AJIB DASTAN HAI YEH(FANFIC) PART 2 UPD

hi guys, i wanted to start a fanfic for this show. i have done few for kaisa yeh pyaar hai and after taht i never foudn a show which i wanted to write about and i love this show so will write a story for it.

i will be updating the parts as i get time. mostly on fridays because i have time on fridays. here is the preview for the fic. if you like it let me know and will continue with part one.

AJIB DASTAN HAI YEH

this is a story of a girl name suman. suman is an only child and has a stepmother and two step siblings who treats her like a princess. she is not spoiled like every other rich kids, she has dreams of a regular girl. she wants a prince charming who would one day take her to her dream castle. her world turns upside down when her father dies and her good mother turns into evil witch.

will suman ever find her prince charming? will her take her away from her darkness and into bright sunlight?

to find answers continue reading.

nice...it sounds like a cinderella's story...i hope rajeev's involved in the story 😛

plz continue coz i would like to know wat happens next 😃

very nice...i would love to read this fanfic !!

nice introduction.....will be waiting to read more of it soon!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊

wow zarna. i like it. i am waiting for the next part of it. please do write quickly. 😛 😛 😛

Good start........please continue........i hope u has no other prince charming in mind other than our Rajeev 😳

yeah go ahead and continue...

The preview is nice.
Plz continue this story.

Bina

PART 1

Slowly the sun comes up from the hiding and spreads its sunlight around the world. The birds wake up and find a puddle of water to take a bath in and slowly you hear alarms going off in all houses. People start to get ready to do their usual chores. There we see the biggest house in the line and hear a girl sing in a very sweet voice.

"hum ko maan ki sakti dena. Man vijay kare. Dusharo ki jay se pehle khudko jay kare. Bhedhbhav apne dil se saaf kar sake. Doston se bhul ho toh maaf kar sake. Juth se bache rahe sach kadam bhare. Juth se bache rahe sach kadam bhare. Dushro ki jay se pehle khudko jay kare."

A girl comes out of the room with a plate containing diya, flowers, and Prasad. She is wearing light yellow churidar and has long light brown hair, slim figure. She is climbing down the stairs spreading the arti every where in the house. She reaches the last step and put the plate containing diya in front of a picture of a lady. She takes the arti and folds her hands together asking for blessing. There is a garland around the picture of the lady. She turns around and finds a man smiling at her. The girl has light brown eyes, fair skin and rosy red lips. She bends down and touches his feet. His smile broadens and blesses her.

"Jiti raho Suman beta." Says the man.

He about 5'7", grey hair, light brown eyes. She gets up and smiles to him. Taking the plate of diya she offers him to take arti.

"Ramu kaka Prasad." utters Suman to the old man

He takes the arti and the Prasad. The girl takes his hand enters the kitchen. There is a stove in the east corner; in north side there is a big sink to wash dishes. On the west side of the kitchen there is a big fridge and in the center of the kitchen there is a big 8 chair dinning table.

The man stands near the open fridge and starts to hand her milk, tomatoes, chilies, orange juice and other things for break fast. She quickly takes out flour from the cabinets below the stove and makes a loaf for Parathas. The old man starts to worm up the milk and places the orange juice on the table. He takes out a box of cereal, bowls, and places them on the table as well. He places three bowls in their places. The girl has finished making certain amount of Parathas and comes to the table. She places the Parathas in the center and goes to the fridge again. Taking out a loaf of bread she places two pieces in a toaster. She starts to butter the bread and the old man has started the coffee machine. The smell of coffee fills the air of the house and one by one rest of the members of the house wakes up.

We go back up to the stairs and into the first door on the left hand side. The room is as big as the kitchen. There is a king size bed, huge cabinet full of expensive saries and jewelries, there is a dresser and the top of the dresser is full of different shades of lipsticks and perfumes. There is a door which leads to a personal bathroom. A lady is sleeping in a king size bed with bright red silk covers on top of her. Slowly she moans and opens her eyes. She gets up opens the curtains and many rays of sun fill the room with light. She is about 5'4", has short grey hair and slim body. She goes into her bathroom. There is a big Jacuzzi bath tub; there is also a standing shower in the corner. Right next to the standing shower there is a big sink with mirror on the wall. The lady bends down on the sink opens the water faucet and washes her face later on steps into her standing shower.

Now while she is taking shower lets go and meet another Mahashay of the house. This room is right besides the queen's room. This room is similar to the one right next door. This Big room has dressers, bed, personal bathroom and a prince sleeping in the bed. Well he is not up yet and lets try and not to wake him up. We don't want to get on the bad side of the guy.

Moving along the corridor we see third door in the hall way. This one is quiet smaller compared to the other but not too small. This room is full of sunlight and looks like the princess is already up and ready to get to college. The bed is made and a young beautiful girl about 22 years old, with fair skin, long brown hair and healthy, but not too chubby, figure is sitting in front of the dresser combing her hair. There is picture of Radha and Krishna on the wall. Underneath it there is a table which has a burning lamp in a thali full of flowers. She girl smiles fixes her churidar and pressing her hand on her hair comes out of the room and goes down the stairs and into the kitchen.

"Suman didi I am hungry. Is the breakfast ready?" asked the young girl

Suman turns around and finds a pretty girl just entering the kitchen. Suman looks as the girl and smiles again.

Pulling the girl's nose playfully Suman declared, "Chandani, if you entered the kitchen before you ask the question everyday you would know that the breakfast is always ready."

Pulling her own ears Chandani said, "Sorry di, as usual I am in hurry so asked the question early. I'll remember next time that my Suman di is perfect."

Chandani sat down on the table and drank a glass of orange juice and grabbing the toast she ran out of the kitchen yelling bye to Suman. Smiling Suman waved bye to her sister and went back to the kitchen. Grabbing a plate Suman placed diya, scented sticks, a kalash full of water and some flowers. Suman walked out of the house and into their front yard. She went to a plant of Tulsi and did her prayers.

"Tulsi maa, please bless my family with health wealth and wisdom. Please give me strength to survive in the darkest hours of life. Please give my strength so I can support my family in the time of need. I also pray for you to keep my house full of happiness and away from sadness", saying this Suman poured the water from the kalash into the pot containing Tulsi plant. She did the arti of the plant and placed the scented sticks into the soil of the pot. She placed the thali on the edge of the pot and folded her hands and took the blessings. As soon as she was done a loud voice of a woman was heard calling her name.
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THE END. HOPE U ALL LIKE THE PART DO LEAVE UR COMMENTS. WILL CONTINUE WITH NEXT PART SOON.

Supurb zarna. While reading it, it seems as we are watching it. Wonderfully written with so many minute details you have covered. Bravo… waiting for the second part. One request please bring our price charming as early as possible. Don't need to mention his name. you know it better….