AJIB DASTAN HAI YEH(FANFIC) PART 2 UPD

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kiah71

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Posted: 18 years ago

#11

Lovely story. At moment I felt like everthing happen in front of eyes. Just like watching it. My request too. Make an entry of prince charming as early as possible. You know about whom I am talking about.

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sweety

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Posted: 18 years ago

#12

nice story.....do continue soon!!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊

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zarna

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Posted: 18 years ago

#13

hi eveyrone. will continue this ff in few hours. 😊

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zarna

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Part 2

Suman entered the house with pooja thali. A lady wearing light pink colored sari, heavy jewelry around her neck and with light make up on cheeks and bright pink lipstick came down the stairs wearing pencil heal shoes.

"Suman set my breakfast plate and glass of orange juice today no coffee. Ok. Now hurry up." The woman declared

"Ji ma. Why don't you have a seat? The breakfast is ready and it wont be long to pour a glass of juice." Suman answered

"Don't talk back to me young lady and stop calling me Ma. Ok. I am not your mother. I have only two kids' one son and one daughter and that daughter is not you. You are nothing more then a servant for me. Do get that through your head. Now go in the kitchen I don't want to waste my time talking to low class people like you." The lady announced in a strong voice.

"Yes ma'am." Suman left the living room on the verge of tears. She poured a glass of juice and placed the glass on the table. She went into the living room got the daily newspaper and placed it on the left side of the plate. She served the lady few Parathas and a sandwich. She was about to leave the kitchen but the lady stopped her.

"Why didn't you clean up the kitchen after you were done cooking?" the lady asked.

"Ma….ma'am I cleaned it I don't see a dirty spot." Suman said

"You don't? But I do and it's right here." She threw her juice on the floor and screamed at Suman. "This juice is expired make me a fresh glass of pineapple juice in 3 minutes. Now get to work." The lady demanded.

Wiping her tears away Suman took the pineapple and made a fresh glass of juice. When she took it to the table, the lady got up and was leaving the kitchen.

"ma'am, you didn't drink the juice." Suman told the woman

"You had only three minutes to prepare the juice it took you 5 minutes. You were late and I don't have time to waste." Saying that the lady left the kitchen and then the house.

Smiling Suman left the glass of juice on the table and went upstairs to wake up the prince of the house. The entered the room and opened the blinds. The ray of sunlight hit the face of the young man lying on the bed. The guys shifted his position in order to avoid the rays. Suman went on the other side and opened other blinds as well. The guys shifted again and placed his face under the pillow. Suman smiled and pulled the pillow away from the guy's face.

Groaning the guy said, "what is it Suman di?"

"One hour away from afternoon Vinay now wake up or you will be late for Mr. Sadu's class. Don't come complaining to me if he fails you or kicks you out of the class again." Suman Said putting her hands on the waist.

The young man quickly rose from his bed and ran towards the bathroom. While he was taking shower Suman fixed his bed, folded his clothes, took out his new clothes to wear and put the others in laundry. She picked up his book from the floor and placed them neatly on the shelf and left the room.

Vinay got ready took his books and went down the stairs and into the kitchen. He grabbed an apple to eat but Suman grabbed his hand and made him sit.

"If you eat only apple every day you will end up in the hospital. Now eat few Parathas or sandwich. I have made fresh pineapple juice for you. Now start eating." Suman told Vinay.

"Di, I will be late for class and if I am late I will fail. If I fail mom will kill me and kick me out of the house. And if I end up on the road I will become a beggar and die of hunger." Vinay pleaded.

"Vinay you have two hours to reach your college it's only ten in the morning. Ma'am just left for work and I woke you up early so you can eat properly. Why do you stay up so late at night?" Suman said caressing his hair.

"Why do you call her ma'am? She is your mom too then why? You know I don't like the way she is behaves with you sometimes. I hate her." Vinay said putting down a piece of bread

"Vinay, I don't want you to say anything bad about her. I won't tolerate it. You are her son and such word doesn't suit you. I know she is my mother but its going to take her sometime to accept that she has three kids. Now eat your breakfast." Said Suman and was about to leave when Vinay grabbed her hand.

"I am sorry di. I hope dad was alive right now." Vinay said sadly

"He is Vinay, in our hearts and our love." Suman said smiling and kissing Vinay's forehead Suman left to the living room.

"Mom, I will make you accept that Suman di is your daughter in these thirty days. If I don't then I will leave this house." Vinay promised him self.

Edited by zarna - 18 years ago

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surahi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#15

zarna when will our charming rajiv enter in the story? 😊

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kaira11

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Posted: 18 years ago

#16

nice part continue soon 👏 👏 👏

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zarna

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Posted: 18 years ago

#17

no one else liked the part? n eways i will continue the part as soon as i get some time off from college

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Rani

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Posted: 18 years ago

#18

wow it was very very intersting fan fic...i really liked it...when r u gonna continue...i cant wait 😭 hehe

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mehak

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Posted: 18 years ago

#19

hey!awesome!The way u r going is fantastic.I m felling the story with heart 😊 Just keep on writing, if u need me or my help plz ask for it.becz i m too a writter.mehak

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