First FF on Dheera Written by xPalkix and Ninag - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
keep updating daily.plz make djeera meet soon start romance.only in ur ff its possible


Originally posted by: ninag

Cool I've got the next part planned in my head. Will write it tomorrow.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bored this evening so will carry on writing!

As Meera left the office that evening she had the strange feeling she was being followed. She went into the grocers and brought some maggi noodles for her dinner and set off home. As she approached her apartment she swore she felt as if some one was behind her. Too scared to look back She ran the last few steps to her residence, bolted up the stairs and into her apartment within seconds. She stood behind the door panting heavily. After a few moments Meera moved into the living room. She must be imagining it she convinced herself. Tap tap tap there was a gentle knock on the door. Meera was frightened she had never had any visitors in all the time she had lived there. She moved towards the door and looked through the peep hole. Omg it was Durga. Meera froze unable to figure out what she should do. If she opened it she would eventually see Dharam again as surely Durga had come to take her home. If she didn't open it Durga would still know where she was...gingerly Meera opened the door. Durga pretended to be overjoyed to see her. "Oh dee you don't know how worried I've been about you" she lied. We have all missed you so much in the house. Vidya has been inconsolable. I don't know how she would have coped without my Shravan. "And Dharam"? Meera asked without thinking. Durga shifted uncomfortably "well to be honest he didn't seem too bothered" she lied. "We are sharing a room again you know". Durga smiled shyly at Meera. Meera reeled from shock and couldn't reply. "I'm so happy", Durga carried on talking taking great pleasure at Meeras obvious pain. "How did you find me"? Meera asked. Durga explained about the advert. Then she asked Meera would you like to see Vidya again? Meera automatically nodded "yes".She missed her sister nearly as much as she had missed Dharam. Now she had heard about his 'reunion' with his first wife she had never felt more alone in the world and needed her Dee. She felt as if she had been punched in the stomach. "Ok tomorrow you will see her again. I will arrange for her to meet you in the abandoned house in the woods". Meera nodded dumbly still in shock and not thinking why she couldn't meet Vidhya in a public place. Be there at around 9pm Durga continued. I must leave now. She turned to leave. Meera watched her scurry away. She closed the door behind her and her legs gave way. She sunk to the ground stunned.

Dharam returned from work still in a foul mood. He couldn't relax and asked the servant where his half read newspaper was. "Sir I think Durga madam threw it away" the servant replied. Dharam muttered some words about Durga to himself then told his servant to buy him another copy of the paper. Whilst waiting for the paper Dharam poured himself a neat double vodka. By the time Durga arrived home Dharam was drunk. Durga knew better than to address Dharam directly. Especially when he had been drinking. She decided to go to bed. She had a busy day ahead of her tomorrow. She was going to get back what was rightfully hers.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Ooh loving the change of character in Durga, deep down its in her we all know it.
Please tell me you're planning on reuniting Dheera in the jungle. That'd be cool.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: xPalkix

Ooh loving the change of character in Durga, deep down its in her we all know it.

Please tell me you're planning on reuniting Dheera in the jungle. That'd be cool.

you know very well what will happen next! 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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After a sleepless night Meera decided to phone in sick to work. She was shattered not only due to lack of sleep but also due to Durgas revelation about her and Dharam. Meera decided she would meet her dee one last time and then try to leave Gujurat altogether.

Dharam awoke with a banging headache. He had over indulged in the alcohol last night and was now paying the price. He slowly sat up in bed and saw yesterday's paper on the bedside cabinet. He picked the paper up and violently threw it across the room. The pages of the paper seperated and fluttered to the ground. Dharam slowly got up and staggered to his wardrobe. That's when he saw the advert. The paper was lying face up and wow that girl sure looked like Meera. He snatched the paper up and looked closely. Oh my god. It was her. Dharams headache magically disappeared. He quickly got ready and without speaking to anyone or eating breakfast he left the house.

He drove extremely fast with his foot pressing hard on the excelerator. He nearly knocked a few people down but skilfully managed to avoid them. After about an hour he roared up to 'Hari Kumar Enterprises". He ran up the building steps and burst into the office. Looking around he couldn't see Meera. He grabbed a young man. "Have you seen Meera Suryavanshi"? The young man was terrified. "Nooo sssirr" he stammered. Hari Kumar heard the commotion and came out of his office. "Can I help you"? Dharam realised he was the owner of the business and therefore meeras boss. "Can we talk in your office"? "Sure", Hari lead him into his room. "Take a seat" Hari motioned to the chair. Dharam remained standing. "I'm looking for my wife Meera Suryavanshi". Hari sat back in his chair. He sized up Dharam. He noticed he was a bit older than her and also wealthy. "Why did she leave you"? Hari asked. Dharam explained everything as quickly and as simply as he could. "Then yes I know her" Hari replied. Dharams eyes lit up. "Where is she?I need to see her right away". Hari opened an old rusty filing cabinet and scrolled through the papers. "Here is her address". He handed Dharam Meeras job application form. Dharam ran up to Hari. "Thank you so much" he hugged Hari, his voice cracking with emotion.

As Dharam drove to meeras house he felt a mixture of emotions. Joy and trepidation. How did she feel about him? Surely if she loved him she would have come back to him. Dharam decided he wouldn't force her home but would make sure she is happy and secure where she was. If she didn't want to be his wife that was fine. He loved her enough to let her be free.

Dharam pulled up to a shabby apartment. He was surprised Meera would live somewhere like this, she had grown up in luxury. That was all she had known. Heart beating fast he knocked in her door...and there was no answer. He knocked again. Finally after realising she wasn't home he knocked on a neighbours door. "Have you seen Meera Suryavanshi"? he inquired. "She just left, I don't know where she's gone" the neighbor replied. Dharams heart sank. Maybe she's gone to the bazaar he thought to himself. He decided to wonder the streets to look for her.

Meera sat on a park bench watching the world go by. She was to nervous and excited at the chance of seeing Vidya. She was trying to make time pass quickly so decided to stay out until it was time to meet her. However her plan had failed miserably. Every minute had felt like ten. She found herself constantly looking at her watch. She decided to go to get some food from the bazaar.

By the time Dharam arrived at the bazaar it was already after 6pm. He had slept in late due to his drunken state. Now he felt alert and he was on an adrenaline high. He decided he would look around the bazar for an hour and if he had no luck he would wait outside meeras flat for her return.

The bazaar was packed with people. Dharam wondered around until a voice made him stop in shock. "Ehh you watch your manners". Dharam spun around and saw Meera arguing with a food vendor. He watched her in awe. She looked as stunning as ever and he felt as if his heart would burst out of his chest. He pushed his way through the crowds towards her. "Meera". Meera paused she recognised his voice instantly and spun around. Without thinking she fell into his muscular arms and inhaled his scent. Dharam held her tight relishing the moment and buried his head in her freshly washed hair. Suddenly she came to her senses. Remembering Durgas words she untangled herself from his arms and looked him defiantly in the eye. Dharam was surprised by her glare but neither of them spoke as they held the eye lock.

After what seemed like an eternity but was only a few seconds Dharam cleared his throat. "Meera, what's wrong? how dare you leave like you did" Meera felt her anger begin to rise. Thinking about him and Durga in that room made her irrational. She felt furious. How dare he talk to her like he owned her. She pushed Dharam away from her and fled through the crowds. Dharam tried chasing her but it was almost impossible through the throng of people.
Edited by ninag - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Meera pushed her way through the people and finally managed to get away from the crowd. She hurriedly returned to her apartment to await Durga. She wondered what Dharam was doing in the bazaar. Maybe he had business nearby she thought. Whatever the reason was seeing him had badly shaken her. The way she fell into him, his touch, his smell filled her senses. But what could she do about it now? He had taken back his first wife. Who was she to come in their way again?

Dharam pulled up outside meeras apartment as darkness started to fall. He sat in his car looking up at the windows of her apartment. He could see her silhouette pacing up and down. Just as he was about to get out of his car he noticed a woman scurrying up the road. She looked familiar, as she grew nearer Dharam realised it was Durga. What the hell was she doing here? He slid down in his seat so she wouldn't notice him. Damn. I hope she doesn't see my car, he thought. However he needn't have worried. Durga kept her head bowed and walked straight past. He watched in shock in the drivers mirror as she entered meeras apartment block.

About ten minutes later Meera and Durga left the building and proceeded to walk in the opposite direction. They caught a taxi and Dharam decided to follow them in his car. They drove for about 2 miles and then stopped outside an old abandoned village. Dharam recognised it as Durgas village that had been left to ruin after a plague had killed many of the villagers. Meera and Durga got down from the taxi and walked into the village. Dharam parked his car by the roadside and walked far enough behind them so he couldn't be seen or heard. The village was completely dark and Meera used her phone as a torch to light the way. Meera asked Durga why she had brought her to such a stupid place to meet Vidya. "I wanted to show Vidya my ancesteral home". Durga smiled at Meera. She loved my parents house so much she wanted to show you it as well". They walked into a forest clearing where a beautiful old house stood. It was falling to pieces yet still looked so proud and regal. "Come, come" Durga called Meera. Meera followed Durga in. She was becoming frightened now. The house gave her the creeps and something about Durgas demeanour had suddenly changed. She led Meera to an upstairs bedroom. "This was my room when I was little" Durga looked at Meera. Her expression slowly twisted. " I had dreams. To marry, to have a husband who adored me. When Shravan came to get me I thought my husband wanted me to return. But no. You had to come to ruin everything didn't you. I watched you and my husband dance, I knew from that moment he was falling in love with you. I was left powerless. How would you feel watching the man you loved, who's touch you craved, who was your world, how would you feel seeing him fall for another woman. How would you feel being so humiliated infront of the world? I was so happy when you left. I thought I would be in with a chance then. But no. I watched my Dharam become even more infatuated over you. I watched my husband die a thousand times. I watched him suffer and it's all because of you, you selfish bitch. I knew then that he would never love me. Id never feel his touch or have the pride of living as his Dharam patni. For this you must pay with your life the only chance I have with my husband lies in your death". Meera started to back away slowly "I don't understand", she stammered..."where is Vidya"? What are you doing?" Meera watched as Durga removed cans of petrol she had hidden behind the bed. Durga started to laugh. "Now you must burn, the way I have burned". She started to pour the petrol around the room.
Edited by ninag - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Durga lied to Meera that dharam n she started staying as a couple n broke her heart.but luckily dharam found that newspaper n got an idea abt meera's whereabouts.he serached 4 her.their meeting was so emotional...the sudden hug n eye lock were touchy.but thinking of durga's words meera ran away.luckily dharam found meera with durga.i cant believe that durga cud b so cruel.she is trying 2 kill meera.I cant believe that d bold short tempered meera could be so calm,innocent n soft to go with Durga.Since dharam followed them hope he'll save meera.plz show shravan knowing his mom's true colours.plz let modis n shravan vidya also accepting dheera as a couple.
Durga talked abt dheera dance.But u did'nt show that scene in ur ff.If u r talking abt d dance they showed on tv plz present it in ur ff in a different way as a fb bcz u ff started off differently.so b4 its start i dont think they had danced bcz in d starting they were not in luv.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh wow! Loved the hug between Dheera in the market! Gave me so many feels 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The cvs better steal this idea! Nina send it to Amar.
And I cannot imagine Durga say bitch 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: xPalkix

The cvs better steal this idea! Nina send it to Amar.

And I cannot imagine Durga say bitch😆

Durga has gone crazy! Oh man if cvs did this to Dheera I'd be so happy. At least show Durga try to kill Meera if there's no seperation track!

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