FF: The Tempest, chapter 11 - Epilogue, p 32 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Deepikz

interesting chapter Swasthi... so Gopi is going to get married to Ahem but has her dues with her maami and love dat in dis too Gopi's friend is Kanaji... waiting for r nxt update... please pm when u do


Glad to read that you are enjoying this story Deepika.

Next chapter coming up soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

Fantastic Swasthi👏


So the afternoon affected Ahem as much as it did Gopi😛 Atleast he is thinking of protection. The man surely uses his head. With him not knowing that his mom chose Gopi for him, what will be his reaction seeing her as his bridesmaid is the question. Gopi may worry, but Ahem know that she was indeed a paragon of virtue.
Interesting character your Ahem😊 His heart is in the right place. He also has his own rules. With the impending Yuva samaj meeting and his engagement, he may be happy about Gopi being the girl his heart desires. But it is not so easy is it?😊

Poor Gopi.. To be indebted to Urmi for life and now carrying the fear of that one afternoon and the fears of abandonment Cannot wait to see her and Ahem meet😛


Thanks so much Harini.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: awsome-raji

awesome ff swasti. love it.


Thanks so much.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Much appreciated Nila.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: -GiNa-

Wonderful Swasthi 👏

when Ahem get to know... His mom chosen the same girl who he watching in his dreams 😳 Love Ahem character
cant wait to see Gopi n Ahem meet 😳 i wanna know wht will Ahem react when he see same girl in front of him... Im eager to read next chapter 😉


Much appreciated Sherry.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: delsi

Swasthi your are getting me impation
very nice part that Ahem was dreaming abt the girl whom he made love without knowing who she is
what ill Ahem do if he comes to know that she is going to his future wife.
Gopi's love for Ahem is increasing.
very lovable part update soon


Thanks so much Delsi.

I am really glad that you are enjoying this story.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: dipsy80

My Like button is torturing me again but i loved it Swasthi! update the next part quickly please! 😃


Deepa not to worry about the like button. Your comment will suffice.

I am really glad that you are enjoying the story.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: hana_y

awesome swasthi so hot wow gohem make love before wed wow and ahem who dont even know who she is he think it jigar setting wow gopi she know he will be his future husband and she left there with out let him to wake up i just hope he saw the invitation card other way he will misunderstand her you did a great update so hot out cyclone weather inside loving cyclone wow love it cont waiting for m=next pm for next 👏 👍🏼


Much appreciated Hana.

I am really glad that you are enjoying the story.

Hope you have the third chapter too.

The fourth chapter is coming soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: poonamahem

I think u have outdone yourself in terms of plot and sensual scene writing ... love it and waiting eagerly for the next .. pls make ahem obsessed with gopi and also he should stand by her and be her rock ... my heart breaks when gopi is hurt ... I wish her the best always ... I adore ahem !! Obv but thats more to do with him being sooo hot .. but I really feel for gopi as a character ... so always want good for her.


Thanks so much Poonam. You are much too generous with words. I appreciate it.

I am really glad that you are enjoying this story. There is lots to look forward to in this story.

The next chapter is coming up soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: Hetp

awesome update swasthi...😃 👏

so both somewhere craving for the afternoon which they had spent together...especially ahem..that he is dreaming😳
gopi fear is natural... now it would be interesting how ahem will react when he see gopi...the same girl with whom he had spent the memorable afternoon and that he is dreaming since from past 1 month...
eagerly waiting for next update😃


Much appreciated Hetal.

I am really glad that you are enjoying the story.

The next chapter is coming up soon.

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