FF: The Tempest, chapter 11 - Epilogue, p 32

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yhm_craze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

My Like button is torturing me again but i loved it Swasthi! update the next part quickly please! 😃

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hana_y

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

awesome swasthi so hot wow gohem make love before wed wow and ahem who dont even know who she is he think it jigar setting wow gopi she know he will be his future husband and she left there with out let him to wake up i just hope he saw the invitation card other way he will misunderstand her you did a great update so hot out cyclone weather inside loving cyclone wow love it cont waiting for m=next pm for next 👏 👍🏼

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Sunnyahem

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

I think u have outdone yourself in terms of plot and sensual scene writing ... love it and waiting eagerly for the next .. pls make ahem obsessed with gopi and also he should stand by her and be her rock ... my heart breaks when gopi is hurt ... I wish her the best always ... I adore ahem !! Obv but thats more to do with him being sooo hot .. but I really feel for gopi as a character ... so always want good for her.

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Hetal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

awesome update swasthi...😃 👏

so both somewhere craving for the afternoon which they had spent together...especially ahem..that he is dreaming😳

gopi fear is natural... now it would be interesting how ahem will react when he see gopi...the same girl with whom he had spent the memorable afternoon and that he is dreaming since from past 1 month...

eagerly waiting for next update😃

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Xarina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Loving it Swasthi and it is so good to see it being written on home ground. Keep going. 👍🏼

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Savi_S

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

nice going swasthi...

eagerly waiting for their meet...

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hana_y

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

swasthi it so lovely both think of each ever and thx ahem try to find where she leave to ask about her as he did not take protection wow he think of it and he touch the pillow to have her fragrance wow no wit their wed hope he will not say any thing which will hurt her or she dont faint before the wed then will have the problem he friend is kanaji cont soon love it amazing awesome it is 👏

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: pretty_h
awesome ff wow swsthi i read both part but part two was so hot which im reading such a hot gohem ff after a long time wow they become one without ahem know who she is and gopi know he will be her future husband wow awesome i love it they made love you are a super mind blowimg writing on hot scene pm me for next please 👏 👍🏼

Thanks so much Hansa.

I am really glad that you are enjoying the story.

The next chapter will be up this weekend.

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Archana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Awesome part Swasthi👏 Loved it! Egarly waiting to see ahem's reaction to see gopi as his bridesmaid. Beautifully written😊

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--HANISA--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

wow swasthi i love it when ahem will know it gopi whom he is going to get married how will be his reaction and how he try to find on her to ask if she is ok and he remember of her too and gopi was remember him wow waiting for next thx for this lovely update

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