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doc4ever

@doc4ever

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Beautiful, Heartfelt OS..😳...Love how Ahem is going through the different emotions...Was just brilliant! ⭐️ Thank you Swasthi! 😊

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megustajalebi

@megustajalebi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

So beautiful! I loved the part where they find out about the twins. Extremely touching ❤️

Well done and thank you for pm'ing me about this Swasthi 😊

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scorpian87

@scorpian87

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

swasti u just made my day 👏 it was an awesome OS loved it 👍🏼

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Rachna

@Chaccha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Swasthi,

I read this, but didn't get a chance to comment earlier due to some tension at work. Bleh!

I love how in this OS, Ahem is the one who is doing all the wooing. The idea of having these late night clandestine meetings is superb and I hope I see some wooing in the coming episodes.

The way that Ahem kept his "affair" a secret was touching because it made their relationship his own--something to cherish, something to hide, something to revel in sans the scrutiny of the world. Thank you! 😳

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Christine

@westindian

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

PLEA TO CVs - please read this beautifully written OS and let us see it executed on screen.

Swasti - this was wonderful, I love it, thank you very much for the PM. I love this Ahem, I wish we could see writing like this for the show.

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grao

@ani_gr

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Fanatstic OS Swasthi...Brilliant ! Thoroughly enjoyed reading.. Loved the conversation between Ahem and Gopi.. Fabulous.. It is a real treat to read.. 😃

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Amal Aziz

@-AmalAziz-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Amazing OS... Loved it

thanks for the PM

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A2ZVictory

@A2ZVictory

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Wonderful OS Swasthi. You truly make Ahem's character more humane.

I love Ahem in your OS. Thanks dear

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Manish

@---Manish---

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Awesome swasthi...

Very nicely thoght and written...

Hey from where do u get this ideas...

But u did a marvellous job

Keep it up

I know Blue is ur colour... When i see blue. . I can easily figure it.. It must b u...

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binataadhar

@binataadhar

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

WONDERFUL & EMOTIONAL😊!!

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