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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: westindian

PLEA TO CVs - please read this beautifully written OS and let us see it executed on screen.


Swasti - this was wonderful, I love it, thank you very much for the PM. I love this Ahem, I wish we could see writing like this for the show.



Thanks so much Christine.

Really glad you enjoyed this OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: ani_gr

Fanatstic OS Swasthi...Brilliant ! Thoroughly enjoyed reading.. Loved the conversation between Ahem and Gopi.. Fabulous.. It is a real treat to read.. 😃


You are welcome Gayatri.

Really glad you enjoyed the OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: amalaziz

Amazing OS... Loved it

thanks for the PM


My pleasure Amal.

Really glad you enjoyed the OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Another incredible piece of writing!!!
Ahem's pain really came through as did the love Gopi has for him. They had the time they needed away from prying eyes and made their bond stronger. No words were needed to explain to anyone else the truth of their feelings.
Absolutely adored this!!! Well done Swasthi!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: A2ZV

Wonderful OS Swasthi. You truly make Ahem's character more humane.

I love Ahem in your OS. Thanks dear


Much appreciated Anna.

Really glad you enjoyed the OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: manishmodh

Awesome swasthi...

Very nicely thoght and written...

Hey from where do u get this ideas...

But u did a marvellous job

Keep it up


I know Blue is ur colour... When i see blue. . I can easily figure it.. It must b u...


Thanks so much Manish.

These ideas come while in the shower.

@ last line - it rhymes so well. Yes, it is my favourite colour.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: binataadhar

WONDERFUL & EMOTIONAL😊!!


I really appreciated your comment.

Glad you enjoyed the OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

It was a lovely dessert 😃


Thanks so much Vidisha.

Really glad you enjoyed the OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: gohem123

Swasthi, that was a cool piece of writing...i always loved your style of writing and way of presentation.You have created a magic again with simple words and i could sense the emotions out of the post...Fantastic and Beautiful...Thank You for the PM... Do write more...


I really appreciate your comment.

Glad to read that you enjoyed the OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: 5cents

Swasthi , I'm speechless...awesome piece with some indescribable emotions. 👏
Absolutely superb description of Ahem's feelings...what can I say ... the phantom sensations left a deep emotion and that has got imprinted on my heart😳.
Beautifully crafted ...I wish it pans out exactly this way😍


You are welcome Tina.

Really glad you enjoyed the OS.

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