OS: To be with her - Page 3

It was a lovely dessert 😃

Originally posted by: Joicej

RES

Swasthi,
That was a wonderful weekend treat.
I like how you introduced the past to Ahem in his dream and without anyone telling or reminding him.
Your Ahem was determined and had a clear goal. He started working straight away. Gopi wasn't hesitant even though her maaji wanted her to avoid her husband. She missed him too and after the confession she was sure that he loved her and their baby.
The ending was just fantastic!! Kokila did not ask for explanations, she knows her son. He got his wife, babies and his mother back. He has achieved his goal.

Thank you swasthi for this beautiful os.

Swasthi, that was a cool piece of writing...i always loved your style of writing and way of presentation.You have created a magic again with simple words and i could sense the emotions out of the post...Fantastic and Beautiful...Thank You for the PM... Do write more...

Swasthi , I'm speechless...awesome piece with some indescribable emotions. 👏
Absolutely superb description of Ahem's feelings...what can I say ... the phantom sensations left a deep emotion and that has got imprinted on my heart😳.
Beautifully crafted ...I wish it pans out exactly this way😍

Res

Swasti ---
had a very long day - and have an early appointment tomorrow --- just reserving the spot

will read tomorrow and update the comments ---

wow!!!👏 u have a really nice imagination... hey.. even if u dont like raji write something about them too.. u write really good...

thnx for the pm..😊

Swasthi, I was just on my FB and I see what I found...
Unborn twins 😃


If interested u can read the article ...
http://www.newscientist.com/article/dn21888-unborn-twins-caught-on-video-mri-for-the-first-time.html

amazin great os... thanx 4 the pm...

arre waah bada time laga diya ilu bolne mein jabki kab se bolna cha rahe the aap yeh teen shabdh

Originally posted by: sbp1971

Fantastic OS Swasthi.

What a weekend treat from you.

Ahem regretting his impulsive words and the past is very well described. It tells us just how much he has come to love Gopi. And Gopi holds nothing against him and forgives him easily is also a given.

Loved the way he spent time with her and got to know her better making their relationship so strong that no word of explanations were needed for Koki.

Thanks so much for this wonderful treat.