My First Os_On Promo Updated pt9 pg 14 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
basharam anita sharam nahin aati ek to kokila ko almost maar daala aur ab sympathy chahati hain ahem se
i hope ahem is worried for gopi being injured poor boy his mom is very badly injured hope that anita rots
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
That was a great update.. Rashi's smells a rat.. Ahem's ignoring the idiot.. Where's Gopi?
Please update soon 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice story dear left us with a big cliffhanger😲😲😲 ..OMG whats happened to gopi 😲😲😲she probably cant walk she has burnt her feet ..plz update soon 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
Thank you for this OS...good job...update soon.👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#15
Enjoyed both parts!! ⭐️😊 Looking forward to the next update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
just caught up with both parts...loved it...update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great job. Please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
Where is Gopi...Ahem was worried about his mom...at the sametime he shuld also be worried about his wife...he seems to have realised about her late :( !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Read both updates. Fantastic updates but what a place to stop.

Ahem is hell bent to be by his mother's side and at the same time cannot find Gopi anywhere.

Do update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Pt 3

Gopi was in the mandir praying to kanhaji for her maaji's wellbeing(Typical Gopi).
She then takes some gangajal and walks in kokila room just as ahem asks about her.
Anita sees gopi and quickly says "wo rahi gopi" Turning to gopi she says "Kaha thi tum gopi, aunty ke saath itna bada haadsa ho gaya aur tum gayab thi...agar tumhari zarurat hongi aunty ko to kya hum tumhe poore ghar me doondhe. Ye kya gopi apni zimmedari ka kuch to khyaal rakhho"
Ahem doesnt like the way anita is talking to gopi (the kumbhkaran finally wakes from a deep slumber). He is about to say something wen Raashi replied "Tum chinta mat karo anita, Gopi aur me is ghar ki bahu hai hum kakiji ka poora khayaal rakhege, aur waise bhi gopi se achcha kakiji ka khayaal aur kaun rakh sakta hai, isliye to ahem jiju gopi par itna bharosa karte hai...Kyu gopi."
Gopi: Ji raashiben.
Turning to Ahem she says "Ahemji wo me mandir me thi...Maaji ke liye prarthna kar rahi thi"
Ahem smiles hearing this
Anita fumes seeing ahem smile and thinks (Why didnt I think of this myself, instead of clinging to ahem...and ahem never smiled at me like that(Keep that thought in your mind you b***h)...
Ohh forget it. Smile se kya hota hai...ahem sirf mera hai, jab hum saath honge tab me usse kahoge ke wo mujhe bhi waisi hi smile de(as if smile fukat ki bat rahi ho, get lost)
Gopi then goes near her maaji and start spraying Gangajal on her body.
Anita cudn't watch all this and left...
The doctor who has just finished chcking kokila turns towards gopi
" Gopiji aap theek hai na..."
Ahem hears this and thinks " ye sawaal mujhe poochna chahiye tha...koi baat nahi me baad me pocch lunga"(dikra kal kare so aaj kar aaj kare so abhi, duffor kahika)
Gopi(looking very cutely confused): Ji me theek hu!!!!!Aap kaise hai

Sorry guys i know just cudnt keep gopi away from her maaji
Know matter how hurt gopi is, her first concern wud be for her maaji

So how was this part
Plzzz comment
Edited by sabby91 - 13 years ago

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