FF: The Tempest, chapter 11 - Epilogue, p 32

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Archana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

wow such a hot update... I'm speechless. Very well written👏 I am still blushing ☺️☺️ Gopi thinks ahem as her future husband and ahem thinks gopi being sent by jigar its going to be interesting to know how they feel for each other.Eagerly waiting for next update.

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Ashwin Maharaj

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Wow. Ok... That was very different Swasthi!

And bloody impressive! It seems like the writing talent we have on IF just grows and grows!

Not that I am surprised. I somehow knew you would be able to pen marvelously!

Great first and second Chapter. Although the 2nd did leave me rather hot and bothered.

I am looking forward to this! It is going to be an awesome addition to SNS FF!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

wow swasthi i love part one i did not read two im going to read it i love part one so lovely gopi want to be in his wrapped wow she look beautiful awesome the way you describe ahem wow i will part tow and comment for it later 👍🏼 👏 .
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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Deepikz
Beautiful chapter Swasthi although i'm like this☺️ lots of nice gohem hot scenes☺️ awaiting ur nxt chapter

Much appreciated Deepika.

Next chapter coming up soon.

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: nilani19
Awsm Chapter😛

My pleasure Nila.

Next chapter coming up soon.

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Xarina
Wow, Swasthi. Great update. It was good to read this. Thank you.

Thanks so much Xarina.

Next chapter coming up soon.

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Hetp
wow Swasthi...what an awesome update⭐️ ⭐️the two souls unknowingly became one...wow...what a romance.. .I was blushing throught reading it ☺️ .hatts off to you for this update 👏 👏
eagerly waiting for the next update 😃

You are welcome Hetal.

Glad to read you are enjoying the story.

Next chapter coming up soon.

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1
Oh My😳 Such a wonderful update Swasthi👏 What a chapter!!!!

The storm waged outside and inside the villa.. Ahem and Gopi's attraction has captured both of them in the first meeting. The point is, Gopi knows and loves Ahem now as her to-be husband. But for Ahem, she was someone Jigar setup and he does not know who Gopi is yet.
It was a mindblowing update Swasthi. Two people who made love as passion overlooked all caution.

Gopi does not know that Ahem is going on a trip. Ahem knows he is Gopi's first but does not know her name or who she is. Will he find the invitation and realize the truth or will he miss it. Looks like Gopi is already in love with him. This sets this up for a very interesting setting for the next update. I cannot wait for the story to take the next turn😛

You are welcome Harini.

Really glad to read you are enjoying the story.

Next chapter is coming up soon.

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swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: dipsy80
omg Swasthi! i think i have fainted somewhere! ☺️..it was magnificient!
however i have a bad feeling about this...Ahem thinks Jigar set him up with her and Gopi sees him as her future husband 😕...i hope i am wrong!

My pleasure Deepa.

Really glad to read that you are enjoying this.

The next chapter is coming up.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: -GiNa-
awesum awesum update swasthi...👏 Im ☺️ blusing throught out the up date... Ur post went us in different world of Ahem n Gopi
looking forword to the next update 😛

Thanks so much Sherry.

I am really glad to read that you are enjoying this.

The next chapter is coming up soon.

Edited by swasthi - 13 years ago