FF: The Tempest, chapter 11 - Epilogue, p 32

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Sherry

@NazimKiDewani

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Awesome Update Swasthi 👏 im excited abt ur update after read ur update my excited was fully justified... 😳

Awww.. I felt really bad for gopi poor girl 😒 one side she saw her second family her maaji, Kakiji n all or other side.. The guy who would be her future hubby whom crush her feeling so badly 😒 but when Ahem saw her that she the same girl so wht he do how he apologised with her 😊 looking forward ur next update 😉

Edited by -GiNa- - 12 years ago

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delsi

@delsi

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

very nice swasthi
Ahem loved the girl whom he is with at the stroming evening, he directly informed this to the bride without seeing her face, fate is playing games between tow of pure hearts who love each other
what ill Ahem do if he see Gopi's face at the time of engagement, so urmila is as usual planning to get rashi into modi's house, what ill be Gopi's decision. eargely waiting for next part

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DEEPZzzz

@DEEPZzzz

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Nice update Swasthi..looking forward to your next update

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yhm_craze

@yhm_craze

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

awesome Swasthi! but you stopped at the wrong time!...cant wait for the next update! 😃

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Hetal

@Hetp

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

awesome update Swasthi 👏

reallly felt bad for gopi...gosh her dreams got crash by ahem harsh word...poor girl on one hand she was bestowed upon love by modi family and on other hand ahem hurt her😭

and now it would be interesting to see when ahem actually see her...that she is the same girl who he is loving...in whom his heart lies...also now how he convince gopi that she is the girl who he loves the most...

eagerly waiting for next update😃