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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
i don't know ganga janu if i am allowed to post comment or not
but i can't help my self
OMG sweetheart u have opened ur own scene gallery
wow thats really awesome sweety
CONGRATS!!!
can't wait to read them yaar, ufffffffffffffffffff
i got a lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttt to catch
uffffffffffffffff i am sooooooooooooooo behind yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely gallery Ganga!
And Mr. Idiot, you are true to your name ... but we still like you 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow wow wow....👏👏👏

(Right now Im posting comments in both places but for next time where do u want it sweety ?Do tell me.)
See this is why we love u sooo much Ganga.... it was simply an awesome scene and it made me completely forget that Ambo are separated nowadays.... I was like they are together and they always will be...,
The house was simply amazing... Such vivid details makes one imagine how it wud actually look... By the way Amrit Malhotra to bara filthy rich ho gya hai... At first i was a little apprehensive about the fact that Ambo wud no longer live in the joint family system but u made it sooooo lovely in the scene that I had to accept the new living arrangemnet and i must say Amrit has become really smart n efficient too... Did so much in 7 days....
I wish a couple could actually love each other sooo much...
And the romantic part was also as usual gggrrrr888 and sensuous... and the dialogues were hilarious and cute.....
Shabaash Tanzeela beta, give a pat to urself !!!!
Edited by Ambofan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks people... i dont mind where comments go.. i would prefer them on the honeymoon is over..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dear all loving AmBo fans, just a quick note to say, please leave all your comments on the topic "the honeymoon is over-part 2" this is so that everyone will find new scenes quickly. also sometimes the tital of the scene will be long and the name does not fit in the title of the topic. so the format of the title will be "~~GCRC~name of new scene~". also my new scene will be posted soon. so thanks for all your patients. thank you...

Edited by ganga16tr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: ganga16tr

dear all loving AmBo fans, just a quick note to say, please leave all your comments on the topic "the honeymoon is over-part 2" this is so that everyone will find new scenes quickly. also sometimes the tital of the scene will be long and the name does not fit in the title of the topic. so the format of the title will be "~~GCRC~name of new scene~". also my new scene will be posted soon. so thanks for all your patients. thank you...


ganga janu sorry to comment
if u don't wan anymore comments just write that in ur title
whatever ur title is and next to it write No comment....
a small suggestion...and sorry once again for commenting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Before the story starts lets get some things start. Well the thing is that, amrit and bebo are together again and they are living in a house of their own. The house they were living in the last scene. However please note, they don't have a daughter yet, nor is bebo pregnant! So now that's sorted, sit back and enjoy the scene.

Amrit and bebo have been living in their own house for a while now. They really enjoy spending time together without the presence of anyone else. There are only three people in the house during the day. Amrit, bebo and then meena. Some night's meena goes to her sister's house, which is close by and stays there for the night. Amrit and bebo don't mind this at all as it means they have the whole house for themselves during the night.

One night meena goes to her sister's place. It's a nice evening and it's not cold. Amrit and bebo have had dinner and now are sitting out in the garden enjoying the night's sky. Both have already got their nightclothes on, bebo her nightdress and amrit his top and trousers. AmBo have got their feet in the swimming pool and are talking about all kinds of different things. Amrit has started to go back to work and everything's slowly starting to go back to how it was.

Then it starts raining. To start with the rain isn't that heavy. Bebo says they should go inside. Amrit says that it's only a bit of rain. It'll stop in a little while. Bebo feels cold. Soon it starts to rain more heavily. Bebo says they really should go inside now. Bebo gets up and walks towards the house. As she walks off, amrit grabs her hand. He pulls her back. He catches her. The rain plasters bebo's hair onto her face. Amrit moves bebo's hair away from her face. Bebo closes her eyes. She tells amrit to let go, someone may see them. Amrit looks at her and says no one would see them. There's no one in their house and the closest house to them is nearly 3 miles away. No one will ever see. Bebo blushes. Amrit touches her gently. He comes closer... Bebo's nightdress is practically plastered to her body. Amrit kisses her neck and moves his hand down bebo's body. Bebo moves away and says, amrit lets go inside, I'm feeling cold nd we will both fall ill. Amrit smiles and says fine, but tonight I'm not letting you go so easily. Bebo blushes...

AmBo go inside... Bebo says she would like to take a quick shower before going to bed. Amrit says ok.

Bebo has had her shower. She's got a towel wrapped around her and her long hair tumbles over her shoulders. She picks up her wet nightdress and puts it on the towel wrack to die. Then she looks for her new one. But then she realises that she hadn't got it with her and that its still in the wardrobe. Bebo is worried that how is she meant to go out and get it as amrit is waiting. Bebo says to herself, why are you worrying bebo. Its ok. Amrit's your husband. He won't say anything. And any way if you walk into the room quickly, grab the dress and come back and get changed he won't have time to see you. Bebo agrees that this is the right thing to do. Quickly she opens the door and walks into her bedroom. Amrit is sitting in bed working on his laptop. He doesn't look up. Bebo opens the wardrobe and looks for her dress. A pair of hand holds her around her waist and the owner of the hands kisses her shoulders. Bebo blushes. Amrit looks at bebo and says you don't need a dress. Your perfect like this. Bebo blushes and tells amrit to let go. Amrit says that he wasn't done with her in the garden. Bebo smiles to herself and blushes again. Amrit carefully lifts bebo up and carries her to the bed. He lies her down and puts the blanket over her and himself. Amrit lies on his side. He kisses bebo's cheeks and slowly makes his way on top of her. Amrit kisses bebo on her face, ears, eyes, nose, lips, neck and chest. Then he lies off of her. Amrit says bebo, what is it that always makes me love you more and more every day. I always used to hear as time passes, love diminishes but here my love for you increases all the time. Why is that? Bebo blushes and shrugs her shoulders. Amrit looks at her and says bebo I love everything about you. The way you talk, your personality, your smile, everything. Bebo you are all mine. Mine alone. No one can have you, no one can share you. You are mine. Amrit says of course people can enjoy the little things of you. Your smile, the way you talk. But there is something of yours that's mine to enjoy. That's your love and your beautiful figure. Amrit touches bebo's body, top to bottom. He says this is one thing that has driven me crazy. You're mine to enjoy and only mine... Bebo blushes as usual. Amrit says no matter how intimate we get something is still missing. Amrit is referring to something, bebo know what he means but doesn't dare say anything. She not ready for it yet. Amrit says, bebo we have been through everything, just one thing we haven't done is this. Don't you think it is time we take this step? This is something every couple goes through straight after they get married. On their suhaag raat. Our relationship started late but still... bebo thinks. I'm ready for our consumination...

The next morning...

Bebo wakes up. She puts her hand on her head. She rubs her eyes and then looks at amrit. Amrit is still sleeping, totally spent after a night of so much love and passion.

Bebo thinks of the night that has just pasted and blushes. She has a quick flashback. Then she thinks to herself, from today onwards a new era has begun for amrit and me. Bebo continues to think. Amrit wakes up and looks at his beautiful wife, who is in deep thought. Amrit pulls bebo's arm and she lies down again, cuddling up to amrit. Amrit kisses bebo on her forehead and says, you came to me easily today. Normally I would have to pull you and beg you to lie down again. Bebo says its still early and there is time for me to spend with you. Amrit smiles and says, that's something new, you never have time for me. Bebo says that's not true. Amrit says it is. Bebo says maybe it is, maybe it isn't. Amrit looks at the clock and says it's only 6 o'clock. They have time for a bit more fun. Bebo blushes. Amrit pulls the covers over them and then we are transported behind the curtains...

The end!

Edited by ganga16tr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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~~dear all loving AmBo fans... i'm afraid i have some bad news... for a while now it has become defecult for me to write scenes. and now i have got to a point where even when i have not got school i still have loads of work... the last scene i posted was in october... since then i have been working on one scene which i still have not completed... hopefully it will be done soon. but after that... sorry to say that will be my last scene until further notice... i'm really sorry... hopefully my last scene will bring a smile to all of your faces... hope you understand.~~

Edited by ganga16tr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It is the night arjun finds out that vijendar is ria's kidnapper. He has been trying to get through to bebo all evening, but her phone remains unavailable. He keeps trying to get through to bebo. Bebo is worried, as she hasn't received any calls from arjun regarding ria. But she hasn't realized that her phone is switched off. Amrit noticed this and thinks to himself that he will tonight again put another test in front of bebo and see how she reacts to it.

After dinner everyone goes to bed. Bebo picks up her phone and sees that it is switched off. She turns it on... Soon amrit comes. He gets changed and gets into bed. Bebo too gets into bed. She turns away from amrit and says good night. He says nothing back.

Arjun picks up his phone, he thinks that he should call bebo, but then puts it down again. He thinks that bebo has been giving me so much time to help find ria. She needs some time for herself and now she has found amrit again they will need time to work on their relationship. It would be rude to disturb them so late at night. So he puts his phone back and says that he will call bebo tomorrow morning and let her know what is happening.

Bebo is settling down. She closes her eyes and tries to go to sleep. Amrit turns and looks at bebo. He moves towards her. Bebo doesn't notice this. She is too busy worrying about how ria might be. Amrit puts his hand on bebo's shoulder. He then puts his arms around her. Bebo gasps. Amrit looks at bebo with utter dislike but says if I get a positive reaction from her it means that vijendar was lying to me and that bebo loves me and only me. But if she gives me a negative response I will confront her and tell her that I know her dirty, low truth. Bebo thinks, what do I do!? I really am not in the mood for any of this. But what do I say to amrit? Amrit moves towards bebo and holds her tightly. He kisses her neck and the top of her arm. Bebo feels a huge jolt of discomfort. Amrit turns bebo onto her back and he attempts to get on top of her but bebo pushes him off. Amrit looks at bebo and asks what the matter is. Bebo says she doesn't feel like it. Amrit gets angry but before he can say anything bebo's phone rings.

Bebo looks at her phone and quickly answers it. She gets out of bed and goes to the balcony. Amrit looks at bebo going and says I knew it. I knew that you no longer love me. You don't care about me. You don't want me! I'm sure that it is arjun's call! Amrit too gets out of bed and quietly follows bebo. She answers it. Arjun apologises for calling so late. Bebo says that it's ok. She was really worried about ria and didn't feel like doing anything else. She asks if arjun has got any news. Arjun says that the kidnapper is none other than vijendar. Bebo looks shocked and says but vijendar is in jail. Arjun says that he has escaped. Bebo says that she is coming over. She puts the phone down. She turns to see amrit who is fuming.

Bebo asks amrit what the matter is. Amrit says that he has caught her red handed today. Bebo looks at amrit confused. Amrit says that she doesn't need to act he knows everything. Who she was with during the time he was away and now where she goes as soon as the phone rings. Bebo says that she wanted to tell him but she didn't want to worry him or make him upset. She thought that he would understand. Amrit says I understand everything all right. But my point is why did you do this to me? If you don't want to be with me why act as thought you do? Bebo looks at amrit and says what are you talking about. Amrit says it doesn't matter any more. All that matters is that she is happy with her arjun. Bebo looks and says amrit I think you have misunderstood something... My arjun? What are you talking about? Amrit looks at bebo and says let it be. I want to go to sleep. Amrit leaves and gets into bed and puts the pillow on top of his head. He thinks she thinks I'm so stupid but I will get to the bottom of this and then I will finish her and arjun off!

Edited by ganga16tr - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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if you want to leave a comment on any scene.. please do so here and not on the new one.

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