank u."Amrit says"No,it's ok.How r u?Where r u going?"Bebo replies,"I'm fine.I was going home."Amrit says"Oh".Bebo says"Ok then Bye."Amrit agrees.Bebo walks away.Suddenly Amrit remembers that he has 2 ask abt yesterday.He stops Bebo.Bebo looks bhind n asks "what?"Amrit says,"I saw yesterday that u r very rich.So why u travel in bus n rickshaw?Why u live so simply?"Bebo smiles n says,"Oh that's the confusion?Ok then i tell u.I m very rich but i like living simply.4 me my family is everything.I don't like showing my money."Amrit is stunned!!!He says to himself,"What a great thinking.She has all good value."He quietly smiles.Bebo asks him,"What's wrong?"Amrit replies,"Nothing"Bebo says,"So where were u going?"Amrit says,"Oh i was just going 2 my office."
Bebo says,"So,i think u r getting late."Amrit gets shocked.He says,"Ya.....Ya......Bye."Bebo Says,"Bye".Amrit is going n Bebo is smiling.

PRECAP:Amrit n Bebo r standing in their window in their own house.Bebo is thinking that Amrit is so good boy.When he smiles he looks so charming angel.She smiles and gives a light slap in her head.Other side amrit is thinking abt Bebo.

Hey gals,I've added new section in FF.So there will b a precap everyday.

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Shruti

@Princyz_Belle

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Hello,friendz.I'm back wid my part-3.Here is the part-3........................

(Part-3)

Amrit is in his office he is thinking abt Bebo.He is thinking how good values bebo has.She is not like a common girl she is special.His Colleague asks him what happened?He looks he is not in present.he is lost in some thoughts.Amrit replies,"No,nothing like that.I was just thinking abt her."His colleague says,"Her?Who is the her?"Amrit says,"Nothing.Plz excuse me,I've 2 go somewhere."Amrit leaves.His colleage says,"He is now gone.ha ha ha."He smiles.

In night Bebo is standing in her balcony n thinking abt Amrit.She tells herself,"Amrit is such a nice boy.He is so polite.He is so friendly.But when he smiles he looks like an charming angel."A littel sound surprise bebo.Bebo gets her sense back.She gives a light slap in her head.She says ,"oh Bebo why r u thinking so much abt Amrit?"But again Amrit's smiling face comes in front of Bebo.Bebo says 2 herself,"Oh Amrit,U r so sweet."Then Bebo again says,"Oh Bebo u r mad.Totally mad."Other hand Amrit is standing in front of his window.He is also thinking abt Bebo.He says in his mind,"I m totally lost in bebo's thoughts.I was not doing my work properly in office.What happened 2 me?Why i'm so much interested in bebo?It's only bcoz i like long hair.And Bebo has beautiful long hair.But she is also beautiful!!!Ohho,Amrit.She looks beautiful bcoz she has long hair n that's it.U only got interested in her 4 her long hair."Both Amrit n bebo r smiling n understanding themselves.But it looks like that,the moon is smiling at them.

The next day Amrit goes 2 his office where his boss gives him a new project.It's with Narangs.His boss tells him 2 go 2 the narang office n discuss the design with them.Amrit says 2 himself,"Narangs!I think it's the company of Bebo's dad."

Amrit goes 2 Narang's office.There he meets Bebo's dad.Kuku tells him that "it's a house what is very special 2 him." Amrit says,"Ok,sir.Let's discuss the design."Kuku tells him,"No, i can't tell u abt this.Bcoz i'm making this house 4 my daughter Bebo.Plz wait 4 some time.She'll b here.After that both u can go 2 the site n discuss abt design."Amrit gets pleased.He is thinking that he'll meet bebo again.

PRECAP:In a beautiful river side Bebo slips n Amrit holds her.A cold wind blows.Bebo's hair is blowing over Amrit's face.In background La La music is going on.

Hope u all will like it.😉If u liked my part plz press the like button.

Love 2 all.😳

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rayaloveland

@rayaloveland

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#77

AMBO SCENE

Amrit comes to know the reason of bebo going to khanna house n he also gets to know everything what happened with bebo. before he got to know this. he shouted at bebo but bebo didnt say anything she went up to her room. she was crying. then everyone told amrit tht u need to bebo ko manana parega tumhe. he asks papaji how? this u have to think. we all are going to sleep. its quite late. everyone go to their room. amrit goes out to bring gift for bebo n a nice music cd plus movie cd. in the gift he has brought a night dress n 3 churidaar for her. he comes back.

in his n bebo's bedroom

amrit goes in the room n locks it frm inside. bebo is crying.he goes towards her with the gift. he sits beside her n makes her turn towards him n wipes his tears

amrit: sry n gives the gift to her.

bebo : its okay.

he gives her the gift

bebo: what is this?

A: its for u. u open n see it..

A: hows it?

B: its beautiful.

bebo hugs amrit . Then amrit goes to the music player n plays the cd. bebo is sitting on the bed.

A: pls wear one of the churidar for me now.

B: okay amrit!

bebo goes n changes n comes out wearing a pink churidar.

amrit goes to her

A: will u dance with me now?

B: okay amrit!

they dance for sometime. then its 10pm.

amrit switches off the music

A: lets watch a movie..

B: okay my amrit. bt let me change.

A: okay my bebo! wear what I brought for u.

B: okay amrit!

she wears tht n comes n they are in their bed n watching a film. Both are very close to each other sitting n watching. n movie gets over at 2am

n after tht they sleep.

hope u like it...

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Alja

@Ambofan

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#78

Glad to see u back writing a scene Riddhu...
Nice one...

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Shruti

@Princyz_Belle

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#79

Hello,friendz.Sorry 4 not updating 4 three days.But here is my 4th part...........................

(Part-4)

Amrit is sitting alone in a room.He hears a knock on his door.He opens the door.He sees that it's Bebo.He smiles at her.Bebo is shocked.She asks him "what r u doing here?R u the architect?Oh what's wrong with u?Why r u not talking?"Amrit gets his sense.He again smiles n says,"Ah Bebo u r asking me so many questions so what will i do?"He asks Bebo to come in and says her 2 sit.Then he says,"Ok,first u sit here comfortably and then i will answer ur all questions."Bebo sits n tells him 2 give answers.mrit says,"Let me tell u,I'm the architect n i'm designing the house 4 u."Bebo smiles n says,"That's so nice that u r the architect."Amrit replies,"Ok now let's discuss the design."Bebo says,"OK".Amrit says,"4 the disign we have 2 go 2 the site."Bebo agrees.

Then both goes 2 the site.It's a great site.Amrit asks Bebo that,"This is the place where ur house will b.Now tell me abt ur dream house."Bebo tells that,"I don't know.i had never thought abt it."Amrit replies,"No,i think u've thought abt it but it's in ur heart n 4 telling me abt this u have 2 tell me abt ur heart."Bebo tells that,"Ok i'll tell taht what i'll like but u have 2 understand it."Amrit replies,"I'll try my best 4 understanding ur heart."They both r looking at each others eyes.They r completely lost.But a worker comes n tells Amrit that,"Sir, now we've 2star work n 4 that we want the design."Amrit-Bebo r shocked.Amrit tells that,"Ok i'll give u the design after some time now u can go."Amrit tells Bebo that,"Ok let's start from the river side."

Amrit n bebo goes 2 the river side.Bebo is very pleased 2 see the river side.A cold wind is blowing .Bebo is walking n smiling.Amrit is looking at her and he is also feeling the wind.Suddenly Bebo slips n Amrit holds her.Bebo's hair blows over Amrit's face.They both r lost in each others eyes.They both r smiling at each other.In background the La la music is going on.Amrit moves Bebo's hair from his face he senses that it's quite late.Bebo stands up n says that "OMG,I'm sorry." Amrit also says,"I'm sorry."They both r embarrassed.But they both have a small smile in their face.

Precap:Amrit n Bebo r walking in a road.Suddenly rain starts falling.Bebo is enjoying the rain but amrit is hiding from rain.Bebo holds his hand n take him in rain.

Ok,gals.That was my 4th part.Hope u all will like it.

Love u all.❤️