First FF on Dheera Written by xPalkix and Ninag - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Loved the update
Simply amazing
Can't wait to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Surprise.Dheera have become friends n dharam wants 2 buy diwal special saree 4 Meera.plz show dharam Diwali celebration.Meera met koki n gopi there.but meera is holding back.Last scene where meera bursts out her past n pain 2 Dharam n he feeling 4 her was so emotional.and he asked her 2 go back home only 4 her happiness.want 2 know whether meera will go.Mayb DharAM CAN UNITE Meera with modis n then Dheera can miss each other making them realize their luv 4 each other
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
thanku so much 4 the update n update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Meera was stunned by his words. She looked at him in shock. So he really doesn't love me she thought sadly to herself. If he loved me he couldn't watch me leave him. Meera sat dumbfounded. She knew if she spoke her voice would choke and she would start to cry again. Then he would realise she desperately loved him. Dharam was also in shock. He couldn't believe he had just told her to go. How would he carry on without her. She was so different to any other girl he had met. He couldn't just let this pagal ladki go. But he knew if he truly loved her, her happiness should come first. Above all else. Dhara took meeras silence as confirmation she wanted to go home. He cleared his throat.

So we shouldnt waste anymore time. Pack your bags. I will drop you home tomorrow.

He tried to sound cheerful but there was a question in his voice "Ok Meera"?

Meera looked at him surprised. That was the first time he had ever called her directly by her name. her eyes filled with tears again. Still she remained silent.

Go to sleep now. I will drop you first thing.

The morning came. As Meera packed she looked sadly around the room she had come to love. She looked forward to the evenings they spent alone in this room, laughing until they cried. She had attempted to teach him English, he had shown her some wrestling moves. "My mirchi needs to learn to defend herself" he would say. "Do you honestly believe Meera Suryavanshi couldn't defend herself" she would reply...anyway there was no point thinking of these things. All hope had died now with Dharams words last night. Her hopes and dreams had died with those three words, "Meera, go home"...

Dharam cleared his throat. "Ok Meera Modi are you ready to go home"? Meera faked a smile. "Yes I'm ready, challo lets go".
They drove in silence. Occasionally Meera glanced at her husband powerfully gripping the steering wheel. His knuckles had turned white he was gripping so tightly. She turned to look out of the window. Her sadness overwhelmed her.

Dharam spoke. "Of course we need to divorce" he said. "I don't want to tie you down and I don't want you to waste your life either. Live it freely and be happy" He looked at her face looking for any sign only clue that she might have feelings for him. However she say there emotionless, her expression unmoving. She felt numb at his words. She felt like screaming at him "how dare you make me love you then send me back to that house"!

They pulled into the Modi driveway. "Please drop me here" Meera turned to Dharam. He replied "but I wanted to come in with you, explain everything to your family, I wanted to see you were ok"..."no I need to do this on my own". Meera climbed out of the car. Dharam walked around to the boot and removed her suitcase. "Well I guess this is it. I will miss having you around". "I will miss being around" Meera replied. She moved forward to hug her husband but hesitated. "Come on give me a big hug" Dharam smiled and gave her a huge bear hug. Meera loved it when he held her like this. It made her feel so safe as if she belonged in his big strong arms. "Ok I'm leaving now" Meera said Trying to be strong. She pulled away from him. "You'd better go or you will be late for work". Dharam looked at Meera for what he thought would be the last time. "We shouldn't stay in touch. Let's make a clean break". "Naturally" Meera replied. "No calling or texting". "Of course not". Meera felt her voice turn hard. How could he be like this? "Ok good bye". She turned and wheeled her suitcase down the huge Modi driveway. Dharam watched her for a few moments, "if she looks back it means she loves me" he told himself. He was looking for any clue, any sign to run after her but it never came. He climbed into his car and slowly drove away. He watched her in his wing mirror as he left both of them seperating further away from each other. He felt like his heart was breaking and for the first time in many years he cried like a baby.

When Meera heard Dharams car leave she stood still. Motionless. She couldn't return to the Modi mansion. Too much had happened. She knew she would never be happy there again. She turned around and walked back down the driveway towards the exit.

Edited by ninag - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Dharam called her Meera 4 d 1st time.so sweet.Meera thinking that dharam doesnt luv her.When he dropped her she controlling herself not 2 hug him,but he initiated abt d hug n a very cute hug,hoping 4 their passionate hug in future.Though there was no romantic touch their missing each other dialogueswere cute.Since meera didnt turn back he thot she doesnt luv him n he broke down.Is Meera returning to Dharam?He will be surprised.hoping 4 them 2 burst out their feelings 4 each other.A romantic diwali is a must.plz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Interesting update, I wonder where meera would go, look forward to read the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
ur FF is a like a dream come true.plz update daily
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Dharams office staff had been surprised to see the change in him over the last few months. He would always come to work smiling and whistling as he strolled purposefully through the reception. Today however he was different.

" Good morning Dharamji". Dharam didn't reply. He scowled at the receptionist, Walked into the office and slammed the door shut. He sunk into his chair defeated and placed his head in his hands.

Meera sold her jewellery and had enough money to rent a small place. She traipsed from office to office looking for work. Although her cv was sparse eventually she was hired as a receptionist by a letcherous boss who appreciated her beauty and her ability to speak English.

At night she would lie in bed thinking about her husband, wondering what he was doing, did he think of her, did he miss her like she missed him. She would fall into a fitful sleep tossing and turning all night having strange dreams.

Dharam tried to numb himself. He began to drink heavily and would often stay away from home until the early hours of the morning. Usually he could be found alone in a dingy bar after he left work. His mother could see how unhappy he was and understood without Meera he was incomplete.

Several weeks passed. Dharam hadn't heard from Meera nor Meera from Dharam. He decided the time was right to send his solicitors to the Modi mansion with divorce papers. His phone rang.
"Hello mr Suryavanshi", the lawyer spoke "we've visited the Modi family house" they told us Meera never went home". "What"!!!!! Dharam dropped his phone and started to panic. Where the hell was Meera?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Meera took a rented house.Dharam came to know that meera never went to the modi house.he will search 4 her.very short update.this not enough😕.we want more.want dharam meeting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Nice update, would like it if it was slightly longer, contribute soon

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