~~GCWC~NO COMMENTS~Bebo ka sach!~page 5~~

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hey everyone! i know we have loads of topics where we post our scenes, however i wanted to open a topic where i can post my scenes, simerlaly as afee has her own topic to post her VM's...
also to my dear friend kamnini, you said i should post you all my scenes and you would read them after you get married, so take this as a lil gift nd make sure you read when you have the time...
so hope you enjoy.. i will post some of my old ones first and update as i write more...
also please press "like" on all the scenes you like, so i can write more of that type.
hope you all enjoy,
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Amrit and Bebo are in their bedroom. Bebo is sorting through her clothes. Amrit gets up from the bed. Put down his work and walks over to Bebo. He takes bebo's hand. Bebo looks at Amrit. Amrit looks at Bebo. Bebo asks him if he has finished his work. He says that he will do it later but now her wants to spend a bit of time with his wife. He says that he would like to say something. He says he loves her more than anything in the world. Bebo blushes. He says that he only works for her, so he has the flexibility to work when he wants and to be romantic too. He says that she can say how she feels about him too. Bebo doesn't know what to say. But amrit's loving eyes made her helpless. She told him she too loves him very much and that he is very special and needed in her life. She also says that every girl dreams about getting a husband that will love her move than anything in the world and that she is the luckiest girl in the world because she has got the most loving husband in the entire world. Amrit is pleased to hear that Bebo loves him very much. For the first time after their marriage he felt as though Bebo is really his. Amrit goes closer to Bebo. Bebo blushes. He kept coming closer. Bebo began to move back. But Amrit kept coming closer. Bebo was up against the wall. She closes her eyes. She feels amrit's hand stroking her cheek. She opens her eyes. He is holding onto her arm. He pulls her a tiny bit. Bebo is right up against Amrit. Amrit says that she does not need to be shy when she is with he husband. Bebo blushes even more. He says that by her being shy she is not giving him the right to touch or come close to his wife. Bebo looks at him. She says that every girl is like this. When her husband is so close she will always be shy. Even if they have been married for a long time. Amrit looks Bebo. Bebo continues. After a girl gets married she belongs all to her husband. He has every right over her. U r my husband and u have every right over me. U can hold me as much as u want. I can't object. Amrit thinks. He says, even though I have all right over u, I still wouldn't like to be doing something u r not 100% happy with. Bebo says that she is happy with him holding her. Amrit smiles. Before Bebo can say anything Amrit lifts her off her feet. Bebo is totally in amrit's arms. Her feet are nowhere near the floor. Bebo looks at Amrit. Amrit looks back at her. Bebo puts her head on amrit's chest and closes her eyes. Amrit carries her over to their bed and then he put Bebo down. She looks at him. Then he comes closer and kisses her on her forehead. He looks at her. Puts his hands on her shoulders and slowly and gently pushes her back...Then they zoom out make it fuzzy and move onto another scene.

OMG thats my first ever AmBo scene i wrote!
Edited by ganga16tr - 15 years ago
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Bebo enters her bedroom with her and amrit's clothes she has got from the drycleaners. She sees that Amrit is getting ready to go somewhere. She asks him where he is going. He says that he wanted to spend some time with her but he got a call from the office asking him to go in urgently, so he has to leave. Bebo is a bit disappointed and says that it doesn't matter the earlier he goes to work he the earlier he can come home. Amrit holds Bebo by her shoulders. He says that he might be late back so she shouldn't wait up. He then leaves.

After he leaves Bebo is tiding their stuff away. She is going through all her dresses and stops when she sees her nightdress. She takes it out of her wardrobe and looks at it. After a few moments she smiles to herself and puts it away again.😃

Amrit gets home at about 11:30. He walks into the room and finds that the lights are still on. He looks around and sees Bebo brushing her hair in front of the mirror. Amrit walks up to Bebo. She still hasn't noticed that he is home. He puts his hand on her shoulder and Bebo looks up. She sees Amrit and smiles and turns around and stands up. Bebo is wearing her nightdress. Amrit looks at Bebo and notices this. Bebo feels a bit shy but changes the subject.😳 She asks him would he like anything to eat. He says that he has eaten, but how come she still is awake. She says that she isn't tired. Suman and Geet where with her until a little while ago and all of them where having a chat. But they had left and she was getting ready for bed. Amrit says that Bebo looks nice in the nightdress. Bebo blushesā˜ŗļø and says she will be back. She was only trying it on, so now she was going to get changed into one of her normal dresses. Amrit tells her to leave this one on. She looks really beautiful in it. Bebo blushes and walks away but Amrit holds her hand. She stops her brings her back towards him. He stops her once she is facing him once more.

He says that she does not need to be shy. Her beauty was something that cannot be hidden. In this dress your beauty just shines out a bit more than usual. Bebo blushes.😳 (She blushes quite a lot in the show, so I think all the blushing does fit in!) Amrit says that in his eyes, no matter what she wears her beauty always stands out. Even in a crowd of millions of people he can always tell where his Bebo is because her beauty shines like a star fallen from the beautiful night sky. Amrit stops. Takes her hand. No matter what you wear you always look beautiful to me. I love you, no matter how you are. Beautiful or ugly, fair or dark. You are the one that rules over my heart...

Edited by ganga16tr - 15 years ago
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Bebo is helping Pappi (Harmeet's son) get ready for school. Bebo tells him to go and get his school tie and she will help him put it on. Pappi goes off. Bebo turns around and is fixing the bed sheets but then she hears Amrit calling her. She turns around and sees him behind her. Bebo looks at Amrit and asks him if he needed something. He says, I need help with my shirt. Bebo looks at his shirt and sees that all the buttons have gone in the wrong holes. Bebo laughs. Amrit asks what was so funny. She says even Pappi could put his shirt on without my help and you are asking me to help you. You are worse then any child. Amrit thinks, and then he says what can I do? You have turned me this way. Bebo thinks and then says how have I turned you this way?? Amrit says, it's your love and care. You do everything for me. I have become so reliant on you that I have forgotten how to even do up my shirt. Bebo says for him to come over to her. She will help him with his shirt. Bebo takes off all of amrit's buttons and then puts them on again.

Just then Pappi comes back into the room. He has got his tie. Bebo puts it on for him and then he hugs her and then her goes.

Amrit is admiring Bebo. Bebo notices this and then asks him why is he looking at her like that. Amrit says you take care of everything so well. You can look after Pappi so well as well. Bebo blushes. She says these are my responsibilities. I have to do them. Amrit admires Bebo even more. He thinks for a while and then says. I now know that if you can take care of Pappi so well, then our child will be no problem for you to handle. Bebo is confused. "Our child?" she asks Amrit. Amrit grins and puts him hands on her shoulders. Yes our child he replies. Bebo is a bit hesitant at this point. Amrit notices this. He then says you don't have to worry. I am not trying to make any hints at what I want. But I was just talking to my friend the other day and he was telling me how his children are. Then he asked me if we had any children. I told him that we didn't. He then said to me that he was shocked, we had been married so long and yet we were not thinking about anything like this yet. I told him we haven't even been married for 9 months yet. But he simply told me that, that is a very long time for two people who love each other very much.

Amrit puts his hand on bebo's cheek. Bebo looks up at Amrit and says that what his friend says is true, but maybe she wasn't ready to take up this responsibility. Amrit says he understands what she is trying to say. Bebo comes one step closer to Amrit. She then continues. I don't think I am ready to take on the responsibility of becoming a mother, but I can do anything for you. If this is what you want then... I can do nothing about that. Amrit thinks about how Bebo can do things she doesn't want to just so other people can be happy? Amrit says that Bebo doesn't need to worry. Even he thinks that maybe its still quite early to think about children. Amrit hugs Bebo.

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Bebo is thinking about what Dunia's ghost said to her. She is thinking what she should do. The ghost won't leave her and Amrit alone until she makes her suhaag raat with him. She thought how can she even tell him what happened. What will Amrit think? He will think she has gone mad. Then Bebo had an idea.

Suman and Geet are in the living room talking. Bebo goes up to them and asks them if the can help her out a bit. Geet asks her what she needs. Bebo says she and Amrit have been really busy these days. They haven't had the time to spend with each other. So Bebo said she thought that if she gets some flowers ordered and candles she can decorate her room nicely and surprise Amrit. But she also said she doesn't have enough time to do it all alone so she wanted Suman and Geet to help her. Suman asked if it was going to be like their suhaag raat. Bebo says no. Its just so that she and Amrit can talk with candles all around them and the sweet smell of lovely flowers. Geet says that's a really good idea. She says why not recreate Amrit and bebo's suhaag raat. Bebo thinks to herself. She thinks that they have said what she wanted but she didn't have to say anything at all. Bebo says that's not a good idea. Suman says to her that she can't refuse them today. She also says sisters have dreams on what they will do for their brothers on their weddings, wee didn't get the chance to do anything then but if we have got the chance again we will not let go of it. Please Bebo, let us help you make your suhaag raat again. Bebo pretends that she is really struggling to make the decision but she agrees in the end.

They are all in Bebo and amrit's bedroom. Suman is putting down the last petals on the bed. Geet tells her that everything is looking really good. Bebo says thank you to them and they tell her to get ready. Bebo is lost. She asks them what do they mean get ready. Geet tells her to take out her wedding dress and jewellery. She also says to Bebo to go to her bedroom and she will help her get ready. Bebo takes her stuff from the cupboard and then leaves the room. Geet tells Suman before she goes that she should start lighting all the candles.

In Geet's room, Bebo is ready. Geet tells her that she is looking really pretty and Amrit will be dazzled when he sees her. Bebo blushes. Just then Suman comes into the room and asks them if they are done. She looks at Bebo and tells her that she is looking stunning. She tells Bebo that all the candles are lit and the petals are all on the bed and floor. Everything is ready, only the groom needs to come. Geet tells her that she should go and wait downstairs for Amrit as he should be home really soon. She also says that she is taking Bebo to her room.

Geet takes Bebo to her bedroom and they are both stunned by how the room looks. It looked like something in one of bebo's dreams. Geet takes Bebo over to the bed and tells her to sit down. They will send her prince up as soon as he gets home. Geet leaves bebo's room. Bebo is sitting and waiting for Amrit to come. But instead of Amrit, Dunia's ghost is standing in front of Bebo. She tells her that she was wise to get help for her sister-in-laws but now she has to do the rest. Dunia's ghost also said that she will not leave until she makes sure that Amrit and Bebo have their suhaag raat. She then leaves and goes behind the curtains. Bebo looks at the clock and sees that its nearly 9. She is worried. What if Amrit came home late?

In the living room, Suman and Geet were sitting and waiting for their brother to come home. As soon as he walks in through the doors both of his sisters run up to him and tell him that Bebo has been waiting for him for ages and that he should go quickly and see to her other wise she might get a bit angry with him. Amrit is thinking. Why is Bebo waiting for me so eagerly today? Suman grabs his arm and tells him to hurry up. She pulls her brother all the way up the stairs. Then they stop in front of Amrit and bebo's bedroom door. Suman opens the door, Amrit is shocked. Suman looks at him and asks him what he is looking at. She tells him to hurry up. He asks his sister what was the meaning of all of this? Suman tells him, this was mine and Geet's plan. We thought we couldn't do anything at your wedding so today we would decorate your room so you can have your suhaag raat again. Amrit is pleased. Suman looks at him and asks him if he was going to stand at the door and stare at Bebo all night or was he going to go inside. Bebo blushes. Amrit walks inside. Suman tells him to make sure he locked the door. Amrit says he will, he also says goodnight. Suman turns around and walks away. Amrit goes into the room and locks the door behind him. Dunia's ghost is still standing behind the curtains smiling to herself. She says her job is done and that she will go and tell Dunia everything is done.

Amrit walks over to Bebo. Bebo is a bit nervous and she is playing with her hands. Amrit sits on the bed and holds bebo's hand. Amrit tells Bebo that she is looking really beautiful. Bebo blushes. Amrit asks Bebo what was the need to do all of this. Bebo said it was mainly Suman and Geet's idea but I agreed with them. I thought because of me we ruined two of our previous suhaag raats. So I wanted to make it up to you. Amrit smiles and says that she doesn't need to do all this for him. He says to her that he knows that she loves him. Amrit asks her if what he thinks is right or not. Bebo blushes. Amrit tells her , he loves her very much. But this is their third suhaag raat and this time he wants to know whether his wife loves him or not. He looks at Bebo. Bebo tells Amrit that she loves him very much. This is why she is sitting here in this manner today. Waiting for him.

Dunia's ghost is still standing behind the curtains. She is laughing to herself. This girl is simply great. She took my words to mind. Dunia, Afreen and Tanzeela will be very happy with me. They will feed my Gulapjam, Laddu, Kheer and lots of other stuff. My mouth is watering already. I should go now. Let Bebo and Amrit spend their suhaag raat together without me watching over them. Then she leaves.

Amrit and Bebo are having one of their famous eye-locking sessions. But then Amrit comes to his senses and asks Bebo if they were going to sit like this all night, or were they going to...

Bebo blushes. Amrit smiles.

Amrit puts his hands on bebo's shoulders and is slowly pushing her backwards.

Then they zoom out.

The next morning Bebo wakes up. She notices that her head is on amrit's chest and that he has got both his arms around her. Bebo gently takes amrit's hands off of her. She lefts her head and then notices all her jewellery has gone! Bebo looks all around her and then sees everything on the bedside cabinet on amrit's side of the bed. Bebo smiles to herself. She looks at Amrit, who is sleeping, one last time and then starts to get out of bed. But then she finds that someone is holding her hand so that she cant get out. Amrit is wide awake and holding her hand. Bebo tells him to let go. Other wise she wont be able to get out of bed and do all her jobs. Amrit tells her that's why he is holding onto her. So she doesn't go and he can spend more time with her. Bebo blushes. (Ufff this girl! All she ever does is blush!) Amrit pulls bebo's hand a bit. She comes closer. Bebo tells him to let go. But he keeps on pulling her closer. Bebo stops struggling and lets Amrit pull her closer. But then there is a knock at the door. Bebo makes Amrit let go and then goes to open the door. At the door Suman and Geet have bought Bebo and Amrit their breakfast. They tell Bebo to take the tea and that they should get ready quickly and come downstairs. They both leave.

Bebo leaves the tea on the table, looks at Amrit who is a bit unhappy and then goes into the bathroom.

Amrit thinks to himself, why do those girls always have to come at the wrong time. They want me and Bebo to recreate out suhaag raat and yet they come and give us a wake up call at 9! Don't worry Bebo, this time you got out of my grip, but next time I wont let you go. I promise...

Edited by ganga16tr - 15 years ago
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The scene starts with Bebo back, with her memory. She is in her bedroom in the Narang house. Everyone is sitting around her. Bebo is still feeling a bit scared, after all that happened with her and rano. She is sitting up leaning on the pillow but she is holding on to amrit. Amrit is stroking her hair. Everyone is feeling bad that they didn't notice that their bebo was missing for so long. Everyone says sorry and bebo says it's not their fault. Amrit is sitting in silence. Then he has tears in his eyes. Bebo looks up and wipes his tears. She asks him what's wrong. He says he is very sorry he didn't recognise his wife. Bebo says it's not his fault. What was meant to happen happened. There's no point looking back at all that now. Bebo's mom says that all that matters is bebo is safe and back with them. They shouldn't look back and cry but look into the future and think how they will celebrate. Bebo's brothers look at each other and then say they will celebrate by getting amrit and bebo married again...

Two days later...

In bebo's house all arrangements are being made for bebo's wedding. Everyone is happy. New flowers are being put up. Saru and prabjot are looking through a catalogue and choosing dresses that bebo might like.

Bebo is sitting in her room all alone. She isn't sad or anything but she is feeling lonely. She understands what they are doing is for her but all she wants is to go home to her husband. Bebo wants to go back to her amrit. She doesn't really want this marriage to take place. Because of this she has to be away from amrit for a longer time. Bebo has got amrit's photo in her hand. She has also got her phone but she knows amrit wont call. This is because he has been forbidden to talk to her until the engagement.

Suddenly bebo's phone does ring. She looks at the number and it's a privet number. She thinks who it could be. The she answers it and says hello. Amrit says hello back. Bebo is shocked. She asks him why he's calling from a privet number. He says he didn't want anyone to see that he had called. Bebo asks him how he is. Amrit says he is fine. He also says this isn't the time for all this. Open the door to your balcony. I have left something for you there. Bebo is confused. But before she can say anything, amrit has put the phone down. Bebo walks to the door for her balcony and opens it

Bebo is shocked. There in front of her was amrit. He had a big smile on his face. Bebo rubs her eyes just in case she isn't dreaming. Amrit smiles. Bebo flies into amrit's arms. Amrit hugs bebo. After a while they let go of each other and bebo asks him how he got up there. He tells her not to worry. He can do loads of things, which are shocking. Bebo says, amrit you should leave. Remember what papaji said. He said if he catches us together before the engagement he would cancel it for two days. So amrit please leave other wise we wont be able to meet for another two days. Amrit says to her not to worry. He has just come to ask her if she liked the ring. Amrit puts his hand in his pocket and takes out a ring box. He opens it and inside is a silver ring with a big diamond on it. Bebo is speechless. Amrit takes it out of the box and slips it on bebo's finger. It fits perfectly and it looks really nice on bebo's fair finger. Amrit takes her hand and kisses it. Bebo says it beautiful. Amrit was like I'm glad you liked it. Bebo takes the ring off and gives it back to amrit. She says I can't wait till this evening when you can put this on my finger with everyone around us. Amrit smiles. He asks bebo what was she wearing. She says that for her to know and him to find out in the evening. Amrit says he should leave now there were loads of arrangements to make at home. He kisses bebo's forehead and goes back down the ladder.

At 9 o'clock everything is ready in Narang house. Only the groom's family need to come. Saru, prabjot and mummyji are in bebo's room getting her ready. She is wearing a black lengha with silver jewellery. Her hair is open and straight. She has got a few clips in her hair, which looks like diamonds. Everyone steps back and looks at bebo. They all gasp. She looks so pretty. Saru says even we are flattened to see you looking so pretty, what will happen to poor amrit? He will faint! Prabjot says bebo is looking stunning. She also says that if the ring is silver then it will match your dress perfectly. But we don't know what kind of ring they have bought. Amrit said he didn't want to tell us. Before thinking bebo says that the ring is silver. All three of them look at bebo and ask her how she can be so sure. Bebo thinks. What was she going to say? But bebo makes up something. She says, amrit knows she likes silver jewellery. So he would have bought something silver. Everyone says ok.

The groom's family arrive and saru and prabjot go to get bebo. They come down and help bebo so she doesn't trip, as her lengha is very long. Suman nudges her brother. Amrit, who is wearing a black sharwani, looks up and sees bebo. He thinks to himself how pretty she is looking. Bebo is feeling shy so is not looking up. She hasn't noticed that amrit is staring at her with googly eyes. Saru nudges bebo and she looks up. She sees amrit staring at her and then she blushes. They come down the stairs and saru tells bebo to sit next to amrit. They look at each other and then look down again.

Papaji talks to amrit's mom. He asks them are they waiting for anyone. They say no. Papaji then says why are they waiting, lets get this ceremony over and done with, then the children can talk to each other. Amrit puts the ring on bebo's finger. Everyone claps. Then saru gives bebo a ring to put on amrit. Everyone cheers and claps.

Then omi says, what do we do now? Now that bebo and amrit are engaged they wont be able to stay apart. Everyone laughs and amrit and bebo blush. Then mummyji say that they should all go into the back room and discuss what they are going to do and bebo and amrit should stay in that room and talk to each other. Everyone leaves them alone.

Amrit takes bebo into his arms. Bebo panics a bit and asks amrit to let go of her. If anyone sees they would be in trouble. Amrit says no one can say anything. We are now engaged and we have the right to be together. You belong to me now. Bebo says actually I still belong to my family and until we don't get married I don't belong to you. Amrit let's her go and tells her that he will let her go now but there will be no escape on their suhaag raat. Bebo blushes. Amrit smiles at her. Bebo says she will be waiting.

Just then everyone comes back. Papaji says I hope you both have had a short chat. After all you will need to know more about each other. Because in a few days you will have to live together. Then mummyji says that bebo, amrit we all have decided when each ceremony will take place. Tomorrow morning bebo you will have your haaldi. Then in the afternoon your mehendi and then in the evening they will have the sangeet. The day after that we will have no ceremonies because the day before so much happened and everyone will have arrangements to make. The day after that we will have the wedding. Then in the evening we will let go of our daughter. Bebo feels a bit sad but then saru says, bebo why are you looking so sad. After the bidaai you will go to your prince charming. Bebo blushes and everyone laughs. Then everyone sits down to eat.

After that amrit's family is leaving but then geet asks bebo's dad if amrit can take bebo's number. Papaji agrees and they take bebo's number. Then they leave.

Everyone sits down in the living room and talk about all the arrangements. Everyone is getting ready to go to bed then bebo's phone buzzes. She looks at it and sees she has got a message. She opens it. It's from amrit. In the message he says, bebo you looked beautiful today. Cant wait to see you tomorrow evening at the sangeet. Hope you have fun during the day with the haaldi and mehendi. I will see you in the evening. Remember one thing until then, I love you. Love you always, amrit.

Bebo blushes. Prabjot notices this and nudges bebo and asks her what happened. Bebo says its nothing. Saru notices this as well and asks bebo who messaged her. Bebo hesitates but then notices that she can't get away with it. She whispers in their ears that it was amrit. Then she blushes. Saru and prabjot nudge bebo and tease her that amrit only met her 2 hours ago and he already was missing her. Bebo blushes badly and runs up the stairs to her room.

Bebo gets changed and wears something more comfortable. She gets into bed and looks at her ring and remembers amrit. She smiles to herself. Then she says, let this wedding be over and done with, and then I can go to you. Bebo closes her eyes and falls asleep.

Edited by ganga16tr - 15 years ago
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PART 2!

It the morning after the engagement. Bebo is still asleep. It 7 in the morning. Everyone else n the house is already awake and making all the arrangements for bebo's haaldi. Saru and prabjot go to wake bebo up. She wakes up to find her sister-in-laws looking down at her with gleaming eyes. They tell her to quickly freshen up and then come and get ready. The haaldi ceremony starts at 8am so they can start the mehendi as soon as its 3pm. Then they can start the sangeet, which starts at 7pm and could last all night. So she needed to get a good breakfast. Bebo goes to the bathroom and freshens up. When she comes out she finds her brothers with loads of toast and cereal and tea and juice. Bebo asks them what was the need to bring all this up she could have gone down and eaten. They tell her she can't go downstairs until the haaldi starts. They want her to be totally surprised.

All of bebo's brothers leave for amrit's house. Saru and prabjot get bebo ready and then take her down stairs. Bebo is wearing a yellow dress, which has loads of work on it.

The entire room is decorated with fresh flowers and lights. It's looking really nice. Loads of bebo's old friends are there, including naintara. She has been specially invited and she comes just for the sake of her friend's happiness. Bebo is over the moon when she sees her friend. She runs up to her and hugs her. Both of them cry, as they haven't seen each other in a while. Bebo asks naintara how she is these days. She says that she's fine and that she will soon be getting married. Bebo is a bit disappointed and thinks that it would have been so good if omi and naintara got together. But naintara doesn't give bebo the chance to say anything and tells bebo to sit down and get this over and done with. Everyone puts haaldi on bebo.

Everyone is busy dancing and singing. Bebo is sitting and looking and smiling at everything going on around her.

Bebo starts thinking about amrit. She thinks what he must be doing.

Amrit walks over to bebo. He holds her hand and makes her stand up. Bebo is shocked to see him and asks him how he got in and no one noticed him. Amrit says he has a secret way to reach her without anyone saying. Bebo smiles. Amrit takes bebo into his arms. Bebo tells him to let go. Amrit lets bebo go. He then sees she has haaldi on her. Amrit takes a bit of haaldi and puts it on bebo's cheeks. She blushes. Then she takes some and puts it on amrit. Then amrit hugs her and she hugs him back. Then amrit starts calling her but she isn't listening. He calls her again.

Suddenly amrit's voice changes.

Bebo opens her eyes. She sees saru calling her.

Saru asks her in whose thought was she lost in. Bebo blushes. Naintara tells saru to leave bebo alone. She was thinking about her prince. She looks at bebo and asks her if she was right or not. Bebo just blushes.
Edited by ganga16tr - 15 years ago
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You guys write nice AmBo Scenes
Why cant you choose your own story that you like best and sent to Cv's
when the show AmBo Back if they do
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Bebo's haaldi has finished and everyone is getting ready for the mehendi. Bebo's brothers are back from amrit's house and have made the final preparations.

Bebo walks out of her bathroom, fresh and haaldi free. She walks into her bedroom only to find someone grabbing her arm. Bebo is about to scream but someone buts their hand over her mouth. Bebo is scared. Then the person turns her around. AMRIT! Bebo is shocked. She looks at him speechless. She asks him what he's doing in her bedroom. Amrit says that's for me to know and you to work out. Bebo then says, oh I get it. I'm dreaming again. But mister dream amrit you cant fool me twice in one day. I maybe crazy for you but I'm not totally mad. Bebo pinches herself and blinks. She opens her eyes to find she's still in amrit's arms. Bebo is really, really lost. Amrit says, bebo what are you going on about? I am here because praji brought me here. I am to be present at the mehendi. They said that I was to get ready in my old room. But I thought I'd come and see you. What are you going on about dream amrit? Bebo blushes. Amrit understands what she meant. He holds her and says you're missing me so much that you dream about me all the time. Am I right? Bebo blushes. Then someone knocks on bebo's door. Amrit and bebo don't know what to do. They shouldn't meet each other in privet until they get married. They would both be in big trouble if anyone sees them. Then the door open...

Saru comes in, she calls bebo's name. But bebo and amrit are not in the room. Saru looks around. Amrit and bebo are hiding behind the curtains. Both of them very, very close to each other. Bebo is look at amrit who is holding her tightly. Then they hear saru coming forward towards the curtains. Bebo is scared she holds amrit tightly. They look at each other in tension. Then ashok comes in and asks saru if she had seen amrit. He was meant to be in his room but he's not there. Saru says she hasn't seen amrit. She asks if ashok had seen bebo. He says he hadn't. Then both of them look at each other and say where ever amrit and bebo are they are probably together somewhere. Bebo and amrit can't help but giggle at each other. Saru says she will go and check on the roof. Ashok says he will check all the balconies. Saru closes the door behind her and then goes.

Behind the curtains, amrit and bebo are having an eye locking session. Then bebo comes to her senses and tells amrit to let go. He says no. Bebo says why. Amrit says, he can't wait any longer. He can't wait till their suhaag raat. It's too long of a wait. Bebo says it's only a matter of 2 days. Amrit says 2 days means 48 hours. Meaning 2880 minutes. Meaning 172800 seconds! Bebo is impressed. She asks him since when he's to so good at maths. Amrit says, bebo you wouldn't believe what I know and what I'm good at. Bebo tells him to go away and work out how many strands of hair he has on his head. Bebo laughs. Amrit laughs sarcastically. Bebo is still laughing. Amrit scoops her up and takes her into his arms. Bebo tells him to put her down. Amrit is lost in bebo's eyes. Amrit says he will only let go when she gives him a kiss. Bebo says no. Not until we get married again. She will only give him a kiss after their suhaag raat. Amrit says if you don't kiss me, I wont let you go. Bebo can hear someone coming. She tells amrit. But he refuses to let her go. Bebo can't help herself. She comes closer to amrit and gives him a peck on the cheek. She blushes. Amrit smiles and puts her down on her bed. Then he walks over to the door and goes.

Bebo sits on the bed thinking. Then saru comes in. She asks bebo where she had been all this time. Bebo pretends she doesn't know anything. Saru explains. Bebo says she was in the bathroom. Saru says ok. She also says she thought bebo was with amrit. Bebo pretends she still doesn't understand anything. Saru tells bebo that amrit is in the house so he can be present at the mehendi and sangeet.

Saru tells bebo to quickly get dressed so she can do bebo's make up and jewellery. Bebo goes to the bathroom. She comes out wearing a mehendi green lengha. Its got gold work on it. She sits in front of her big mirror. Saru tells bebo to choose some jewellery. Bebo picks a green necklace with gold outlining, matching earrings and green and gold bangles. Bebo gets ready.

Then prabjot and naintara come. They come and are stunned at how bebo is looking. Prabjot says that bebo should put a bit of make up on, just so she looks extra nice. Bebo refuses. She tells them that amrit doesn't really like it when she puts make up on. He says that she's naturally beautiful and by applying make up all she is doing is killing her natural beauty.

They laugh. Bebo blushes a bit.

Then geet and suman come. They knock on the door. Prabjot tells them to come in. Bebo turns to them and smiles. Saru does the official introductions.

Naintara tells them all bebo is ready to go down. Saru, prabjot and naintara go and take bebo downstairs. Suman and geet go to get their brother.

Amrit is still in his room. Stroking his cheek where bebo kissed him. He smiles to himself. Suman and geet nudge each other. They go into the room. Amrit hasn't noticed them yet. Suman goes and sits next to him. She calls his name twice. Then she shouts his name in his ear. Poor amrit jumps holding his ears. Suman and geet laugh. He asks them why didn't they just call him. They didn't have to shout. Suman tells amrit she was calling him, but he wasn't listening. Geet says he was too busy stroking his cheek. Suman asks him what was wrong. Did bebo slap him?!?! Both sisters laugh. Amrit says, laugh if you want but you wouldn't understand. Geet says fine.

Amrit, suman and geet go downstairs. Amrit is wearing a black sharwani. Bebo is already downstairs. They were waiting for suman who was going to do bebo's mehendi.

Everyone takes a seat. Amrit goes and sits on a chair near ashok.

They're people dancing and singing. Naintara writes amrit's name on bebo's right hand. Suman is just doing patterns on the other hand. Saru comes over when naintara is done and says, all they have to do is wait and see how dark bebo's mehendi gets. The darker it gets, the more love amrit has for her. Bebo blushes. Prabjot says they should cheat a bit. If they get a lemon juice and water mixture the mehendi gets darker when you spread it on top. Bebo says not to do this. They ask her why. She says she would like to see how much her to-be husband loved her. Everyone laughs and tells her that they too want to see how much amrit love her. Bebo blushes.

After a while bebo's mehendi is dry and it looks really nice. Its really, really dark as well. Prabjot tells naintara to tell amrit to come and sit next to bebo. She goes and gets him and tells him to sit with bebo. Amrit sits down and bebo show amrit her mehendi. She explains that, the darker it gets the more you love me. Amrit says, beware the mehendi might turn black! Bebo laughs and blushes. Amrit takes bebo's left and kisses it. Amrit says, bebo this hands mehendi will turn blacker than black.

Everyone is dancing and singing. Bebo and amrit are watching from their seats. But while no one is looking, a lot is happening between amrit and bebo...

Edited by ganga16tr - 15 years ago
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It's still the same day. The mehendi has finished and everything is ready for the sangeet. Bebo is dressed. She is wearing a blue lengha this time. Its got silver work. She's got a diamond necklace on with shines really nicely in the light and matching earrings. Her engagement ring goes perfectly with all this. Saru and prabjot step back and look at bebo who is looking at the floor. Saru tells her that she is looking like a princess. Just then naintara comes in and asks everyone if bebo is ready, because the groom's side are all ready and sitting down stairs. Saru tells naintara that the princess is ready. Prabjot tells bebo to be prepared to do loads of dancing and she may need to sing a song, so everything should be ready in her head. Bebo looks up and says she wont sing or dance. Saru says that she has to. It's traditional for the bride to dance with her future husband at their sangeet. Bebo says whatever traditions there maybe she will not dance with amrit. Saru tells her fine, she doesn't have to dance with amrit but she can still dance. Bebo still disagrees. They take her downstairs.

The hall has been changed again. This time there are blue fairy lights and blue curtains. Amrit too is wearing a blue sharwani to match is bride. Bebo goes down the stairs carefully. Saru and naintara sit bebo down next to amrit. Amrit whispers in her ear that she is looking very beautiful. Bebo blushes and thanks him. Then she says he doesn't look that bad himself. Amrit smiles at her.

Bebo's dad walks next to bebo and amrit and gets everyone's attention. He welcomes all the guests and tells them to dance and sing as much as they want and enjoy the evening.

Everyone dance and sing. Then ashok goes to the middle of the room. He starts to sing "Mahi ve" from Kal Ho Na Ho. He sings towards saru. Saru blushes.

(Imagine it as ashok singing aman's lines, amrit singing rohit's lines, bebo singing naina's, kuku narang singing the loud bits in the middle and bebo's mom singing the mom from the films lines)

Ashok starts singing, saru blushes. Then he pulls amrit. Then amrit joins in and sings for bebo. Poor girl she can't help but blush. Then saru pulls bebo and bebo too starts to sing. Whilst they are all singing mummyji comes in and sings for bebo. Everyone dances and sings and then the song finishes.

Before anyone had the time to get their breathe back for all the dancing and singing. Amrit creaks another song. This time he is singing Mein agar kaho from Om Shanti Om. Amrit sings and walks around bebo a bit. Then bebo too sings. But only a few lines.

Then the song ends.

Everyone sits down and laughs. Just then the lights go out. Everyone is worried but then a spot light turns on and bebo is standing. Then bebo starts to sing! She sings Bhole chooriya from Kabhi Kushi Khabi Ghum.

(Imagine this one as, bebo singing pooh's lines, amrit singing rohan's, daljeet singing rahul's lines, prabjot singing, anjili's lines kuku singing the dad's lines and amro singing the mom's lines.)

Bebo sings towards amrit. He is really surprised. Then he too joins in with bebo. Then prabjot comes in along with daljeet. They ALL sing and dance together then kuku and amro come and sing with their children. Everyone sings and dances. Then the song finishes.

Everyone gathers around bebo. They are all so surprised that she can sing so well. Saru asks her what the matter was. Bebo said she wasn't going to sing so what happened all of a sudden. Bebo says she didn't want to sing, but she thought it would be a bit of fun. Everyone praises bebo.

Bebo and amrit sit on their chairs again and everyone else is dancing.

Amrit asks bebo how was his singing. Bebo tells him it was excellent. Amrit says those were words that express how I felt for you before. Before we got married the first time. I tried to tell you how I felt but I couldn't. I know a few languages, Hindi, Punjabi and even English but yet in none of these languages could he express himself. Bebo blushes and looks the other way.

Then bebo asks amrit if he liked bebo's dancing and singing. Amrit says it was so good. He never thought she could dance and sing in that manner. Bebo says that song I sang, I just didn't sing the words because I know them. Those words show how I feel about you. I didn't pick that song because I like it. I picked it because the words from the song are words that are in my heart for you. There is no fun in my life without you. My bangles, if they could speak, would be able to tell you how much I love you. So this song is perfect for my love for you. Amrit is flattered.

Everyone continue to dance and sing the entire night. But the party has to finish sometime. Everyone is very tired by the time it is 1am in the night. Most o the guests have gone. Just close family and friends left. Then they leave.

The bride's family and grooms family sit together and talk for a little while more. Its now nearly 1:30am. So amrit's family decide to take their leave. They say that they will all meet again in two days for the wedding. Everyone greets each other and then they go.

Edited by ganga16tr - 15 years ago

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